Ok so tiny rant about why the Immortal Desires ending is one of the all time worst choices endings to absolutely no oneโs surprise:
First thereโs the plot ending:
Yes, this is the last scene of the book (unless you get the bonus scene). The book ends with MC randomly having been turned into a vampire, and if you buy every single talisman throughout the story, you get a bonus scene. In the bonus scene you find out MC was going to die, and that Cas and Gabe turned her without her consent while she was unconscious after never having discussed her being turned or her feelings on the matter before then. Then they didnโt get the chance to tell her until she figured it out on her own. And then once MC figured it out sheโs like โcool, thanks for saving my life, no big on the vampire thing.โ
Thatโs literally the line.
And this is where the whole book ends, so MC never gets upset, never talks to them about it, nothing. Sheโs just totally cool with being turned into a vampire without her consent while she was unconscious.
Also, keep in mind, the entire explanation for why sheโs suddenly a vampire is in the bonus scene, so unless you spend about 100 diamonds on all the talismans, you do not get this scene. The book just ends with MC suddenly becoming a vampire.
Then thereโs the poly situation.
Throughout the entire book the romances are set up so that you can romance Cas, Gabe, or both of them together. And when I say together I donโt mean u can pick both of their scenes and just decide in the end, I mean there are multiple diamond scenes throughout the book where u can pick a romance scene that includes both of them together. Itโs one or the other or both of them together throughout the entire story.
For example, this is the final diamond choice:
You can choose them both together.
Now what, do you ask, happens in this scene where they all three confess their feelings to each other? Cas and Gabe confess their feelings to MC who says โfor now I canโt choose between you, I hope youโre okay with that.โ
AND THEY ARE. They both say โyou canโt choose right now and thatโs fine.โ
The thing that makes me truly furious about this is that they spend the entire book focusing on the relationship these three develop together. They have diamond scenes together. They have romantic scenes together. And then in the end MC guiltily feels like she canโt decide between them???
They not only set up a poly relationship and didnโt follow it through, but they set up a poly relationship and then made MC feel guilty about wanting them both. If the entire book it had been framed as one or the other, I wouldnโt be so mad, but the entire book it was framed as one or the other or both together.
So to conclude: itโs a rushed ending plot wise, MC is turned against her consent and without her knowledge and is not only fine with it, but in fact grateful for the violation, and they spend an entire book purposefully setting up a poly relationship and then at the last minute force guilt on MC and make her choose.
So yeah, one of the worst choices endings Iโve ever read, and I read wolfbride.
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