Thoughts on "What You Mean to Me"
Ok I've calmed down (somewhat). Time for more coherent thoughts. Pacing was beautifully done with suspense of that you knew what was coming just wondering how and when. Characters were fantastic. They felt real to me like their problems were things I should care about. Story was just fuck. So good. I loved how you used different forms of "swearing" like not using buck (because I think it's over used) and instead use great words like feathering and hayseed. Felt more natural. Also instead of "oh god" it was "oh goddess". Nice touch. Minor complaint: no cutie marks. But looking back on it, I actually like that angle. So what if you don't find your talent? WHO CARES? If you're happy fucking live your life that way. This whole story has really spoken to me on a deep level because I don't know what I'm doing with my life yet but I can sure as hell enjoy it before I do. Just gotta sit back relax and not stress on shit. So thanks. Put a smile on my face that hasn't been there in a while. 10/10 would read again
