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Dramione Comment Fest: Assignments!

THE FEST IS HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you to all 81 readers and 34 authors who are participating, this is beyond my wildest imagination for this fest 😭 I am thrilled to announce that groups are organized and the fest is LIVE! All you lovely people have until March 15 to read your fics and leave comments. 

A few rule reminders before we begin:

You must leave at least one comment per AO3 chapter

Your comment must include “Comment left as part of the Dramione Comment Fest” 

Based on the emojis, you will know whether to leave your reviewer only WARM FUZZY comments (🥰) or have the option to leave CONCRIT comments (🤓).  A note on concrit (constructive criticism): Authors have requested concrit *only if you have something productive to share* and fic-bashing will NOT be tolerated. For tips on how to give helpful concrit, I recommend checking out this post or this one. And if you don’t have any feedback on their writing, a warm fuzzy will always do! 🥰

A Few More Notes on Fest Structure

Because I really don’t know how to be brief. Okay, so! As this is Edition 1 of the fest this is all a bit experimental. I divided all the readers into groups of 5-6 based on reading preferences. I then assigned each fic to two groups (so each fic will be read by 10-12 people). I’M NOT REALLY SURE WHAT HAPPENS NOW. I’d love for this event to be interactive & community-building-y so I welcome any and all ideas of how to make that happen. Some of my ideas:

Screenshot a comment you leave and post it on tumblr. You can tag the other readers in your group or the author to chat about the fic! Tag this account & I’ll reblog it. You can use my *professionally-made* header image if you like.

Reply to other DCF readers in the AO3 comments and have lovely conversations about the fic there.

I don’t want to admin a Discord server/Facebook group for this fest but do you???? Let me know!

????? Seriously any more ideas are welcome. Tag me & I’ll reblog so other fest-ers can see!

And without further ado....the groups!

Group 1

Readers (AO3 / tumblr): 

Elpiniki / @elpinikikappa

TakingFlight48 / @takingflight48

MellC / @foxfoots

houseofpercypotter / @houseofpercypotter

pandora_rose_xo / @pandora-rose-xo

ln4747 / @ln4747

Fics:

Fright or Flight by @nztina 🥰

Perfect Moment by @tanchimo 🥰

Crumbling Bricks by @caitlincheri 🤓

A Book Club Tinted Green by @ptwritesmore 🤓

The Two Sided Triangle by @canttouchthis87 🥰

Group 2

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

herelysiansoul / @herelysiansoul

NotAMuggleMiss / @notamugglemiss

BlossomsFlaming / @obliviateandremember

Cassiopeya / (no tumblr)

Cassiopeia_Red / (no tumblr)

Fics:

The Path Unexpected by @magicaltraveler3 🥰

Fight me, Ignite me by @vofastudum​ 🤓

The Soulmate Test by @thebemoon​ 🤓

Carpe Piscis by @tygermine​ 🤓

Catching the Seeker by @mydearestprongs 🥰

Group 3

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

earlgreyhot / @mydearestprongs

ButterfliesAndHurricanes / (no tumblr)

lonelyhuntress / @dreamerprincessa

Kiwi05622 / @kiwi05622

Ghostlyharmonypenguin / @ghostlyharmonypenguin​

lilhawkeye3 / @lilhawkeye3

Fics:

Blind Affairs of the Heart by @niffizzle​ 🤓

XXXXII, or: the answer to life, the universe, and everything by @thelastlynx​ 🤓

Temptation by @sweetestsorrows​ 🥰

The Thing About Overthinking by @amarillis39​ 🤓

On Nights Like These by @dreamsofdramione​ 🥰

Group 4

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

beautyberry / @beautyberrywrites

likefireinwater / @likefireinwater

dreamsofdramione / @dreamsofdramione

Athena_5 / (no tumblr)

cnova / @eccentricallyfabulous

LouisaCaraballo / (no tumblr)

Fics:

Poison & Wine by @xdarkofthemoon 🥰

Fallin’ (Adrenaline) by @leilahmoon 🤓

The Secret Admirer by @faeorabel 🥰

[wet] by @thesuperjane​ 🤓

Bound To You by besmirchedmaiden 🥰

Group 5

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

cupsofgreentea / @mialfoy17

FandomsAllDayEveryDay / (no tumblr)

Worldcrawler / @worldcrawlerhp

internct / @internct

niffizzle / @niffizzle

Cleopatra123 / @callamelli

Fics:

three questions by @houseofpercypotter 🥰

What Lies Beyond the Light by @her-co 🤓

I know, I know by nevertoosweets 🥰

Rake, Pile, Leap by @beautyberrywrites​ 🤓

Uncontrollable by ButterfliesAndHurricanes 🤓

Group 6

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

JLaLa / @jlalafics

ehlara / @ehlara

maia_scorpio / @maia-scorpio

Jadefrostflower / (no tumblr)

