my single greatest weakness as far as love stories go
is when a story is told through one characterās (pining) point of view, but you the reader KNOW that their love interest loves them back
and the pov character casually says something that you the reader KNOW is gonna be completely devastating to their love interest, but pov character has NO IDEA, like:
ā[innocently devastating thing],ā said pov character
a strange look seemed to pass over love interestās face. āyeah, [seemingly casual response that comes off as a little stilted, for reasons pov character just cannot pinpoint],ā said love interest.
āuh, [joke that accidentally just DIALS UP THE AGONY TO A THOUSAND FOR LOVE INTEREST],ā pov character added, to cut the tension.
love interest stepās faltered for a second.Ā ā[seemingly casual response that is FILLED WITH EXQUISITELY REPRESSED PAIN AND LONGING].ā it sounded a little gruff. probably love interest was just distracted, or wanted some space. who could blame them?
POV CHARACTER, YOU IDIOT <3