demo for a song I wrote recently (it doesn't even have a name)
constructive criticism appreciated if you're chill, please don't murder me, any kind of interaction with this post actually makes me very happy and I giggle and kick my legs and twirl my hair whenever I get a note :3
Tags and such + chords and lyrics below the cut
Ppl who asked to be tagged: @aliveskeleton @stxrrstruckk @frogz-r-gay @xx-vamp1r3-k1ss3s-xx (I might make a tag list for my covers and music stuff so if ppl want me to do that lmk) ALSO @silly-boi-adventures you were very enthusiastic Abt my covers so I thought I'd tag you here too
CHORDS AND LYRICS AND STUFF
(anyone that can play landslide will know the verse is a complete rip off of that with a different root note ToT)
I might have accidentally sang different lyrics than are here, this is what I have written
capo three
[verse chords]
X3203X
X2203X
X0203X
X2203X
picking pattern: AGDB
The passive aggressive remarks
claw at the seams of my lips
You’re the woodpecker I’m the tree bark
scratch all the worms out my skin
(Interlude w all the same stuff but nothing on the b string for one of the rounds)
shoot down my messenger pigeon
countdown the days to come home
radiowaves got nothin on you sweetheart
but that's all I've ever known
[Chorus]
32003X
22003X
X2203X
X3203X
(figure out the picking pattern yourself idk it either)
The constellations only penciled us in
do you promise to stay my best friend?
I still can’t understand the words that you say
just before you drift away
[back to verse]
When you're lost in that gray
i know im only ever dark to you
you don't hear a word I say
i hear your every whisper (x2-4)
[outro thing]
Verse with open B string and then first string 3rd fret (G my beloved)
IF I KNOW YOU WELL I WILL UNABASHEDLY EXPLAIN THE MEANING OF EVERY SINGLE LYRIC IN THIS SONG I PUT WAY TOO MUCH THOUGHT INTO THESE SHITTY LYRICS
prince!satoru holding your hand whilst you both waddle bare beet on the shallow edges of a pond you just discovered somewhere in the middle of the palace orchards.
he’s infuriatingly smug about it, too— summer skies for eyes focused on the way you grumble about ‘walking just fine by yourself’ and clutching the warmth of his hand all the same. c’mon, just admit it, you’re head over heels in lo—
(maybe a little too focused, though, because he doesn’t notice a moss covered rock just a blink away and ends up falling on his butt— taking you down with him.)
