no shame - lrh (rewritten)
the original version was my first time ever writing a fic, and since then, my writing has improved a bit so i thought i would give you a new version of my first ever fic. enjoy <3 there is also a scene detected to my bestest friend @talkfastluvr ilysm
summary: Luke is a street racer and she teases him before the race and after it’s over he fucks her in the back of his car.
word count: 4.3k+
luke hemmings loved adrenaline.
hence why he's leaning up against his car with a cigarette dangling from his mouth, waiting for his opponent for this next race to arrive as he seems to be late, as always.
he sees his girl walking up to him with a sinful smile on her pretty lips as she walks up to where he stands.
he's clad in a white t-shirt that stretches around his broad shoulders, the sleeves clinging to his arms. the black jeans he wears hugging his thighs tightly.
she lifts her arm to take the cigarette from his lips, putting it between her own to take a drag.
"baby, what are you doin' over here?" luke asks, flicking the cigarette butt from his fingers, stopping it out on the ground under his black boots.
"just came to see you one last time before you went, that's all," she says lowly, her mind spinning at all the things she and luke could do in his car before he races, just to settle the nerves twisting in his stomach.
"hm, that's sweet of you," he opens his arms a little for her to slip in them, breathing in the scent of his familiar musky cologne, she can't get enough. "thank you, darling."
her lips curve into a smile, he brings a hand up from around her waist, to the side of her face, brushing the strand of stray hair out of her face, all while brushing the tips of his finger over the apple of her cheek.
no matter how many times she feels his warm touch on her skin, it will always feel like the first time.
his touch is so light, yet so heavy as even the simplest touch on her cheek makes her head spin.
as she stands there tucked closely against his body, she can feel his muscles through the thin cotton of his white t-shirt, his soft stomach, and hard chest just begging to be kissed.
his rough hands roaming around her back, tracing small shapes around the heated skin, covered by the old t-shirt of his she wears.
he starts to let his hands wander, fingertips trailing from the small of her back to her waist, sending goosebumps all over her body.
something about luke's messy curls, ocean blue eyes staring back at hers, his soft breath fanning against her neck, and his fingertips pricking at her skin has her thighs clenching a little more than they should
luke's been so busy lately, they haven't had time for each other, and right now she misses him, every part of him, so much.
as his callused fingers dance along her waist, she lets her mind travel back to the last time his fingers felt like this against her skin.
the last time he-
"you okay, pretty girl?" luke asks, snapping her out of her thoughts, his blue eyes searching hers. a slight blush creeping up on her cheeks.
"i'm fine, just thinking about you," she whispers against his chest, looking down to their feet so he wouldn't see how pink her cheeks have slowly gotten.
"oh yeah, sweetheart?"
"mhm, i was thinking about-
luke brings his index finger up to her lips, cutting her off while giving her a small smirk.
"as much as i would love to hear what your pretty little mind is thinking, i can't be sitting here wishing i could bend you over the hood of my car now can i?"
luke wishes he could tell the coordinator of the race to screw it he's out. but the amount of money he would lose doing that would be too much.
but god did he want her screaming his name right now?
she looks up at him, her eyes staring at his pink lips that she so desperately wants to kiss right now, the ones she so desperately wants to feel them pressed on the skin of her neck, trailing up her inner thighs, between her legs.
luke holds her waist as she lifts up on her tiptoes, her breath fanning over the shell of his ear. "i'm so wet for you, baby. i need you so bad, i just want you to take me right fucking here-
he grabs the back of her neck, cold silver rings digging into her skin, pulling her down so her face is in front of his. his blood running a little hotter knowing he just told her what to do and she deliberately did the opposite.
"what did i just say? didn't i say not to tell me what i know you're thinking right now? but of course, you go and do the opposite," luke bends down to the crook of her neck, letting his lips linger just above the skin. "because you're a little slut for me, aren't you? now all i can think about is fucking you until you're screaming for me."
she smirks against his shoulder, finally getting the exact reaction she wanted out of him, wanting him hard in front of everyone so maybe she can get him to herself tonight.
"sorry."
"sorry is not cutting, sweetheart. since you want to get me hard in front of everybody, when i'm done, i'm taking you to the back of my car so anyone that walks by can see what a slut you are for me."
she can feel her underwear dampen as her thighs clench, his words sending shivers down her spine as she knows he's finally going to fuck her.
