This Was the edit after importing the shots we got during the reshoots. I also changed some timings to match better with the edit like where the cards were being laid down I cut to Olives face in between to 1 - break up that schene a bit more as I wasn't happy with it and it was too repetitive and 2 - to push the narrative that it’s about him and how important these cards are to him personally.
I also added in a speed ramp shot, as suggested, after speaking to Geraint. I really like the look of this shot and am planning to add a few more like it throughout the edit.
I’m not happy with the ending as it currently stands because it doesn't fit with the narrative. In my interpretation of this story, he has just lost everything but the shot is kind of emotionless. I’m going to change the last shot to be of him sitting in the dark the red lights are gone and only the spotlight on. I’ve decided to use this shot because it makes him look small and broken. We filmed this shot without any red light because the danger was now gone he’d lost everything and had nothing left to lose. We wanted to make him look small so moved the camera back further and we got more of the black background in to convey hopelessness.