Look at me, bro. They made me dress like this today plaid shirt, blue chinos, belt nice and tight. Hair combed, smile on command. Hands in my pockets, standing tall, looking exactly how they want. Feels good being told what to wear.
What about you, bro ?
Look at my smile… yeah, just like that.
You look a little confused right now, but that’s okay.
Big smile, bro. Wider. Concentrate.
Smile and obey me.
That’s it… good boy.
You’re gonna be my new stupid smiling brother real soon.
Eddie was excited to go to his first fraternity party during the summer. It was supposed to be very exclusive, and he was surprised they wanted a husky nerd like him to come over. The only sports he had any interest in was rugby, and he hadn’t played it in years. When you showed up it was just a lot of stereotypical Frat Boys hanging out on their porch, drinking beer and smoking cigars. One of the older guys, Josh his name was, walked over and clapped Eddie on the back.
“So glad you decided to come bro, we’ve been looking hard for New York routes over the summer. We really think you have what it takes, we wanted you to hang out with us first, get to know you better. You smoke, right?”
Eddie have never tried smoking before, but he wanted to fit in so he nodded. Quickly a luxurious cigar was pulled out of a small mahogany humidor and cut expertly. Josh used a small match to light it, handing it to Eddie once it was lit. Josh instructed him how to inhale, to make sure that it would be nice and even and so that Eddie would not cough or sputter. Once Josh had him smoking, he was moved to town to sit next to some of the older guys to chat. A beer appeared next to him without being asked for, but Eddie picked it up and started drinking it.
They hung out for a while, talking about sports in school and we’re surprisingly friendly. He felt himself starts relax around them, start to enjoy himself. He was surprised how little of the cigar was burnt out, feeling like he had been doing this for hours but he guessed it must not have been that long. His cup was empty, but it was quickly refilled. He went to take off the hoodie he was wearing, but felt a slight lurch when he went to do so. He looked down and was surprised to see himself and a button-down shirt. He then realized that he was being silly. Of course he would have been dressing to the nines, he wanted to get into a fraternity. He looked down at the rest of his outfit, his boat shoes and matching leather belt, his khakis, his sunglasses. “Damn, I look fine”, he thought.
As he was pondering this, most of the cigar seem to just disappear. I thought of the other fraternity guys smiled and nudged each other knowingly. This time Josh pulled out a joint, offering Eddie a hit. You didn’t want to turn down this generous offer, so once again he had a quick instruction for what he was supposed to do. He held it between his fingers and took a hit. He felt another slight lurch, his brain rearranging itself. He was no longer coming to school to study molecular biology, he was here to get a business major and chill with his bros. He was going to party four days a week, hit the gym all the time, and enjoy getting a nice allowance from his well-off parents. He was going to hang out with his bros, partying and having a great time. But something was still missing he knew. At first he thought he should want to be out fucking women, but something still seems off.
The sun had started to go down by now, and some of the men were getting restless. Once the joint was gone, daddy looked over to Josh to see if something else would be offered, knowing his bro would have something for him. Instead of something to drink or smoke, Josh had unzipped his pants and pulled out his surprisingly erect dick. He put it before Eddie’s face, and without thinking about it Eddie lead over and begins sucking, tasting the pre cum dripping out of his new fraternity bro. Of course he shouldn’t have to worry about girls now, the men in this house were down to fuck anything that moved. As the newest member, he would spend most of his first semester making sure that anytime one of the guys here had an erection he would be quick to suck him off. After all, the pledge who sucked the least amount of dick so at the end of the semester would get cut. Only cocksucker bros would get initiated and then be allowed to chase tail themselves.
Vincent found the envelope when he came home late, keys still in his hand, thoughts scattered the way they usually were. Matte white. Heavy paper. No return address. He stared at it longer than necessary, then opened it.
An invitation.
The Ashford Society.
Attendance encouraged.
No time. No explanation.
The building greeted him with silence. A door opening before he knocked. Warm light. Clean lines. Men standing in small, precise clusters, their voices low, their movements economical. Polo shirts in calm colours. Khaki shorts pressed so sharply they looked permanent. Vincent hesitated just inside the doorway, suddenly aware of his own lack of intention. His messy blond hair. His hoodie. His posture that never quite settled.
“You look lost.”
The voice was calm, almost amused. Vincent turned to see a man standing close enough that he hadn’t noticed him approach. Blond hair, perfectly arranged. Polo immaculate.
“I just got an invite,” Vincent said. “I wasn’t sure—”
“That’s how everyone starts,” the man replied, smiling. “I’m Julian.”
“Vincent.”
Julian nodded, eyes moving over him slowly, not judging, assessing. “You stand out.”
Vincent laughed, rubbing the back of his neck. “Yeah. I get that a lot.”
“For now,” Julian said lightly. “Come on. You’ll feel less awkward once you settle in.”
Vincent followed before thinking to ask where they were going.
“You’re tense,” Julian observed at one point, resting a hand briefly on Vincent’s shoulder. “You carry too much noise.”
Vincent exhaled without realizing he’d been holding his breath. “I guess I do.”
“We help with that here.”
Men passed them, adjusting collars in mirrors, smoothing sleeves, correcting posture without instruction. One caught Vincent looking and smiled faintly.
“You’ll get used to it,” he said. “It feels better once everything lines up.”
Vincent nodded, though he wasn’t sure what that meant.
Time blurred. Rooms blended together. Conversations looped back on themselves gently, always redirecting Vincent when he strayed too far. Whenever he fidgeted, someone noticed. Whenever he hesitated, someone reassured him.
Then Vincent noticed the doors.
How they closed softly behind him. How the exits weren’t where he remembered them.
“I think I should go,” he said suddenly, stepping back. “I didn’t plan to stay this long.”
Vincent shook his head and turned away, panic breaking through the calm. He ran.
The hallway stretched longer than it should have. The lights felt warmer. His footsteps sounded wrong. Heavy.
Hands caught him. Not rough. Firm. Correcting.
“Easy,” someone said near his ear. “You’re safe.”
“Let me go,” Vincent said, but his voice sounded distant to his own ears.
Julian stepped into view, unhurried. “You almost made yourself uncomfortable.”
“I don’t belong here.”
Julian smiled gently. “Not yet.”
Vincent was guided into a smaller room. Quiet. Padded walls. A single chair bolted to the floor, facing a mirror. He slowed instinctively.
“What is this?” he asked.
“A moment of focus,” Julian replied.
They sat him down. Leather straps closed around his wrists, his ankles, his chest. Not tight. Just enough to remind him where he was meant to stay. Vincent tested them once, twice, then stopped. Struggling felt pointless, like pushing against gravity.
Julian pulled a chair close and sat facing him, their knees almost aligned.
“Listen carefully,” Julian said. “You’re not in trouble. You’re being corrected.”
Vincent swallowed. “I want to go home.”
“I know,” Julian said calmly. “Say this for me.”
Julian spoke slowly, clearly. “I am calm.”
Vincent hesitated.
Julian waited.
“I… am calm,” Vincent said.
“Good,” Julian replied. “Again.”
“I am calm.”
“I belong where I am,” Julian said.
“I belong where I am.”
“My mind is clear from any distracting thoughts.” Julian said.
“My mind is clear from any distracting thoughts.”
“I must obey the rules.” Julian said.
“I must obey the rules.”
The phrases repeated. Not shouted. Not rushed. Corrected gently whenever Vincent stumbled. The mirror reflected his own face back at him, slowly emptying of tension, of doubt.
Julian stood and stepped out of Vincent’s line of sight. When he returned, he held folded clothing.
A polo shirt. Pale blue. Structured collar.
Julian loosened the straps just enough. “Hold still.”
The polo slid over Vincent’s shoulders, soft and deliberate. Julian adjusted the collar carefully, centering it, smoothing it flat against Vincent’s neck.
“There,” Julian said quietly. “Now kneel, Vincent.”
Vincent kneeled on command.
“There we go, who's my good little obediant good boy?” Julian asked
My apologies for not posting in so long. Turns out that I got a lot busier than I had originally thought, but that’s no excuse to not give you all a well-deserved story. Thank you all for your continued support, and have an incredibly Happy Holidays!
“Ah! He’s here!” Andrew scrambled around the cabin, excited that his boyfriend had finally shown up. It had taken almost a week of begging for his uncle to let the two have the place for the holidays, and Andrew couldn’t express his joy when he caved in. The whole place for just the two of them–it was going to be so romantic. They had decided to leave on the morning of Christmas Eve, but Andrew’s boyfriend, Ty, was called into work for some “emergency meeting”. Understanding that he had to go, Andrew made him promise he would make it to the cabin before sunset so they could unwrap presents together. Ty agreed to the deal and sealed it with a kiss.
Making sure that everything looked perfect, Andrew ran from the kitchen through the living room and to the foyer. At 5’6, Andrew’s thin gymnast body scurried around the cabin like a mouse. He had just turned 22 last month, but his youthful appearance made him seem like he was still in high school. Buzzed platinum hair, a hooked nose, and a few spy freckles were the only really noticeable features on his body, as otherwise he was rather average… for a twink. His boyfriend however, who was three years his superior, was on the verge of a bear. He was technically a cub by age, but the size of his gut and sheer amount of hair said otherwise.
“Hello?” A baritone voice called out.
“Coming!” Andrew quickly dashed down the stairs to the front door where he saw Ty holding a few presents. But after a second, he realized the smiling man was not his boyfriend and instead a stranger. In a mix of confusion and surprise, Andrew missed the last step and fell down, crashing against the carpeted floor.
“Oh! I did not mean to startle you.” The stranger tried to drop the boxes to offer a hand, but Andrew refused.
“I’m fine, thank you.” Andrew pushed his way back up, gazing at the smiling man in front of him. The chap seemed pretty preppy, actually very preppy. Cute boy-next-door haircut and smile, plaid button-up underneath a pullover, tan loafers showcasing patterned socks. His tight clothing also displayed his moderately muscular build, something between a swimmer and a baseball player. Although he had the same large feet and comforting, chocolate-colored eyes, the lack of hair and body fat among other things made it obvious that this man wasn’t Ty. Guessing the man to be about 6’2, Andrew realized he might not be able to escape this stranger without a good game plan.
“Andrew, you could never believe how they kept me up at work,” the man began, strolling past Andrew as he made his way up the stairs. “It was preposterous, how they acted as if none of us had a home life. To be fair, as a Republican I understand the importance of the corporate world and its economy, but by no standards does that mean I should have to work Christmas Eve!”
Andrew, who was in such a state of bewilderment that he had practically been entranced, had followed the man up the stairs and to the Christmas tree.
“Who…” Andrew began timidly, “Who are you exactly?”
The man, who was placing the gifts under the tree neatly, turned his head and cracked a wide smirk. He then began chuckling merrily, thinking Andrew had said some sort of joke. He made his way over and extended his hand as if he was in on the act himself.
“Keating Eckley Whitlyn, Jr.,” he replied, “Junior Associate at the Carmichael Corporation.”
Andrew anxiously grabbed the hand and shook it.
“Andrew Macheel,” Andrew noticed a sharp shock run through his hand, but disregarded it. “Assistant Painter at the Metro Gallery.”
“Why do you have to be such a wild ruffian,” Keating snarkily replied, his proper tone suddenly taking a darker turn. “How do you expect to make any money without a proper occupation?”
“Keating, we’ve had this argument so many times before!” Andrew groaned. “I love this job! Why won’t you let me be happy?”
“And how do you expect to become a refined, young man when you walk around in those?” Keating pointed to Andrew’s outfit, which consisted of a band tee and sweatpants.
“I expect you are hiding some form of indecency down below as well,” Keating added.
“Oh, and that’s worse than your whitey-tighties?”
“They are traditional, full-cut white briefs,” Keating contradicted. “Both comfortable and respectable. And I would be in my usual attire, but I removed my suit in the car.”
Andrew wanted to burst into flames, for as long as he had known Keating the two had always bickered about each other’s lifestyles. But, knowing that he had to be the mature one, Andrew decided to try and veer into another topic.
“I know my taste isn’t like yours,” Andrew began. “But I don’t go for name brands like you do; that doesn’t make my taste flawed.”
“I heavily disagree, I rarely dedicate myself to particular brands.”
“You’re wearing one right now,” Andrew pointed out, jabbing a finger into the small emblem on his friend’s chest.
“You amuse me, Andrew.” Keating chuckled again loudly, “This was part of the ‘emergency meeting’ at the office today. It was actually a surprise Christmas party for all of the employees, and they handed out truckloads of fashionable clothes for all of us.”
“Oh,” Andrew muttered, investigating the symbol. “That doesn’t look like your company logo though?”
“It is not,” Keating confirmed, taking a seat on a couch. “Apparently, it is some partner brand of Polo Ralph Lauren that made an exchange with the Carmichael Corporation. They handed out free gift bags to every employee and urged us to try on this now clothes. We both know I would have never been able to exist that offer!”
They both laughed hard at that, with Andrew finally becoming satisfied with his decision to come here. Keating had invited him to come to his family’s private cabin for the holidays, the two having been close buds since meeting in college. Andrew didn’t know why he had stuck with Keating so long now, as the two disagreed on many different issues quite often, but it probably had to do with Keating being so attractive. Sure he was way super preppy, but every time he tried to leave, that easy-going smile always pulled Andrew right back in. It was unfortunate however that nothing could ever happen, as Keating had explained through one of his numerous homophobic rants that he was in fact straight. Andrew was still in the closet, so luckily the issue never came up.
“As long as this topic is present,” Keating mumbled, grabbing one of the presents beside him and tossing it to Andrew. “The Carmichael Corporation accidentally ordered too many bags, so they prompted us to hand them out to our family and friends as well. There was no way I could refuse such an excellent offer.”
Andrew groaned internally as he faked a smile. “Oh, thank you, Keating.”
“Of course! I thought my best lad ought to have some more fashionable clothing. My taste is quite sophisticated, so I hope you do immensely enjoy it.”
Keating’s face burst open into a wide grin as Andrew ripped it open. To Andrew’s dismay, the box contained a plastic-wrapped outfit that looked as if it was plucked from a privileged, arrogant fratboy’s closet–just like Keating’s ensemble. He first pulled out a baby blue button-up that was made of a surprisingly soft material. Sadly, it was two sizes too big, but Andrew was probably never going to wear it. Next was an evergreen colored pullover with the emblem embroidered on the left breast. That was followed by tight, gray chinos that were again too large, a pair of striped socks, hazelnut-colored penny loafers and a pair of extra large whitey-tighties probably identical to the pair Keating was wearing. At the bottom of the box was a kit of personal maintenance materials and a small sheet of paper which Andrew assumed was a receipt. He definitely need that later. The whole gift disgusted Andrew, but he was thankful he’d never have to wear it.
