I really like your song! Itās giving pop punk/emo vibes, very nice.
My feedback is this: Iād love to hear more of your voice! I feel the mixing is a bit off and the guitars are a little loud, so itās hard to hear what youāre saying. However, that is common in early FOB and other similar bands, so if thatās part of the style youāre going for then keep it that way. :)
I did notice a vocal scoop/uncertainty maybe at the beginning of the word āairā (in the phrase āin the airā). That could also be the Melodyne/voice tuning software. Iāve had producers who just do a blanket ācorrectionā over the song and then go back in later to adjust wrong notes, and Iāve had producers who just analyze the vocal line and go in to fix notes that are slightly sharp/flat. I much prefer the latter, as the former creates a sort of āautotunedā sound. Again, though, that is also a cool effect depending on the style of the song.
Excited to hear more stuff from you! š
No I was actually personally disappointed with the amount of autotune in the finale song, I will be going forward and steering away from it. Thank you so so much, as well, I really appreciate it! <3 And yes!! Midwestern emo was my inspiration! I'm glad it's came across!