"go sit over there," he points. "be ready for me when i get back, i'm not going easy on you."
walking over to her seat, she watches him shake hands with his opponent before he gets into his car, rolling the front two windows down so he can blow out his cigarette smoke.
she squirms in her seat, crossing her legs back and forth, just wishing this could be over already so she can have him where she wants him.
a loud gunshot fires and luke is nowhere to be seen, his car already out of her line of vision.
it's not long before she hears the loud sound of his engine making its way back, his car just an inch ahead of his opponents, as he flies past the finish line, he won by an inch.
luke immediately jumps out of his car to run and get the money he won, he almost didn't care enough to get it tonight, because the only thing he can think about is taking his girl to the back of his car.
she walks over to his car, leaning against the door as she waits for him, his underwear getting wetter by the second as she sees how his eyes are boring holes into her skin.
he finally starts making his way over, his jaw clenched and eyes ablaze. "you have five seconds to get into the back of that car before i lose my fucking mind."
this is what she fucking needed.
"yes, sir," she answers, climbing into the back of the car.
luke climbs into the back along with her, not giving her a chance to get settled before he's grabbing the back of her neck harshly, bringing her lips to his.
his kiss is rough, silently telling her who's in charge, he grabs at her hips, gripping onto the shirt as he pushes her onto her back, pinning her body to the seats.
she moves her hands to his messy curls, pulling on the strands to earn a low groan from him, she knows how much it turns him on when she pulls his hair.
luke moves his lips down to the crook of her neck, kissing every inch of her sensitive skin, but soon hits her sweet spot to hear a soft whimper escape her lips.
"does that feel good? tell me." he groans in her ear, grabbing at the outside of her thighs to move them around his waist.
"yes," she chokes on a moan as he grinds his hips into her, the material of her underwear rubbing against her clit. "it feels so good, please."
"you must need it real bad, huh?" he taunts her, he knows how bad she needs him, her thighs are practically squeezing around his hips as she tries to press them together, to get some type of friction between her legs.
"so fucking bad, luke- please, do something."
luke's pants tighten at the sound of her begging for his touch, he lays awake at night when he's gone thinking about the sound of her desperate and begging for him. she's always so needy for me. luke thought.
he drags his hand up her thigh, to the hem of her thin shirt. his eyes looking up from her stomach to her eyes, silently asking if it's okay to take the material off her body.
letting out a small "yes" he rips it off of her, throwing it somewhere in the small space of his sports car, leaning over her, luke takes her hard nipple between his lips, letting his tongue swirl around it.
"fuck," she grabs at the back of his shirt, wanting to feel his bare chest against her own, as soon as she gets it off of him, he's grabbing her wrists, pinning them beside her head. "you've been such a dirty little girl tonight baby, getting me hard when i could do nothing about it. i bet your little panties are soaked. can I see?"
"yes- you can." she whimpers, feeling herself get wetter at his whispered words. she can't help but attempt to squeeze her thighs again. but luke is having none of it as he roughly grabs her thighs to spread them apart.
luke hooks his fingers around the tops of her pants, teasingly pulling them down her legs, letting his fingertips trail across her skin to leave goosebumps all over.
he takes her thighs in his large hands, letting his cold rings dig into her sensitive skin, leaving small indentions for her to look at later to remind her she's his. and for him to look at and trace over with his fingertips while she's laying with him.
her body shakes under his hard stare as she lays in nothing but her soaked underwear. "I can tell your panties are soaked from here baby, you are such a little slut." he takes his middle finger, dragging it up the damp material.
"so fucking wet, you're dripping through your little panties." he uses the pad of his thumb the rub at her sensitive clit. "but...since you decided to tease me, princess, i think it's only fair i do it back."
she whines as he takes his finger away from between her thighs, she just wants him to make her cum, she needs it bad. "luke, no please, fuck."
"quit fucking whining," luke lifts his hips from the seat, dragging his jeans down his legs. so now, he sits in nothing but his underwear in front of her, his cock throbbing behind the material. he takes his hand, rubbing over the tip, getting harder by the second. "i'm going to get off while you sit and watch throbbing in your little panties because of the little stunt you pulled earlier."
his head tips back, mouth agape with harsh pants falling past his lips, his fingers wrapping around his dick behind the thin material. because the longer he keeps teasing himself, the longer she has to wait to cum.
she sits across from him with her thighs pressed together as tight as she could get them, watching luke tease himself and groan as he runs his fingers over his sensitive tip, he pushes his fingers past the waistband of his underwear to pull them down his legs. tossing them down on the floor beside him.
his dick slaps against the bottom of his stomach, a hiss escaping his lips as the cool air hits him. the ache in his cock more prominent.
as she continues to watch him, he finally takes himself in his hand, the muscles in his right bicep flexing as he starts to move up and down. a low moan coming from the feeling of getting some relief.
"all night i've been thinking about your sweet cunt, how it feels when it's wrapped around my cock," luke smirks at her, watching as she attempts to squeeze her thighs until he moves his foot between them. keeping her from doing so. "this is your punishment, little girl. that means no pleasure. so you better stop pressing your thighs together."
"luke, i can't. i'm so fucking wet, please," she whines, needing anything between her thighs. now that she can't even press them together she can't take it anymore.