“Oh…” Andrew began shakily. “Thank you so much for all of… this?”
“Well, most definitely!” Keating replied, getting up off the couch. “Now, you must go try it on!”
“What?” Andrew cried.
“You will look like such a fine fellow in all of this,” Keating continued. “If you want to amuse me, go try it all on. It will be swell, I promise.”
“Swell?” Andrew mumbled as Keating pulled him up from the couch.
“Imagine us,” Keating rambled as he pushed Andrew and his present to the bathroom. “Two preppy lads, Republican chaps, looking polished and well-cut. We’ll both be the handsomest gentleman in the town.”
“I don’t think-”
“Trust me, you will love it as soon as it touches your skin.” And with that, Keating shoved Andrew into the bathroom with the outfit and closed the door.
“I am not letting you out until you have the entirety of the ensemble on!” Keating shouted from the other side of the door. Andrew sighed, knowing well enough that there was only one way to escape this situation. In seconds, he was standing naked in the cabin’s bathroom, looking at his skinny, pale body in the mirror above the sink. He really didn’t want to do this. In fact, he didn’t even want to be here! Why did he have to fall for the cute preppy guy? Why didn’t he go for the basketball jock or some chess nerd? Or why not someone who was actually gay? Andrew huffed as he queasily grabbed the whitey-tighties, cursing at himself as he brought them up his legs.
Without his knowledge, the moment Andrew let go of the waistband was the moment that all his worries and rational thought disappeared. With the soft, white fabric covering his private regions and hoisted up just below the belly button, Andrew couldn’t be more pleased with the gift Keating had gotten him. The briefs made him feel just like Keating: polished and proper. Every respectable man ought to wear white briefs, as not only were they comfortable, but they made a man feel responsible and well-grounded. Maybe preppy even.
Grabbing the next article of clothing, Andrew missed the fact that the once too big whitey-tighties were quickly becoming form-fitting. Two juicy, firm buttocks filled out the back of the briefs, with his hole tightening up like a door closing up to a room that should’ve never been opened. His pouch gradually filled out, making room for a sac that was much heavier than before, and that of the average man for that matter. His cock also pulsed forward, growing from its previous twinky size to something more appropriate to that of a businessman. 8 thick inches would definitely cement his soon-to-be cocky, arrogant nature. But to Andrew, it was the appropriate size for a preppy fellow like himself.
Carefully, Andrew caressed the striped socks and hoisted them up his legs. The soft fabric felt good as it brushed across Andrew’s hairless thighs. Being a few sizes off, the socks didn’t exactly fit onto Andrew’s dainty feet, but he didn’t mind in the slightest. A man ought to wear the appropriate, conventional footwear, and he’d make sure to do the same. With that said, he felt like he had loathed the two socks beforehand, but that thought ceased to exist in seconds.
Reaching for the chinos, Andrew failed to recognize the feeling of his feet slowly expanding across the floorboards. The socks filled in as Andrew’s feet became meatier. If he was to be a true man, a real preppy fellow, he’d ought to have the proper feet to announce his presence. The once tiny soles morphed into Size 14 giants, creating a scent in the air that announced both dominance and masculinity.
With the pants in hand, Andrew delicately slid one of his legs down a silvery hole. His frail, stick-like limbs easily traveled through the open caverns. The tiny calves and thighs barely filled the chinos, but luckily the waist was just barely wide enough to keep the pants from falling down. Noticing a brown belt already halfway through the loops, Andrew guided it through the rest of its journey but didn’t latch it into its buckle. Satisfied with the results, Andrew grabbed for the button-up next.
Andrew was too infatuated with trying on his new shirt that he didn’t realize his legs were rhythmically vibrating. Slowly but surely, the quadriceps and calves lengthened and thickened, adding inches to his height as they moved closer and closer to the walls of fabric. They didn’t stop however when they did meet the chinos, but instead pushed harder, only stopping when they made the seams look as if they were about to burst. With the skinny chinos now truly looking skinny, the other factors of manliness came into play. A soft, caramely forest of hair erupted from Andrew’s legs, along with a few taught tendons and sharp muscles that showed his athleticism. As Keating always said, a swell guy must keep his body swell too.
Now stabilized by two massive trunks, Andrew finished buttoning the baby blue dress shirt. He left the top open to relish in the beauty of the outfit so far, not noticing that his lithe frame didn’t exactly fill in the sleeves and chest area. He was too proud of himself to notice, confident and self-assured as he brought his head through the forest green pullover. It too placed itself nicely onto Andrew’s body, although it was also oversized. Andrew didn’t mind however, as just the thought of him dressing classic drove him wild. Not that kind of wild however, as the thought of those kinds of actions now strangely made him feel vulgar and indecent. Brushing those questions off, he decided to grab the penny loafers to top off the outfit.
While Andrew placed on the lavish loafers, his upper body began to morph into something more suitable. First, his shoulders broadened within the shirt, pushing out to create a sturdier, straighter frame. Now having more room, his arms developed second, taking on new, haughtier layers of flesh that allowed Andrew to show off developed biceps, triceps, and lower arms. His hands became calloused and mitt-like, taking on a larger, rougher texture. The amber-shaded hair flowed across his upper limbs as the changes continued downwards, carving out a six pack and a set of pectorals similar to that of a Greek statue. The hair filled in along the cracks and deep curves as well as forming a small trail to the belly button and venturing underneath the briefs to make a well-kept bush. Andrew’s torso also added a little extra height to his overall body, maxing him out at 6’3. The final touch was blossoming in his armpits as thick tufts of hair emerged, allowing for more of his masculine scent to escape.
With the penny loafers secured to his feet, Andrew stood proudly up to look over himself. He looked like a million dollars! He probably was wearing that much too, but that wasn’t the point. Looking over the other items in the box, he began to add the finishing perfections. First, he rolled up his sleeves to show off a little of his developed arms and tightened his new belt around his waist. Next, he dug into the personal maintenance kit, digging out a bottle of cologne among other things. He spritzed across his collarbone and onto his neck, bringing forth a prominent Adam’s apple that lowered his voice to a smooth baritone. He followed that with a little pomade and hair gel, massaging it delicately into his platinum hair. Kneading softly, he didn’t notice his hair slowly grow out, becoming thicker and curlier as it spilled onto his forehead. Not only that, but it adopted the familiar copper color fairly quickly.
Andrew then grabbed a small tube of lotion from the kit, squirting out a nickel onto his palm before rubbing into his skin. The lotion rapidly dissolved any blemishes and blackheads out of Andrew’s face, along with any stray hairs that hadn’t been shaved. While the rest of Andrew’s body had become rather furry, the jaw was now unable to hold any facial hair. Andrew knew that if a man wanted to stay conservative, he’d have to get a hot shave at least twice a day. Although Andrew’s jaw couldn’t hold hair, it could now cut through steel, for with the help of the lotion it had grown into a sharp point with lantern-like edges. His nose and eyebrows had traded in their pointy edges for softer curves, and with the help of a small bottle of mouthwash, his teeth had become a perfect set of pearly-whites. With every product used, Andrew looked back in the mirror with authentic joy. He looked perfectly preppy, just like he had hoped to be. Keating always knew exactly what to get him.
“Are you done yet?” Keating called from the other side of the door.
“Of course, come in and take a gander,” Andrew called back. Keating accepted and strolled in. A strong smirk sprawled across his face before an even wider grin replaced it.
“You look splendid, lad!”
“I would say I look rather befitting.”
“Befitting, preposterous!” Keating retorted. “I would go on and say absolutely charming.”
“I would hope you are not trying to use any tactics on me.” The insinuating words left Andrew’s mouth before he could think about what he had said.
“I could not believe you would assume such a tasteless, indecorous thing!” Keating seemed truly offended by the statement, but easily recovered. “I would just assert that the fine fellow in front of me looks like a whole new lad!”
“You are honestly too charitable, Keating.”
“Before I forget,” Keating paused, picking up the small piece of paper that Andrew had disregarded before. “You dropped this.”
“Oh,” Andrew replied, putting out his hand. “You have my gratitude.”
“Anything for you,” Keating read over the paper and exchanged it, shaking his hand with the other man. “Yale Stockton Rockefeller IV.”
Yale noticed a sharp shock run through his hand, but disregarded it.
“Keating Eckley Whitlyn Jr., you are the best fellow any honest man could ever ask for.” Yale was completely honest, content with their long-lasting friendship. He walked out of the bathroom and slowly made his way to the living room, reminiscing his history with Keating.
The Whitlyn and Rockefeller families had worked together for centuries, so it was no surprise that the two of them would become close friends through preparatory school and private colleges. They had led their student governments, varsity golf teams, economics clubs, and Conservative student organizations to multiple national titles. Both turning 26 in a few months, the two were already successful, working on Wall Street through the Carmichael Corporation. They were both respectable and accomplished avid workers, but it was nice to relax every now and then, especially at the old Whitlyn cabin.
“So, how do you feel about this proposition,” Keating suggested. “Tonight, we spend some brotherly bonding time between the two of us fine gentlemen.”
“Sounds indecent of you,” Yale noted cantankerously as he took a seat on the couch.
“Tomorrow,” Keating continued. “We explore what the locals call ‘nightlife’ and meet a few fine women to accompany us back to our quarters.”
“That seems much more suitable.” Yale cracked a wide smile, excited already for the holiday break.
Aiden walked in with his AirPods still half in, sipping from a plastic cup with a giant green straw.
“Yo,” he said, taking the last open seat at the table. “Hope I didn’t miss, like, the whole game plan or whatever.”
The girl next to him gave a polite smile. The guy across from her didn’t even glance up right away. Just kept writing something in a notebook.
Not a laptop. An actual notebook.
“You’re Aiden?” the man finally asked, voice flat, clipped.
“Yeah. That’s me.” He set down his drink, crumpling the sleeve. “Group 7, Econ, capitalism go brrr, all that jazz.”
The man raised an eyebrow at that, finally locking eyes. Built like a linebacker. Buzzcut. No-nonsense vibe radiating off him like static.
“Mike,” he said simply. “I’ll cover data modeling and sourcing. Already have stats from the Fed and BLS.”
“Word.” Aiden nodded, then added, “I can finesse the design, keep it clean. I’m good at copy too—like phrasing it so it doesn’t sound like a robot wrote it. You know, make it hit.”
Mike just stared.
“Make it… hit?”
“Like, punchy. So it lands. Good flow. Human vibes.” Aiden offered a sheepish smile. “Don’t worry, I’m not gonna write it like a TikTok caption or whatever.”
“I hope not.” Mike returned to his notes. “This is economics, not a meme review.”
Aiden gave a half-chuckle, rubbing the back of his neck.
“Okay, boomer,” he muttered under his breath. Loud enough to be heard. Not loud enough to be a confrontation.
Mike didn’t look up. He just said:
“Not a boomer. Gen X. Which means I grew up with dial-up, knew how to fix my car at fifteen, and joined the Army instead of making thirst traps.”
Mike gave a slight smirk. “Good. Let’s keep it that way.”
“Bro, you ever met someone so aggressively boring it’s like… a spiritual experience?”
Jordan smirked without looking up. “You mean like our stats professor?”
“No. Worse. This dude is in my Econ group. Name’s Mike. Like, straight-up textbook Mike. Big arms. Crew cut. Probably eats nails for breakfast. Brought a notebook to a group meeting. Like a paper one. No emojis. No color-coding. No stickers. Just… ink must think it’s still 2003.”
Jordan laughed. “Sounds like my dad.”
“Exactly!” Aiden pointed. “He’s like if your dad and a boot camp had a baby. I said I’d handle the slide design and he looks me dead in the eye and goes, ‘Just don’t use cartoons.’ Like sorry, sir, didn’t realize I enlisted.”
Jordan finally looked up. “So what’s he doing in your class anyway?”
“He’s ex-military or something. Came back to school. You can smell the brickwall on him. He drinks black coffee, dude. Like just bean blood. No milk. No vibe.”
Jordan grinned. “And you’re stuck with him all semester?”
“Apparently. And like I know I’m dramatic sometimes, but he’s kinda getting in my head. I’ve started second-guessing everything I write. Like ‘is this too cringey? Too casual? Will Mike say something?’” Aiden mockingly deepened his voice. “‘Write like a man, Aiden. Use numbers, not feelings.’”
Jordan laughed again.
“Next thing you know, he’ll be quoting Reagan well helling at kids to get off his lawn.”
“If I ever hear the phrase ‘back in my day,’ just put me down.”
They’re second meeting was in a library even more stale than their first meeting spot.
“You sure this is the move?” Aiden said, looking around. “Feels like a place where dreams go to die.”
Mike didn’t look up. Just flipped open his notebook.
“No distractions. Good light. No excuses.”
Aiden sighed but sat across from him, unpacking his laptop and phone. Mike gave him a look.
“AirPods out.”
“Seriously?”
“Yeah. You wanna focus or play DJ?”
Grumbling, Aiden slid them out and tucked them in his hoodie. He opened the slide deck and mumbled:
“This place is so sterile, man. It’s got, like, no vibe. Negative vibe.”
Mike smirked faintly. “Vibe doesn’t matter. What matters is what you produce.”
“You sound like every grindset TikTok stitched to an Andrew Tate clip.”
“I don’t know what half those words mean. And I’m good with that.”
Aiden started typing. A moment passed. Mike pulled out a couple sheets of printed data and slid them over.
“These graphs are from the St. Louis Fed. Consumer sentiment by quarter, 2020 to 2023. See if you can work them into your part.”
“Oh. Damn. These are kinda clean.” Aiden paused. “Like, not gonna lie, these visuals go hard.”
Mike raised an eyebrow.
“…That a good thing?”
“Yeah.” Aiden nodded. “Yeah, no, like…they slap. Unironically. In a depressing sort of way.”
“I’ll assume that means ‘useful.’”
Mike leaned back a little, arms crossed. Watching.
“You know, for all your noise, you don’t actually push back much when challenged. You just whine.”
“Wow. Thanks for the character assassination.”
“Not an attack. Observation. You’re smart, Aiden. Just soft.”
Aiden scoffed.
“I’m not soft. I just… operate differently.”
“Mhm.” Mike looked back at his notes. “Time will tell.”
The dorm was quiet for once. No shouting upstairs, no muffled bass from the guys down the hall. Just the hum of Aiden’s laptop and the occasional rattle of the old radiator.
He was halfway through revising his section of the presentation—Mike had left him with some notes that were, admittedly, kind of helpful. Brutal in tone. But helpful.
Aiden read through one of Mike’s annotations in the Google Doc:
“Cut this paragraph. Doesn’t say anything. Just filler.”
Aiden groaned. “God, he’s so rude.”
He hit delete. Instantly, the slide looked better.
He took a sip of his drink and made a face. Lukewarm caramel cold brew. Too sweet now.
