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Voting ended onMay 28
some Vee art, I’d imagine her being more robot than toon. She’s powered and conscious through ichor similar to my au / retake’s version of Dyle, in fact my au / retake of Dyle uses the scrapped V2 model as a vessel.
Twisted Vee stays the same but Origin Twisted Vee (or Origin Vee) is strung up by wires.
My AU’s origin Twisteds are basically Twisteds that appear as boss floors (think like Dolly’s Factory). Origin Vee is hoisted up by cables (they’re drawn from the back but I’d redraw them coming from her head), her left arm is formed into a sawblade for when she grabs toons. Toons grabbed by her are forced to answer a trivia question or be sawed. The second Vee head is Vee Version 2’s ripped off head (Dyle when obtaining the body ripped off Vee V2’s head).
Vee Version 2 has a star theme, her legs are replaced by a tire, she has a more refined suit, her face is more squared. I’ve also been thinking of changing my Vee design and giving her the light screen she has in her showtime and veester bunny skin.
Poppy is a support that helps other people with stamina
Boxten focuses on extraction
Shrimpo can throw hands
(Fourth image for clearer view of Shrimpo’s passive)
I’ve been thinking of switching Poppy’s and Shrimpo’s role, I feel like Shrimpo could be used more in supporting other toons while Poppy was already the designation survivalist.
uhh quick role reversal idea: Poppy’s active stays the same but removes the extra support of placing cans of pop and it gets faster with the more pop Poppy has on her and her passive prevents her stamina from draining for 6 seconds after using a pop item. Shrimpo’s abilities stay the same since they could be used as support.
Melody is the little ballerina figure thing that Boxten would have in his head, like a real music box, she’s alive like Barnaby
Revival system: inspired by dfeng, toons are able to carry their dead friends back to the elevator to place them in a tube of ichor, 300 tapes and 3 spawns on that toon (increase by 3 for each rarity after common). Tape cost increases by 50 the more toons are revived.
Also some designs for starter twisteds, uhh if twisted boxten plays his music nearby your skill check size is decreased, twisted Poppy spawns EVIL pop cans and bottles that take stamina, twisted Shrimpo is extremely slow but always hunting a toon.
Follow up on my other post about my Origin Twisted idea
Origin Vee: she’s become a super-computer, she’s able to mass survey the floor. She keeps her previous mechanics but strengthen them (Pop-ups now move, toons is heavily slowed after getting a question). Her added ability is that cameras spawn around her floor which give toon’s trivia questions when passed by, answering wrong or not answering will damage that toon. When a toon is around Origin Vee they must stay still or she will sense their movement (Origin Vee is mostly blind as she’s only able to detect when someone is passing by a camera, she’s become one with Gardenview’s technology.)
Origin Astro: he’s practically become a pillar, he can’t move instead being the centerpiece of his floor. He keeps his previous mechanics but strengthens them ( he can spawns rings of his magic that quickly drain stamina, when a machine is failed he’ll instantly take a chunk of the ichor and if the toon can’t get off before he does they’ll take damage). His added mechanic is that he produces of a cloudy fog imbued his her magic. After passing through the fog it causes hallucinations of which will be of: machine sounds, fake toon death sounds, Twisted Dandy’s music, Twisted Astro’s footsteps, fake twisted chase sound, fake toon damage sound, fake Twisteds, fake machines, Origin Astro’s ripped-off face plate, and a wavy screen effect (can be toggled off for motion sensitive players.) after the hallucination affect ends the toon cannot regenerate stamina for 10 seconds. It also disrupts any normal sound like actual Twisteds spotting you.
Origin Sprout: he’s more passive twisted until the other Twisteds spot a toon, he might seem intimating but as long as you stay out of his or his friends’ way he’ll leave you alone. He keeps his previous mechanic but strengthens it ( he’s slow but is constantly surrounded by his ichor tendrils, when he’s near he’ll spawn his tendrils around him when nearby). His added mechanic is that when he spots a toon while another twisted isn’t chasing a toon he’ll slam his hand on that toon, after a toon recovers they won’t be able to be heal or use their items for 15 seconds (they gain a status effect named Headache).
Origin Shelly: she’s completely lost any sense of morality or self and has become nothing but a ferocious beast. She keeps her previous mechanics but strengthens them ( her confusion effect gets stronger the closer she is which becomes apparent when she slowly walks to toons on machines, she’s still fast and can lunge large distances randomly and quickly. Her added mechanic is that she spawns sandpits all over her floor, these sandpits act has hiding spots for her and other Twisteds. Stepping through the sandpits fully covers your screen in sand for a bit and you can only walk through them.
(you can tell when my designs got sloppy srry)
Origin Pebble: he’s still loyal to his owner even after so long. He keeps his previous mechanics but strengthens them (his speed and eyesight are enhanced, he shakes the screen when running towards a toon and decreases his target’s stealth when spotted.) His new mechanic is that he can disguise himself as the real Pebble or as an average rock, the ichor has split pebble into many Pebbles. These fake Pebbles can bark when nearby to alert Twisteds, burst into ichor puddles, bite and do damage, or be the actual Origin Pebble in disguise. Your main way of escaping him is using designated hiding spots around the maps, of which would be few are far between.
