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Exile (Jake Sully x Reader)
After you have finally escaped the brutality of Quaritch, your feet wandered carelessly to eywa-knows where. With no clan to return to, you will never guess where you end up inâ the root of it all.
Give me a minute to hold my girl. (I)
The joke's on me (II)
The inches in between us. (III)
Know it's for the better. (Sully family x daughter!Reader)
You've been thrusted to carry the burden of being the eldest after his passing.
I ! Feels like we had matching wounds, but mine's still black and bruised (and yours is perfectly fine now.)
II ! Once there was a way to get back homeward, (you're gonna carry that weight for a long time.)
III ! I watch the fathers with their little girls and wonder what I did to deserve this, (how could you hurt a little kid?)
IV ! Mom, am I young? Can I dream a few months more?
V ! I know it's for the better. Know it's for the better.
Every corner of this house is haunted. (Sully Family x daughter!reader)
Jake had taken you as his own after Tsu'tey's passing, leaving no one to care for you. Things had been good before your relationship with him had blurred along growing of age. You and him fought all the time; argued each other's ear off and tonight was no different-- except words have been said, severing the already damaged bond.
Chapters: One | Two | Three | Four | Five
A passage from Tuk-Tuk's diary (Things that have happened since you left us.)
Just drabbles of how little tuk-tuk copes after Neteyam's passing.
Chapters: One | Two | Three
One-shots:
Neteyam te Suli Tsyeyk'itan
Two hearts on the floorâ one mine, both yours. (And when he died, the sun was buried with him)
Ao'nung
Uh-oh! I think you're holding the heart of mine! (Second: My heart is, squeeze it apart- it's fine.)
Lo'ak te Suli Tsyeyk'itan
To kiss in cars and downtown bars was all we needed, (When you are young they assume you know nothing.)
shameless plug because i'm about to write gut-wrenching works for arcane. the angst here is HIGH people (and while we're still waiting for the next avatar movie ijbol, might as well write for other things)
Lowkey thought you jinxed yourself and actually did die. GLAD YOUâRE ALIVE THO
THIS IS SO FUNNY. Nope, still very much alive! I think I had just gradually lost interest in Avatar and eventually, it burnt out entirely. I still have the unfinished draft in my files and I remember it from time to time (and it's a bummer knowing I had been so immersed in it.)
Unfortunately, my hyper-fixation revolves around other things for now. So until the next movie comes, I think I might never post anything Avatar related (mostly because I've forgotten too- which sucks.) I honestly didn't think people would still read my work, nor did I think that there'd still be people waiting- but then again, it's Tumblr haha.
Anyway, I'm very sorry! I'll see you all when I come back (If I do come back, who knows :b )
posting this to let everyone know that i am still alive and the fifth chapter is already in the works! been very busy is all. i'll make this part extra angsty to make up for the long wait.
posting this to let everyone know that i am still alive and the fifth chapter is already in the works! been very busy is all. i'll make this part extra angsty to make up for the long wait.
Your miguel o'hara fiction had me sobbing đĽşđĽş it gives me the vibes of "never love love and anchor" by the crane wives, and at least in my interpretation of it, is about a parent/loved one unable to love a child like they deserve.
Also, about the whole "character x character"- I've never personally seen it as inherently romantic??? I've been reading fanfiction for a little over half my life and haven't seen this type of issue brought up. I've read it as a characters relationship in relation to another character. So while it may be usually romantic it sometimes isn't, I've read both romantic and platonic with the "character x character" tag on it this whole time. And at least usually the little "[related]!" Thing in the begin of a set characters name doesn't lead to a romantic fic, and if it does people usually give trigger warnings beforehand of !ncâŹst. I don't even really know what else you'd be able to tag it as an alternative đ¤, most people just do "character x character" when they're searching for fics anyway, changing how it's presented may make it go virtually unseen to people who don't follow you. That's my personal opinion, I don't see any real harm in it, besides your descriptions also help in clearing up this issue usually by context. Anyway sorry for ranting, love you, bye-bye lol â¤ď¸â¤ď¸â¤ď¸
hello bby, thank you so much for reading! iâm not at all familiar with crane wives so iâll go check it out!
regarding the said issue, i think the same way too ;(( iâve been writing since april and have already posted two series that revolves around family troupes and this is the first time iâve heard about it. honestly, iâm just hopeful that i havenât made anyone uncomfortable in any way. thank you for this, anon! i appreciate the insight.