He stood up, walked to his little Keurig, and paused.
“…Nah,” he muttered. He pulled open the drawer and stared for a second. Slowly, almost suspiciously, he reached for the black roast.
No creamer. No sugar.
He brewed it.
The scent reminded him of Mike—of old thermoses and dry libraries and the brutal indifference of efficiency.
He took a cautious sip. Bitter. Burnt.
“Jesus,” he muttered. Then: “…Not bad. It ain’t Starbucks” but the caffeine hit him a hell of a lot quicker.
Back at the desk, he slouched over the keyboard, scrolling through consumer sentiment data again. He opened one of the PDFs Mike had sent and started writing. His fingers moved a little faster than usual. Not smoother—sharper.
He stopped mid-sentence and looked at what he’d written:
“Trends suggest a reactive, not proactive, consumer base. Dependency on narrative control instead of material confidence.”
Aiden blinked. “Whoa.”
He reread it.
Then he muttered:
“Mike-pilled.”
He laughed softly at his own joke. But he didn’t delete it.
Instead, he leaned back, cracked his knuckles, and stretched. Without thinking, he muttered under his breath:
“Alright. Back to it.”
The clock on the wall hit 9:12 p.m. Aiden leaned back in his chair, stretching until his spine popped.
“Dude, my eyes are vibrating. I think I’ve transcended into an Excel spreadsheet.”
Mike smirked slightly, closing his notepad. “Welcome to the real world.”
“Seriously though, how the hell do you do this for hours? No music. No breaks. No scrolling.” Aiden looked at him. “Like… doesn’t it get boring? Or lonely?”
Mike didn’t answer right away. He stared at the grainy ceiling for a moment, then said:
“You know what’s worse than being alone?”
“What?”
“Feeling useless.”
Aiden sat up a little straighter.
Mike leaned forward, resting his arms on the table.
“I did eight years. Infantry. Came back with some messed-up knees and not much else. Most of the guys I served with, they either stayed in, got married, or fell apart.”
“Damn.”
“Yeah.” He rubbed his jaw. “You get used to structure. To having your day mean something. And then you come home and everyone’s talking about TikTok and podcast grinds and side hustles… and I’m out here trying to remember how to file a FAFSA.”
“You’re not dumb, Aiden. You act like life’s just a big inside joke, but you’re not dumb. You’ve got something in you. It’s just buried under too much noise.”
Aiden felt his ears burn a little.
“I mean, it’s not noise, it’s just…” He trailed off. “Okay, sometimes it’s noise.”
Mike nodded. “Just cut through it. That’s all I’m saying. You don’t have to become me. But don’t waste time pretending you don’t care.”
It was a Tuesday morning, not early by military standards, but early for a college student.
Aiden stepped out of his dorm wearing a black thermal and a clean, unbranded windbreaker. His jeans—normal jeans, not ripped or faded ironically—sat comfortably above worn boots. Not new boots. Not styled boots. Just practical ones.
He still had AirPods, but they weren’t in. His phone was in his pocket, untouched since he woke up.
Instead of scrolling Twitter or checking TikTok first thing, he’d brewed a small cup of black coffee with the cheap beans Mike recommended—“burnt enough to keep you awake.” He didn’t love it, but it got the job done.
He walked with purpose now. Not a sprint, Just… forward it’s Al about exponential growth.
Aiden was heading to the library when he passed a group of students sitting under a tree, scrolling and laughing over something on their phones.
“Did you see the new #BurndownGlowChallenge? Bro’s face looked like AI.”
“Nah, I’m all about that ‘salt swing’ filter. It’s peak mood.”
“Fr fr. No cap.”
Aiden slowed, pretending to tie his boot, catching just enough to feel out of sync.
He didn’t understand half of it.
He wasn’t even sure they were speaking full sentences.
And for the first time in a long while… he didn’t care.
No instinct to open his phone. No itch to look it up. Just a faint, amused thought:
What the hell is a ‘salt swing’?
He stood, brushed off his knee, and adjusted the strap on his backpack—trimmed down to the essentials: laptop, hardbound notebook, and a black pen Mike had handed him weeks ago.
“Typing’s for recall. Writing’s for memory,” Mike had said, like it was law.
He didn’t always agree with Mike. Didn’t always want to.
But even so… there was a kind of peace in not needing to keep up.
No more tabs open for every trend. No more fear of being out of the loop.
Let them chase filters.
He had work to do. Something real. Something built to last.
Aiden pulled open the library door and stepped inside without checking his phone once.
The same quiet room. The same musty carpet and fluorescent hum.
Only this time, Aiden was already there.p before Mike even arrived.
Mike stepped in carrying his battered thermos and a folder of printouts. He paused for a second, just inside the doorway.
Aiden sat at the table, sleeves rolled, laptop open—not on TikTok, not browsing. Just mid-typing, brow furrowed in concentration.
A steaming cup of black coffee sat beside him. Not from the café.
From a thermos of his own.
“Huh,” Mike said, the corners of his mouth twitching slightly. “Beat me here.”
Aiden glanced up. “Yeah. Thought I’d get the graphs formatted before you could roast my layout again.”
Mike walked over and set down his materials.
“Looks clean,” he said, scanning the screen. “Efficient. No fluff.”
Aiden gave a mock salute. “Trying to keep the vibe professional, sir.”
Mike narrowed his eyes, amused.
“You cut your hair.”
Aiden instinctively reached up. The sides were shorter now—tight fade, less product, more shape. “Yeah. Was getting tired of the mop look.”
“You look sharper.”
“Thanks… I think?”
Mike didn’t respond right away. He took a sip from his coffee and sat down, flipping through the folder.
Then, without looking up:
“Discipline suits you.”
Aiden froze for a second. He wasn’t sure why that sentence landed like it did. But it did.
“Thanks,” he said, quieter now.
They worked in silence after that. But the silence felt different.
There was no tension. No testing. Just two people getting things done.
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The next day was more of the same only sound being the low hum of the building and the occasional scribble from Mike, seated across from him.
A calm sort of of rhythm.
Until the door swung open.
“Aiden!”
Jordan, in joggers and a bright hoodie, burst in like a thunderclap. He held a large iced drink in one hand and a half-open bag of chips in the other.
“Dude, come on, it’s Thursday. You’ve been grinding for days. Let’s go. We’ll hit that new bubble bar and maybe hop to Zack’s after—people are pregaming already.”
Mike didn’t look up from his notes.
Aiden didn’t either—not right away.
“Jordan, I’m working.”
“So pause. It’s not like the project’s due tonight. You’ve been acting like you’re in a cult or something. No memes. No games. You didn’t even respond to the Yanni speedrun clip I sent.”
Aiden finally looked up. Calm. Measured.
“I saw it. Just didn’t have time to reply.”
Jordan frowned. “You always have time. What, does Mike there give you a schedule now?”
Mike’s eyes flicked up, slow and sharp—but he didn’t speak.
Aiden met Jordan’s gaze evenly.
“No one gives me anything. I’m just tired of wasting my own time.”
That hit harder than Jordan expected. His face shifted—something between confusion and hurt.
“Dude. What happened to you? You used to be fun.”
“I’m still me,” Aiden said simply. “Just more focused now.”
“Focused?” Jordan scoffed. “This isn’t focus, it’s like… boot camp cosplay. You used to hate people like that.”
Aiden didn’t flinch.
“No. I used to be afraid I’d turn into them. Turns out, there’s a difference between being boring and being disciplined.”
Jordan shook his head. “Nah. This isn’t you. You think you’re leveling up, but you’re just turning into someone else. Some knockoff army dude with a buzzcut.”
Aiden stood slowly. Not angry. Just… steady.
“Maybe I am changing. That’s the point, right? Growth?”
“You’re selling out, bro.”
“No,” Aiden said. “I’m stepping up.”
Silence. Jordan’s eyes darted to Mike like he wanted to blame him directly, but Mike didn’t even look up.
Just turned a page.
Jordan scoffed, louder now. “Whatever. Have fun being a robot.”
He turned and slammed the door behind him.
Aiden let the silence settle again.
Mike didn’t say a word for a long moment. Then:
“You alright?”
Aiden nodded slowly. “Yeah. Just… weird. I didn’t think he’d blow up like that.”
Mike grunted. “People get emotional when their reality gets challenged. He liked the old you.”
“I barely liked the old me,” Aiden said without thinking.
Mike smirked. Walked over, and without warning, gave him a rough noogie.
“Ow—dude!” Aiden laughed, swatting his hand away.
Mike chuckled and backed off, sitting in the chair next to him.
“You’re shaping up, Aiden. Seriously. You’re turning into the ace in the hole.”
“What, like I’m your secret weapon now?”
“Something like that.” He shrugged. “Just saying—if you ever need a brother, I’m around.”
Aiden blinked. He wasn’t used to hearing that kind of warmth in Mike’s voice. Not from him. He expected another lecture, or a jab. Not… this.
Then Mike added with a grin:
“Now that you’ve finally cleansed yourself of all that brain rot.”
Aiden gave a short laugh. But then he paused. Thought about it.
A few weeks ago, that would’ve pissed him off. He would’ve fired back, defended TikTok, started listing creators and content and all the reasons why it wasn’t just “garbage.” But now?
Now he just nodded.
“Yeah… I mean, some of it was good. But yeah. A lot of it was brain rot.”
He looked down at his hands for a second. Flexed them.
“And when the shoe fits…”
He didn’t finish the sentence.
The bell over the barbershop door jingled as Aiden stepped inside. The smell of talc, aftershave, and old magazines filled the room like muscle memory he didn’t own yet. The place was small, tucked between a laundromat and a used tire shop—nothing fancy, just a single mirror, a chair, and an older guy in a Henley shirt sweeping up clippings from the last customer.
“You walk in or got an appointment?” the barber asked, not looking up.
“Walk-in. Just need it cleaned up a bit.”
The man nodded and gestured to the chair. Aiden sat down, fingers flexing once in his lap. He looked at himself in the mirror—shaggy dark hair that had lost its shape, curls creeping over his ears. He remembered Jordan once saying it looked “intentionally messy,” like an influencer’s.
Now? It just looked tired.
“What are we doing?” the barber asked.
Aiden hesitated. He almost said, just a trim.
Instead, he heard himself say:
“Medium fade. Three on top. Keep it sharp.”
The barber looked at him in the mirror, surprised.
“Military, huh?”
“No.” Aiden shook his head. “But I respect the look.”
The buzz of the clippers filled the silence. Hair fell in neat tufts. With every pass, Aiden felt something shedding—not rebellion, not identity, just… clutter.
Mike hadn’t said anything about his hair. Never told him to cut it.
But he had once said, “Discipline isn’t about what you’re told. It’s about what you choose when no one’s looking.”
The clippers clicked off. The barber brushed off the back of his neck and handed him the mirror.
Aiden turned his head slowly, inspecting the clean taper, the sharpness over the ears. He didn’t look like Mike.
He looked like himself—just more sure of it.
“Looks good,” he said.
“Looks straight edge,” the barber replied.
Aiden handed over the cash, nodded once, and stepped out into the late afternoon sun. He caught his reflection in the shop window as the door closed behind him.
Not flashy.
Not performative.
Just clean as a well meaning man ought to be.
The lecture hall held a lot of quiet and not so quiet conversation as students shuffled in, some of them clearly more invested in watching reels on their phone than class or even talking with their classmates which Aiden could only roll his eyes at, as he adjusted blazers and double-checking slides. Professor Winslow sat at her desk, arms crossed, brows high, grading as she listened. She’d seen her share of disaster presentations today .
But Aiden felt fucking ready.
Mike sat next to him near the board of the room, arms folded. He’d told Aiden he didn’t need to speak—he’d done the data work, the prep. This was Aiden’s show now.
And he owned it.
Aiden stepped up to the podium wearing a clean collared shirt, no wild patterns, no ironic pins. His hair was neat, sleeves rolled just enough to show he’d put effort in but didn’t care about showmanship.
“Good morning,” he began, clear, grounded. “Our analysis focuses on the long-term psychological and fiscal impact of federal stimulus narratives post-COVID—how confidence, not just cash, shaped consumer response.”
He clicked the remote. The slide appeared: concise, elegant, to the point.
“We’ll begin with a visual breakdown of quarterly sentiment shifts across demographics, then tie that to ad spend data and consumer trends using sources from the St. Louis Fed and Nielsen.”
The professor raised an eyebrow—surprised.
In the back, Mike just nodded once.
As Aiden spoke, he didn’t perform. He communicated. Calm, precise, composed. The same kid who once said “capitalism go brrr” now quoted source data like a seasoned analyst.
The class had ended. Final grades weren’t in yet, but Professor Winslow had paused at Aiden’s desk on the way out.
“Impressive delivery. You’ve got a clear head on your shoulders.”
Aiden had just nodded. “Thank you, ma’am.”
Mike waited by the door. When Aiden reached him, he held out a hand.
“You did good, kid.”
Aiden took it. Strong grip. Mutual respect.
Then Mike let go and stepped back. A faint smile in his eyes.
“Wanna go for a run”
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afternoon light spilled across the trail in long, golden bands. The path wasn’t busy—just the rhythm of shoes against pavement, breath syncing with motion.
Aiden’s shirt clung to his back with sweat, his legs ached with that dull, steady burn he’d learned to crave. The burn that told him he was doing something real. Earning it.
Mike jogged a few paces ahead, arms pumping in a tight rhythm. Aiden used to resent how easily the guy moved. Now he respected it. Now he kept up.
They didn’t talk much—just the sound of lungs working, shoes hitting earth, and the occasional rustle of trees shifting above.
Aiden had never felt so clear. So alive in the quiet.
No headphones. No notifications. Just the forward motion.
He didn’t need to think about who he used to be. His body didn’t let him. The run demanded presence. Focus. Drive.
Buzz.
They stopped near a clearing, Mike stretching one leg behind him with military precision. Aiden pulled out his phone.
Jordan:
hey… random ask
i’m taking econ 245 this summer
mind helping me prep a bit? you crushed that class fr
like i know we’ve been weird
just… would appreciate it
Aiden stared at the message. He wasn’t mad. He wasn’t smug. Just… grounded.
He smiled slightly. Wiped a line of sweat from his brow. And typed:
yeah man
i got you brother
come by tuesday—8am
bring coffee
black, that’ll be my payment XD
He hit send.
Slid the phone back into his pocket.
Mike gave him a glance. Just one.
Aiden nodded.
“Let’s finish the loop.”
And he took off again, heart pumping, muscles burning, mind sharp.
He didn’t look back.
He didn’t need to..
All he needed was that feeling in his chest from a good meaningful run always chasing his peak embracing the discipline. None of that zoomer brain rot.
[Since it seems like CYOC may be down for good, I’m going to share some of my favorite stories that were once available on that site, spruced up with grammar fixes and some AI images.