AmyPC / @amypc1

EllieBear / @elliebear75

Fics:

people fall in love in mysterious ways by @pandora-rose-xo 🥰

Glowing Embers by @o0sarena0o 🤓

Skin Deep by @eccentricallyfabulous​ 🤓

Droplets by @hslades​ 🤓

Late, but Just on Time by @takingflight48​ 🥰

Group 7

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

Caitlincheri28 / @caitlincheri

Curiouserniffler / (no tumblr)

VoltronGal9189 / (no tumblr)

Vofastudum / @vofastudum

PTwritesmore / @ptwritesmore

MrsKissyT / @the-og-mkt

Fics:

Healing Hands by arwrite 🥰

Moments by @notamugglemiss​ 🤓

Uncontrollable by ButterfliesAndHurricanes 🤓

I know, I know by nevertoosweets 🥰

Blind Affairs of the Heart by @niffizzle​ 🤓

Group 8

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

Breakfast / @whimsyandmayhem

Canttouchthis / @canttouchthis87

Maria81 / @mariakov81

princessofmerchants / @princessofmerchants

ThebeMoon / @thebemoon

millie1213 / (no tumblr)

Fics:

All the things by @elpinikikappa 🤓

Fright or Flight by @nztina 🥰

The Path Unexpected by @magicaltraveler3 🥰

Fight me, Ignite me by @vofastudum​🤓

XXXXII, or: the answer to life, the universe, and everything by @thelastlynx​ 🤓

Group 9

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

fantasizewithme_0719 / @all-consuming

feelingofthesea / @feelingofthesea

thelastlynx / @thelastlynx

Estesue / (no tumblr)

jukiajukia / (no tumblr)

bri_h / @sheblooms-bri

Fics:

Perfect Moment by @tanchimo 🥰

people fall in love in mysterious ways by @pandora-rose-xo 🥰

The Soulmate Test by @thebemoon​🤓

Temptation by @sweetestsorrows 🥰

The Thing About Overthinking by @amarillis39​ 🤓

Group 10

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

DarkoftheMoon / @xdarkofthemoon

inwildernessandsea / @inwildernessandsea

thefifthmaurader / @thefifthmaurader

FaeOrabel / @faeorabel

TJ_Dubs / @teacher-with-bad-handwriting

DayaneStyles / (no tumblr)

Fics:

Crumbling Bricks by @caitlincheri 🤓

A Book Club Tinted Green by @ptwritesmore 🤓

Catching the Seeker by @mydearestprongs 🥰

Droplets by @hslades​ 🤓

Bound To You by besmirchedmaiden 🥰

Group 11

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

peaceisalwaysbeautiful / @peaceisalwaysbeautiful 

Dadosix / @dadosix 

reylomama87 / (no tumblr)

tanchimo / @tanchimo

Wanderiing_wonder / @wanderingwonderuniverse 

Lucysway22 / @goldengirl22 

Fics:

The Two Sided Triangle by @canttouchthis87 🥰

Poison & Wine by @xdarkofthemoon 🥰

Carpe Piscis by @tygermine​🤓

The Secret Admirer by @faeorabel 🥰

Rake, Pile, Leap by @beautyberrywrites​ 🤓

Group 12

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

Realjane / @thesuperjane

AlmondMilkTeaDoubleBoba / (no tumblr)

chAoticgood18 / (no tumblr)

ARPrexy / @hogwartstrolleydolly  

Amarillis39 / @amarillis39

HouseElfPsychiatrist / @ambystomatidchanterelle

Fics:

Fallin’ (Adrenaline) by @leilahmoon 🤓

All the things by @elpinikikappa​ 🤓

What Lies Beyond the Light by @her-co 🤓

On Nights Like These by @dreamsofdramione 🥰

Late, but Just on Time by @takingflight48 🥰

Group 13

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

Anilcadz91 / @anilcadz91 

Shinyteef / @monaiargancoconutsoy

blueeyedsue / @blueeyedsue

bethelson / @bethelson

MeganM1977 / (no tumblr)

Fics:

Glowing Embers by @o0sarena0o 🤓

Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3​ 🤓

three questions by @houseofpercypotter 🥰

[wet] by @thesuperjane​ 🤓

Group 14

Readers (AO3 / tumblr):