iâm not sure if this is intentional, and iâm hoping that itâs not, but uh, u should be aware that âcharacter x characterâ refers to a romantic relationship, so when you write âfather!miguel oâhara x daughter!readerâ it implies that youâre writing father/daughter incest. if this isnât the case (again, i rlly rlly hope itâs not the case) you wanna use âfather!miguel and daughter!readerâ instead, this way more people can read your work without thinking itâs incest. i just wanted to give you a heads up!
hello! this is the second time iâm receiving a message that regards this matter, but i forgot to take care of the first one because i took a hiatus that lasted for at least a month (you can check the gap between my last update and my current one.)
before i proceed to address this matter, i want to say first and foremost that i do not condone incest in any way. it is a topic i will not engage with or entertain.
if you're following me on my alternate account ( @avatarkv ), you'll notice that my works there primarily revolve around familial themes; you'll also notice my consistent use of the "character x character" tags. iâve been writing since april, and never has this aspect been raised as a concern until now.
but please donât get me wrong, i very much appreciate the heads up! iâve done a quick research myself and although the meaning differs, most answers explain that putting x in between two names solely emphasizes the two characters in the said storyâ or in a sense, yes, their relationship. however, i think itâs general knowledge that a relationship isnât at all limited to romantic alone.
would like to hear more from this! correct me if iâm wrong too, but believe meâ if i wanted to write incest, i wouldâve stated it clearly on the tags :) nevertheless, i am mindful of not causing any discomfort to anyone here, so i will be removing them.
felt like i needed to share this here too (considering i have a wider audience in this account and i've written with the said tags ever since.) please tell me if this has ever been an issue!
(I watch her go with a surge of that well known sadness and I have to sit down for a whileâ the feeling that I'm losing her forever.)
The rundown: That cake scene with Miles at his fatherâs bodega party but itâs with Miguel and his universeâs daughter. Heâs late and itâs your quinceaĂąera.
Content: Father!Miguel O'hara x Daughter!Reader / Angst! (wc: 3844)
There was something oddly peculiar about your father. People would assume that he would be the archetypal absent one who chose to abandon his child; the dead-beat-dad who ultimately never cared for them. Youâd argue it wasnât trueâ you were fed, you had the weight of what a fifteen year old should have, and education was proper.Â
You love your papa with all of your heart, but there was no denying the fact that he would never be around often enough. You understood this when you were eight years old, and mornings would bring only a cold breakfast accompanied by a hastily scribbled note from him. Heâd leave earlyâ far too early. You tried staying up in an attempt to tell when he gets up and leaves the house, but you swear you donât hear the door open every time.Â
Then came twelve and the missed events. Miguel seemed to be missing in action when it came to certain school activities, not showing up for things that he had previously made commitments for. It became more and more frequent as you grew olderâ you wouldnât hear from him for days.
He was a man dedicated to his profession, and although you felt pride in what he had achieved, there was this empty space in your heart that hadnât been filled ever since you were eight. It was said that a child needed the presence of their parents to feel securityâ to feel important. You never truly understood it, not until you had to endure many nights at dinner alone and the numerous times you spent walking home with nothing but your own thoughts for company.
You had always pondered over the question of whether it was a common phenomenon that fathers seemed to love their daughters less once they had reached teenagehoodâ or if it was possible for fathers to unlearn being fathers.Â
âIs your papa coming, bebita?âÂ
The faint notes of classical music filled the air as you sat on the wooden floor, stretching your sore limbs. You observed the ladies who were much older than yourself starting their exercise routines, having come in early before the group class began. You waited for Miguel to pick you up.Â
â But that had been two hours ago. Your teacher finally worked up the courage to approach you, hesitantly looking for the right words to say. She wasnât exactly pleased to be the one to let you down, but sheâd seen you walk out the studioâs door alone time and time again after you told her that your father would bring you home himself.
âHe said heâd come pick me up today.â You spoke, nervously twisting the ends of your skirt. Your teacher had most likely heard these words countless times before from you, but the faint ray of hope in your voice remained firm. âHe promised.â You added quietly, praying that maybe it would be different this time.Â
âAy, bebitaâ you know how this ends. You tell me those exact words and you walk out here on your own anyway.â She slightly shook her head, her face softening with a sympathetic smile as she knelt closer to you. âTell you what, how about I offer to give you a ride home today? I have plenty of snacks in my car that you can enjoy. You can take as many of them as you'd like.â
You took some time to consider it, letting her gently weave her fingers through the strands of curls that couldn't quite fit into a bun. Your lips pursued as you sighed softly, âWhat if he comes and Iâm not here anymore?â Youâd hate to miss the opportunity.
