A short story by BCLL (2015-46079)
I. Exposition
A. Jane, a 26 year-old woman, is the only daughter of Tomas and Lerma and they live in a humble house in Pasig.
B. Jane works at a lifestyle parlor in Makati at which she is hailed and awarded as one of the best employees the establishment has ever had.
1. She is very good at her work that she receives many requests of assistance from regulars.
2. She is so good that she has gained an admirer who has been persistently pursuing her: Robert James.
C. Robert James gains, after a long time, the trust of Jane that they have grown as confidantes, both professionally and personally.
II. Rising Action
A. Jane’s parents receive a letter from the mail at the beginning of September.
B. Jane discovers that she is adopted from an overheard discussion between her parents, Tomas and Lerma.
C. Jane seeks Rob’s counsel as he is, coincidentally, a lawyer and asks him to help her uncover the truth about her parents.
III. Climax
A. As he investigates, Rob finds out that his father, Dante James, is the reason for Jane to be separated from her biological parents.
B. After much thinking, Rob decides to tell Jane everything he found out about her parents and his father even though he knows what it will do to their friendship.
IV. Falling Action
A. Jane receives the inheritance that her biological parents had left her after their death.
B. Jane decides to go back to her parents and talk things through.
C. Jane and Rob remain very good friends.
V. Resolution
Because Rob helped her uncover the truth and was very honest with her about everything, he and Jane are still very good friends. Jane keeps him close as he had changed her life for the better.
It was a quarter past six in this Thursday morning of July as Jane knocks on the door of her parents’ room.
“Ma, I’m heading out now. Jessica called earlier and told me I needed to be at the shop by 7 a.m. because Mr. James scheduled an urgent appointment and, as usual, asked for me. I have to go now if I don’t want to be late. There’s breakfast on the table. Please eat with papa. He’s out in the garage, washing the car. Again.”
“Okay, take care of yourself, sweetheart.”
Jane passed by her father before she left the house.
“Bye pa. See you later. There’s food on the table, ok?”
Jane is a 26-year-old woman who works at one of the beauty salons in Makati. She lives with her parents, Tomas and Lerma, and older sister Jessica. She has a knack in being a manicurist and masseuse, but her ultimate dream is to enroll at a fashion design school. She is working tirelessly to earn enough for her education.
As Jane got to the end of her street where she always hails a tricycle to ride to work, she heard her name being called out somewhere nearby. As she found the source of the shouting, she saw Mr. Robert James, or Sir Rob as he is called at the salon, waving at her from his parked car a couple of houses down from where she was standing. It looked like Sir Rob had been waiting for her to come by.
“Good morning, Jane! How are you? Are you on the way to work?”
“Good morning, too, sir. Uh…yes I am.”
“Perfect! I’m going there now, too. C’mon, hop in!”
“Oh, sir, that won’t be necessary. I can go on my own. I’ll just meet you there.” And Jane caught the next vacant tricycle, leaving Sir Robert, surprisingly, smiling as he watched Jane ride off.
Once in the salon, she started to prepare for today’s business, starting with Sir Rob’s appointment. Usually, he asks for a mani-pedi cleaning and, on special occasions, a foot and body massage. What Jane did not understand was why he always asked for her when there were more experienced and talented employees in the salon.
Today went by as a blur after Sir Rob’s appointment. She had two more customers after before she went for a break. While she ate, she could hear the usual snipes of Jessica, her boss and sister, to her friends. Tomas and Lerma helped Jessica put up her own business. When the business started, it was only a two-roomed unit, but, now, it has expanded to a loft-type place, where more customers and services could be accommodated. Despite her loathe against Jane, Jessica was forbidden by their parents to fire her sister because, they said, they had to be a team. No power against her parents’ bequest, her hatred comes in all forms except her utmost desire of expulsion.
Throughout the entire months of July to August, Robert would schedule appointments with Jane just to see her. At first, it was once a week. Now, he has come by thrice a week since. He means no harm, he says, but Jane cannot help but feel uncomfortable. Only when September rolled in did something change between them.
Two weeks into the month of September on a Wednesday morning, Jane woke up because of frantic voices in the kitchen. Jane got up from the bed to investigate. Jane heard her parents discussing about a letter they received in the mail earlier that month. She heard them say that it was time to open the letter. By their voices, Jane could tell that the piece of envelope they were holding was making them nervous, at the same time, reassured. By the time her father had finished reading the letter aloud, Jane did not realize heavy tears were falling from her eyes. It was because she found out that Tomas and Lerma were not her biological parents, that she was adopted, that she was living a life of lies.
It seemed that Jane had no other choice, but to talk to what seems like her only friend at the moment: Robert. His appointments turned lunch reservations turned walks around the business park of Makati. During these sessions, Jane talked about what she had overheard from her parents, her feelings, and her options. As it turned out, Robert is a licensed lawyer and offered his counsel and assistance over Jane’s case. He felt compelled to help her because they have grown a lot closer over the past few months and adopted a different kind of care for her.
So, he set out to investigate on her case. As he did, he immediately found trails and little pieces of the puzzle. As it turned out, Jane’s case was pretty famous for an issue of adoption. While he did this, Jane confronted her parents.
On the night of September 16, Jane found her parents in the kitchen sitting with Jessica. They were discussing future plans for the beauty salon.