Smozark / @smozark

SlytherinHermione / @her-co

Ofkingsandqueens / (no tumblr)

whimsymanaged / @whimsymanaged

nevertoosweets / (no tumblr)

ash_robles / @ash-robles

Fics:

Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3​ 🤓

Healing Hands by arwrite 🥰

Moments by @notamugglemiss​ 🤓

Skin Deep by @eccentricallyfabulous​ 🤓

WHEW THERE WE GO. That was a lot. Have fun!!! <3

Questions, comments, concerns, or I messed up a link? DM me or email dramionecommentfest AT gmail DOT com

[ptwritesmore]

The Anatomy of a AO3 Comment + Cheat Sheet

Want to tell an author that you like their work, but stuck on what to say? Maybe this can help!

Before we jump in, any comment from a “I loved this” to a keysmash will make an author’s day. There is no obligation to leave a comment at all, but know that whatever nice thing you say will carry weight with an fic author. You do not have to follow any format. 

I’m putting this together because people have said they get stuck on what to say when they want to leave a positive comment on a fic. So feel free to consult this when you’re not sure what to say. 

Anatomy

The anatomy of a meaty comment can be broken down into a few building blocks:

Telling the author you liked the fic 

Complimenting an aspect of the story 

Pulling a line from the story and talking about it 

Talking about how the story made you feel 

Ending line 

So an example could be:

I wish I could leave another kudos on this! I especially liked your characterization of Ginny - she’s spunky and hilarious, and her comments about Hermione’s love life cracked me up. This line in particular made me actually snort out loud: “insert line you liked here.” This one shot was so fluffy, it’s going to make me smile for this of the day. Thanks for writing and sharing with us! 

Cheat Sheet 

Going a step further, here are some examples of things that fit within each building block:

Tell them you liked it 

This kicks off the comment - it could end here and that would be fine!

I wish I could leave another kudos 

This was lovely! 

OMG this was so good!!!

I wish I could read this story again for the first time

This was so well done

Hi, I love this! 

From the example above: “I wish I could leave another kudos on this!”

Compliment an aspect of the story 

Adding this shows what you liked the best. This essentially boils down to: “I really like how you did [x thing].” [X thing] could be any of the following:

Characterization of a character: [x character] was so on point, reading your [x character] was basically like reading the canon character you captured them so well, each character was so well-defined, you built out [x character] and gave them so much more depth, [x character] was hilarious/sweet/terrifying

Character development: I enjoyed [x character’s] journey, I love how [x character] grew in [y] way, I never imagined how [x character] would react in [y] situation before 

Pacing of the story: this was so quick and engaging, I loved the pacing here, this slower pace helped underline the emotional turmoil [x character] was going through 

Description of a place/scene: you described [x location] so well that it was basically like being there, your descriptions are like poetry, I appreciate the way you set up a scene, I could see [x location] perfectly in my mind’s eye

Nonverbal cues that set the scene: the little things you add to help highlight the emotions like [x character] biting their lip when they are nervous really build the story, I enjoyed the nervous ticks you gave [x character], the details of their first kiss showcased the emotion they both poured into it 

Dialogue between characters: the dialogue was captivating/emotional/real/raw, I love the banter between these two characters, I thought [x character] had the best lines, the interactions were perfect  

Small details that pulled the story together: I appreciate how you wove [x] into the story, the little clues in the background were a great hint for the reveal

Writing quality: this was so well written, the writing was gorgeous/haunting/poetic, this was executed perfectly 

From the example above: “I especially liked your characterization of Ginny - she’s spunky and hilarious, and her comments about Hermione’s love life cracked me up.”

Pull a line from the story and talk about it 

By pulling something specific you can dissect further and showcase your own reaction to the material. You just copy a favorite/funny/meaningful line and explain why you liked it or how it made you feel. You can do this with multiple lines if you’d like, don’t be afraid to mix in simple reactions “omg” with more in-depth examples. Here are some examples:

This line made me laugh/smile/cry/cringe/squeal/scream/snort/want to vomit

I nearly jumped out of my seat/cried/jumped for joy when I read this line

Her line here was especially powerful given the extra backstory you gave her

I could totally see [x character] a saying that

You nailed his voice

The comedic timing of this line was perfect

From the example above: “This line in particular made me actually snort out loud: ‘insert line you liked here.’” 

Talk about how the story made you feel 

This fic melted my heart 

I’m still crying, that was so haunting 

I feel like I need to go take a cold shower now 

The angst here killed me 

This fluffy fic made my day better 

From the example above: “This one shot was so fluffy, it’s going to make me smile for this of the day.”

