I think one of the worst things a story can be is unproblematic.
Nothing makes a story more unreadable than being able to see the author squirm apologetically for the story they actually want to writeβwringing their hands and imploring the reader please, please donβt be mad, I know itβs ideologically questionable but I need you to not be mad at me!
For example: a Good Kingβ’οΈ. Itβs one thing for a story to present a fictional monarchy and ask me to root for it. Itβs another thing for a story to say, hey, I know what youβre thinkingβbut donβt worry! I can justify this premise! I have introduced a lot of convoluted self-aware political justifications for why my king is good and likable without actually asking any risky ideological questions! These characters arenβt actually problematic! Donβt be mad at me!
Commit to the bit. Apologetic, defensive writing designed to bypass obvious criticisms often winds up offending me far more than stories that are just kind of surface-level problematic. If Iβm gonna be a hater you cannot stop me; the more you insist that a character is actually a good oil tycoon because of all these exceptional situations and beyond my reproach, the more I resent you and hate your stupid book.







