♤ Read pinned for more information. || barely active, mostly active over on our writing blog, colored-comas. || originally created this blog to support our parter system, hello Siren! || DNI - any syscourse related blogs, strictly nsfw blogs, believe in narc abuse or any type of "disorder abuse", people under the age fifteen or above age forty, ship discource folks are on thin ice. ♤
"It might be a coincidence, but, this started when you got here." Nyx pointed out, it made Adams mouth go dry.
"There is something about you."
-
🌟 New chapter is finally out!! Just in time for this NRFTI holiday, too! Happy Birthday to our very beloved Nyx, even though this chapter is not the most kind to you... 🤍
Happy New Year everyone!! And a very happy NRFTI Holiday month, January is very important to us!! We are finally posting the official character designs!! Starting with these two, and going through the entire WarZone cast 🤍
Created by @sns-sims !
[ Mitchell Hayes // Jaime Aces ]
Mitchell stands at 6'0 tall, with midnight blue eyes and warm toned brown hair - Jaime stands at 5'7 with pale blue eyes and fluffy brown hair, of course he is missing his puppy ears sadly! His ears are folded down and resemble a baby german shepherd, his tail is quite small too!
We hope you guys love them and their features as much as we adore them!! We have so many more characters to post soon as well!
And obviously once again, iykyk - however these are our very beloved OCs 🤍
Commissions and donations are finally up and running!! 🩵
As I reach a more and more difficult living situation and it becomes harder and harder for me to comfortably exist as a disabled person in my environment, the more important things like this have become for me.
Therefore, I have opened up two types of art commissions on Ko-Fi !! With a slot limit of fifteen overall, as to not overwhelm me.
[ Link ]
For the sake of engagement, here are some of my most recent drawings.
Any bases used are created by the very lovely Mellon_Soup, who has indeed given permission for folks to use their bases in commissions. As I have severe arthritis, bases are a very important accommodation for me.
Reminder that our inbox is always open for discussions, questions, and anything at all. Since we are unable to properly write, I'd love to interact with people who might have thoughts, theories, or suggestions for the story or characters!
Our shared laptop has been broken for a while, which means we've had zero access to writing more for any projects we have. We're getting a new one asap, but obviously this means no further writing until we get that sorted out. This happened immediately after we finally posted WZ, and has been honestly devastating for our team as we wanted to stop having such long pauses between posts.
Our plans when we get a new laptop include,
Continuing WZ, obviously.
Fixing up the writing in UB, describing characters better and fleshing out the timeline more clearly.
Continuing work on project "B.B." and "A.A."
Long term plans,
Voice acted animation for WZ.
Posting updated/fixed NRFTI Sims.
Recruiting another person to the creation team, though we are unsure about this one - having more people behind the ideas seems fun.
The third book is finally ready to be posted, with multiple chapters up and ready to leave readers on one of our biggest cliffhanger endings ever..
Click the links above to read everything so far, yes including the rewritten version of Colored Comas!! Upwards Bound could probably use a refresh too, but we'll leave it be for now. Enjoy!!
Standing in a grass clearing, trees surrounding it in a circle shape, a stream of water splitting the area. The colors looked artificial, the grass crunched like plastic, the sun behaved as a decoration - the way it lit up the area only provided suspense, the light moved and dimmed seemingly for dramatic effect rather than being true sunlight.
Everything felt so real, it was hard to convince himself that it was a dream, tightness in his throat and a forming headache.
Lucid dreaming, he thought - repeating that in his head, over and over.
Rapid blinking, watching a long leathery looking tentacle slip out from its hiding in the trees.
Quickly, it was followed by several others, a blur of inky dark blues as it launched itself forward, out of the branches..
The third book is finally ready to be posted, with multiple chapters up and ready to leave readers on one of our biggest cliffhanger endings ever..
Click the links above to read everything so far, yes including the rewritten version of Colored Comas!! Upwards Bound could probably use a refresh too, but we'll leave it be for now. Enjoy!!
Standing in a grass clearing, trees surrounding it in a circle shape, a stream of water splitting the area. The colors looked artificial, the grass crunched like plastic, the sun behaved as a decoration - the way it lit up the area only provided suspense, the light moved and dimmed seemingly for dramatic effect rather than being true sunlight.
Everything felt so real, it was hard to convince himself that it was a dream, tightness in his throat and a forming headache.
Lucid dreaming, he thought - repeating that in his head, over and over.
Rapid blinking, watching a long leathery looking tentacle slip out from its hiding in the trees.
Quickly, it was followed by several others, a blur of inky dark blues as it launched itself forward, out of the branches..
The third book is finally ready to be posted, with multiple chapters up and ready to leave readers on one of our biggest cliffhanger endings ever..
Click the links above to read everything so far, yes including the rewritten version of Colored Comas!! Upwards Bound could probably use a refresh too, but we'll leave it be for now. Enjoy!!