Of course you still had faith that he would come, having endured all the other times he had let you down. You were never one to quickly give up on people and your father was the only one you trusted the mostâ youâd hate to admit that his inconsistency was starting to hurt; digging a deeper wound to the already bleeding cut.Â
âHeâs not coming and I know you know that too.âÂ
She stands up, grunting slightly as she hefts herself up. You knew there was no more room for negotiation anymore when she urged you to come along. She carefully takes your backpack from off your back and drapes it over her own shoulders, âCome on sweetheart, let's get you home.âÂ
The silence in the car was palpable, with no one feeling the need to prod conversation. You hadn't stopped fidgeting with the hem of your bag since you got in, and you could feel your teacher's worried glances burning into you. Your mind was a jumble of emotions that kept bubbling away as they all competed for your attention. What could be his reason this time/?
She switched on the radio in an effort to lighten the tense mood, but when a melancholic tune filled played instead, you couldnât help but let out a deep sigh.
âIs it possible for fathers to unlove their daughters?âÂ
It was a question that took her completely by surprise, so much so that another uncomfortable beat of silence passed before she could respond. The stillness made you regret asking in the first place. Your legs shifted nervously, an unconscious habit which you had never noticed before.
âOf course not,â She muttered, almost inaudibly. âFathers tend to forget is all.â
But you knew that wasnât the case.Â
While Miguel was never home, something else resided on the corners of your houseâ someone you have never met at all. She smiled back at you from the frame sitting atop your dad's nightstand, wearing the similar blue soccer jersey your school had. She was the picture on his wallet and the little widget on his phone. It was beyond youâ the few blue ribbons hidden on the box beneath his bed; the medals, the drawings you know youâve never drawn or given him. For all you know, the kid didnât even go to your school.Â
It wasnât anything sinister, but in a way she felt like a ghost. A child your father mourned for all his life and you had no idea why.Â
This was a physical pain in your chest; one that was peeling away the very layers of your heart until it was nothing but uglyâ just how could Miguel love a child more than his own? It was ridiculous to feel like you were in competition with someone you barely knew, yet somehow, you felt like you were losing. It felt even more absurd when you considered the possibility that maybe you weren't really his child at all.
âI joined our schoolâs soccer team today, papa.âÂ
It wasnât an ordinary occurrence for Miguel to be at the dining table for lunch. But on this Saturday noon, he was there. Sitting across from you, quietly eating his food. Finally, he paused and shifted his gaze towards you, seeming to linger on you longer than normal before looking away, cracking a grin.
âSoccer? You hate sports, mija.â He says, a bit of laughter in his voice. "What made you decide to try out? I don't recall you being the least bit interested before."
Something in his eyes becomes brighter, a sense of familiarity as he eagerly awaits your responseâ and the thing is, you couldnât tell him why. Not without addressing the elephant in the room. Maybe youâd hang my medals too? Maybe youâd frame a photo of me? You know well your question reminds him of someone else.Â
âNo reason.âÂ
It was no surprise that you were terrible at it. After barely two seasons, you'd already given up. However it was surprising to see Miguel in the stands during the times that you had a game, but there wasnât much to watch anywayâ not when youâd been relegated to the bench for most of the time. All you felt was shame.Â
Oddly enough, he didn't question it. He remained silent during the rides back home, his gaze distant and never once looked at you. Had you embarrassed him to an extent where he couldnât even acknowledge you? Or have you given him the impression that you were just no better than the little girl in his pictures?
You dared not to talk about it too.
Music was your passion; the pulse, the poise and elegance of it all resonating with you deeply. Ballet was something that spoke to you particularly in ways no other art form could. You found a special joy out on stage, a feeling that grew deeper and greater each time you danced.
But like every flame that you desperately try to keep alive, Miguel had a way of snuffing it out.Â
You remember it all so vividly, even though you'd much rather the memory be nothing more than a faint blur. Your very first recital and yet he wasn't anywhere to be found amongst the audience.