This story was published anonymously. If you are the author and either want this taken down or want me to link to a place where fans can support you, please DM me.]
I'm not a cruel man. I just feel that society has rules that need to be followed.
I’m feeling a bit lonely, so I headed down town to The Bijou. They show classic movies on Sunday nights. I round the corner to find three young men mugging an older man. I guess I should tell you I have a unique set of talents. As I walk closer, I can see that the young men were wannabe thugs, with their sagging jeans, tattoos, shaved heads, and wifebeaters.
My eyes flash an emerald green.
"Do we have a problem, boys?” I ask.
"Fuck off, old man,” the one with blue eyes retorts.
"Walt, we'll take care of him, too,” the one with the lip ring and nose ring says. The third just smiles, holding a tire iron and trying to look menacing.
I walk up to them. I put my hand up to my lips, so it looks as if I am blowing a kiss.
"What the hell are you doing,” Walt yells. The three thugs find themselves stuck in place.
“Run,” I say to the older man.
I come closer. "You boys need to learn respect.”
"You're going to regret messing with us, Mister" the one with the piercings says.
"I have never regretted anything I've done,” I say, caressing his face. His piercings fall out, the holes growing shut. I run my hand across his shaved head, his hair grows back as neatly coiffed pompadour. I rub his arms and chest, his tattoos fade and disappear. A mat of jet black hair grows on his chest.
His pectoral muscles get thicker, his abs more defined. I grab his shirt, it slowly transforms from a wifebeater to a blue gingham button-down, unbuttoned just enough to show his chest hair. I smooth out the wrinkles on the shirt. As I do, a navy blue sweater vest appears over it. I pull his pants up, transforming them into nicely pressed chinos.
“What the hell did you do to Moose, I mean J-Dawg,” Walt yells, as his memories of his friend change.
"Are you jealous?” I say, trying to pull Walt's shirt down where it belongs. I quickly realize the young man is not wearing underwear. I continue to adjust the boy’s clothes. I tug his shirt down to cover his abdominal muscles, it changes to a yellow cardigan over a white button-down. A light dusting of blonde hair can be seen on his chest.
I am tempted for a moment while pulling down his pants. This action, and my lust, causes him to grow a thick blonde bush. I stop myself from taking pleasure in the delights of his body. I return his pants to their proper position, as they become a pair of khakis. I pat him on the head, and his hair grows in as a slicked-back blond high and tight.
“Gosh, you look swell, Wally,” Moose says with a smile.
“You're looking boss yourself, daddy-o,” Wally replies.
I smile. The third takes a swing at me with the tire iron as I approach him. I give him a stern, fatherly gaze, and he immediately drops his weapon. "Don't be afraid, son,” I say, wiping a tear of fear away. Touching his face causes freckles to appear. I laugh as red curls grow atop his head.
I completely remove this boy’s shirt, shaking it out. As I work with his clothes, his muscles thicken and thick auburn curls grow on his chest. I redress him, his shirt now a red and white pinstripe button down covered by a red letterman's jacket. I am tired of being nice as I adjust this one’s pants. I grab his crotch. He moans, his average cock growing to 10 inches while still soft.
I look at my three 1950s wet dreams touching themselves. I am pleased with my handiwork.
“Gee Mister, we’re sorry how we acted,” Wally says.
I begin to leave, the boys following me closely. They won't hurt me. They can’t. They are my good little boys.
Ryan lounged across the couch like he owned the place—which he did. He had one arm stretched over the back cushion, his polished shoes propped confidently on the coffee table, and a smug grin playing on his face. He looked every bit the part in a navy windowpane blazer and a salmon dress shirt that somehow made him look more alpha, not less.
Across from him, standing awkwardly near the doorway with a duffel bag still in hand, was Josh. Fresh out of college, recently hired for a junior analyst job downtown, and grateful—maybe too grateful—to land a room in a prime apartment for cheap. Ryan had offered it on one condition: he got to set the rules.
“Alright, Sport,” Ryan said, flashing a smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes, “now that you’ve moved your stuff in, we’re gonna go over how things are gonna work around here. And I suggest you listen up.”
Josh gave a small nod, unsure where to look. Ryan’s tone wasn’t mean—just… firm. Unquestionable. He sounded more like a frat president laying down pledgeship rules than a typical roommate.
“First off,” Ryan said, sitting up slightly and resting his forearms on his knees, “you dress like a grown-ass man in this apartment. That means slacks, button-downs, tucked-in polos at minimum. No shorts, no hoodies, no sneakers unless you’re headed to the gym. You’ve got a job now, so you dress like it—even at home. I expect collars, creases, and belts. You can handle that, yeah?”
“Yeah, I guess—”
“Not ‘guess,’ Sport,” Ryan cut in. “You can handle it.”
“Yes.”
“That’s better.” He smirked. “Now, you’re up at 6:30 every morning. Showered, shaved, dressed. You hit the gym at 7—I’ll even leave you a routine. No sleeping in. No excuses. I want discipline around here.”
Josh looked like he might object, but one glance at Ryan’s steely expression shut him down.
“Lights out at 10:30 sharp,” Ryan continued. “That’s not negotiable. No screens, no music, no staying up late messing around. Your mind’s sharper when it’s rested. You’ll thank me later.”
Josh gave a slow nod. “Got it.”
“Cool. Now for the chores.” Ryan leaned back again, crossing one leg over the other. “You handle all cleaning. That’s the trade-off for getting a sweet room in a prime place. Floors vacuumed twice a week. Kitchen spotless. Bathroom scrubbed. My dress shirts ironed. If I see dust, we’re gonna have a conversation. Got it?”
“Yes,” Josh said quietly.
“Good.” Ryan let the silence hang a beat before continuing. “No alcohol. At all. I don’t care if it’s a weekend or if your coworkers are out partying—none of that weak shit here. You stay sharp. You keep your focus.”
Josh hesitated. “Even… like, just socially?”
Ryan gave a short laugh. “You’re here to get better, not to coast. You wanna be some average dude in khakis and hangovers? Or do you wanna level up? You want this to work, you follow the rules.”
Josh looked down and gave a small nod. “Understood.”
Ryan’s eyes lingered for a second, then he added, more casually but still firm, “Oh—and one more thing. You’re gonna stay clear-headed. That means no jerking off. Seriously. That lazy impulse crap’s the first thing that kills motivation. If you’re wound up, channel it. Hit the gym. Do pushups. Go polish your damn shoes.”
Josh blinked, his face flushing slightly. Ryan just smirked.
“Trust me, Sport. Give it a couple weeks, and you’ll feel the difference. You’ll walk straighter. Think sharper. You just have to trust the process.”
There was a silence as Josh stood there, absorbing it all. Then Ryan added, with a slight grin, “You stick to this, and I’ll make sure you don’t just survive the real world—you’ll own it. But you break the rules?”
What if a very bad, punk guy from an average college has a really Bad demeanor and is always causing trouble, so he gets transferred to a re-education that supposedly turns you into the perfect preppy boy, where forced by his preppy colleagues he gets his attitude adjusted?
It was Lucas's first time on the Davidson College campus and his first night of an after-hours "attitude adjustment" class. His ratty backpack bounced on his lithe shoulders as he approached the classroom while the other students sneered under their breaths, all heading to their dorms and homes for the evening. Lucas's ratty leather jacket, jeans, and weathered boots couldn't have stood out more harshly against the sea of button-down shirts, sweaters, shorts, chinos, and boat shoes.
Liberal arts was his major, and he was good at it - well, he would have been if he'd put in any academic effort. But to Lucas, papers, essays, and exams were all a power structure to rally against. Four years into a three-year degree, and sick of the disobedience and attitude, his college gave him an ultimatum: leave for good, or take the adjustment course at Davidson, which was a college known in academic circles for its snobby preppiness, but also its eerily successful adjustment program.
Lucas's parents certainly didn't want an unemployed, moody twenty-three-year-old back in their house, and the college was all he had. So the choice was all but made for him. He was to take the class at Davidson and lose the attitude.
Eyes toward his feet, Lucas slinked into the classroom only to run head-first into a cashmere sweater. Lucas looked up at the man who stood a head taller than him and found himself flanked by two other similar-looking students. All three men stood two to three inches taller than the five-ten Lucas, all wore their hair in similar parts, and all wore typical, semi-formal prep clothing. Another three cogs in the machine at the Davidson, Lucas thought to himself.
"You know, I don't exactly want to be here. Get outta my way and the quicker I get out off your snotty campus," Lucas stated plainly.
"Oh we know, Lucas," the middle frat boy snickered.
Lucas raised an eyebrow, how did these nimrods know his name? He also knew that despite his disregard for these types of preppy bros that he wouldn't stand a chance against one of them in a fight, let alone three. "Look, guys, I just gotta do this course, then I'm gone."
"And why do you think we're here?" said the man to Lucas's left.
"We're your instructors," chimed the third of the trio.
"Let's get started," the leader said, grabbing Lucas by the collar and pushing him to the wall. "Alright boys, you know what to do."
Lucas struggled against the large hands pinning him down while one of the others held a clear bottle in front of his face and sprayed it three times.
"Get the fuck off me, asshole!" he screamed, attempting and failing to land a lunch as the preppy jock loosened his grip.
"Not so fucking smart now are you?" the preppy student sneered at the defenseless punk who was coughing from inhaling whatever it was the group had sprayed in his face. Not only did the admittedly pleasant scent hang around in his nose, but it was like it permeated him as a whole.
Lucas fell to his knees, his head spinning. The smell in the air was so... masculine, enough to turn on even the straightest man or puritan prude.
"Smells good, doesn't it?" the main jock chuckled.
"Ah... ach... what did you do to me?" Lucas spluttered, rolling his neck.
The trio of preppy frat boys wasted no time hoisting the incapacitated Lucas into a chair, tying his limp hands at the back and switching on the projector screen at the front of the room.
Lucas coughed, unable to get the scent out of his airway. He struggled against the rope holding him to the chair, watching helplessly as the image of a black and white spiral flashed onto the backdrop ahead.
"You assholes just wait, when I get out of here I'm... gonna... gonna... I..."
All it took was a glimpse for Lucas to become slackjawed and glued to the screen, unable to continue with his useless verbal threat. The preppy men began to take turns making hypnotic commands.
"You want to be a preppy college stud."
"No, please... I don't want to be..." Lucas mumbled, almost drooling as he gazed at the spiral, feeling the mixture of the jocks' words and the substance they'd sprayed him with mingling in his head.
"You want to be like us. You don't wanna do any of that useless liberal arts shit anymore. Finance, law, engineering... real work, take your pick, that's what you wanna do."
"Finance... yeah... just like dad..." Lucas could feel his philosophical smarts draining away, replaced with business savvy and a desire to impress.
"A real prep has to know how to have fun. You wanna party with us, don't you?"
"Yeah... no! No!" Lucas tried to resist, but it was no use. The chemicals and instructions forced open new neural pathways, replacing the old Lucas with a far more extroverted one. "Uh... hell... yeah..."
"Most of all, if you wanna be like us you've gotta look the part, man. You want to look like us. You will look like a preppy frat stud."
It felt like hands were gripping Lucas's body from all directions, pushing, kneading, and tugging. Only seconds later his back cracked loudly. With a long, loud, uninterrupted moan, he arched backward as he began to grow taller. His legs pushed out along the rough carpet and his arms dangled longer at his sides.
To his horror, his jacket and shirt ruffled like they were in a gust of wind, shifting and warping. Lucas shrieked in bliss feeling his rail-thin chest puff outward to fill what was now a button-down shirt while lean abs bubbled to the surface just below.
"No, god... No... what am I... I... I... oooooohhhhhh!"
Another guttural cry echoed off the walls along with a large helping of pre-cum ejecting into Lucas's shifting underwear. His lanky arms pulsated, lean muscles bulging underneath tanning skin towards hands that were popping and jutting out larger across the floor. Sweat ran down his tied arms, dripping off the ends of his twitching, lengthening fingers.
Lucas had almost forgotten that the three preppy studs were still in the room with him, softly pawing at their thick cocks as they watched him become more and more like them.
"Feel good, bro?" one of them whispered, "Doesn't it feel fucking great to become a proper man?"
Lucas could only muster a moan and a nod, too enamored with the bulging muscles growing down his legs and his swelling, perky butt that threatened to ruin his jeans any moment. Those began to change too though, the denim becoming softer, looser, and better fitting shorts that hugged his new bubble butt.
"No, n-, n-, n-..." Lucas murmured in the death throes of his resistance as the changes progressed and took hold of his cock.
With his eyes wide and his mouth hanging open and looking up at the handsome figures towering above, Lucas felt his hard cock stir dramatically in what was now an expensive pair of underwear
"AUUUGH! Fuck yeah!"
His face and head throbbed, his jaw tightening while his cock pulsed heavier and thicker, pre-cum flowing like a fountain against his muscular thigh. Like his cock, the toes in his boots stretched longer, striking the ends of the footwear. The pressure suddenly dropped, however, when the boots themselves shifted in shape and size, becoming a fresh pair of large, size twelve boat shoes. Large soles and long, bony toes tore through the remains of his socks, inching forward to fill the jockish footwear.
At the same time, his cock was running out of room in his pants while at the same time his skull felt like it was being squeezed as it took on a squarer shape. Lucas groaned for mercy through gritted teeth that were becoming straighter and whiter. His nose shrunk cuter, while brown eyes become a striking blue. The messy black hair he'd long worn lightened in tone, combing over neat and handsome.
Before that fateful night, Lucas would have had much to say on how he shrugged off the "shackles" of beauty standards and masculinity. But now... now he knew he was beautiful, he could feel it. The lean, slim muscles and his large, swelling cock oozed masculinity, and he loved it.
The transformed Lucas sat there smiling dumbly, moaning, almost drooling as he thrust his bulging crotch upward.
The three other preppy jocks examined the now lean, handsome man head to toe and gave each other smirks of approval, and switched off the projector.
Lucas' eyes fluttered as he left the spiral's trance and the last of the catalytic chemicals in his body were used up. His balls swelled and tensed up, ready to launch their load.
"Man, I'm gonna... gonna..." Lucas growled, breaking free of his restraints and desperately fishing his cock out of his chino shorts before it launched rope upon rope of thick cum halfway across the room.
"Lucas, welcome to Davidson," the main jock chuckled, slapping the newly inducted preppy stud on the back.
"Heh, thanks, man," Lucas panted, "Call me Luke, by the way."
"Alright Luke, if you wanna put that trouser snake of yours away, Daniel here will show you where your dorm is."
Luke barely realized his long, soft cock was still out in the open. He hurriedly stuffed it back into his shorts before following his fellow prep bros to his new campus dorm.
