Its near neoghbor andthe next largest ocean called the Mc-Whirt hian sea,s but which is the Proteste ntian Ocean,
this is just confusing; don't tell me what it should be called if that's not what it IS called.
on account of its heat waves sweeping into the cool Angelinian sea,s and drawing down upon its waters
I'm so confused. Why do its heat waves mean that it's improperly named??
the colder atmosphers of the Calverinian winters, is a most dangerous and fatal oceans, for typhoons which carry all before them, even in sw[ee]ping the land, occur t so frequently that no one dares trave travel on it during the typhoon seasons. The Angelinian seas also have frequently severe typhoons which havocs every thing in an instant.Governer Hanson, and his brother Gover Robert Angelic Vivian, with their two wives, brothers,
So the brothers have two wives? The wives have brothers? So the kids of the four wives just belong to all the brothers??
and the little Vivian Girls, are the main ones related in this story.The beaut iful children are so pretty that it could never be described.
I'm just gonna say it. This makes me uncomfy. Also, don't tell me who the main characters are going to be. Just write the damn story and I'll figure it out. Also, don't be a coward, just describe them it's not that hard. They have hair and eyes, right? They are aged? Are they freshly born??
Before and during the war as we will see as we proceed, these brave little gigls passed through indescriable horrors , but their imprisonment at Calverine, and Andrean, was the worse suffering which they experienced before for more than fourty the out break of the great war.
In this story for more than fourty three years, child slavery exi existed in the Calverinian country.Hundreds of thousands of children, torn from their pa parents we were thrown into the horrible factories, made to work themselves to death without getting a cent, and horrors upon horrors almost equalt equaled that of that perdition.
How is this a sustainable system? If you work children to death, they stop being a sustainable resource.
Abbieannia made four attempts to break this evil, in wagin four wars with Glandelinia and though successful in the war did not completely stamp out this dreadful canker eating at the heart of the wicked nation.
Now you have to sell me on why Abbieannia is in the right, or why they're good; or why Glandelinia deserves to have their way of life punished by the unquestionably perfect Christians. You have to prove to me that Glandelinia aren't just a bunch of baby-eaters because they aren't Christian.
Also, how is the child-slavery to the extent of death the canker? They're supposedly already an evil nation.
Before the Glandco-Anglinian war broke out Abbieannia had threatened to strike down the Glandelinian a nation with one deliberate war, but other nations mediated untill the danger of struggling with the foe was averted for only two weeks and then bang, bang, as Angelinia drove in herself despite all mediators.
This makes me uncomfortable
The fifth war , the War of 1841 was so successful for Abbieannia, that she succeeded in freeing the Calverinian nation
How do we know Calverinia was freed and that Abbieannia isn't just trouncing in there unannounced and uninvited?
from the powers of Glande linia, but failed to have the desired effects of the child slave horrors. Smaller nations not named had been overthrown
I don't think 'overthrown' is the right word here
I find this difficult to believe
of chid children alone had been carried off, and for fourty years, the poor childp children had lain blound and bleeding in these Glandelinian child slave prisons of horror,
I find this hard to believe. First, children don't remain children forever. Second, you just said they get worked to death, but now they just languish, bound and bleeding to death?? Does this planet have some kind of weird effect on the humans that colonized it? Maybe children really do stay children for forty years
inploring for help from bondage seemingly in vain.
Who are they imploring? Because clearly they aren't imploring their captors, and I highly doubt their captors are letting them run away or write messages. Also, what kind of population are just losing millions of kids and not complaining about it? They're coming across the borders to steal children?? How is this sustainable?? HeNnRrRyYyYYy!!!
No slavery had been as cruel and shocking as this, and Angelinia h herself looked on in horror, but as long Hanson or his brother did not make anymove that threatened war with Glandelinia, nothing could be done.
I don't understand what this has to do with anything. Why exactly is it that they don't want to go to war with this other country over what is apparently such a big deal?? Why does it have to be one of these brothers to make or not make a move?
During the bloodiest war of eighteen fourty three, the Calverinian country succeeded to Angelinia, and Abbieannia, and this brought the first serious tr trouble between Glandelinia and Abbieannia, which led to the destruction of the ship loaded with children, and the Kings Wife and daughter and which caused the Kings death when he heard the news. At the same time Abyssinkile h had desired to make a junction with Angelinia, and at this Glande linia went made mad, and struck a blow against Abyssinkile, but Abbieannia in the war of eighteen fourty one put a stop to her folly.
Only two years later after the great war was over, the child slavery which had only slackened, only was renewed and expanded so rapidly that the Zimmermannia councils rushed orders for the crushing of that worse of evils and so war was declared, and Calverinia invaded, the foe driven out, and their own couj try invaded by the Abbieannians, and the wicked nation brought to her knees. Some of the most terrible things in the first part of the story are the ravages caused by the Glandco-Angelinian war, and by typhooons of great and destructive force.Great heat waves moving northward cross the Calverinian country, and also the cool Angelinian seas, and as it sweeps into the atmosphere of the Angelinian seas, the hot tropical sun cau_es the lower layers of air to expand, while lifting the upper layers like a great gaseous sheet at the same time. The lifted gas then spreads uniformly, outward in all directions, th[u]s causing the heated area to become one of low pressure, while the sorro surrounding area has its pressure increased.
And now for the weather. I'll be back with more snark in about fifty pages
An ascent of air from an limited area causes an up uprush which forces a local chimney through the uppr upper [s]t ratum it contains, becomes condensed thus liberating as heat, a large ammount of energy, which had been previously stored u p up in the process of evaporation. In turn this still rarifies the ascending current s[o] that the draught is strengthened. Warn vapor laden air blows in from all sides at the bottom to supply the partial vacuum, and the current in meeting at the center and rush past one another produce a whirling motion, which is increased by the additional new volumes of light air, which is condensed into clouds.These spread outward in the upper regions, and the central area [b]eco[m]es quic[k]ly through so[m] mysterious cause one i[m]mense suction, which increases in violence, the motion, becoming more spirial, b[e]ing now more than overcome, by suction into the great roaring vortext. Motion around the center v dev[o]leps a stronger vacuum with the greatest violence in its immense stem of thousand mile funnel, which layers of clouds spread far from the whirling storm brings upon the