Ending line 

If you’re not sure how to wrap up, try:

Thanks for writing this!

I wish there was more, this was delightful

What a refreshing take, thanks for sharing with us!

Such a great read, I loved it!

Now I want to read more 

I love this fic!!!

This was beautiful <3

Going to go read more of your work now, bye! (only use this if you plan to)

Bookmarking to read again! (only use this if you plan to) 

From the example above: “Thanks for writing and sharing with us!” 

Wrap Up 

You don’t have to use all of these at once, of course. Just take whatever building blocks work for you and build a comment from there. 

And if you want to level up, feel free to talk about how this touched you personally. One of the nicest comments I ever got was how a fic of mine helped them while they were struggling during COVID and that made themselves tea and sat down to enjoy each update. They didn’t need to tell me that, but it made me cry that something I wrote provided that kind of moment for someone. 

Hope this helps!

[dramionecommentfest]

THAT'S A WRAP!

Thanks to everyone who participated in the first-ever Dramione Comment Fest! We appreciate all of the readers and writers who spent time to be a part of this event and look forward to future fests🥰🥰🥰🥰

[dramionecommentfest]

DCF is almost over! 😭

This kitten is hiding from the truth, but DCF ends this Monday, March 15. So if you need some weekend plans, hit up the list of stories, break out your commenter hat, and leave some comments for our amazing authors!

[bethelson]

I got to participate in the @dramionecommentfest this last month, and let me tell you it was a challenge trying to find time to get. these. stories. read. Between starting a new job, and the snowmageddon, and just chasing around a toddler my time was divided and taken. But I’m so glad I finally made time to read them, because lovely they are!

Instead of sharing my comments let me just bring attention to the stories and writers!

[wet] by @thesuperjane

A little oneshot that takes place deep below ground as our duo search for a lost shrine. Beautiful words and beautiful depictions of our lovebirds. And there’s a lot of moments leaving us wanting more 😉

three questions by @houseofpercypotter

A sweet little thing that keeps you snickering the whole read all about the three questions you shouldn’t typically ask someone outright. Also a realistic and brazen version of Draco.

Glowing Embers by @o0sarena0o

A ritual/pureblood culture oneshot that truly feels like you’re reading something much bigger. You get a glimpse of Samhain through the eyes of Hermione and her complete oblivion at the hints Draco has been dropping.

Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3

A set of drabbles and oneshots based on prompts! I’ve only read the first one so far, but was a lovely read nonetheless. A nice, crisp style of writing, so come see what’s been hidden in this gem.

So please go give these a read and a kudo when you have the chance!

[dramionecommentfest]

the real MVP right here -- new job! snowmaggedon! chasing a toddler! and STILL managing to participate the DCF. you're the best, @bethelson 🥰

[beautyberrywrites]

I want to thank reylomama87 (no tumblr), @internct and @peaceisalwaysbeautiful for leaving so very detailed comments in the @dramionecommentfest 💛💛💛

Honestly, they've helped me very much and it made me so happy you took the time to give me your opinions 💕

[dramionecommentfest]

🥰🥰🥰🥰

[her-co]

Finished reading all of my assigned stories for @dramionecommentfest

This one was such a great read - it included tattoo artist cool girl Hermione with her own tattoos, tattooed redeemed!Draco with a praise kink, oh and did I mention chemistry in the tattoo chair? 😏💚

It inspired this little manip!

Highly recommend 5/5 💚💚💚💚💚!!

Read it!! Skin Deep by cnova @eccentricallyfabulous

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

[dramionecommentfest]

AHHH YOU MAKE THE BEST POSTS! What a lovely manip!!!! <3

[dramionecommentfest]

DCF Halfway Point: Comments due March 15

Hello everyone!

We are at the HALFWAY point of the Dramione Comment Fest -- two weeks down, two to go. Thank you to the many of you who read with such enthusiasm at the beginning of the fest. If you haven't started yet, no problem! There's plenty of time. If you have read all your assigned stories, well, there's a long list of fics somewhere and I know the authors would be thrilled for even more comments.

Check out the assignments and keep scrolling to see some of the fun posts that people have shared about their participation in the fest. I've had so much fun reblogging your comments and enthusiasm so please keep 'em coming!

Thank you all for participating and happy commenting! <3

[lizardsottersholdinghands]

Just left comments for @dramionecommentfest on Crumbling Bricks by @caitlincheri! This fic is POETRY, with such gorgeous lines. I quoted so many of them that a screenshot of my comment would basically spoiler the whole fic 😂 Go read, go read! 