Yo, so I started this Red Wave trial thing today. The docs said it’s supposed to, like, make your brain work better or something. Was told to track my thoughts in this journal thing. Honestly, I’m just here for the cash. I’m not buying into any of their science-y shit. Took the first pill this morning. Feel normal so far. Guess we’ll see if this stuff actually does anything.
Since I was told to describe myself a bit, I guess I might as well if I want that cash they promised. Name's Blake. I'm 26 and work at a local manufacturing company in the finance department. It's a pretty chill gig. Don't gotta wear a suit either which is good. Didn't even wear one to my graduation and I don't plan on starting now.
Anyway bro, I'm also a proud atheist. Never got into politics, but I guess I'm more liberal. I mean, just let people do what they want, right?
February 10th, 2025
Alright, not gonna lie, I’ve been feeling kinda sharp lately. Like, my head’s clearer, and I’m getting more stuff done at work. My boss Emily even said my presentation didn’t totally suck, which is rare. Oh, and I actually ironed my shirt today before work. Don’t know why—just felt like I should look decent. Weird, right? Maybe these pills aren’t total BS. I don't know why, but I've been thinking of wearing a tie to work...
March 12th, 2025
So get this, man: I bought a suit over the weekend. A whole grownup suit and a tie to go with it. I dunno know why, but I just felt like stepping up my game for my presentation at work today. And man did I look good. I got so many compliments on my fit. It honestly felt really good. My bros thought it was weird and so do I, but now that I have it I guess I'll use it at another presentation in the future.
April 15th, 2025
Something weird is going on. I heard some chick at work talking about her church today. Instead of scoffing and rolling my eyes, it made me, like, think a little. Like I got curious about it. I don't know what's going on, but I might have to check it out sometime.
Speaking of work, I've been wearing a tie more and more. It feels... right. People seem to notice too. I get so many compliments about them. I went back to the store and pick out a whole bunch of different colors. I may be the only guy in the department wearing one, but standing out isn't a bad thing I guess.
May 18th, 2025
Alright, so… I went to church today. Yeah, me. Blake, the proud atheist. Walked past St. Mark’s on the way to grab Starbuck's, and something just made me stop and go in. The music was kind of awesome, and the pastor’s talk about purpose hit me harder than I expected. I don’t even know what’s happening to me, but I’m starting to think there’s more to life than what I’ve been living. I might go back next week to see what I've been missing, but I'm not sure yet.
June 30th, 2025
This morning, I prayed. Like, actually prayed to God. I’m still trying to wrap my head around it, but it felt… good. I’ve also started reading bits of the Bible over the past week. There’s some deep stuff in there. Work’s going great, too. I’ve been mentoring one of the new guys, and Emily says she’s impressed with my leadership. Suits are now my everyday thing. Who knew dressing sharp could feel so right?
July 23rd, 2025
I’ve been pulling away from my old friends. Their whole sarcastic, edgy vibe just doesn’t sit right with me anymore. Instead, I’ve been hanging out with people from church who share my interest in self-improvement and faith. I’m even thinking about joining a volunteer group at the church. Life feels more meaningful now. My mind still feels so clear too. I don't know what this pill is doing to me, but it's working.
August 11th, 2025
I’ve been reflecting on some big ideas lately: responsibility, tradition, family values. They make so much sense now. I’ve also started watching a few commentators online who align with these views. Their logic is compelling. Honestly, I don’t know how I didn’t see it before. It’s like a veil has been lifted. Why should abortion be legal? Why should we violate the second amendment with gun control laws? Why do gays think thy can decide how the rest of us live our lives? So many questions I'm learning the answers to. I never paid much attention to politics, but maybe I should.
September 7th, 2025
Sunday service has become the cornerstone of my week. I’ve officially joined St. Mark’s and volunteered for their community outreach. Pastor Williams’s guidance has been invaluable. I’m entirely committed to this new path. My wardrobe, my habits, even my worldview have all transformed. I’m proud of the man I’ve become. I've said this a million times already, but it just feels right.
October 20th, 2025
Today is my birthday, and reflecting on this past year astounds me. My former self seems like a stranger. I’ve embraced faith, order, and purpose, and it just feels right. I got my hair cut to be a lot shorter than I once had it as a special birthday gift to myself. It feels more appropriate for my new image.
I had some friends from bible study over for a small party. I wore my best suit for the occasion. We played games, ate good food, and prayed of course. There was a riveting debate on the role of faith in politics. All in all, it was a good time. I can't believe how much my life has changed just in 10 months.
November 30th, 2025
Today was the final day of the trial. The scientist leading the study asked me all sorts of questions, from my conservative views to my faith in God and my new sense of style. I'm not sure what it all has to do with a mental focus pill, but I didn't feel like asking questions. I'm sure they know what they're doing. Anyways, I better get going. St. Mark's is having an event today to celebrate God and all of His glory. I wouldn't miss it for the world.
December 1st, 2025
The Red Wave trial has concluded with a 100% conversion rate among participants. Subjects exhibited profound and permanent shifts in personality, behavior, and worldview. Pre-trial skepticism and liberal inclinations were entirely replaced with conservative, faith-based identities. This case highlights the pill's efficacy in aligning individuals with structured, traditional conservative values. Further research will examine long-term societal impacts of widespread application. More subjects needed.
“Well, look who decided to grace us with his presence!” Andy chuckled. “Get over here, dickhead!”
Nathaniel swaggered over to the group, each step in his attire deceptively erotic. The starched white shirt rubbing across his sensitive nipples, the tailored khakis juggling his testicles in a back-and-forth moose knuckle. The suede bluchers, the shoulder pads in his jacket, the overly-expensive sunglasses perched on top of his perfect nose. Anyone could guess what type of man Nathaniel was just by looking at his outfit, but the four boys he drew closer to were focusing on what was in his hands.
“Is that…champagne?” Harry’s eyes were wide with admiration.
“Three bottles of it too?” Zack’s eyes were wide with wonder.
“What could possibly be the occasion?” Ricky’s eyes were wide with longing.
Nathaniel drew closer, disposing of the bottles and flutes beside his best buds. “The reception staff offered them to me, a welcome package for our admittance into their fine establishment.”
Andy frowned, “That’s a bit strange, right? Do they know we are only here because we won an auction for a day pass?”
“It’s a country club man, they’re supposed to be filthy rich!” Harry immediately got up and started pouring himself a glass. He did his best not to spill onto his shorts or the sweater his girlfriend had gifted him.
“They’re probably just showing off,” Zack added, his disdain for traditional culture evident by his counterculture outfit: an all-black simple tee and skinny jeans ensemble. “Probably are trying to get us to become full-time members.”
Ricky was already hoisting up his first glass to his lips, drops splashing onto his unruly beard. “And most importantly, it’s free liquor!”
Nathaniel watched contentedly as the three downed their glasses. He could sense the slightest hesitation from Andy.
“Have you tried any of it yet, Nathan?” Andy questioned.
“Certainly, and it was quite divine,” Nathaniel responded. “But why not ask the other fellows for further conclusions?”
“It’s the finest drink I’ve ever had,” Harry replied, scratching at his legs a bit before they disappeared under two white legs of slacks.
“It’s clean, delicate,” Zack noted, toying with the intricate front bit of hair that was meant to appear natural but was actually tediously maintained. “A lovely body of flavor.”
Ricky’s statement was as tight as the rolled up sleeves of his designer button-up. “And it’s champagne.”
Nathaniel made no visible reaction as the preppification completely rewrote his friends. His eyes did not waver as Harry’s curls were mowed down into a lackluster business cut, while Zack’s counterculture apparel burst out into the traditional blazer-button down-slacks combo, or when Ricky’s facial hair fell away to reveal a face that had never seen the inside of a lower-class home. Nathaniel made no visible reaction, but he did experience great satisfaction. He was disappointed however when he realized Andy had still not yet poured himself a glass.
“Is there a problem with the gift, Chandler?” Nathaniel allowed the presumptuous snarl to creep out of his voice.
“It truly is marvelous,” Harrison’s eyes were wide with arrogance.
“There is nothing quite like it,” Zachariah’s eyes were wide with vain.
“What could possibly be stopping you from having a glass?” Cedric’s eyes were wide with greed.
Andy’s eyes were wide with fear.
The photographer was out a few minutes later, just as Nathaniel had recommended. The country club liked to promote their organization through whatever means they could, including social media. And Nathaniel knew he and his men would enjoy the extra attention and promotion, particularly Chandler, who always went the extra mile to stand out just a tad more. Today, that meant a salmon blazer paired with the lightest of mint-colored shorts.
The crew had no problem posing for the photographer, their cheers to becoming the newest full-time members of the country club wholly authentic.
“For starters, the shirt must always be tucked in.”
I did not dare move as he approached me. My tormentor, my nemesis, the man I had swore to defeat all these years. I could do nothing as he stepped closer and hooked his fingers into the waistband of the briefs and properly folded the shirt in. I remained frozen as he bent over and from my ankles and carried the trousers past my naked legs. They were his briefs that he was tucking the shirt into, his trousers that he was hoisting higher and zipping up.
“That’s it, son,” Mr. Richardson stepped back. “Now fasten your side adjusters.”
I instinctively followed his command, feeling a pleasurable shiver run along my spine as my hands mechanically obeyed his orders. They pulled at the fabric on my trousers, securing the clasps and the waist tight against the briefs. Mr. Richardson said only briefs could provide both the support and dignity for a proper man.
“Good, make sure it’s tight and rigid,” Mr. Richardson instructed. “That stiff quality is what makes the traditional man.”
His words made me feel weightless, pliable. It was almost as if my free will had become a clay that Mr. Richardson was able to mold in his own palms.
“And you wish to be a traditional man, don’t you son?”
I could have never, ever expected my answer to have come so quickly. “Yes.”
His smirk should have riled the anger residing deep inside of me, but instead all I felt was pleasure. Pleasure from Mr. Richardson’s approval. Approval of my obedience.
“Now that you are tucked and tidy, let’s find you a tie.” Mr. Richardson searched through a drawer filled with more ties than I could count. And yet out of all the fanciful colors and patterns, he chose a simple black latticed piece to hand to me.
I looped the tie deftly around my collar, not even noticing that the full Windsor I had created was almost identical to his own. He glanced down at the knot before instructing me to tighten it. A puff of ecstasy released from my throat as I drew the fabric tight against my Adam’s apple.
“You’re beginning to look just like me when I was your age, son.” Mr. Richardson’s comment brought a pleasant smile to my lips as he squirted an obnoxious amount of clear gel into his hand. He then brutally forced the product into my hair, the harsh parting sporting an undeniable sheen. I said nothing. It felt good to say nothing. It felt good to let Mr. Richardson take control.
“Doesn’t it suit you better? To look like me?” He took a seat back behind his desk before handing me his bottle of cologne. “Would you like to smell like me too?”
“I would very much like to, Sir.” Never once had I given this man respect, and now I had bequeathed him with a title where one could hear its capital letter at the front. I took the precious item from him and applied the ostentatious, yet comforting cologne to my pulse points.
The scent I had once reviled now surrounded me, pulsing out my own bloodstream proudly. Mr. Richardson’s nostrils flared to appreciate his own aphrodisiac. I felt my own nose do the same.
“If you are to be a traditional man, like you said you’d wished to be,” Mr. Richardson asserted. “Then you ought to be like me too, son. Am I correct?”
My eyes shifted momentarily, falling down over what I had become before retaking it in through an older reflection. I knew Mr. Richardson was mocking me, offering me a way out. All I had to do was take it. Say he was wrong and he would let me free. I would never become what he desired. All I had to do was say no.
“Yes Sir, you are always correct. I ought to be like you too.” But why would I say no to Mr. Richardson. I wanted this to be my future. I wanted to be a classic, proper, traditional man. I wanted, no, I had always wanted to be like Mr. Richardson.
“Very good, son.” His low voice held confidence and maturity. “Now, put on your jacket and then we can get started.”
I took his word and secured the final portion of my suit over my shoulders. Mr. Richardson’s smile was smug with victory. My face quickly came to match his, as it had been both of us who had won.
Originally posted on Patreon in January 2023 (thank you to Trav for getting me over a bit of writer's block with the titular recommendation letter, AND the use of the word 'ratiocination'). Join now to get stories when they first go up, along with exclusive artwork and my Discord! There's a new story coming this month, don't wait a year to read it...
“Rupert? Where’d you get Rupert?”
“It’s the name of Stewie’s bear in Family Guy,” Jerry chuckled, typing away on his laptop. Two feet away, on the other side of the couch, Nick watched the words materialize on his own computer screen via the magic of Google Docs. Every few moments, the typing would stop and there’d be a click, as Jerry scrolled through the built-in thesaurus to find a pretentious replacement for a more basic word. ‘Respected’ became ‘venerable,’ ‘great’ changed to ‘superlative.’
“Rupert D. Westinghouse. No one’s gonna believe that’s a real name,” Nick laughed. “But whatever.”
“That’s where you’re wrong, Nicky Fitz,” Jerry grinned, as he swapped ‘institution’ in for ‘school.’ “It’s so crazy that no one will think to look it up. I bet it’s a better fake name than, like, I dunno…‘Mike Smith’ or something.”
Nick nodded. “Yeah, I guess that’s probably right.”
“Okay, so... I'mma make up a thing for this guy to be a doctor of.” Jerry’s brow knitted together and he stuck his tongue out at an odd angle. Nick sighed.
“Biology?”
“Too normal.”
“How is that a bad thing?”
“Because we gotta sell it!” Jerry said as if it was obvious. “And I know what to put. ‘Perhaps most notably... the glorious art... of... masculine’...uhhhhh…‘physical conditioning’ - yeah, there we go!”
“Dude, what does that even mean?”
“Fuck if I know, but Dr. Westinghouse sure does!” Jerry replied cheerfully. “And it sounds gay, and I’m sure college admission people love that.”
Nick looked the letter over and chuckled to himself. “This is so dumb. But it’s dumber that Mom is making me apply to schools when I don’t wanna go. So whatever.”
“At least they let you just send one application everywhere now, that’s nice. I remember my aunt said she had to look up schools in a catalog. Wild.” Jerry fixed a typo as he talked. “Your mom is never gonna think about it again once you send the application in, so let’s just get this done. How’s it look?”
Nick looked at his screen and read the fake letter of recommendation through.
To whom it may concern,
The reason I am contacting you on this day is to make a heartfelt and enlightened recommendation for your fine institution to accept Mr. Nicholas Kirby Fitzgerald as a student. Mr. Fitzgerald is an A-student with a 3.9 grade-point average; a superlative record on his school’s wrestling, football, and weightlifting teams with several championship wins under his belt; and is both charming and urbane in ways that make even a venerable academic such as myself seem positively uncultured! I have known Mr. Fitzgerald since he was but a mere tot, as his father and I are the most deeply intimate of colleagues. As such, I have no doubt in my mind that Mr. Fitzgerald’s natural talents, combined with the instruction of your learned faculty, will take him far in life. He would make a brilliant addition to your roster and one day be a shining star among your vaunted alumni.