Floor clear conditions and special machines. (Special Machines are separate from the normal machines also on the floor.)
Origin Astro’s floor clear condition is to turn on 10 nightlights to quell Origin Astro, allowing you to leave. His special machine is a big music box, toons need to crank the machine to keep Origin Astro from releasing the fog. Let him rest, he’s been through enough.
Origin Vee’s floor clear condition is to collect water to put in a bucket over the main stage ( like the Nickelodeon slime but for Vee’s trivia, the intended source is slime but water is the only resource available). Sources of water are: water faucets, sinks, water fountains, Finn, Poppy, and coolers. Vee’s special machines are stage lights that need to be connected to outlets to draw Origin Vee to the main stage. Free her from the system she’s been tethered to.
Origin Sprout’s floor clear condition is to burn the floor to the ground, to do so you need to use the floor’s special machine, the oven. You need to work on a cake to place on the dining table, this distracts Origin Sprout. To finish the floor clear condition you need to pour gasoline from the oven to the dining table to set Origin Sprout and the floor on fire. Once doing so Sprout’s tendrils which would prevent the toons from leaving are forced back allowing you to leave. Finish what they tried to do.
Origin Shelly’s clear condition is to collect pictures of Shelly and her handler to place them all in a nest. The pictures would be found in offices, employee only rooms, around Shelly’s room part of the floor, and scattered around the floor. The special machine is a tape recorder, you need to compile scattered audio tapes to lure Origin Shelly back to the nest of photos. Once doing so the fossilized wall covering the elevator door breaks are you’re able to leave. She never wanted to leave Shelly behind.
Origin Pebble: the special floor clear condition is to clear the floor while avoiding the swarms of Fake Pebbles. Origin Pebble’s floor has multiple sections that open up when some machines are finished, when the next exit is opened the previous section starts to cave in. (Best thing to compare it to is the Greenhouse event in Dolly’s Factory.) The longer you stay on a floor more Fake Pebbles will spawn. The special machine are kibble dispensers, to complete them you need to find dog food to pour into the machine before starting it. The machine distracts the Fake Pebbles for around 50 seconds, Origin Pebble wont eat from the kibble dispenser. The machine is meant to help toons keep trap of the real Origin Pebble’s location. Don’t lose track of Pebble like he did.
I think I like these concepts, my only current issue is that other than Origin Pebble and Origin Astro they rest of the Origin Mains’s clear conditions are kinda just “do thing and lead Origin Main into area to complete the floor” but the task that isn’t leading the Origin Main to an area feels different from the other tasks that it kinda evens it out.
I’m not really a fan of the designs I might change them later
Origin Twisteds are stronger version of the normal Twisted counterpart. Each are contained to one floor.
My retake au redesigns the toons while keeping the original designs in the cartoon, posters, and merch.
The toons gain exclusive redesigns for Gardenview like Mickey gets a suit for Disney Parks. The Origin Twisteds take the appearance of the Gardenview Toons while the normal Twisteds take on their normal appearance. [Current toons are also copies but made by Dandy so they keep their Gardenview outfits]
The normal Twisteds are copies made by Gardenview [Retake info: Gardenview is alive, the trees is its heart. The copies are based off the surrounding posters, cartoon, merch, theming, and the like.]
[each main gets their own special Dyle-like Origin Floor, kinda like Dolly’s Factory or the holiday floors. Holiday floors are added to the normal floor rollout but have higher chances of appearing. This retake au would presumably have faster game progression to ensure most players could see all floors, after Origin Twisted Pebble the floors would have to repeat.]
Origin Twisted Astro’s appears on floor 5
Origin Twisted Sprout’s appears on Floor 10
Origin Twisted Vee’s floor appears on floor 15
Origin Twisted Shelly’s floor appears on floor 20
Origin Twisted Pebble’s floor appears on floor 25
Dyle’s floor works like normal and Dandy also gets his own floor too when he spawns
pretty cool it explains a lot of the more biological factors of toons
I’d imagine them being more organic when Delilah made them but once they’re remade (HC that Dandy revived the toons after the malfunction incident) they are mostly made up of ichor explaining why when they did they only explode and don’t leave any organs behind
also yea that ichor stuff is definitely making stuff alive like Bassie’s whispering flower and ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING ITS MOVING IT MOVES ITS ALIVE IT CAN FEEL IT CAN SENSE IT CAN CREATE IT THINKS THERE FOR IT IS
Warning: Sprout demonstration of organ having toons and pure ichor toons, mid process of sprout twisting, may be unsettling to some viewers
Poor Vee, why’d they build her like that though why would they make a toon practically a robot that constantly needs repairs and has the disadvantages of technology😭
I didn’t know what to do for the drawing so I’m putting Vee under the buzzsaw
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