Standing in a grass clearing, trees surrounding it in a circle shape, a stream of water splitting the area. The colors looked artificial, the grass crunched like plastic, the sun behaved as a decoration - the way it lit up the area only provided suspense, the light moved and dimmed seemingly for dramatic effect rather than being true sunlight.
Everything felt so real, it was hard to convince himself that it was a dream, tightness in his throat and a forming headache.
Lucid dreaming, he thought - repeating that in his head, over and over.
Rapid blinking, watching a long leathery looking tentacle slip out from its hiding in the trees.
Quickly, it was followed by several others, a blur of inky dark blues as it launched itself forward, out of the branches..
Hi hi! Do you think by any chance you could do a list of serious/refined sounding names with a cute nickname? For instance Victoire turning into Vicky. Sorry if this is too big an ask, but ty nonetheless and I hope your day is going great!!
Refined Names with Cute Nicknames
-> feel free to comment suggestions, I'll do my best to add them to the list.
Fully packed with lore, lots of character information, and some spoilers if you look deep enough - this new quiz certainly seems fit for anyone trying to piece together the story! Though, it can also simply be fun and interesting for people who aren't interested in theorizing or digging into it !!
Having taken weeks to complete, we hope this quiz is entertaining for anyone who decides to take it.
Reblog with your results, or any interesting things you've found hidden or stated within the questions, answers, or the results...
I’ve seen mystery/thriller authors use the same handful of red herrings too many times to count. So here are some (hopefully not as common) red herrings for your writing.
1. The Unreliable Narrator's Bias
Your narrator can play favourites and scheme and twist the way your readers interpret the story. Use this to your advantage! A character portrayed as untrustworthy can really be someone innocent the narrator framed, vice versa.
2. The Loyal Traitor
A character with a history of betrayal or questionable loyalty is an obvious suspect. They did it once, they could do it again, right? Wrong! They’ve actually changed and the real traitor is someone you trusted.
3. The Conflicted Expert
An expert—like a detective, scientist, or historian—analyses a piece of evidence. They’re ultimately wrong, either due to bias, missing data, or pressure to provide quick answers.
4. The Overly Competent Ally
You know that one sidekick or ally who’s somehow always ahead of the curve? They’re just really knowledgeable, your characters know this, but it makes it hard to trust them. Perfection is suspicious! But in this case, they’re actually just perfect.
5. The Misleading Emotional Clue
Maybe one of your characters is seen crying, angry, or suspiciously happy after xyz event. Characters suspect them, but turns out they’re just having a personal issue. (People have lives outside of yours MC smh). Or it could be a cover-up.
6. A Misleading Alibi
At first this character’s alibi seems perfect but once the protag digs into it, it has a major hole/lie. Maybe they were in a different location or the person they claimed to be with was out of town.
7. The Odd Pattern
Have a seemingly significant pattern—symbols left at crime scenes, items stolen in a specific order, crimes on specific dates. Then make it deliberately planted to mislead.
8. The Misinterpreted Relationship
A character was secretly close to a victim/suspect, making them a suspect. Turns out they were hiding a completely unrelated secret; an affair, hidden family connection, etc.
9. A Forgotten Grudge
Create a grudge or past feud and use it to cast suspicion on an innocent character. Introducing an aspect of their past also helps flesh out their character and dynamics as a group + plant distrust.
10. The Faked Death
Luke Castellan, need I say more (I will)? A supposedly innocent character dies, but turns out they faked it and were never a victim in the first place. They just needed to be out of the picture.
11. The Mistaken Eavesdropper
A character overhears a threat, argument, etc. They suspect B based on this convo, but turns out they just came to a false conclusion. (Or did they?)
12. The Forgetful Alibi
Someone confesses to hearing/seeing a clue, but turns out they were mistaken. Maybe they thought they heard a certain ringtone, or saw xyz which C always wears, but their memory was faulty or influenced by stress.
Looking For More Writing Tips And Tricks?
Check out the rest of Quillology with Haya; a blog dedicated to writing and publishing tips for authors!
Need some creative ways to give your characters a real fight for survival? Here are 10 ideas:
1. Punctured Artery
A puncture to major arteries like the femoral artery (thigh), the carotid artery (neck), or radial artery (arm) can cause rapid blood loss. It starts off with a sharp pain, weakness, lightheadedness and eventually can lead to hypovolemic shock. Requires urgent medical attention.
2. Punctured Eye Socket
A punctured eye socket will cause blood vessel damage leading to internal bleeding. I would use this for non-combat characters trying to get away. The eyes are an easy weak spot + you don’t need much strength to cause a critical injury/puncture. Also good for a protag's tragic backstory.
3. Torn Achilles Tendon
A torn Achilles tendon can result in severe bleeding if nearby arteries or veins are damaged. Your character will be forced to hobble away as pain causes their foot to swell and bruise. Plus, you can easily adjust the pain levels per your scene, from swift cuts to explosive jumps.