Indeed, I am one such alumnus myself. I graduated magna cum laude and returned for two of my degrees in my fields of expertise, perhaps most notably the glorious art of masculine physical conditioning. My own sons – Chadwick and Greyson – have also graduated from your institution. They will tell you exactly what I have. Given all this, I feel I am to be taken at my word on this matter. However, should such a pedigree fail to impress, please do allow me to elaborate upon myself.
You may have heard of Dr. Rupert Danforth Westinghouse – yours truly. High-ranking bodybuilder and celebrious powerlifter, often called the height of sartorial sophistication, a world-renowned sommelier of wine and tobacco, and possessing a ratiocination that makes even the most learned individuals weak in the knees, such is its brilliance. Though I must admit, such a body does make it difficult to find good clothing and fit through certain doors!
With that, I do believe I have made my case for Mr. Fitzgerald. I look forward to his surefire acceptance into your university and to meet with a member of your administration come the new semester. I will do my best to not come off as intimidating.
Yours truly,
Dr. Rupert D. Westinghouse, MD, DPT, EdD, PsyD
Nick nodded approvingly and clapped Jerry on the back. “It’s crazy what a thesaurus will do. Reading this, I’d have no idea you got a D in English.”
“Yeah, but that’s just because I forgot about half the assignments,” Jerry said proudly.
“Do you think he’s talking too much about himself?” Nick asked. “I think he might be talking too much about himself. Like they’ll know it’s fake. Not that it really matters. I just don’t want them to like, I dunno, call my Mom or something,” Nick said with a shrug, squinting as he looked at the letter on the screen. “Don’t want her on my case.”
“Is your Mom EVER on your case? I don’t think they’d do that. And anyway, they’re not gonna be reading too closely. They’ll just be like ‘oh, he’s up his own ass.’ Which he is. If he existed. Also," Jerry continued, "how are they gonna call your Mom? How're they gonna get her number?”
“Yeah, true. I’m thinking too much.”
“Time for an edible then?”
—-----
Jerry kicked his Vans up on the dash as a thought came to him. “Any word yet?”
Nick’s mouth was full of french fries. “Word?”
“From colleges.”
“Oh! I already forgot,” Nick laughed. “I bet they haven’t seen the application yet. It’s only been a couple weeks. But who cares, really.”
Jerry nodded as he stole some of Nick’s fries. “Yeah, was just wondering if I got away with that recommendation letter. Man, I think that’s some of my finest work. I’m proud of it.”
“That guy’s fuckin’ name,” Nick remembered, shaking his head as he laughed. “‘Rupert Westinghouse.’ Maybe that should be what you do instead of college. Write fake recommendations for people.”
“Way more fun than paying a hundred grand to sit in class,” Jerry agreed. His dream job was being a Twitch streamer - the cool part was that he was already doing it, the downside was that he was making no money. Which was fine, for now, because he could live at home, but as soon as he had to get his own place it would be an issue. He and Nick had a mutual buddy who worked at Casey’s General Store, so that was always a back-up option if he couldn’t find something a little cooler. When the stockroom at the Nike Outlet was hiring, that would be the move. Shoe discounts and no customer service.
“Wanna come to Ace with me?” Nick asked. “Gotta get a bolt for my dad.”
“I have a stream I wanna watch,” Jerry said, checking the time. “I can walk over later though if you want.”
“Yeah maybe.” Nick turned on the car and chucked his Wendy’s bag into a backseat full of trash. “Just hit me up. Want me to take you back?”
“Nah, I’ll spare ya from having to drive that one entire block,” Jerry laughed. “You’d still be waiting to left turn onto Hatcher in the time it took me to walk home.”
“True that!”
“See ya.” Jerry hopped out of the car and scraped a wrapper off the bottom of his Chucks. He hit his vape pen as he crossed the street, cut through two backyards, and was walking into his house barely two minutes later. “I’m home!”
He kicked off his shoes, grabbed an apple from the fruit bowl on the counter, and headed up to his room.
His gaming chair greeted him, its ergonomic curves a welcome departure from the worn-out seats in Nick’s car. He’d never thought of gaming chairs as a necessity, but when he found one at a garage sale down the street, he quickly changed his tune. Like most guys his age, he had terrible posture, and the chair rectified that, along with its offering of plush cushions that made even his bony ass comfortable.
For an hour, he watched his streams, cranking the volume up so he could hear over the sound of the SunChips he was eating. When his phone buzzed, he answered it without looking so he didn’t miss any of the onscreen action. “Yo.”
“Good afternoon, may I speak to Dr. Rupert Westinghouse?”
Jerry’s mouth froze mid-chew. He quickly checked his phone to make sure it wasn’t Nick calling and playing a prank on him. “Um…uh…hold, please, just a second-” he stammered out, smashing the ‘mute’ button on his iPhone before the caller could agree to waiting. He put the call on hold and switched to call Nick - they never talked on the phone, so Nick would definitely know something was up - but didn’t reach him. Fucker was probably passed out on the couch…
…then it dawned on Jerry, Nick didn’t want to go to college. This didn’t matter. Might as well have some fun with it, then…
He unmuted the call and trilled, “Dr. Rupert Westinghouse speaking!”
Jerry nearly dropped the phone in shock when the voice that came out of him was not his own. Instead of his usual lazy drone, he spoke in a sharp Mid-Atlantic accent, pitched at the deep bellow of a bass. The effect was unusual and distinctive, like James Earl Jones doing an impression of Humphrey Bogart.
The lady on the other end said something about being on her way and looking forward to seeing him, then asked if she needed to bring anything.
“Bring anything where, my dear?” Jerry thundered, trying to keep his lips shut but failing. His voice was twice its regular volume, its masculine tone deeply affected. He sounded so pretentious.
The lady said something about his house and a meeting. He felt chills shoot through his whole body, compounding when he began to speak without thinking, “Oh, goodness no, your presence is gift enough…” as he looked at his caller ID and began searching through his inbox. The top email looked to be exactly what he was searching for.
VICKERS, JULIANNE
Re: Re: Recommendation for Nicholas Fitzgerald
Wonderful! I agree it has been too long. Is it too formal to say I’m honored to be invited to your home? I’ll be there at 3:30 today…
The hairs on Jerry’s neck standing on end. His house. She was coming to his HOUSE! Who even was this lady…he hadn’t invited anyone over, and he didn’t know a Julianne Vickers…
Still speaking to her in that strange, boisterous voice, he scrolled down and was surprised to find a thread below the latest email. The message Julianne was replying to was formally written - “My dear Julianne, Please forgive the belated nature of my response…” - and indeed invited her over for a meeting. Jerry felt a chill as he read the address, HIS address, on the screen, and saw the email signature: “Warmly, Rupert.”
Someone had written an email from his account pretending to be the pretend person recommending Nick. And speaking of Nick, he was the cause of all of it: Julianne’s initial email, at the bottom of the thread, was in regards to the fake recommendation - although she was taking it to be authentic. She seemed to think she knew Rupert, making mention of “wonderful dinner parties” he’d once hosted, and said she wanted to discuss his recommendation of Nick, because any student who had Dr. Westinghouse’s stamp of approval was someone she wanted at her school.
“Wonderful, I’ll see you soon then!” Julianne said. “Bye bye now.”
“Cheers!” Jerry said, before throwing his phone across the room like it was a bomb. “That’s not my voi- THIS isn’t my voice!” He couldn’t shake off the preposterous bass. Every word sounded like it was from a black-and-white movie with the audio pitched down.
With one hand over his mouth, Jerry scrolled through his inbox to distract himself from talking. But it wasn’t his inbox. He didn’t really use email, for the most part. It wasn’t how he communicated with his friends. But this inbox had tens of thousands of emails going back years, all written stuffily and centered around boring topics like business or investing. Jerry finally checked the accounts tab and saw the address: “[email protected].”
RDW…
“Rupert Westinghouse…” Jerry whispered under his breath, the bass reverberating through his ribs. “No way.” But sure enough, all the emails were signed by the made-up man. And if someone was maintaining that detailed of a fraud, that meant Julianne Vickers, whoever she was, knew exactly where he lived and how to get there.
Jerry tore out of his room and clomped down the stairs. “If the doorbell rings don’t answer it! Anybody here??” He hoped no one was. Less explaining that way, especially since he didn’t sound like himself. “Please ignore the…door…”
Jerry froze at the bottom of the stairs. His house…wasn’t his house. It was big and grand and filled with all kinds of expensive shit, like Turkish rugs and oil paintings. Classical music emanated from a large antique record player. The living room had a fucking chandelier. “Um…I…we…” he stammered, shellshocked. What the hell was in that vape? Acid? He had to be tripping…
He turned and walked back up the stairs to get away from the unfamiliar scene, but the stairs were different too: twice as wide, and winding their way up to a second floor that was just as opulently transformed as the ground level. Jerry darted into his bedroom for safety, but it was now an office, or a library - there were floor-to-ceiling shelves packed full of thousands of hardback books, and a large wooden desk with an old computer and a fucking typewriter next to it. It looked masculine, homey, wealthy, and completely unfamiliar.
Jerry stood in the doorway, his hands on his head, mouth agape. “Oh this is…this is bad…” he squeaked. “I don’t…get…” He didn’t have words. Or thoughts. His brain was like a crashed computer, completely frozen. Should he run? But this was his house…where else would he go…Nick’s, maybe. Would Nick be behind this? Not the house, that was too extreme, but at least the fake emails…but he couldn’t think of why…
His feet were moving backward toward the stairs before he even realized they were. He just needed to move, to get away. He’d somehow blinked his way into a stranger’s mansion and he didn’t want to get arrested–
“GUH!” He swore he saw a painting move, and it nearly made him jump out of his skin. The realization that it was a mirror - a large, heavy one framed with extravagant gold carvings - was small comfort as Jerry saw what it was reflecting.
He slowly raised his hand up his head, and his reflection did the same. His fingers dug into his long, unbrushed hair, and though it felt normal to the touch, the mirror showed a dramatic change: it was white. His hair had turned fucking white. Could that happen in a moment of extreme panic, like he was feeling now? His entire head of hair just…poof, white? It looked like a fucking mad scientist Halloween wig on his head.
Thoroughly freaked, Jerry stepped out of the reflection and looked down the long second floor hallway. The walls were covered with a wide variety of art and frames; mementos from a life of travel and adventure. None of the pieces looked the same - there were tribal masks, drawings of horses, landscape photographs, peacock feathers - and yet they all fit together, each one telling its own individual story. Jerry hesitantly stepped a few feet down the hall just to survey all the treasures before he ran out of there, and found himself in front of another antique mirror. He leapt at the sight of his snow-white hair: no longer untamed, but precisely parted and slicked back against his scalp with shiny pomade. His forehead looked enormous and it dawned on him - in the form of a cold weight sinking in his gut - that his hairline started back by his ears, leaving three new inches of bare skin at the top of his head.
Trembling fingers reached up to inspect his receded hairline, but he snapped his hands away when he noticed their new swollen size. His fingers were thick as sausages, broad knuckles and wide fingernails, and as he clenched them into fists they seemed to expand even bigger, like a pair of toasters. “Wh-what is…what on Earth…” he stammered out, shaking his giant hands to get the blood flowing out of them, but only emphasizing their immensity and palpable strength. His index fingers and thumbs pressed together and moved on their own to the sides of his neck, where they met the knife-sharp points of the shirt collar that was blossoming out of the top of Jerry’s t-shirt. The new collar was a white so brilliant that it made Jerry squint, and so tall it required him to raise his chin, even with the two buttons undone to allow the collar to sit open. It looked strange, this big, bold, aggressive dress shirt collar around his neck. Jerry’s fingers gripped his collar points and gently guided them to their proper resting place on his collarbone, ensuring his collar stood tall instead of going limp.
Now he really needed to go. No more artwork, no more looking at his old-fashioned hair. He walked straight back down the hallway, shoes sinking into the expensive runner rug until they reached the stairs and made sharp clacks on the wood. Jerry stopped and looked down. He had beautifully polished brogues on his feet instead of sneakers, and their leather soles were a great deal stiffer than the rubber he was accustomed to. With a resigned sigh, he sat down on the top step to take them off.
That was when he noticed his calves. “Blast…” They were so big, they made his thighs look small. It was like he had footballs implanted under his skin. And they were shredding his ribbed athletic socks apart, revealing sheer hosiery underneath that was visibly strained by his monstrous calves. An attempt to pull them down was met by resistance, and he moved his hands upward to find leather sock garters buckled below his knees, holding his dress socks embarrassingly high. Jerry fumbled with the garters but, unaccustomed to his thick fingers, wasn’t able to unclip them. “Blast!”
The compulsion to stretch suddenly overwhelmed him, and he extended his legs outward, counterbalancing them by leaning back. He was growing, he suddenly knew; he could feel his formal hose shifting around his lengthening calves and his spine rubbing against the floor he was resting against. An erection popped up in his lap, the representation of his overwhelming emotions - fear, confusion, excitement - as he got taller far faster than he’d ever anticipated. His weighty brogues banged against a lower step as his legs finished lengthening, and he grabbed onto the stair banister to haul himself upright to his new five-ten, six inches taller than moments before. Reeling from dizziness, he pulled himself to the safety of the upstairs hall, moving himself away from the top of the stairs to ensure he didn’t fall down them. This sudden vertigo made it impossible to walk in a straight line, and Jerry bumped into the walls, knocking books down as he stumbled back and forth trying to find his center of gravity. Finally, he braced himself against the back of an enormous wingback chair, his sausage fingers digging into the expensive leather. “Ahhhh.”
He was trying to catch his balance, his breath, and his bearings all at the same time. It was a tall order. He spread his legs far apart and planted them firmly into the ground, leaning all the way forward against the back of the chair, feeling momentarily grounded. His thighs took the opportunity to swell and expand, quietly tearing out of his shorts as the fabric shifted up and caught between the engorged muscles. They doubled in size and kept going, his wide stance now a necessity thanks to the mass of his legs, which pressed together where they’d once been a foot apart. Jerry only had an inkling of what was occurring thanks to the feeling of his balls being compressed, before they popped free and rested on the top of his thighs, swelling up to the size of eggs. His cock thickened to the width of a soda can, spitting warm pre-cum into his tightening underwear. “I don’t-” Jerry sputtered out, jiggling his thighs as each grew bigger than waist, “-d-don’t wanna…don’t want to be like…mmm…”
But he couldn’t get the words out. He was too confused, panicked, and breathless to assemble his thoughts. His ribcage was constricted by his t-shirt, which had already been tight and wasn’t being helped by Jerry’s shoulders and chest being pushed through the rest of their adolescence and broadening to their adult widths. The seams were being tested by his torso’s new width even before a new roundness in his stomach began sneaking out of the bottom of his shrunken tee. With Jerry bent at almost 90 degrees over the chair, it was easy for gravity to go to work, pulling down on the small belly he now possessed. It hung like a cow’s udder before it grew bigger and rounder, solidifying as his core muscles hardened to support it. Abs like stacked cinderblocks bulged beneath his skin.