Your focus was a tunnel-vision, only set to finding even a glimpse of himâ you had been so determined to find him that you forgot about all of your own movements. Soon, the few wrong turns had turned to missed cues; as soon as the music stopped, you made a run for it.
Your teacher had done her best to console you that day, attempting to coax a smile from you in front of the vanity mirror with its bright lights. She had wrapped her arms around you, doing anything she could to draw even the faintest curve of your lips. But you stayed slumped on your seat, feeling the weight of the unshed tears on your eyes.Â
The door swung open, finally revealing Miguel; he was out of breath and sweat glistened on his forehead. His shirt was unbuttoned at the top and his tie was undone, a clear sign that he had run all the way here. He paused for a moment to catch his breath before walking in frantically, eyes looking for you.Â
His eyes softened at the sight of you in your pretty pink tutuâ then the tenderness was replaced with a feeling akin to plummeting one hundred stories down. How could he miss this? How could he let his sweet girl wait? He rushed to your side, sinking down into a kneeling position. He looked upon you with lines creasing his forehead and you already knew what was to come out of his lips.
âIâm sorry muneca, I came as fast as I could.âÂ
The other parents of your classmates started to barge inside the very room, their children giddy with joy and excitement, running to them with beaming smiles. You could hear their loud congratulationsâ voices singing sweet praises and telling how they looked outstanding on stage. The noise sounded like static in your ears, like their words were unfamiliar to you. They received bouquets of flowers, sweetsâ gifts for a job well done. Miguel came late and only with apologies.Â
âYou want pretty flowers too, mijita? We can stop by the flower shop a few blocks away from here, you can pick any bouquet you want.â His lips curved into a gentle smile, desperate to make his daughter feel betterâ the same daughter who wouldn't even meet his gaze. âPapa had to deal with something. Iâll be sure to go to your next recitalâ pinky promise.âÂ
âBut I worked really hard for this.â
You wanted so desperately to blame him; to yell at him for every mistake that you've made on the stage. You felt ashamed, humiliated, and helpless all at once- and still, you couldnât have the heart to be mad at him.
He looked at you apologetically, "Baby, I'm sorry I couldn't make it earlier. How about we talk about the flowers you want to buy instead? There are lots of restaurants nearby as wellâ you can pick whatever pleases you, just name it." He paused for a moment before continuing, gently nudging your shoulder. âI know how much this meant to you.â
If he did, why couldnât he have come at all?
You let out a deep sigh, feeling completely ridiculous in your tutu. All of the sudden, the leotard appeared to be two sizes too small and utterly irritating; your tights seemed unbearably itchy. You looked down helplessly, wanting nothing more than to leave this situation behind. âI just want to go home. Can we just leave? Please?â You pleaded softly.Â
He bit the inside of his cheek, a gesture that conveyed own sinking heart in a way words could not. His shoulders sagged ever so slightly, breath hitching as he gave in to your request instead.Â
âOf course.âÂ
After that very moment, you'd vowed to yourself never to wait in anticipation of something that may or may not come. You wouldnât put your faith in any more of your father's promises spoken under the dead of night. It took a toll on youâ your naivety had taught you better than before.
But when your fifteenth birthday drew near, you never expected he would go so far.
The locks clicked and whirred as Miguel fumbled with the keys to the front door. You could hear your Father's voice, clearly agitated as he jostled the keys back and forth in an attempt to fit them into the lock. Finally, he steps inside, eyes immediately darting to you.
âYouâre not wearing your birthday dress, sweetie. Is something wrong?â Heâs wearing a smile, struggling to keep the two boxes of cake upright as he locks the door from behind. The banner is lopsided and the balloons scattered all around seem smallâ like theyâve been there for days and were starting to deflate themselves. He kisses the top of your head once he gets close, getting a better view of what you were working on on the counter. Homework. âDid you have your friends over today? How was it? Wanna hear all about it.â
And he must have forgotten. You decided to pretend not to hear his question, continuing to jot down notes, only humming at his presence. He settles the boxes down, sitting on the stool beside you.Â
âI know papaâs late, but you can still go and wear your dress. I want to take picturesâ should we order pizza? Do you want something else?â Heâs rambling, hurriedly searching for his tone to dial down a few numbers. Miguel turns frantic, looking at the closed signs under every nice restaurant. âPizza should be fine, mijitaâ youâve eaten dinner, right?âÂ
âNot hungry.âÂ
Miguel chuckled, dialing anyway. âDid school suck today, sweetie?â He jokes, trying to lighten the mood. âYou know what can cheer you up? Cake. You love cake.â
âI donât like cake anymore.â You say, your voice barely above a whisper. You can feel frustration boiling over insideâ and you fear it wasnât the kind youâve grown accustomed to suppressing. He was oblivious and it was killing you, hurting you in so many ways possible. âIâm not hungry.â You repeat again.
