Week 9: (final blog)
This week, our very last week of blogs, we discussed Non-fiction Realism. âšľ
Starting with your very own Staley, “25 Years Ago, I Played in the Little League World Series, Too.” It must be weird for you to read a blog on your own writing, but I do appreciate you deciding to share it with us. It reminds me that my professors do exactly what they are asking me to do, and find passion in it. Anyways your article sucked. Just kidding. Â
Something I particularly enjoyed about your piece was your use of nearly all the senses in describing your childhood relationship with baseball. Within about two paragraphs I understood why this week is titled nonfiction realism – so you hit the ball out of the park with that one (ha-ha get it). The conflict between our childhood perception of baseball, vs our adulthood was my favorite part. Inevitably, as we get older things start seeming less and less exciting, I don't know why, but it seems this way. Your fond tone goes to show that we can still find joy and excitement in these memories, no matter how different our lenses might be now. Â
Next up, “Hub Fans Bid Kid Adieu,” by John Updike. This story encompasses Boston's relationship with former baseball player, Ted Williams. We have the narrator, John, who clearly distinguishes and takes time to let the reader know who he is, which something we should work to include in our creative expository assignments. My favorite part of this piece was actually the ending, “On the car radio as I drove home I heard that Williams, his own man to the end, had decided not to accompany the team to New York. He had met the little death that awaits athletes. He had quit.” As I have mentioned before I'm a sucker for a powerful ending sentence. Â











