Under Her Thumb
My first attempt writing a long-ish caption. Third-person narration is not my writing strong suit. I’d love some feedback and to know if this is something you enjoyed reading and would like to see more of.
Late afternoon sun trickled in through the blinds. The blissfully content girl had her thumb nestled deep between those plump, rosy lips, cheeks gently hollowing with each rhythmic suckle. Her eyes dreamy and distant, lashes fluttering like tiny butterfly wings against pale flushed skin.