He didn’t want to stroke his fat cock for fear of losing his balance, so he propped an elbow on the back of the chair and used the freed hand to play with his right nipple through his shirt. The scratchy cotton of his t-shirt was changing to the material of an outrageously expensive dress shirt, stiff as steel but soft as a cloud, as his tiny nipple swelled between his thumbs until it was like the top of a baby’s bottle, never to sit flat again. Jerry made a cry of pleasure like he’d never heard from himself before, the sensitivity of his chest a new and intoxicating sensation. Nervy waves of pleasure ricocheted down his spine. “Ah…AH…”
With the weight of his expanding belly pulling him lower, Jerry was relieved to feel his weight shift backward, rectifying his wobbly balance. His eyes rolled back from the feeling of his glutes flexing together, tensing so tightly that a wave of muscle undulated out from between them and across his small butt. Jerry’s pants had always sagged, his lack of ass a running joke in school, but now it looked pert and round, and the growth surging through it was making it bounce and jiggle as it swelled. His underwear tore open, elastic band twanging free as a beefy muscle butt ballooned out of his backside. Jerry reddened as he felt his dick tumble free and his shorts shred completely, leaving him naked from the waist down in a house he wasn’t sure was his own. He’d been planning to escape outside but now he needed to get something to cover himself before he did that, provided he could even walk.
A groan and a push got him upright, his new belly heaving upward as it swelled another inch, now protruding out a foot in front of him. He put one hand on the nearby bookshelf as he shuffled forward, his naked thighs rubbing against each other, their friction producing leg hair that swirled around his shaking muscles. The immensity of his quads and hamstrings made him waddle, his meaty calves slamming downward with each step, but he was able to move without falling. And so he walked, out of the library and into the hall. “I can do this,” he whispered, looking straight ahead to avoid looking at his belly or hands.
The first door he tried was a bathroom, but the second opened up into a grand bedroom with a huge four-poster bed. This seemed like a master bedroom that would have a closet attached, and sure enough, it did - the largest closet Jerry had ever seen, bigger than his own bedroom. It was immaculately organized, like one you’d see on a TV show, with all the clothes hanging in the same direction and sorted by style and color. Everything was formal, and everything was for men: suits, belts, shoes, ties, pocket squares, slacks, and dress shirts - at least two hundred of them alone. Jerry rummaged for a few moments trying to find a pair of sweatpants, but there was nothing casual that he saw, so with a sigh he selected a pair of dress trousers. They were a subtle gray and blue plaid, and they looked too big for him, though they didn’t have a tag for him to check. Realizing he needed underwear too, he found a pair of white briefs as big as a pillowcase, the only size on hand.
Jerry was sure he’d have to hold up the oversized clothes once he left the house, and getting them on was difficult, because his body was so foreign and cumbersome. After nearly falling twice, he waddled out to the bedroom and sat on a bench next to the bed, shimmying into the huge briefs. They hung loosely on him as he pulled on the trousers, noting that the pant legs were just the right length for him, and sharply ironed. He clasped the pants over his belly, then held them up as he got onto his feet. “A belt, maybe,” he muttered aloud, shuffling back over to the closet. As he let go of the trousers to look through the racks of clothes, his belly quietly swelled larger to fill his pants, while his butt ballooned into a big ass that pressed against the tight tailoring of the trousers. The fit of the pants started to change along with his body, altering to fit the new mass he was growing, especially once his waistline started to gain inches. Ever so subtly, the hem of his t-shirt crept back down, disappearing into the waist of his pants as it grew longer and longer to fully cover his belly and be properly tucked in.
Jerry selected a brown leather belt and began working it through his belt loops, shocked by how long it was - at least twice as long as any other belt he’d ever worn - but happy that it buckled. He straightened the buckle over his belly button and hiked his pants up, wedging his big balls into a moose knuckle. He couldn’t see it thanks to his belly, but there was no missing the shiny white buttons on his shirt. Jerry poked his finger into one, just to ensure it was real. He was wearing a t-shirt, it wasn’t supposed to have buttons. But this one did, a row of them starting at his open collar and running down the center of his torso, straight into his trousers. The buttons held firm over his big belly, the white fabric stretched taut over its mass. Jerry was still processing it all when he noticed his sleeves now reached his wrists, and as he watched they crept even longer, all the way to his fingers. Jerry pushed his sleeves up, irritated at how overly long they were, and suddenly the fabric split open.
Curious, Jerry raised his hands up and watched as the ends of his sleeves folded back double and stiffened like cardboard, the white fabric shimmering like fresh snowfall. His cuffs grew as big as his powerful hands, the edges sharpening into square points as Jerry encountered his first pair of French cuffs, as aggressive and masculine as his collar. Out of the layers of fabric appeared sapphire cufflinks depicting the two halves of the globe. “What in heaven’s name,” Jerry muttered, running his finger over the oversized cuffs. He moved his hands up the expensive fabric of his sleeves and across his torso, examining his elegant shirt. He felt so silly in an outfit like this, but at the very least he was fully covered, down to the polished brogues on his feet. He remembered seeing them on the stairs, but then they’d been gone when he pulled his pants on, but now they were back again…
“Strange…”
That was how he felt dressed like this. Strange. Like he was wearing a businessman Halloween costume. If any of his boys saw him like this he’d have to pass it off as a joke. But no one would see him this way if he had anything to say about it…until he realized that in a few minutes, that lady from the college who thought she knew Rupert was going to be showing up. He needed to text Nick about that, but he patted his pockets and realized he had no idea where his cell phone was. He would certainly need that before he left.
“Phone, phone,” he mumbled under his breath. He had to fixate on it so he didn’t get distracted, because everything was distracting at the moment. It was all so foreign, from his lumbering waddle to the swish of his trousers, and it disoriented him.
Despite his focus, he stopped anyway when he walked past a full length mirror in the hall. “Good Lord!” he exclaimed, taking a step back so that only his belly protruded into the frame. At least it didn’t sag, he thought. He stepped forward and faced the mirror straight on, astonished by his breadth - the mirror only reflected the middle third of his body. He blushed at the sight of his nuts imprinted in his trousers, and reflexively reached to adjust them as he always had, but his muscle gut wouldn’t allow for such a direct gesture anymore. He tried to reach around it, nearly bursting his buttons off as he hoisted the steel ball up. “Goodness me,” he said, annoyed at the way his brain kept changing his words into old-fashioned ones. But it hadn’t blurted out anything on its own, until he heard himself say “But it should be even bigger!”
Jerry straightened up in shock, and his belly blasted forward, pressing into the mirror with such force that he worried his buttons had cracked the glass. “I don’t want a big…wonderful…handsome belly!” he said, his voice emanating powerfully from his gut, which was now as large and round as the same kind of globe depicted on his cufflinks. His brick-like abs were outlined in his shirt fabric, highlighting the immense power contained in his torso. “Perhaps it isn’t so big,” he said aloud. “It merely looks large because my chest has shrunk!”
Jerry’s eyes bugged. He immediately felt a stirring behind his fat nipples and watched as his shirt buttons tightened across his pecs - what was he saying, he didn’t have pecs - “I have worked very hard on my chest, and I want it to be spectacular!” he announced with a loud laugh.
He didn’t want to be laughing.
He didn’t want his chest to grow.
And yet there he was, chuckling as his pecs swelled. They started as solid flat plates already broad enough to keep his shirt tight, and then they ballooned, rounding outward without losing any of their firmness. “That’s more like it!” he said with a bug-eyed grin as his buttons began popping open. “Bigger!”
Jerry’s eyes lolled in their sockets as his nipples rubbed against his silky shirt, the pleasure overcoming him. His pecs just kept swelling, bigger and rounder and broader, each burst of growth pulling his shirt further open and baring more cleavage than he’d ever seen on a man before. He wanted to button his shirt and hide…
“And where is my chest hair? I haven’t shaved, have I?!”
No no no–he didn’t want a hairy chest…but already, he had one, as salt-and-pepper bristles fanned out from the valley of his pecs and formed his new pelt. Not overly hairy, but more than enough to show that this chest was a man’s. It felt like a pair of sandbags in his shirt, heavy and firm and fighting with the remaining middle buttons. His whole body looked different now. There was a lived-in burliness that was missing before. His chest was to be his calling card, the keystone of his incredible physique. Even in a full suit, under a shirt and a tie and a jacket, his pecs would be unmissable.
He was hard as a rock thinking about it.
He tried to imagine how embarrassed he’d feel being at school, walking down the hall in a zillion-dollar bespoke shirt with his hairy tits bursting out of it. But he only felt pride. Cocky, masculine pride that other men weren’t as big, muscular, and refined as he was.
“PHONE,” he reminded himself, pulling away from the mirror. His walk was different yet again; now accommodating for a huge pair of pecs weighing him down. His chest propelled ahead like a battering ram, ready to clear the hall of any loiterers. It was still growing as he walked, projecting out over his big belly, swelling further out of his shirt, which was tested further by his shoulders thickening. His collar rose up to his jaw when his traps bulked up and his delts inflated, creating a proper frame for his mammoth pecs.
Even breathing felt different. The natural rise and fall of his chest was like a pair of mountains in an earthquake, his huge tits hoisting up and down as he sucked in an oxygen tank’s worth of air to fill his massive frame. He wanted to avoid looking at his body, a resolution made difficult by his chest forcing itself into his view every other second.
He arrived back in the library. It felt smaller now, which - when his stomach cleared a side table of its contents - he realized was because he was so large. On instinct, he started to bend over to pick up the knick knacks he’d knocked over, but moving was so awkward that he simply left them on the floor. “You’re a wrecking ball,” he grumbled, rubbing his perfectly round muscle gut. It felt like his dress shirt was wrapped around concrete. Perhaps this gentleman dressed elegantly to counter the brute force of his physique, Jerry thought. “Now where the devil is my–”
A noise like a tiny jackhammer drew his attention to the desk, where an iPhone was loudly vibrating across the surface.
“--phone,” Jerry finished, pounding over to his phone and picking it up in his big mitt. His beefy fingers required two attempts to accept the call.
“Dr. Rupert Westinghouse speaking!”
“Hi Dr. Westinghouse, it’s Julianne Vickers. Are you alright?”
Jerry rolled his eyes at having to talk to this lady again. “Yes, just fine! Why?”
“Oh, you sounded out of breath, that’s all!”
Jerry’s loud exhale blasted into the phone speaker. “Ah, well, I’ll admit I haven’t…felt quite like myself today. But I’m fine, my dear.”
“Good, good - I’m just calling to get the gate code?”
“Ah-” Jerry said before his jaw suddenly locked up. His iPhone suddenly pressed into his face hard enough to make his cheek throb. He adjusted his grip, the sharp edge of his French cuff scratching his face, before his jaw popped back open. “M-my apologies! The gate, erm, slipped my mind! The code is one-nine-five-nine-star.”
“Perfect, thank you!”
“My pleasure. See you soon.” Jerry grimaced as he ended the call. “Why didn’t I tell her not to come!” he seethed to himself, slapping himself on his forehead. He’d need to figure out a way to chase her off when she arrived.
His palm rested on his head, rubbing it as he recalled that his hairline had succumbed - somehow - to pronounced baldness. The hair that remained was thin and smooth, affixed to his scalp with gel. And as he moved his fingers down, he noticed his ears felt larger…and his skin was rougher, thicker…
“It’s nothing, I’m sure,” he said in a confident voice that betrayed nary a hint of his inner anxieties. “I’m quite young!” He prodded his eyebrows as he hesitantly walked to a nearby mirror mounted on a closet door. They felt bushy and heavy, not like he recalled. And were those wrinkles around his eyes? “Nonsense! I’m young!”
He thought of his jaw locking up on the phone and rubbed it. It was a big, dense box of a thing, girded by thick pads of muscle and tendon that smelled of aftershave. His hand sat there, covering his face like a mask as he stepped in front of the mirror just in time to see deep wrinkles fold onto his smooth forehead. Furry silver brows bulged out over his eyes, which were deep blue and framed by regal crow’s feet. His nose had grown bold and broad.
Jerry lowered his hand and stared at the stranger looking back at him. It was a face that demanded to be taken seriously. Handsome and imperious. He shifted his massive jaw back and forth and stared at his jutting chin that replicated the shape of his belly. His lips were thin and stern, curved slightly downward. It was a manly face. Even the jowls were muscular.
“I’m still young,” he insisted aloud to himself, the depth of his voice now matched by the seriousness of his features. “64 is not old.”
64…
One-nine-five-nine…the gate code was his birth year.
“I wouldn’t want to be a minute younger!” he said aloud, and he slapped his hand over his mouth, wanting to avoid changes like the one he’d triggered back when he grew his chest. He looked at his big, weathered hand and the gorgeous French cuff below it, his cufflink sparkling as if to say hello. His cock stiffened in his trousers. Keeping one hand over his mouth, he unzipped his fly and awkwardly heaved his fat dick out between his legs. It was difficult with his belly, and he had to bend slightly, which made his boulder ass stick out and almost rip open his pants.
He was so fucking big.
Jerry shut his eyes, hiding from the handsome older man in the reflection. His back arched further and he pushed his big tits forward, moaning into his palm as he felt them burst further out of their confines and pop open the fourth button on his shirt.
He was hard as a rock now, already spewing pre-cum into his hand. Just needed to take care of business quickly before his guest arrived…he was a man, after all, and men had needs. Especially men like him. Huge, strapping men. That was the best kind of man to be. There was no OTHER kind, really. He needed to be the kind of hulking hunk who made the world’s best tailoring fight for its life. That would inspire young Nicholas to be one, too.
His belly pressed against the glass and he growled with joy, moving his hand from his mouth to his muscular neck. All 375 pounds of him was burning with lust. The sexuality of his body seemed to fill the whole room - it was nothing like Jerry’s old body, which no one ever noticed. This new body was built to fuck and to fuck hard. He could pin a body down with his big belly, have them motorboat his pecs and suck his nipples, grab his huge ass, hold his meaty hands, then get jackhammered by his thick cock. And even when dressed up like a genteel blueblood, not a single one of those features was hidden.