âDonât be like that, __. Besides, itâs still tradition.â He stands up to check the drawers, only finding worn out candles from past birthdays. He takes a lighter. âKnow whatâs better than a cake? Two cakes! Youâll change your mind, go and open the boxes mija,â
Miguel excitedly pressed his hands on your shoulders, pushing you gently forward to open the two boxes of cake. The look in his eyes was that of pure anticipation as he waited eagerly for you to do so. It almost hurt you to tell him the newsâ that you wanted more than to just take the blame itself. It was conflicting.Â
You finally got up from the bar stool, settling on your feet in front of the counter. Taking a deep breath, you carefully opened the lid of the boxes. What greeted you had made you visibly recoilâ the small flicker of hope that settled in your chest gone as quickly as it came. The cakes were crumbled and the frosting was all over the box, like it had been trampled and tossed around.
Was this all a joke? Were you a joke to him? Your shoulders trembled as you couldn't bring yourself to look away from it; the letter was still visible but amongst the cake crumbs lay written a nameâ Gabriella. Not happy birthday to you, but Gabi.Â
You didnât know what hurt most. Your lips quivered and all you could mutter was, âGabi?â
His eyes widened in surprise as he quickly moved to your side to take a look at the cake himself. He swiftly closed the lids, shaking his head. âMustâve been a mistake back at the bakery. I canââÂ
And you could barely catch your breath, not when the hurt piled over one another.Â
âAre the medals from her? The oneâs from your bed? The trophies?âÂ
He furrowed his eyebrows, clearly irritated. âWhat did I tell you about snooping around my things, __?â
âIs this the girlââ A ragged inhale cuts your thoughts, âon your nightstand and wallet?â You didnât even realize you had started to cry, but when another breath had caught itself in your throat, you were inconsolableâ finally letting the dam break all at once.
Miguel did nothing to console youâ he didnât know how to. He knew he had messed up royally and all he could do was helplessly watch you break down. Who knows how long youâve kept this?Â
â__, come on. Itâs just a simple mistake, itâs still cakeââ
âAnd it was my birthday!âÂ
âBaby, whatâs the big deal?â He was shocked and understandably so. His sweet, babygirl, who was usually so quiet and docile, was talking back angrily to himâ but Miguel knew better than to point fingers. This was his faultâ your unbecoming was his own doing.
âYou just had to be lateâ on my birthday!âÂ
âI have work, baby, you know this.âÂ
âThat still doesnât explain anything!â You cried out, desperation flooding your voice. âWhy are you never home? Where do you go? Who is Gabriellaâ why do you love her more than me?â You could feel your breath catch in your throat as your voice rose and trembled with every question. Your breathing grew unsteady and your throat began to close up, not allowing anymore words to come out as much as you wanted to scream. You feared thereâd be no more room for air.
And there was something about Gabriella that everytime she was brought up, Miguel would be defensive. Perhaps it was the plenty of times Lyla would reprimand him when she catches him watching the few videos of them or when Jess would pity his state. âDonât be ridiculous, __. I made a mistakeâ thatâs it. We donât have to fight.â He says, grabbing a spatula. âIf it bothers you so much, here,â
Miguel frustratedly spreads the lettering with the spatula, leaving smudges of red on top of perfectly white frosting, resulting in a more muddled mess. He's making a complete mess of it and you can't bear to watch any longer. Your still figure finally reaches out to grab his wrist, âStopâ stop that! What are you doing?!â Â
It was no use. The cake was nothing but totally ruined now. You didnât even have the chance to read the message. He forcefully digs the candles on both, sliding it in front of you. Your eyes stayed on the cakeâ you didnât have the heart to look at him. Anger boiled up within you and without a moment's hesitation, the words leaped from your mouth, "You're not listening to me! This is not what I'm so upset aboutâ!"
