Hi there, Meagan! This is a semi-appless, OC rpg set in Dublin, Ireland that focuses on the residents and what happens when online identities affect real life. Could I get an opinion? Thank you so much!
Hello, sorry this took a hot second! So starting with your url and icon, I’m guessing this might be a secrets rp, which are always fun and a great way to incite drama. Onto you rmain page, the graphics are gorgeous! I'm obsessed with city backgrounds, and I think I spot Keegan Allen in the sidebar, and I'm obsessedwith him too. My only thing is that the page is super blue, so I might suggest switching up the color scheme to use some of the other colors in the graphics if you get a lot of comments on this. I'm not a huge fan of the font in the graphic on your nav page, but I'm super picky about those and usually like them to match across the board, so that's probably my problem. I'm reading the plot now, and I would definitely recommend some color scheme changes with the font & the background because the white is a strain to read against the light blue. I also recommend something to break up the monotony of the page like a really simple border that wouldn't make your page seem too busy with the background or some blockquotes like you have on the rules page! Love the summary and think it's the perfect way to tell how the rp's going to be run. The plot is a little on the long side, and I might cut out some of the first paragraph about signing up for Chatspace and just cut right to the chase. I love your location page, but I'd recommend slapping the same PSD from your graphics on the locations just so it matches and maybe some blockquotes around here as well. There is some continuity lacking across the pages. Overall, the content is great, and I think you have a solid plot. I would just fix up a couple aesthetic things and make everything match a little better. Good luck with your rp!