protips for thinkpieces, pt. 2
Here is a piece about Joanna Newsom that I liked a lot more, until I didn’t. It’s another piece of music criticism with an explicitly progresive (or “social-justicey,” or whatever) bent, which is in vogue in criticism these days. This isn’t new – Ellen Willis was known as a feminist writer and a rock critic, decades before any of us were born. But this is also something I have an ambivalent relationship with, particularly in how it intersects with media-celebrifying of the 25 Under 25 sort (and what happens to the 26+ Over 26, or for that matter Also Under 25), and in how there becomes a party line, which becomes the party line of critical thought, from which any deviation is #problematic. At its worst it’s not a good scene for discussion or ideas; a lot of smart critics come off sounding either like foaming reactionaries or… well, kind of glib.
So, this piece: despite never being able to get into Newsom, I mostly agree with its point. But a lot of the execution seemed kind of glib. It’s little things, many of them. One: “it speaks volumes that men love PJ Harvey, she of the deep timbre” (has the writer heard White Chalk? Or seen the endless sexualization in the press of Harvey and her sort of blunt music, which perhaps might speak a few more volumes about why men love her?) Two: the claim that people expect Newsom to be Taylor Swift (does anyone, anywhere, actually think that?) Three: The claim that Men Are OK with “twee male singing voices” after listing a lot of voices like Bob Dylan and Tom Waits and Axl Rose who are very much not twee (so… you’re claiming that the bastions of male-approved artists are Owl City and A Great Big World?) Four: The praise of Newsom for never “selling out to a major label” and “not pulling a Liz Phair,” a lot of unexamined assumptions.
Five, though, I have thoughts on, that I’ve been afraid to mention for some time because it goes against female-music-writer gospel. Namely: Somewhere along the line it got ossified into the progressive stance that comparing female artists to other female artists is sexist. This is undoubtedly a phenomenon; how much of a phenomenon is perhaps debatable. (Here’s one for the data journalists: Mine a bunch of music reviews, by male and female artists, break down the comparisons to other artists, and get some stats onn how they play out. I’m not sure the answer would confirm anyone’s hypothesis. This includes mine.) This started with as specific comparisons that were lazy and overdone, then gradually became “comparisons to other female artists are sexist.” (Sometimes it isn’t just female artists; the piece takes issue with comparing Joanna Newsom to Joni Mitchell and Kate Bush [”male critics compare her to other female artists to demean her”], and then it takes issue with comparisons to Bob Dylan and Fairport Convention [”remember, ladies, behind every great woman there are decades of greater men”], which prompts the question: who the fuck, exactly, is allowed to be compared to her?) I have passed the point of disagreeing with this and now find it poisonous, for a number of reasons:
* It removes female artists from the critical conversation. Comparisons in music reviews are among the most frequently hated-upon aspects of music writing, which I’ve never understood. This is part of how the brain processes new information: comparing it to that which it already knows. When you’re writing for a paid audience you have obligations to that audience, sure, but it’s also nice to think your audience has a sense of curiosity and the ability to read an unfamiliar name and want to learn more, rather than condescending to them by presenting then nothing new. The best criticism, to me, occurs when writers weave endless webs of recommendations from their upbringing and tastes and loves, both popular and obscure, no boundaries whatsoever, just nodes leading to endless nodes of artists; and it’s not quite like knowing another person but it’s in that neighborhood and it’s beautiful. (It’s also more personal and less mediated than music recommendations ever are, anywhere else.)
Less personally, comparisons are also part of how artists are canonized; I poke fun at endless Kate Bush comparisons a lot, but would her comeback after over a decade be so warmly received without what amounts to years and years of buildup? When you call comparisons to female artists invalid, you cut off these nodes. And because it’s not as if male artists are compared to women en masse, you cut them off from the one place they reliably exist. Where would I be if I hadn’t read about Bush in music reviews? About Kristin Hersh? About PJ Harvey? Not a fan of theirs, is where.
* It removes from the critical conversation those whose primary inspirations for their music are other women. Artists are inspired by other artists. That’s part of being an artist. And sometimes it happens that all those other artists are women. Elite Gymnastics, for instance, has gone on record talking about building a whole new music canon of Tori Amos and Sarah McLachlan and the Spice Girls. (Which was others’ canon first, but let’s ignore that.) Citing other artists would be false speculation; it’d be bad criticism. The subtly insidious thing about this is that comparisons to male artists just pass without note: they are unmarked, mundane.
* Similarly, it removes from the critical conversation those whose primary reference points for music are women, who unsurprisingly tend to be… other women. I grew up listening to almost exclusively female artists, and lived happily in a world where everything reminded me of them: hyperacute sense of little turns of vocal phrasing that reminded me of Bush, to the second in the song, bitter-sharp-funny lines that sound like something Kristin would write, poised minimalist incisions that could be Stina Nordenstam. Then I became a professional music critic and suddenly all of this became invalid. The band references it seemed non-notable to make in reviews both felt fake (I wasn’t really reminded of any of that stuff – I didn’t grow up with it, the emotional framework wasn’t there) and gave me a nice heavy chunk of impostor syndrome that’s still there, because my takeaway, often from women, was: all the music you grew up listening to is invalid, the way you thought about it was wrong, and you’re not allowed to talk about it. This is, of course, bullshit. But it’s what comes of prescriptive rules.
Honestly, it feels like opposite day sometimes: you can flood a reader with names upon names upon names of female artists and commentary about their art, just bombard them with it, all but force them to listen and learn more about these women if they don’t already know – and then have this called “sexist.” But such is the nature of party lines.