But he responds in the same loudness as yours, slamming his hands down on the cold tiles of your countertop. âOkay, champ, you got itâ go for it! Say what you have to say,â A sarcastic chuckle left his lips, adding insult to the already deep wound. âWhat do you have to tell me so bad?â
And you didnât think it was possible for silence to be more deafening, but as you stared each other down, all you could think of was how maybe Miguel was worse than the archetypal absent one who chose to abandon his child or the dead-beat-dad who ultimately never cared for them.Â
You were right. Fathers were capable of unloving their daughters and the way his dark eyes burned into yours was all the answer you needed. This wasnât your papaâ did you ever know him?
âMy birthday was two days ago.âÂ
He furrowed his eyebrows, doubt creasing his forehead as he looked back to the calendar hung on the fridge. His gaze resting on your birthday date, the red circle mocking him in vivid reminderâ two days ago. Your birthday was two days ago. The realization hit him like a ton of bricks, and he felt nothing but guilt tying his stomach in knots.Â
âMijitaââ Heâs quick to console you, the anger in his words disappearing immediately and turning into an apologetic oneâ but every time heâd try to move forward, youâd only step back. Miguel couldnât even bear to think how youâve celebrated on your own. How you waited for him all night in your birthday dress. He subtly shook his head, trying his best not to clog his mind yet.Â
He needed to make it up to you. He couldnât lose you too.
âMy birthdayâ why did you have to take it?â You rubbed your eyes harshly, but the more you wiped the tears away, the more they seemed to fall. âItâs mine and I still had to wait for you to be able to sing the song. Itâs my day and all I could think of was what time you might come home tonight.â
You wanted nothing more than for him to run to you with open arms, to let you cry on his shouldersâ but as his silence stretched on, you mistook it as nothing but ruthless. He simply didnât care. Miguel was too much of a wall for that.Â
The look you gave him was nothing but hateâ a look no parent wants to ever come across and it almost makes him stagger back. It was like what he had done was the most disgustingâ most inconsolable act ever beyond repair and all he could do was watch; watch as another daughter of his slip through his fingers. Heâs holding you like water and he doesnât know how to keep you in.
You scoffed, averting your gaze. âYou donât want to talk about it? Fine by me.â You turned your back, letting out another shaky exhale. You couldnât look at him the sameâ not after this.
âYou make it really, really, hard to feel like a daughter.âÂ
And with that, you run to your room, leaving Miguel to stay rooted to where he stood. He thinks to himselfâ had he taken that from you too?
shameless plug, but iâm currently working on other stories at the moment! not that iâm putting my series on hold since iâm also writing it at the same time, but iâve been itching to post father!miguel oâhara so iâm finally able to work on a few đ hereâs a rundown to what i might post this week teehee
account i use for spider-men content: @alrtyhoney (only bec i wanted to use this acc solely for avatar ;((( i thought of it like rlly rlly hard nd decided that i rather keep it tidy) iâll see you guys there!
how old is the Reader in every corner of this house is haunted??
hello! i don't really have any specifics since i am not that knowledgeable with how the na'vi ages in general- it's a very complicated concept in my case, considering the different information i'm getting with every character haha but she's roughly a year older (and a half ? ? ?? idk pls) than neteyam!
i just finished reading the last part of your story and omg thereâs so much to say
neteyam and reader being so similar yet so different that they hurt each other unconsciously. both of them wanting validation but differently neteyam wants to be recognised as a warrior and is frustrated because jake pull him off missions while reader wants to be recognised as a daughter and had this need to be held back from mission but jake doesnât give either nor satisfied their need
Neytiri having a lifetime of grievance and has to bear the loss of tsuâtey while educating the last living piece of him. having a different relationship with reader that can be made into a correlation with Jake/Kiri particular relationship. the fact that even if she loves her life with jake thinking of what-if knowing she would have known perhaps less loss in a different lifetime if she made a different decision back then.
jake while being navi, eating navi, seeing Eywa, communicating with their culture and practice cannot let go of his human nature. despite all the time that has passed and knowing the guilt he held for the past and his first treason knows that it all roots from his human origin and cannot do anything about it. Loving reader differently but cannot let himself love properly because it would seems as if it was another thing he took from tsuâtey. Him crumbling under the pression and expectations while failing everyone he met. but heâs stil learning and despite all the grievance we should hold against him - can we really hate him for it ?
The parallèle between jake and reader fortheir first adventure toward unknown is so heartbreaking, bittersweet and really left a bad taste because after all she IS his daughter first and foremost, his firstborn, his first link to fatherhood and anchor his place in a intrinsic way.
