Hi bub! I was just wondering if we could possibly get a shoutout from you? We’re an appless OC college roleplay about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We've just reopened and we'd love to have some more slots filled. Thank you!
Hi, Stephanie! I was just wondering if we could possibly get a shoutout from you? We’re an OC college roleplay, that has been open for nearly 3 months, about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We have a very active dash and we'd love to get some applications for some of the faces on our MW list. Thank you!
Hi! I was just wondering if we could possibly get an opinion from you? We’re an OC college roleplay, that has been open for nearly 3 months, about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We have a very active dash and we'd love to get some applications for some of the faces on our MW list. Thank you!
sure!
congrats on lasting 3 months, first off! it’s sad that it feels like such a triumph, but it is, and that should tell people about the admins’ dedication. the three month slump combined with school starting can make activity take quite a dip, but judging by the fact that you’re asking for an opinion, you’re aware of that and are working hard to keep things going, which i think should tell people even more.
in your faq, you refer to the reader as “pup” multiple times, and a lot of people may find that patronizing, which may in turn create a reason for otherwise interested parties to close out of the page. in general i definitely suggest avoiding any pet names because some people really hate them, and you want to appeal to the widest audience possible!
the plot isnt “original” but it’s definitely an interesting twist on something that’s been played on a lot for a long time! it’s impressive and encouraging to the rest of us that something fairly simple has been going on for so long, and i really do wish you luck as you continue through this. i don’t have much to say since this is an appless, but i think that this is a good example of the right way to do an appless, and how they don’t all die within a week.
Hi, petal! was just wondering if we could possibly get a shoutout from you? We’re an OC college roleplay about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We have a very active dash and we'd love to get some applications for some of the faces on our MW list. Thank you!
Hi, Frost! I was just wondering if we could possibly get an opinion from you? We’re an OC college roleplay about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We have a very active dash and we'd love to get some applications before our event tomorrow evening! Thank you!
Disclaimer: This is merely my opinion of a roleplay and is not meant to harm/hurt/demean the group! This is just my opinion and I am offering some constructive criticism on things that I believe could be altered/amended. Do not feel that you need to do any of these things since it is merely how I feel. Without further ado, you can find your First Look Review below the cut!
Icon & URL - Your URL is very short and to the point which I like. It shows and accurately explains what your roleplay is about, which is very good so people know what to expect when they click on your page. I also like your icon a lot, since it has the acronym for the school involved in it. Overall, I would give you a [10/10]!
Theme & Links - Personally, I am not a fan of boxed themes for roleplay mains. For me it just doesn’t look that great, but that is merely my opinion. I am someone who is very crazy about navigation and organization and you have done a very good job with that. It was very easy to navigate your page and look through everything since everything was clearly labelled. Overall I would give you a [6/10] for Theme & Links.
Graphics - Your graphics are rather simple and I like it very much. My only issue with them is that they don’t really show that you are an University roleplay. I think that if you changed them a bit to show that it is a University/Greek roleplay it might help people know what you are more, but that’s just my opinion! Overall I would give you a [7/10] for Graphics.
Plot - Your plot is very simple and to the point. It is not overly complicated and it tells enough of a story for everyone to know the rivalry between the houses and what lead to their current situation. I also like how there is a short little plot summary at the bottom so if anyone is confused everything is clarified! Overall, I would give you a [10/10] for plot!
Rules - I love how you put a limit on two characters, because sometimes in appless roleplays things can get crazy with people taking on more characters than they can handle. Overall, your rules are very simple and cover everything that someone needs to know while they are applying and things that they should keep in mind once they are apart of the group. I would give you a [10/10] for your rules section!
Character Bios - N/A since you are an appless roleplay
Hi, lovely. I was just wondering if we could possibly get an opinion from you? We’re an OC college roleplay about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We're going on our second month of being open, have a very active dash, and we'd love to get some applications to fill up our remaining slots! Thank you!
Sure, but remember this is my opinion and my opinion only, I do not mean to offend you or your rpg! I adore your theme, it is absolutely gorgeous. The color scheme is light, calming and matches your theme and graphics. Your graphics are amazing and I think they match your plot as well. At first I thought your plot is very basic for a college rp but then I read further into it and I find it very interesting, I like the little twist you added to it. I like that you added a page where we could learn more about the houses. I like the part where you told your players to take their time when they apply and not just rush in the rules, I also love the rule you added about how the members have to wait three days and reply to at least three starters before they can make their own starter. Overall, I love the way you wrote the entire rules page. Your app is the basic appless rpg app. I do wish there was some room for non binary characters, although I do know the houses are for males and females only. Anyways, Good luck with your rpg!
Hi, lovely. I was just wondering if we could possibly get a shoutout from you? We’re an OC college roleplay about the rivalry between two Greek houses, which lead to the burning down of the sorority house, who are now being forced to live together until their house is repaired. We've just celebrated our first month of being open, have a very active dash, and we'd love to get some applications to fill up our remaining slots! Thank you!