"well, you should have thought about the consequences, princess. now i get to get off while you sit there wishing this was your hand around me instead." he continues to pump his cock, groaning as he rubs the pad of his thumb over his tip, collecting some of the pre-cum on his finger, using it to spread around cock to increase the sensation of his hand.
"shit, sweetheart. you're practically dripping down your thighs, you like watching me stroke my cock that much, huh?" luke asks, his blue eyes fluttering shut as he grows more and more sensitive. "this feels so fucking good, too bad my naughty girl can't feel it too."
"i love it, luke i-" her words get caught in her throat when she watches him start to lift his hips into his hand, using his other hand to brush the sweaty curls out of his face. the muscles in his abdomen starting to flex.
"god, i'm just thinking about your pretty little moans, how good you sound when you beg for me." luke opens his eyes to look at her, making sure her eyes are on nothing but him as he uses his index finger in a "come here" motion.
she moves from her spot on the other side of the seats, now sitting on her knees between his legs, her fingers aching to touch him. or herself.
"come closer, im getting close, and i want to cum on your pretty tits."
leaning down between his legs, she looks up at him to watch as he gets close to the edge, his hand speeding up around himself, luke uses his free hand to wrap it around the front of her neck, digging his rings into the side of her throat.
luke's movements get sloppy, he's close. so fucking close. he can't wait to see his girl covered in his cum, while looking up at him, desperate for him to do something for her.
"fuck, that's it. shi-" his words stop with a loud whine as he starts to release all over her chest, his head thrown back with moans pouring from his lips as he continues to pump himself through his orgasm.
she looks at the aftermath of his orgasm now all over her bare chest. until luke takes his finger, dragging it through to let it collect on his fingertip. he taps it against her lips, silently telling her to open them.
"suck."
she slips his finger into her mouth, the salty taste hitting her tongue as she sucks it off his finger. "that's my good girl, you've been so good. you ready for me to play with your wet little pussy, hmm?"
"please, fucking, please. i need it so bad," she begs, needing him to touch her more than anything.
he puts his hand on her chest, pushing until she's on her back so he can ruin her, luke knows how badly she needs it, and he can't wait to watch her fall apart.
"you're so needy aren't you, sweet girl? always needing me to make you cum, such a little slut for me," he whispers into her neck, kissing from her ear, down to her chest that's still covered in his cum.
"i'm so needy for you, luke. i need you."
luke slides his fingers under the top of her underwear, pulling them down her thighs to discard them. the air hitting between her thighs makes them need to close. but he holds them open with his hands.
the way he's staring down between her legs has her turning her head away as she feels her cheeks heat up at the intensity of his eyes.
"look at me." luke demands, wanting her to watch him as he used his tongue on her. he bends down to the inside of her right thigh, kissing up from her knee, to right above her clit, blowing a puff of cool air onto it, watching her squirm at the barely there contact
just as she thought, what she finally wanted was right there in front of her, he drags his lips down the inside of her opposite thigh, his soft lips teasing the sensitive skin.
she was just about to whine one last time before he takes his lips off of her thigh. without warning, he places his mouth on her clit, letting his tongue swirl around it.
loud moans start pouring from her lips, her body already shaking with intense pleasure at just the simple feel of his tongue, it hits her that anyone that walks by his car could hear her moans, but right now, she feels so good, she almost hops someone will hear.
"you taste so good princess, fuckin' dripping for me." luke groans against her, savoring the taste of her wetness on his tongue.
she looks down to run her fingers through his curls but finds he was already looking up at her first. meeting his eyes that are swimming with a cloud of lust.
he brings his index and middle finger into the mix as he pushes them both past her entrance, her thighs squeezing around his head. "so tight, look at how well you take my fingers, like a little whore."
her body starts to heat up, that familiar feeling settling in the bottom of her stomach, the way his fingers and tongue are hitting her favorite spots has her close to the edge already.
"are you close, angel?"
"yes, im so close. please don't stop." she pleads, in hopes that he'll let her cum.
"beg for it, beg me to let you cum."
"please, i need it so bad."
luke stops his movements, taking his mouth off of her clit. "oh no, sweetheart. how pathetic. i can't make you cum like that."
"luke, i'll do anything. just please, please make me cum with your tongue, i'm sorry about earlier just please." she throws her head back against the fogged window, bucking her hips, trying to reach his mouth.
he pushes her hips back down to the seats, telling her to stay still as he dives back between her thighs. the sound of his fingers pushing in and out ringing in her ears.
"i'm going to count down from three, and you can cum, okay?"
she shakes her head in agreement as she tries to keep her body from cumming before he says.
"three."
she's so close.
"two."
fuck.
"one, and.."
just as she was about the cum on his tongue, he pulls away. taking his fingers from her entrance. leaving her empty and even more desperate than before, her eyes watery and body tired as she has her orgasm ripped from her hands.