[whimsyhuh]

The second fic I read for @dramionecommentfest was Catch Me Always by @lilhawkeye3.

This fic was a series of one shots in non-chronological order that formed a really beautiful story! Some moments include Draco and Hermione post-Hogwarts, before the final battle, in 6th year after Dumbledore’s death, Draco in the aftermath of Hermione’s torture at his home, and more. @lilhawkeye3 did a wonderful job of weaving the moments together with tenderness, laughter, angst, and fluff.

I loved reading everyone else’s comments, too! ☺️ Give this fic a read!

[dramionecommentfest]

love this thoughtful commentary on what sounds like a really interesting fic! 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 

[o0sarena0o]

Ok but stream of consciousness comments are my new jam now! AmyPC left me such a blessing with this review on Glowing Embers, I’m still smiling from ear to ear 😁💚😁. It’s just so full of joy! I also appreciate your concrit about what was unclear to you! It’s a great help for my future stories. Thank you so much for making my day! 🥰

I’m so happy that @dramionecommentfest assigned so many wonderful people to my little story. I can’t stop repeating that I enjoy this fest it so much 💚💚💚!

[dramionecommentfest]

omgggg @amypc1 look at this NOVEL of a beautiful comment  😍 😍 😍 comment GOALS

[bethelson]

Just wanted to let those know who have stories assigned to me for the @dramionecommentfest that if you have not yet seen comments from me, it’s because I am Texan, and live in Texas, and if you weren’t aware we kind of just went through a mini apocalypse this past week that resulted in the loss of power in our state for a few days.

I personally just got internet and steady phone service back yesterday, so I can get to reading and leaving you lovelies some kind words soon, but just know that if I get to your story late, it is because I’m putting the safety of my family first for the time being since there’s still a lot happening here. I know there’s still plenty of time left before comments are due, but I honestly just don’t know what to expect anymore after the week we just had. I’ve seen some stuff y’all 😅

So thank you for your patience, and I can’t wait to get into your stories to leave you oodles of love 💜

[dramionecommentfest]

oh gosh dear TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF. dramione comment fest can come later when you are safe and well. crossing my fingers all is well soon <3 

[foxfoots]

Sending some love and a shoutout to my "Housemate" @houseofpercypotter for three questions. This fic really lightened my stressful week. What did I find funniest? You'll just have to read the story and comments if inquiring minds want to know. When you leave your own reply tell us your fave funny zinger. There are so many good ones. Having a blast with the @dramionecommentfest.

[lizardsottersholdinghands]

ooooh I love the teaser you’re leaving us with  👀 👀 👀 👀 👀 👀

[dramionecommentfest]

omg reblogged with the wrong account again 🙈

[her-co]

Third story read for

Dramione Comment Fest 💚

@dramionecommentfest

Moments by @notamugglemiss

This story gives us a snippet of real life moments for parents!Dramione, that many often can relate to!! 💚

The author has an amazing ability to paint a big picture within a short story!!

Recommend 5/5 💚💚💚💚💚!!

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

[dramionecommentfest]

I LOVE that you’re posting every story you read 💗 💗 💗 and your reviews are so lovely. keep ‘em coming!

[vofastudum]

@dramionecommentfest is truely a gem! 

I’ve been working on the format of my stories for YEARS! And especially  this comment from @beautyberrywrites makes my heart soar! This tells me I’ve succeeded (at least at some level) to do what I was aiming for: To tell a little and still so much, to make the reader FEEL the story, and to create an unique format I can be known for as a writer. 

A huge thank you for organizing this fest! And also for everyone who paricipated! 

❤❤❤❤

[dramionecommentfest]

@vofastudum ‘s response to @beautyberrywrites ‘s comment is making me cry. vofastudum, congrats on honing your writing and making your writing goals come true  💗 💗 💗 💗

[o0sarena0o]

It was such a pleasure to get the email notification of Anilcadz91’s amazing review! (again, I’m not sure if you’re on tumblr, but I need to express all the warm and fuzzy feelings).They took part in the comment fest organised by @dramionecommentfest, and Glowing Embers was one of the lucky stories they got assigned to. Thank you so much for your encouraging words!🥰💚

[dramionecommentfest]

🥰 🥰 🥰warm fuzzies forever!!! 🥰 🥰 🥰

[tanchimo-moved]

participating in the @dramionecommentfest has been such an uplifting experience as a writer 😭 I haven’t responded to comments yet but please know that I have read them all like a dozen times and I am tearing up at how sweet everyone has been!!!!

[dramionecommentfest]

😭 🥰 😭 🥰 😭 🥰 😭 🥰 you deserve it all!!!!