You know the way this chapter ended make me think of a path for reader mirroring jakeâs - i hope she finds a certain someone from an unknown clan the same way Jake found neytiri
i will finish this because itâs really long and i feel it will bore you but thank you for your dedication to the avatar universe and the take you take for every story you made - because thereâs really no discontinuation between the tone of your stories and the filmâs
Anyway all the love for your writing đ¤
(please iâm french be indulgent toward my english đ)
honey, everything is so on point- i don't even know what to comment with each one bec you just laid out every word i have to say. heavy on the 'loving reader differently but cannot let himself love properly because it would seems as if it was another thing he took from tsuâtey' bec it hurts so bad. we can't rlly entirely hate jake for it
i love this message so much. rest assured that i am finishing this series (nd might even make more who knows teehee) thank you for this bby!
Hiiiiiii! I'm here again after reading the New chapter of Every Corner Of This House Is Haunted and I LOVE IT!!!! It was really worth it waiting a little while. When I saw the notification on my phone I was EUPHORIC!!! Thank you for coming back to us, dear author đđđ¤
Omg I was so broken reading Neteyam's part đ It seems like he's trying his best not to worry about his sister, but he's failing!! Like, after all the distance on their relationship, he feels like he shouldn't be worried, but he is đ
THEIR FLASHBACK!!!!! It made me so happy reading a little about their sibling relationship :))
HE USED TO CALL HER TSMUKE đđđ WHY DID HE HAVE TO STOP?? Neteyam, pls, call reader "sis" back again đ
And it broke me so much the fact that the reader literally taught neteyam the concept of lie đ˘ I mean, the navi language doesn't even have a word for lie, so it's normal to a navi not know the concept of it. But instead of him learning the word "lie" as something bad that hurts people, she taught him the good part of the lie, because she lied just to protect him đđđđđ
I kinda feel a little bad for Jake tho (not because of the situation with reader of course, he was wrong), but his whole life he's known as someone that brings chaos and destruction, and he feels he needs to be perfect to deserve to be happy, but he's so focused in it he doesn't even notice when he's being cruel and losing touch with his family. He somehow admits that he's responsible of the chaos the brought to the family and didn't even notice until it happened đđđ
NEYTIRI IS SUCH A GOOD MOM!!! PLS SOMEONE HUG HER :(((((
and I was so surprised by the end of the chapter when reader encountered the palulukan đ I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
I love your writing, the way that you work to describe both parts of the situation and not making it like "reader is right and jake is the villian". (Of course im a little biased on reader's side, but who cares đ¤)
It's literally the last thing I'm holding onto to stay on the fandom. Pls, pardon my English! I was so excited to comment on the fanfic that I didn't even have time to see if it makes sense.
Love you, bye!! đŠˇđđŠˇđ
AIKO MY WIFE HELLO thank you for mentioning the flashback! i actually thought of removing it from the chapter because i thought it wouldn't hold any significance whatsoever, but i'm glad i didn't! how you put it, with reader teaching neteyam the word lie is so heart-wrenching ;( yall are wise fr. to think that he knows that word as something soft and gentle because of reader is BEYOND me, i love you for that
i feel so bad for jake too bby: (( i genuinely think that he blames himself for every bad thing that has ever happened because he thinks he brought it to them himself. my man just wants to be happy
thank you for this! i really love exploring different perspectives and dynamics, it makes the story more in depth that way?? i'm really glad that i'm able to portray it well! (bby believe me, your english is good! ilysb, thank you for reading!)
hi! just read every corner of this house is haunted and it's so good!!
I just thought that what if reader die protecting neteyam and his thought about her will turn upside down and reader's death will haunted him for entire life lol
oh I have another what if too!! I've thought what if reader ran away and got killed. the sully didn't know. they flew to awa'atlu blahblahblah neteyam die. when jake and neytiri visit him in the spirit tree, they meet neteyam and reader! the reality hit them so hard that their eldest daughter was dead and none of them weren't there for her.
(sorry if i talk to much)
these two scenarios are so different to what i initially planned (actually thought of the first !! but i don't really want to give neteyam that kind of burden ;( my child has had enough) but the second i want to write! after finishing the series, i'll try to make an alternate ending prior to that what if of yours, anon! it's so interesting.
baby talk to me all you want, i really don't mind! thank you for this