4. Neck Hyperextension (Hangman’s Fracture)
This injury will fracture the C2 vertebra and can lead to spinal cord damage, paralysis or sudden death. This isn’t a light injury your character can come back from, so I would suggest using it only when you’re aiming for death.
5. Pierced Lung
A punctured lung will lead to a pneumothorax where air escapes into the chest cavity, collapsing the lung. Characters with this injury may have difficulty breathing, chest pain, and a cough that produces frothy blood (all the dramatics you need).
6. Severe Concussion
A severe concussion will lead to confusion, vomiting, immobility and memory loss. More dangerously, brain swelling, internal bleeding and damaged brain tissue. Plus, it has a long recovery period.
7. Shattered Pelvis
If you need something severe that restricts mobility but also causes severe pain then this is perfect! Involves signs of shock, internal bleeding, numbness, swelling—really a lot of things. Can occur if OC falls from a high place, hit repeatedly, car accident, etc.
8. Internal Bleeding from Blunt Force Trauma
I like using this when you need something subtle since it doesn't show immediate symptoms. Over time, they will feel weak, cold, nauseous, and intense pain. Perfect if you want that 'everyone made it out then suddenly someone collapses' moment.
9. Intestinal Perforation
A sharp blow or penetrating wound can cause a tear in the intestines, leaking bacteria into the body cavity, then peritonitis. It can go from small stomach pain to near death pretty quickly. Without prompt medical care, sepsis can set in, causing organ failure and death.
10. Cut to the Jugular
If you need something more visibly dramatic then go with the classic cut to the jugular. A warm rush of blood will pour out, and blood would spurt with every heartbeat. Causes panic, choking, and internal bleeding too. All the blood and gore you need.
This is a quick, brief list of ideas to provide writers inspiration. Since it is a shorter blog, I have not covered the injuries in detail. Remember the worse the injury the more likely your character is to die (so be realistic folks). Happy writing! :)
Looking For More Writing Tips And Tricks?
Check out the rest of Quillology with Haya; a blog dedicated to writing and publishing tips for authors!
Other Words for "Look" + With meanings | List for writers
Many people create lists of synonyms for the word 'said,' but what about the word 'look'? Here are some synonyms that I enjoy using in my writing, along with their meanings for your reference. While all these words relate to 'look,' they each carry distinct meanings and nuances, so I thought it would be helpful to provide meanings for each one.
Gaze - To look steadily and intently, especially in admiration or thought.
Glance - A brief or hurried look.
Peek - A quick and typically secretive look.
Peer - To look with difficulty or concentration.
Scan - To look over quickly but thoroughly.
Observe - To watch carefully and attentively.
Inspect - To look at closely in order to assess condition or quality.
Stare - To look fixedly or vacantly at someone or something.
Glimpse - To see or perceive briefly or partially.
Eye - To look or stare at intently.
Peruse - To read or examine something with great care.
Scrutinize - To examine or inspect closely and thoroughly.
Behold - To see or observe a thing or person, especially a remarkable one.
Witness - To see something happen, typically a significant event.
Spot - To see, notice, or recognize someone or something.
Contemplate - To look thoughtfully for a long time at.
Sight - To suddenly or unexpectedly see something or someone.
Ogle - To stare at in a lecherous manner.
Leer - To look or gaze in an unpleasant, malicious way.
Gawk - To stare openly and stupidly.
Gape - To stare with one's mouth open wide, in amazement.
Squint - To look with eyes partially closed.
Regard - To consider or think of in a specified way.
Admire - To regard with pleasure, wonder, and approval.
Skim - To look through quickly to gain superficial knowledge.
Reconnoiter - To make a military observation of a region.
Flick - To look or move the eyes quickly.
Rake - To look through something rapidly and unsystematically.
Glare - To look angrily or fiercely.
Peep - To look quickly and secretly through an opening.
Focus - To concentrate one's visual effort on.
Discover - To find or realize something not clear before.
Spot-check - To examine something briefly or at random.
Devour - To look over with eager enthusiasm.
Examine - To inspect in detail to determine condition.
Feast one's eyes - To look at something with great enjoyment.
Catch sight of - To suddenly or unexpectedly see.
Clap eyes on - To suddenly see someone or something.
Set eyes on - To look at, especially for the first time.
Take a dekko - Colloquial for taking a look.
Leer at - To look or gaze in a suggestive manner.
Rubberneck - To stare at something in a foolish way.
Make out - To manage to see or read with difficulty.
Lay eyes on - To see or look at.
Pore over - To look at or read something intently.
Ogle at - To look at in a lecherous or predatory way.
Pry - To look or inquire into something in a determined manner.
Dart - To look quickly or furtively.
Drink in - To look at with great enjoyment or fascination.
Bask in - To look at or enjoy something for a period of time.
Calling all aspiring storytellers with hearts full of whimsy! Get ready to sprinkle a touch of enchantment into your scenes with my Scene Wo
683 members, 435 posts about #creative writing #creative writers #helping writers • Guiding Writers to New Heights