oh my GOD, I love this comic! I started reading it a few hours ago and just got up to speed with it and it's just- AAAAAA
first of all: the dialogue is just SO good, it is a definite strong point. LOTS of funny moments, very in character, everyone is distinct, all the emotions feel real and most of all it's so easy to imagine everyone speaking in their voices!!
secondly, the story: SUPER engaging, I'm so anxious over wade, bob and jack, dark feels like a genuine threat, marks guilt alreayd feels like it's gonna be a big thing later on. so many good things that I do not havr the words to describe!! I make theories as I read and am motivated and want to find out what's going on! there's such a good balance between exposition and secrets <3 I wonder if it's only marks uhhh others? that are there or if those like anti will appear too?
third: the characters are so tasty and *chef's kiss*. i don't need to harp on wilford, because that glorious being is so so sososo brilliant and i love how you've done them! sparkle bitch bastard conman prettyboy <3 jack sheer rage and volume is iconic. wade sacrificing himself genuinely touched me. bobs cool nonchalance and calm goodbye is such a nice contrast to the energy of everyone else. marks increasing anxiety and -frankly- trauma not overtaking everything as he keeps cracking jokes is a very mark thing to do. I'm not too familiar with yami since I've only watched one or two of his videos years ago, but his quiet presence is well done so he doesn't take over bobs role as the straight man, but he is still a very grounding force and gets things back on track, which I admire!
FOURTH OF ALL: the art is just MWA tasty! it is so fascinating to watch as your art and coloring and shading evolves while also being able to see how your style looks like in other people's coloring and shading! I loved seeing the shift from the first page to now the 109th and I've been looking at which pages don't have a different artist credited (as i assume it's colored by you) and the development in your coloring and shading is so noticeable and so fun that it just reminds me of wow... progress is real.
and last but DEFINITELY not least: the humor!!! it's so good!!!!! it's my favorite aspect of this comic besides the world-building. every panel with wilford, that one panel where jack and wade try to convince springtrap to go elsewhere, mark saying he should shut up, the fact that putting bonbon on freddys hand actually worked, sans' puns and the fact the others joined in on them, the slapstick and the yes, and!s on behalf of the crew, jack being a bitch towards dark, IT'S ALL GREAT AND MY FAVORITE PART!
if you're ever in need of extra colorists or anything, feel free to contact me free of charge. my tumblr doesn't have a lot of my art uploaded, but I can dm examples and stuff ofc <3. I'm so excited about this series and I'm definitely going to be keeping an eye on this from now on.
excited for the next chapter, but also reminding ALL of you to stretch, drink water, eat some fruits and go outside to take a deep breath. also relax your jaw and do hand exercises.