āBig Pharmaā okay are we talking about how privatization and monetization has deeply corrupted the field of medicine or are you talking about how you think chemicals in the water are making the frogs gay
āGMOsā? Are we talking seeds that grow sterile plants and patenting genetic modifications then destroying any competition no matter how small they are? Or are we talking life saving rice with vitamin a to make sure kids donāt go blind in regions not suited for other high vit a veg? ⦠or are we talking about your chidoodle?
if tumblr was an online game iād run my character up to your character and spam the jump button and do backflips and frontflips over your characterās head to show you iām excited to see you on the dash
A very nice read, with some parts of it I enjoyed below!
Austin Langer was able to interview former BioWare narrative designer Sylvia Feketekuty. She discusses how the teams tackled exposition, pla
Austin Langer (RPGamer): When thinking about RPG dialogue across different eras, how do you approach balancing clarity and relatability with maintaining a distinct tone for the setting?
Sylvia Feketekuty: [...] Writing for Dragon Age was different. Since Mass Effect takes place in our own universe, you know how the laws of physics are supposed to work there. But each Dragon Age game had to reestablish its particular metaphysical framework of magic and spirits, their effects on different cultures, and the politics of dealing with them, on top of introducing new people and places. In my opinion, at least, there was a lot more to explain to players. Especially in the first few hours.
This is probably why, when I came on to Dragon Age: Inquisition, the narrative team already knew they wanted a diplomat character. Josephine helped to ground the big, political forces clashing around you. Whenever she briefed the Inquisitor, I had Josephine approach it like an executive summary. She knows the Inquisitorās time is valuable. So, in tandem with your other advisors, she always gave players just enough information to make a decision, but never so much as to overwhelm them.
One of the other quirks I had in the back of my head is that Josephine isnāt quite as efficient in her speech as she thinks she is. The Lady Ambassador is never tiresome! But sheās so seeped in the grand politics of Thedas, she canāt help but try to round out all of the points, in the most diplomatic way possible. Paradoxically, I think it makes her exposition more interesting. That quirk is, I hope, part of Josephineās charm.
AL: When a character is responsible for delivering critical exposition, how do you prevent that functional role from flattening their unique voice? Have you encountered situations where exposition demands directly conflicted with character voice?
SF: It can be a struggle! Iāve absolutely hit times when a character who needed to be in a scene was not the best choice to explain what was going on. In that case, sometimes delaying part of your exposition is the best move. An NPC learning about whatās going on alongside the player always helps pace things out more naturally.
As for making sure exposition doesnāt flatten a characterās voice: one thing I like to do is give an NPC something to complain about, or worry over, or be excited for. Itās not necessary for very short scenes, of course. But if itās a larger beat of exposition, try to dig deep for that hook. It helps with even the driest of information. If resources and time permit, bringing in a second NPC for the first NPC to argue with is even better. We always pay more attention when thereās friction.
When I was writing Emmrichās personal quests in Veilguard, I tried to have a current of worry running underneath his explanatory dialogue. Heās the kind of person whoās always mulling things over in the back of his mind. āShould I tell Rook about lichdom? Can I successfully join their ranks? Will Manfred be all right if I do? Will Rook understand?ā
And once Emmrich learns a former friend is behind the sinister events heās investigating, his anxiety goes through the roof. It was really easy to write Emmrichās plot exposition after that, because it was so charged with his personal anguish and fears.
Those moments werenāt perfect right off the bat though. Iād like to shout out the other writers, especially Trick and Brianne and Gabriel, who gave feedback that helped bring those emotions to the fore. Honestly, having someone you trust give you candid but useful story feedback is probably the fastest way to improve your exposition (and most other parts of your writing.)
AL: How early in development do narrative constraints like branching scope or VO limits start shaping how dialogue is written?
SF: Right away. I think people would be surprised by how much even āsmallā branching dialogue-say a shopkeeper who has six different greetings and farewells-can make your word budget skyrocket when multiplied across an entire game. (Especially if your game is fully voiced, and you have to keep actor availability into consideration.)
One thing I wanted from the start of Veilguard was significant branching with Emmrich for players who took the Mourn Watch origin. Since itās one of six origins, there was only, theoretically, a one in six chance players would ever see that dialogue. On paper that doesnāt seem like a good use of extra words. But I think that kind of branching is what players like the most.
It really pays off a choice you make, and lets you get deeper into role playing a specific fantasy, and changes a relationship with a character. Thatās cool! Itās the kind of reactivity I like, at any rate. So if Rookās a Mourn Watcher, players can complain with Emmrich that no one outside Nevarra really gets necromancy, or gossip about whatās happening back home, and so on. That was very fun for me. I think it was worth it.
(adding another part, for archival purposes, because I really like it)
AL: A lot of RPGs have characters with story arcs where they make a big, life-changing decision influenced by the player. When writing this kind of quest, how do you keep a characterās core beliefs and personality consistent? If the player has such agency over a character, how do you balance their ācore profileā so the character doesnāt sound like a totally new character if they do evolve through player choice?
SF: You definitely have to nail down a characterās core voice, their hopes and fears, before deciding how a big choice will change them. Or at least I do. The best thing you can do for yourself at this stage is to plant the seeds of this choice. Everyone has conflicting beliefs or multiple things they hold dear. Even if you donāt come up with the perfect life-changing decision right away, knowing those internal contradictions and yearnings will give a foundation to tinker with it until you get it right.
When planning out Emmrich in Veilguard, for example, I spent a lot of time noodling around with his background and his philosophical foundations before I felt I really got him. And in the first draft of his personal arc, the ending always led to him becoming a lich. The choice was more about how intelligent or not Manfred got. And it was okay, but it wasnāt gripping. It didnāt get at anything about Emmrich.
So I thought about it, and realized I wasnāt really pulling on some of the things Iād set up with his character. Emmrichsā fear of death, contrasted with his reverence for it; his not-entirely-acknowledged paternal bond with Manfred; whether Emmrich could overcome his self-doubts for his deepest desires. So the choice became achieving lichdom or bringing back Manfred. And after he becomes a lich, Emmrich is even more rapturously absorbed in the spirit world than he was before. And if he decides to bring back Manfred, Emmrich finally takes conscious responsibility for what that little skeleton means to him.
So I would say Emmrichās voice does evolve, depending on the playerās choice. But in both cases, it was along a journey heād already begun to take, and rooted in who he always was.
What I feel people frequently forget about autistic special interests is that they aren't always information based. They may simply be visual or mental
Someone may have a special interest in a show, but instead of that meaning that they will talk about that show often, it may mean they watch that show extremely frequently.
Special interests are ways of regulating, not simply encyclopedias we have in our heads. Sometimes it's watching something frequently. Maybe only listening to one genre of music, maybe it's a collection, maybe it's an action. I'm tired of it only being seen as autistic people's personal encyclopedias