“Finally!” the deep voice erupted out of Jerry. “Finally, I’m waking up! Finally I’m becoming Rupert!” He moved his hand to one of his bowling ball pecs and twirled his chest hair between his fingers, overwhelmed with joy. “This is how…I’ve been wanting to feel…my entire life!” Jerry wondered if that was true - he didn’t recall being discontented with his old, lazy, chill self - but he couldn’t deny how centered he felt now, letting his imagination run wild with fantasies involving boarding school and Ivy League educations, lifting weights with his chums and peeling off their letter sweaters to see and enjoy the fruits of their hard work…he and his friends growing big and strong and beefy, popping buttons off their shirts, having new ones made, wearing custom suits at each others’ weddings and sneaking off to fuck…
And he quite enjoyed how smart he felt now. His affected way of speaking…his magniloquence - ah, what a divine word that was!
The doorbell rang.
“Just a moment!” Jerry boomed, although he guessed he was too deep into the house to be heard. “I’m getting changed!” He broke into boisterous laughter at the pun. “Yes, yes, I’m practically done changing!” He wanted to imagine Jerry acting like this or dressing like this, putting on his cufflinks and combing back his hair, but he couldn’t remember what Jerry looked like, or how much he weighed, or even how old he was. It was all Rupert now. Sweat dripped from his chin into his pecs as he stroked his cock and relished in his change, feeling each part of himself adjust just as he wanted, as he actively transformed himself into the man he’d unwittingly manifested. The haze was lifting as if he was rising from a long nap, knowledge of his businesses and travels and family all filing into place…
It took him longer to cum than it used to, back when he was a young, muscular buck, but he liked that. Sex was the best thing on Earth, why not make it last longer?
When he realized he was finally thinking fully like a man of a certain age, he came. Long ropes of white heat shot out of his cock and hit the mirror as Rupert pumped his hips forward and felt his transformation lock in. Having blown a load standing up, his balance remained admirably stable for a man of his age, pushing out an orgasm as easily as a thought. He straightened up, still expelling his sex, shutting his eyes and grinning as his shirt buttoned itself over his chest and a pair of horn rimmed glasses appeared on his nose. His arms stretched out as if to hug his new self in the mirror, allowing a perfectly tailored blazer to materialize around his mammoth torso.
Rupert opened his eyes when the doorbell chimed again. He looked at the clean mirror, puzzled, then at his crotch, where his fly was firmly zipped and preserving his modesty. But hadn’t he just… Wasn’t he… “Hm,” he said, adjusting his pocket square. “What a peculiar fantasy.”
He eased his way down the stairs, waistline brushing the banister as he appraised himself to make sure he was presentable. He could still recall his buttons bursting open and his cock expelling several loads worth of cum all at once, but that couldn’t be real - it was the middle of the day, and what was he, some oversexed schoolboy? Not anymore! Rupert Westinghouse was a dignified elder statesman, and he reached the bottom of the stairs and opened the door quite sure of that fact.
“Ah, Julianne!”
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Nick looked up from his phone at the vast brick manor before him. It seemed foreign to him, even though Jerry was his buddy and they’d been going to each other’s houses for years. Something told him this wasn’t Jerry’s house, because Jerry’s house was modest and average, while another part of him said that of course this was Jerry’s house. It was chock full of beautiful furniture and artwork, and it was on the Parade of Homes every year, along with the city’s historic registry.
But as he ascended the stairs to the front door and walked across the wraparound porch, Nick couldn’t shake the feeling that he was trespassing. He paused at the top of the steps and wondered if he should bother going further. Surely Jerry was fine. Nick was just a little puzzled by his texts not going through. He’d even tried calling Jerry - something he never did - and was told by an automated voice that the number was disconnected. So - wanting to get some fresh air anyway - he’d walked over to Jerry’s house. Or, apparently, Jerry’s mansion.
But curiosity, and the need to quell his own uneasy thoughts, got the better of him. He rang the doorbell.
A few moments passed, just long enough for Nick to assume no one was home. But as soon as he was gearing up to leave, he heard some motion from deep within the house, and a low voice call out something like “just a minute.” He couldn’t make out the exact words, but he could hear the footsteps. They sounded heavy.
Really heavy…
The door opened, and Nick jumped in surprise. Instead of his friend, he was looking at the biggest man he’d ever seen. The belly was the first thing he noticed - broad as the front door and round as a beach ball, with ab muscles visibly taut across its curved projection. It made him think, briefly, that the man was fat, but a few more seconds of appraisal showed he clearly wasn’t. He had shoulders like a set of football pads, with big traps bulging out from his thick neck, and his chest was composed of two hairy boulders each the size of Nick’s head. He was dressed like he was going to a wedding, in a beautiful white shirt that hid none of his size, its buttons so tight they threatened to shoot off like bullets. His cuffs had those fancy baubles that rich guys wore instead of buttons. He was in the process of unbuttoning the top half of his shirt when he answered the door, allowing extra space for his huge pecs to hoist out another inch. “Nicholas! What a pleasant surprise!” the man thundered, his voice knocking Nick back.
Nick looked up at the man’s face. He made wrinkles manly and a receded hairline handsome. He had the chiseled, rugged features of an actor who always played presidents and CEOs. “Um…sorry, I…” Nick squeaked out. “I was looking for Jerry?”
“What do you mean?” the muscleman asked. “And what are you wearing?! Goodness, Nicholas, what happened to putting your best foot forward.” He clicked his tongue as he ushered the younger male inside. “I just had the pleasure of catching up with an old acquaintance of mine, Julianne Vickers. She’s an admissions officer now and saw my name on your recommendation, so she personally came by to ask about you. Isn’t that marvelous? You’re certainly getting into her school, my boy, and many others. The only question is where you’ll go that excites you the most and nourishes your spirit!”
Nick stood trying to process all the words that were just thrown at him. “You met with…sorry, college? Wait, recommendation…you wrote - Rupert? RUPERT?”
“Goodness, my dear boy, what happened to your prodigious elocution?! You can’t be stammering like that on the Senate floor. I simply won’t allow it!”
Confusion froze Nick’s tongue. He stared helplessly at the hulking gentleman in front of him. “Sorry, I…don’t quite know where to begin,” he said. “I came over because the phone wasn’t working.”
“To look for someone aside from your Uncle Rupert?” Rupert put his hands in his pockets and stared directly at Nick. “You haven’t been partaking in any illicit activities, have you? You know how I abhor drugs.”
“No! No,” Nick said quickly with a wild shake of his head. He was proud that he could tell the truth. No weed yet today.
“Excellent. It wouldn’t be cause for me to rescind my recommendation, knowing you as I do, but it would give me cause for concern.”
“I’m sorry, Uncle…Rupert,” Nick said, his head swimming. Something was strange here.
“I’ll get you a glass of water and we can talk. Have a seat.” Rupert headed off to the kitchen, the walls vibrating as he walked.
Nick didn’t sit. He walked around the room and tried to familiarize - or re-familiarize - himself with the mysterious man he was calling his uncle. Of course, Rupert wasn’t really his uncle, not biologically. Just a really good friend of Nick’s father’s. Nick remembered being in this living room when he was really little, bouncing on Rupert’s knee and covering his ears when Rupert laughed. Everyone thought that was cute. When Nick was a little older, Rupert bought him his first bow tie before a school dance and taught him how to tie it. Uncle Rupert was always a fount of information, a gateway to the world exemplifying how many places there were to see and things there were to do. Uncle Rupert seemed to have seen and done all of them. He was such an interesting guy.
Nick turned around at the sound of Rupert’s footsteps and accepted the glass of water. “Thank you,” he said, taking a drink. “Were those for your meeting?” he asked, gesturing to Rupert’s cufflinks.
Rupert chuckled. “When have you ever seen me sans cufflinks?”
“Never, I guess,” Nick said. There was some hazy memory of a guy in Rupert’s place who was scruffy and goofy. But Uncle Rupert was certainly neither of those things.
“On that note,” Rupert purred, with a hint of disapproval in his voice, “when did you begin to favor casual dress?” He fingered the sleeve of Nick’s t-shirt as if it were a roofing shingle. Nick couldn’t help but notice the contrast between his sleeve and Rupert’s, which was glossy and beautiful, tight over the man’s huge arm.
“Well, I…I wasn’t really doing anything I needed to look nice for today…” Nick said, chugging the rest of his water.
“Neither was I, until it dawned on me I had a meeting with a college admissions officer. Thank goodness I was already attired formally. A gentleman always puts his best foot forward because he never knows what the day will bring. And you have always strived to be a gentleman, Nicholas! That is one of the qualities that has forever made me so proud of you, as I know it does your parents.”
“A gentleman? Me?” Nick had no idea what Rupert was talking about. Nobody was ever going to confuse him for a wealthy, successful, charming guy. “How?”
“You were born with every quality you need, you simply have to capitalize on them! Take your styling, for example - you look rumpled today. But if we just unroll your sleeves…” Rupert grabbed Nick’s arm and pulled a long sleeve with a buttoned cuff down to Nick’s wrist, smoothing out the wrinkles with his palm. He did the same with Nick’s other sleeve. Nick looked at his arms, confused, but had no time to think before Rupert exclaimed, “And good GOD, boy, your collar is folded inside your shirt!” He yanked on the top of Nick’s t-shirt so hard that Nick coughed, and suddenly Nick could feel a tall, scratchy shirt collar around his neck. “You can leave your tie loosened, however; it gives a young man of your standing a rakish, devil-may-care quality that is quite charming.”
“My whuh…” Nick looked down at his bright blue Oxford shirt, his eyes landing on the polo player embroidered on the left chest. He was wearing a repp stripe tie composed of bold green and gold, its perfect half windsor knot jauntily loosened just enough to show the undone button of his collar.
“Now tuck it in, goodness, I know you know better!”
Nick nodded obediently and unbuckled his belt, shoving the long tails of his button-down shirt into the top of his…khaki chinos? He didn’t own pants like this, did he…and why were they ironed, he didn’t even know how to USE an iron. But he tucked his shirt as tight as he could, using his brown leather braided belt to hold it in place.
“Much improved already,” Rupert nodded, placing a hand on Nick’s back. “Stand up straight, young man. Slouching doesn’t become you.” Nick straightened up as best he knew how, but Rupert wasn’t satisfied. “No no, goodness, haven’t you watched your father and I all these years? Stand like THIS.” He pulled back Nick’s shoulders with his hands, and Nick groaned in joyous pain - it felt like several years of spinal adjustments all at once - suddenly, he felt so very tall. His tie looked so long down his front, and his khakis seemed to take forever to touch his leather loafers.
“I’m…tall!” Nick exclaimed, holding his neck high.
“See! A whole new perspective when you carry yourself as a gentleman,” Rupert said proudly. “How tall are you now?”
“Six-foot-four and a half,” Nick said, and he couldn’t believe it as he said it. Was that right? That couldn’t be right…
“Perfect for water polo!”
“W-water polo?”
“And rugby!”
“Rugby?!” Nick never thought of himself as athletic. He was lazy. He’d only played rugby and water polo because his dad wanted him to. Only lifted all those weights to get his old man off his case. He hadn’t meant to grow a thick, powerful chest, broad shoulders, bulging biceps, and a big butt that made it hard to buy pants since he had a small waist. Uncle Rupert was always the muscle guy, not Nick, but all the athletics seemed to accelerate Nick’s puberty into lightspeed. He sprouted hair on his chest and started talking in a pleasant baritone voice, and his parents kept having to have new clothes made for him as his chest widened and his thighs swelled. “I guess I do play rugby,” he said, rubbing his throat when he heard his deep voice.
“You guess?! Didn’t you play it all through your undergrad? Not to mention your wrestling and football, of course. And, needless to say, your weightlifting.”
“Yes, I…my undergrad? Didn’t you just write me a recommendation for that…”
“It feels that way, doesn’t it? I can’t believe you’re getting your Masters already either.”
Nick’s muscles ballooned. His shirt buttons drew tight over his pecs as they projected out into a firm, bulging shelf. Thirty more pounds of pure brawn piled onto every spot but his waist, forcing him to widen his stance as his thighs pressed into each other and his bubble butt hurtled outward. His long neck thickened with muscle but maintained its elegance as the changes shot up to Nick’s face. He was already sprouting the stubble of a twentysomething man as his jaw shaped into chiseled perfection and his chin grew sharp, sprouting a dimple as it did. “I feel strange, Uncle Rupert…I think I look different.”
“Yes, the wait seems interminable for our self-perception to catch up to our physical form,” Rupert nodded, patting Nick’s chest and unwittingly cupping his hand as the thick slabs of muscle grew round like a bodybuilder’s musculature, allowing Nick’s tie to sink down between his two mighty pecs. “I myself can’t believe you’re the same little boy I once held! You’ve become such an impressive man, Nicholas.”
“A man,” Nick said, his mouth spreading into a perfect Colgate smile that would make a Kennedy envious, with Hollywood perfect teeth lined up behind his pillowy lips. He looked down at his thick erection throbbing in his trousers. “I guess I am a man now…can I tell you something, Uncle Rupe?”
“Of course!”
Nick’s cheekbones were so sharp it was a wonder he didn’t cut his fingers as he traced over them. “Sometimes I can’t control myself…I get so worked up, I just…” A small wet spot spread across his crotch. “Unnghh…I mean, my muscles! I love my MUSCLES!” Nick raised his arms as his cannonball biceps swelled large, their peaks stretching toward the ceiling. His cuffs burst open as his forearms enlarged, exposing thick veins pulsing in the rhythm of his cock.
“Yes, Nicholas…the wonder of being a man does it to us all,” Rupert whispered.
“Mmmmgrrrhhh, every guy wants to be me! It turns me on, I can’t help it-” Nick shot up another inch, his pecs plumping further out, muscles engorging themselves with testosterone as his stubble and eyebrows thickened. “I’m sorry Uncle Rupe, I-I think I’m gonna-”
“You never have to apologize.”
Nicholas was groping his big tits through his shirt as he shot his load into his chinos, his newfound ego basking in the glory of his transformation. He humped the air and groaned happily, his chestnut hair styling itself into a fluffy side part, a perfect crown for the wealthy prep he now was. Rupert stared in wonder at the youthful god before him. Young Nicholas, the most handsome young man he’d ever seen, rippling with muscle and dressed like a Ralph Lauren fantasy.
He stood still for several moments, his broad chest heaving up and down as he caught his breath. His crotch was miraculously dry, as if it hadn’t endured the weight of Nicholas’ orgasm. “My apologies, Uncle Rupert,” Nicholas said, his voice now sporting the same affected accent as his elder. “I don’t know what came over me.”
“It happens to us all, my dear boy. And let me let you in on a little secret…” He leaned in, allowing Nicholas to stare straight down his hairy cleavage. “...it never goes away.”
“I’d certainly hope not!” Nicholas smiled, buttoning his cuffs. “Thank you, for everything - the recommendation, and your hospitality…and most of all your guidance! I hope you know I cherish our relationship.”
“I do too, my dear boy, I do too.”
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