"luke, why? i did everything you said."
he slots himself between her legs, his hips meeting hers. "not even close, you didn't listen to me earlier. so why should i have let you? besides, i want you cumming around my cock."
"yes, please. fuck me."
he grabs the underside of her knees, pulling them up around his hips, getting himself close to where she needs him most. luke grabs the base of his dick, pumping himself before he pushes inside her, groaning lowly. he places his tip against her clit, rubbing up and down to make sure she's ready for him.
"are you ready, pretty girl? ready for me to make you mine, hm?"
"yes, ple-" he cuts off her begging by pushing inside her.
he stays still for a moment to make sure she's ready. their breaths finally mingling together in the small space between their faces that are now so close, they can feel the fast beat of each other's heart.
"move." was all she could say before he starts he push his hips in and out of her.
"shit, oh my god, baby. that's so fucking good." luke groans into her neck, the feel of her wetness around him has his mind in such a haze he can barely breathe.
"please, harder."
"whatever you like, darling."
all the air in her lungs is gone when he starts pounding inside her, the sound of his hips roughly meeting hers echoing throughout the small space of the car.
he grabs the backs of her thighs to push them further back. the tip of his cock hitting directly against her g-spot. she moans loudly, her chest lifting off the seat as he continues to hit that spot inside her.
"there it is," he smirks, focusing on hitting that spot over and over again until she can no longer take it.
"you feel so good, angel. so tight and wet. fuck..." he pauses trying to catch his breath. "goddamn you're such a slut, i love watching your pussy take me. you just love my cock don't you?" He bends down to her lips, letting them hover over her own as he wraps his fingers around her throat.
"yes, i love your cock," she moans, loving the feel of him ruining every part of her.
"louder, princess."
"i love your cock." she moans louder.
"come on, be my little slut and scream it for me."
"yes, luke. i love your cock." she screams, loud enough where anyone remotely close to his car could hear her.
"that's it, you want everyone here to listen to me pounding your pretty little pussy? do you want everyone to know i'm yours?" luke rubs his palm across the skin of her ass, until he lifts it off the skin, to bring it back down in a harsh slap.
the sensitive skin stinging, but she can't get enough. everything he gives her feels so good. she never wants him to stop. "yes, i want everyone to hear how good you're making me feel."
his hand then travels down to where they are connected rubbing her throbbing clit, trying to get her to come for him. "i know you do, fuckin' good girl."
her hands scratch down the skin of his back, leaving red marks up and down his spine, he'll stare at those in the mirror as he waits for his shower to warm, remembering how good he made her feel.
luke's furrowed brows and now sloppy thrusts tell her he's starting to get close, and as his fingers speed up on her clit, she's not far behind him.
"come on, sweetheart. i want you to come for me, want to feel you squeezing my cock. getting it nice and wet."
"i'm so close, i- "
"i know, i'm right there, fucking cum for me, darling." luke whispers against the shell of her ear.
one last stroke of his dick inside her and flick to her clit. she's cumming. finally, after waiting for what seems like forever, she's getting to cum around him. her face is buried into his neck as she shakes against his body, whimpers filling his ears as he fucks her through her orgasm.
at the feel of her squeezing him so tight, he can barely keep his composure, but he always wants her to cum first. his thrusts are now losing rhythm as his orgasm dangles in front of him.
she wraps her legs back around his waist, keeping him from moving away from her. "baby i- he throws his head back. "do you want me to cum in you hmm? want me to fill you up?"
"mhm, yes. i want it so bad."
at her words, he lets his high take over him, his cum filling her up just like she asked. luke grunts in my ear as he starts to slowly push in and out. riding out his orgasm.
"good fucking girl," he says as he kisses my chest, letting his lips travel from my chest up to my neck.
he takes himself out of her, both of them whimpering at the loss of each other. luke looks down between her legs, his blood pumping a bit faster a the sight. "i love watching my cum drip out of you, goddamn your little cunt is wrecked."
luke takes his index finger, dragging it up from her entrance, up to her clit. getting his cum on the tip of his finger before he places it in his mouth. groaning at the taste.
she could almost cum again at the sight.
"here taste us, princess."
he slips his finger through her slit again before placing it past her lips. she swirls her tongue around his finger to make sure she gets off all of it.
"do you think anybody heard us?" she asks, giggling to herself at the small haze her mind is in she feels utterly fucked out in the best way she can describe.
he smiles at her giggling. "i don't know, but if they did, they'd be lucky to hear you. " luke kisses the tip of her nose, then her cheek. then her soft lips.
"i love you." she kisses him back, loving the taste of the two of them on his tongue.
"i love you too, angel," he takes his t-shirt, slipping it over her head, wanting her to be comfortable.
"now let's get you home so i can take care of you properly."
