Witch on the Holy Night is charming and grips your attention with its strong performances and kinetic format, but it needed more time.
Wrote a review for Mahoyo for work! It was really fun, totally loved the characters, and I liked the way the kinetic novel format was. My one complaint was that I played it with the English localization for work purposes and it was really unpolished. Tons of typos (the most egregious being ‘thongs’ instead of ‘things’), grammatical errors, and punctuation mistakes. All of them were ones that were clear oversights and not just a disagreement over the Oxford comma.
Like, it felt like it needed just more time. Some of the more unnatural-reading lines clashed with the much more natural flow of other sentences, which either meant there were 2+ translators but no editor, or there was only one translator who didn’t have the time to go back and fix these mistakes. Either way, I hope they release a patch soon with an edited translation, but I doubt they will.
