i think "awaited" would be grammatically correct more than just "waited" but i guess that's an extra syllable :P (tho i don't necessarily think translyrics need to be super strict on syllables, as long as you can sing it all within the instrumental/timing since ive heard some english covers that still flow nicely that don't have word for word matching syllables [tho maybe "we both awaited" would fit? it's kinda hard to tell w/o hearing an example of the lyrics])
I think it’s possible to change this line, thanks
Regarding syllable count, you may be true, but for now I prefer being as close to the original sounding as possible (more to that, I’ve seen people being not very happy with some translyrics having wrong syllable count).
You can also deanonymize yourself so I can credit you for your help (:








