Courtesy or more than that? (5)
Synopsis: As their unforgettable road trip comes to a close and the Jeep turns back toward the reserve, Neteyam finds himself completely at peace, entirely unbothered by the return to his rigid daily responsibilities. Having traded his strict military checklists for spontaneous adventures across Argentina's wetlands, mountains, and thermal pools, he reflects on the journey as the best decision of his life.
Warnings: Human AU, slow burn, slight mentions of Sully family dynamics, Neteyam being an "overthinker." lots of fluff, Human AU. In this universe Neteyam is 18. To understand this AU you need to read the blogs that explains the dynamics between the characters:
The further south they drove, the more the landscape flattened into the immense, windswept gray of the Patagonian steppe. The wind became a physical force, buffeting the Jeep and whistling through the door seals. Canuto spent most of his time curled in a tight ball on Neteyam’s lap, buried beneath two technical fleece jackets, his black nose twitching as he shivered.
They hit the iconic Route 40, stopping at places Tsawke had kept mapped in her head for years. But as they pulled into a famous lakeside lookout near San Carlos de Bariloche, the excitement in her eyes fractured.
Where she expected pristine glacial shores, plastic bottles trapped in the briars rattled in the wind. At a campsite near Esquel where she used to watch condors, a new gravel quarry had chewed away half the hillside, leaving gray dust over everything.
Tsawke stood by the front bumper of the Jeep, her camera hanging forgotten against her technical jacket. Her curls were whipping wildly around her face, but she didn’t care. Her jaw was set, her brown eyes clouded with a quiet, heavy grief as she looked at a pile of discarded tourist trash near the water's edge.
“It’s changing,” she murmured, her voice flat, barely carrying over the wind. “It’s not just the trash, Sully. The glacier line on that peak... it’s higher than it was three years ago. It’s like the wild parts are shrinking.”
Neteyam walked up behind her, stepping closer to block the biting wind from her side. He didn't offer a hollow cliché or a standard military solution. He just placed a heavy, reassuring hand on her shoulder, letting her feel his warmth through the technical fabric.
“The world is heavy right now, Tsawke,” he said softly, his voice low and steady. “But you’re still looking. That matters.”
She looked down, leaning into his touch for a brief second before a sudden, sharp tremor beneath Neteyam's jacket caught her attention. She looked at him closely. Neteyam’s lips were a faint shade of blue, and his jaw was clenched tight to keep his teeth from chattering. Down in the passenger footwell, Canuto let out a tiny, miserable whine, shivering violently despite being wrapped in three blankets.
Neteyam tried to pull off a tough smile. “The tire pressure is stable,” he offered weakly, trying to redirect. “We can still make it to Santa Cruz if we—”
“Sully, stop,” Tsawke interrupted. The sadness vanished from her eyes, instantly replaced by that sharp, protective authority he knew so well. She reached out, touching his frozen cheek with the back of her hand. “You’re freezing. And Canuto looks like a vibrating toy.”
“I’m fine,” Neteyam protested, though his breath hitched from the cold. “You wanted to see the southern fjords. We have the gear.”
“The gear is for a Patagonian summer, not a polar vortex, you stubborn idiot,” she said, but her voice was completely soft, filled with a tenderness that made his heart skip. She didn't hesitate. She walked over to the driver's side, threw open the door, and looked at the map on the dashboard. “We’re turning around.”
Neteyam blinked, astonished. “What? But your route—the glaciers—”
“The glaciers aren't going anywhere, and I’m not losing my navigator or my co-pilot to hypothermia,” she said firmly, tossing a warm thermos of tea into his hands. “There’s a thermal valley up toward Mendoza and Neuquén. Red rocks, hot springs, and actual sunshine. We’re going there.”
As she hopped into the driver's seat and started the engine, Neteyam climbed into the passenger side, pulling a shivering Canuto tightly against his chest. He looked over at Tsawke as she shifted into reverse, turning their backs to the freezing south.
She had spent months planning this precise route, but the moment he and a stray dog started to suffer, she hadn't hesitated to throw the entire itinerary out the window. Looking at her determined profile, Neteyam realized that his safety—their comfort—mattered more to her than any destination on a map.
“Mendoza it is,” Neteyam murmured, a deep, genuine warmth finally spreading through his chest.
Tsawke reached over the console, giving Canuto a quick scratch and letting her fingers brush Neteyam’s hand on the tea mug. “Shut up and turn up the heater, Sully. Let’s go find some sun.”
The monotonous hum of the pavement shifted to a deeper rumble as the Jeep headed north, away from the freezing gales of the deep south. Inside the cabin, the heater was blasting a comforting, dry warmth, and Canuto was finally fast asleep across Neteyam's lap, his scruffy chin resting peacefully on Neteyam’s knee.
But the atmosphere inside the car remained heavy.
Tsawke’s grip on the steering wheel was white-knuckled. Her eyes were fixed rigidly on the long, straight line of the highway, her jaw set so tight that a small muscle in her cheek was twitching. She hadn't adjusted the radio in an hour, and the silence from the driver's side was dense and stormy.
Neteyam watched her profile silently. He knew the difference between her playful frustration and the deep, wounded anger she was carrying now. It wasn't about the turned-around trip or the freezing weather. It was what she had seen at the lakes and the quarries.
"Hey," Neteyam said softly, his voice low so he wouldn't startle the sleeping dog. "Talk to me. You're going to snap that steering wheel in half."
Tsawke didn't look at him, but her chest rose and fell in a sharp, agitated breath. "I'm just tired, Sully."
"You're not tired, you're furious," Neteyam countered gently, leaning a bit closer across the center console. "Is it the south? The trash?"
That broke the dam. Tsawke let out a bitter, humorless laugh, her fingers gripping the wheel even tighter. "It’s just... humanity, Neteyam. It infuriates me. People are so incredibly, blindly selfish."
She finally glanced at him, her brown eyes flashing with a mix of sorrow and rage that cut right through him. "How can they look at a glacial lake that took thousands of years to form and think it’s a good place to dump plastic? How can they look at an ancient hillside and see nothing but gravel to buy and sell? They just can't see the harm they're doing to nature. All the pretty, valuable things in this world are going to end just so a few people can fill their pockets with money."
She looked back at the road, her voice dropping into a fierce, shaking whisper. "They think they're so smart with their industries and their margins. But an old Cree proverb keeps running through my head, and it’s hitting me like a physical punch today: When the last tree has fallen, the last river poisoned, and the last fish caught, only then will they realize that they cannot eat money. They won't be able to eat their rocks, or their bank accounts, or their objects. But by then, everything beautiful will be gone."
Neteyam listened to every word, his heart aching for the weight she was carrying. He looked down at Canuto, then out at the vast landscape rolling past the window. He knew exactly what she meant. He had seen the same greed, the same thoughtless destruction back near the reserve.
"You're right," Neteyam said, his voice steady, grounding, and completely devoid of doubt. "Everything you just said is completely true. The greed is real, and it’s terrifying how fast people can destroy what took eras to build."
He reached out, crossing the space between them, and placed his palm gently over her hand on the steering wheel. He waited until he felt her tense fingers slowly loosen beneath his touch.
"But look at this Jeep, Tsawke," he murmured, his eyes locking onto hers when she glanced over. "Look at what's inside it. You didn't leave the south because you wanted to go find a city; you left because you cared about a shivering stray dog and a freezing navigator. You saw the ugly parts of the highway, but you also showed me the wetlands, the birds, and the ancient granite. You’re still documenting it. You’re still fighting to make people look."
A small, quiet breath escaped her lips.
"The selfish people are loud," Neteyam continued, a soft, encouraging smile pulling at his lips. "But they don't own the whole road. As long as there are people like you who still get furious about a plastic bottle in a lake, the beautiful things aren't completely gone. You haven't let them win. And you've taught a guy who used to only care about military checklists to actually stop and look at the landscape."
Tsawke stared at him, the harsh, defensive anger in her expression slowly melting away, replaced by a raw, quiet vulnerability. She let out a long, shaky sigh, turning her hand over beneath his so their fingers could interlock for a brief, tight moment.
"You're a terrible negotiator, Sully," she whispered, though a faint, genuine ghost of a smile finally touched her lips. "But you're a really good co-pilot."
"I try," Neteyam smiled, gently squeezing her hand before letting her return it to the wheel. "Now, where are these hot springs? Canuto and I have a serious date with some warm weather."
The heavy tension completely evaporated from the cabin, replaced by the humming heat of the dashboard vents and the steady, rhythmic snoring of Canuto. By late afternoon, the flat, windy steppes of Patagonia finally gave way to the towering, sun-drenched crimson cliffs of the central Andes.
Tsawke detoured the Jeep down a rugged, unpaved canyon track outside of Malargüe, Mendoza. The dry air was crisp but baked by an intense, brilliant sun that felt like a physical embrace after the freezing south.
“There,” Tsawke said, pointing her chin toward a hidden crevice in the canyon wall where a gentle plume of steam was rising into the clear blue sky. “Termas de Cajón Grande. No luxury resorts, no tourist crowds. Just pure mountain water.”
When they killed the engine, the silence was absolute and peaceful. Canuto was the first one out, yawning massively before trotting over to a patch of sun-warmed earth and instantly flopping down with a blissful sigh, his paws up in the air.
Neteyam climbed down and shed his heavy technical jacket, closing his eyes as the warm mountain sun hit his face. For the first time in weeks, his jaw wasn't clenched against the cold.
Following a natural stone path, they found a series of terraced pools built directly into the red rock, fed by a trickling thermal spring. The water was crystalline, shimmering with a faint emerald tint.
An hour later, the sun was beginning to dip behind the massive Andean peaks, painting the canyon walls in brilliant shades of gold and violet. Neteyam was sitting in the upper pool, the water perfectly hot, soaking away every ounce of residual stress from his shoulders. He rested his arms on the smooth stone edge, looking out over the vast, untouched valley.
Tsawke was sitting a few feet away, her shoulders submerged in the steaming water. Her damp curls were piled on top of her head, and the fading sunlight caught the sharp, beautiful angles of her profile. She looked completely different from the fiercely angry girl on the highway; she looked soft, grounded, and entirely at peace.
"Hey," she murmured, glancing over at him with a lazy, content smile. "Are you currently running through a twenty-point checklist for pool safety, Sully?"
Neteyam let out a soft, genuine laugh, shaking his head as the steam swirled around them. "Actually, no. Point number one was 'thaw out.' Point number two was 'relax.' I'm officially done with the inventory."
"Good," she whispered, moving a little closer through the water until her shoulder lightly brushed against his. "Because you look human when you're not holding a clipboard."
Neteyam turned his head to look at her. In the quiet twilight of the canyon, with the water keeping them warm against the cooling mountain air, the space between them felt incredibly small. He didn't feel the nervous panic he had felt in the rooftop tent; he just felt a deep, steady certainty.
"Thank you for turning the car around, Tsawke," he said softly, his voice dropping into a lower, intimate register. "I know how much the south meant to you."
Tsawke looked down at the water, tracing a small circle in the ripples with her finger. "The south will always be there, Neteyam. But lakes and glaciers don't mean anything if you don't have the right people to see them with." She looked up, her brown eyes locking onto his with a fierce, quiet honesty. "I didn't need to go to the end of the world. This is exactly where I wanted to be...Besides, if I want, I can go whenever I want. And whenever you want to come with me on that adventure, you are welcome."
Neteyam’s heart gave a slow, heavy thud against his ribs. He reached out beneath the warm water, his fingers finding hers and intertwining them, squeezing gently. This time, she didn't pull away or deflect with a sarcastic comment. She just leaned her head against his shoulder, letting out a long, peaceful breath.
Down on the grassy bank by the Jeep, Canuto gave a single, muffled bark in his sleep, completely content in the fading warmth of the afternoon. Neteyam looked from the scruffy dog to the girl resting against his side, and as the stars began to pierce the deep blue Mendoza sky, he realized they hadn't just found a warm valley—they had found exactly what they were looking fo
n the passenger seat, Neteyam leaned his head against the window frame, a soft, unbothered smile on his face. Canuto was sprawled across his lap, snoring heavily with his scruffy chin hooked over Neteyam's forearm—completely domesticated and utterly content.
Neteyam looked down at his own hands. They were tanned from the Mendoza sun, a little calloused from handling rough camp setup, and entirely empty. For the first time in his life, he didn't have his tablet out, he wasn't checking the digital map, and he hadn't thought about his twenty-point checklist in days. The rigid, hyper-vigilant military efficiency that Jake had drilled into him hadn't vanished, but it had finally loosened its grip.
He didn't feel the usual knot of anxiety that usually came with returning to his responsibilities. Instead, his mind was a vivid loop of memories from the past weeks:
The surreal, shimmering waters of the Iberá wetlands where Canuto had first joined their crew.
The freezing, starlit night in the rooftop tent where he had been terrified to move an inch.
The raw, honest conversation on Route 40 where he had held Tsawke's hand against the steering wheel.
The absolute, healing warmth of the Mendoza hot springs that had washed away years of carrying everyone else's burdens.
They hadn't made it to the southern fjords, and their perfect itinerary had been completely derailed by a shivering stray dog and a polar vortex, but Neteyam knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that it had been the greatest vacation of his life. He had set out to survive the road, and instead, he had learned how to live on it.
Beside him, Tsawke guided the Jeep through the familiar turns of the reserve's entrance. She looked over at him, her brown eyes catching the relaxed slope of his shoulders and the genuine peace on his face.
Down in the footwell, Canuto was snoring softly, his head resting heavily on a discarded, dirty flannel shirt. The scruffy dog had completely claimed his spot in the family, his coat permanently smelling of woodsmoke and river water.
Neteyam reached out, his hand resting on the center console just an inch away from Tsawke's. She was driving with a relaxed, easy posture, a stark contrast to the tense, white-knuckled grip she’d had days ago. A faint, peaceful playlist hummed from the speakers.
"You're smiling," she noted, not taking her eyes off the road but letting a lopsided grin touch her lips. "Are you mentally drafting a report for your dad about our fuel efficiency?"
"Not even close," Neteyam murmured, his voice warm and completely unburdened. "I was just thinking that this was the best decision I've ever made."
"Getting hijacked into the mountains by a rebel scientist?"
"Letting go of the clipboard," he corrected softly.
He looked over at her profile, illuminated by the bright, golden midday sun. He didn't care that the trunk was full of muddy gear, that half their supplies had been eaten by a stray dog, or that they hadn't made it to the southern fjords. They had swapped a rigid itinerary for something real—wetlands filled with capybaras, a cold night under a canvas roof where their breathing synced, a furious conversation about saving what is beautiful, and a hidden thermal pool where everything finally aligned.
"We didn't cross the whole map," Neteyam said, turning his hand over so his palm faced upward, an open invitation.
Tsawke didn't hesitate. She slid her hand into his, interlocking their fingers with a familiar, easy pressure that sent a wave of quiet comfort right through his chest.
"Maps are overrated, Sully," she whispered, squeezing his hand. "We found the good parts."
Neteyam looked back out at the road ahead. The reserve was waiting, and with it, all the responsibilities he had carried since childhood. But he wasn't the same guy who had stepped out of the house at five in the morning with a twenty-point checklist. He was returning with a co-pilot, a scruffy mountain dog, and a quiet, unshakeable certainty that no matter how loud or chaotic the world got, he finally knew exactly where he belonged.
To admire and live in God's creation.
the part 6 is the final part and is an extra.