“Err…hi. Jess, can I talk to mom and dad for a second, please?”
“Go away, Jane. Can’t you see we’re discussing something important here?”
“Jess, please. Mom, dad? Can I talk to you for a second?”, Jane says with more conviction, tears streaming her eyes. This her parents saw and asked Jess to leave for a while. Jessica looked pointedly at Jane as if she was the worst thing that happened to her.
“Jane, honey, what is it? Is something wrong?”, her dad asked.
By this time, tears were definitely rolling down Jane’s cheeks. “I don’t know how to tell you this…”
“It’s okay, honey. Is this about work? Or is it about school? Come, sit here. That’s what we were talking to Jess about. We were discussing your enrollment next semester at the fashion school you’ve been dreaming about!”
“Mom, dad. I heard you talking in here the earlier this week. Yo-you were holding a-a-a letter in your hands. Something that happened 24 years ago.”
Tomas and Lerma were speechless. They did not know what to do. Or say.
“When were you planning to tell me? Never? If you didn’t want me to know at all, why didn’t you wait ‘til everyone was out of the house? HOW COME YOU DIDN’T TELL ME? Mom, dad, please. Just tell me the truth, no excuses. No more lies!!”
“Honey, calm down please”, Tomas said. “Here, have a glass of water. We’ll tell you everything. Why don’t we start from the very beginning, hmm?”
And they did. Jane was the daughter of the late Edgar and Malou Reyes, who were both lawyers during their time. Tomas and Lerma were a part of their big household help in their house in Antipolo as driver and cook, respectively. Jane’s birth was a surprise to the whole household as Edgar and Malou were already in their 40s when they had her. Everyone adored Jane because she brought so much laughter and joy into the house.
When Jane was two years old, little did she and the household help know that Edgar and Malou was involved at a very controversial lawsuit at the firm they worked but Tomas and Lerma could not recall specifically which. The controversy was so toxic to the point of murder threats here and there that Edgar and Malou decided that it was best for Jane to be sent away. They, then, requested Tomas and Lerma to take her into their custody as it was no longer safe for all of them. At this time, Tomas and Lerma had a three year-old little girl. Yes, it was Jessica. So, they fled Antipolo and returned to their house in Pasig. Until now, no mention of Edgar and Malou was dropped ever again. Unfortunately, the old couple died at a car crash and Tomas and Lerma never knew what had happened with their lawsuit, whether they had won or lost.
After a few moments of silence, Jane cautiously asked, “So, what was that letter?”. Tomas and Lerma looked at each other.
“Honey, it came from the lawyer who handled the case of your parents.”
The next day, Jane and Robert was scheduled to meet over lunch. Rob was very rattled at this point from the things he found out in his investigation and was not too thrilled to see Jane. Rob saw Jane from the window of the restaurant they were to meet with. He looked at her with so much sadness and weight that he did not realize Jane was waving at him with her phone at her ear. Apparently, she was trying to reach his cellphone as he was not responding physically. Rob, to Jane’s amusement, picked up the phone.
“Rob, what are you doing inside? Come to the aircon!” Jane said with lightness. But Rob, could see right through her: pale face, swollen eyes with dark circles under, puffy cheeks.
As they ate, Jane could see that Rob was nervous. “Spit it out, Rob. Is there something you want to tell me?”
Rob looked her in the eyes and said, “I’m sorry. I’m so, so sorry, Jane. If it weren’t for me, you’d still be with your parents. If it weren’t for me…”
Jane looked at him with confusion. As it turned out, her biological parents worked at the firm Rob’s father owned, Dante Firms. Dante James was a powerful man. Until now. That is where Rob works.
“No, it can’t be. I-I have to go. I’m sorry.” And Jane rushed out of the restaurant, leaving Rob with his hands covering his face. Jane and Rob did not talk for a few weeks. Not until Rob marched into the salon one November afternoon because Jane was not picking up her phone or acknowledging his emails.
“Jane. I don’t care if you don’t want to talk, let alone see. But I found the lawyer from my father’s firm who was at the opposition from your parents. I’ve got big news.”
It turned out that her parents were innocent and that Dante James tampered with some evidences because he did not like losing. Rob said that Edgar and Malou were close to winning, but Dante James acted faster and used lots of money to win no matter what.
“So, what do you think the letter my parents received contained?”, Jane asked.
“I don’t know. Do you want to find out?”
And Rob drove Jane back to her house where they found Tomas and Lerma sitting at the porch.
“Mom, dad. Can I read the letter?”
As promised, the letter read that Edgar and Malou were innocent and it has been 12 years ago today. There was also a will with inheritance that was left in the care of their lawyer. The lawyer wrote that it had taken a long time to find Jane as they could not track Tomas and Lerma anywhere.
“Honey, we’re sorry. We were afraid that if you found out about all these things, you’d leave us! We can’t imagine a life without you, sweetheart. Please forgive us.”
“Rob, how do we go from here?”
Rob helped Jane track the lawyer who sent the letter down. They retrieved all her inheritance, including the house in Antipolo. To show gratitude and ask for forgiveness, Jane brought her entire family to come live in her house in Antipolo. As for Rob, well, they still continue seeing each other as Jane is very thankful for his help, because without him, she would not have been able to do the right things.