Divine

i love writing and im putting those skills to use

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💗Masterlist💗

Needs

Chapter 1 Chapter 2

Chapter 3 Chapter 4

Chapter 5 Chapter 6

Chapter 7

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Tonight👀👀👀💗

hehe about that

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Help to describe someone flirting as a fellow writer.

1. The eyes) lingering eye contact, or quickly looking away and back again, or describing them tracking each others mouth

2. Through touch) brief “accidental” touches, a hand brushing a shoulder, lingering touch while handing an object, nudging shoulder while walking.

3. Proximity) stepping just a lil to close into their bubble or personal space, leaning in close to whisper something that could’ve been said out loud.

4.Teasing/banter) mocking each other playfully, stumbling over words,blushing, fighting with sleeve,getting a small compliment then panicking.

5.) using internal monologue

Ik this is not the best but anything to help u 🫶

bro god bless you this amazing help

xoxo

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IS THE SUN BOTHERING YOU PRINCESS?

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Guys help how do i describe someone flirting 😔

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what time r u releasing chapter 7? I can’t waittt

i think tmr. im not 100% with this chapter yet

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I would wife u up bro wtf

thank yewww im very flattered lol

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Baby your so good

awwww thank yewww

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Why are you not a fan?? What’s wrong with it?

From the snippets I’ve read today I think you’re doin pretty good.

im not sure just feel like its a little boring bc its just fluff before all hell kind of breaks loose and its not the amount of words I want it to be. But I wrote what I already planned for im just a bit disappointed with it and I want to make it a little better description wise

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can l please ask when you will be posting chapter 7

i think in a few hours or tmr. it all depends on my editing im not really a fan of this chapter right now

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Needs snippet p.2

Paige looked between her and the dress with a blank stare.

“Y’know there are way better stores around here than this. Plus you've been walking around for what, ten minutes. You don't want to look a little longer?”

Azzi shook her head as she searched for her size, smiling even brighter once she picked the white version off of the rack. 

“You do know I'm a millionaire right? We could get something more expensive.” Paige said, rubbing the back of her neck.

“Just because Abercrombie and Fitch isn't your ideal place to buy clothes doesn't mean it isn't mine. And clothes don't have to be expensive in order to be good quality. I mean look at balenciaga.”

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Today you say😏😏😏

wait and see wait and see

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Love ya ty for the snippet

love you more, youre welcome

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How many more chapters u thinking

im not sure but its not close to ending

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Needs snippet

“I'm sorry. I was an asshole. And you have quite honestly been nothing but patient.”

Azzi said nothing, absentmindedly tracing circles on the blonde's skin.

“I'll be as patient as you are. This whole thing goes both ways. The least I could do is try to make it comfortable for the both of us.” Paige had wiped her tears, turning to face Azzi.

Their eyes collided, a truce being put into place although none of them spoke.

Azzi nodded her head. Her face gave nothing away but Paige could see the way her eyes softened slightly.

Paige had never been vulnerable. She had these panic attacks for as long as she could remember but she never did anything about it. The way she was raised didn't allow it to slow her down in training or just being ready at all times. But Azzi made it so easy. It came as a shock at first but in some way Azzi was able to calm her heart without knowing.

Paige smiled shyly realizing she had maintained eye contact but Azzi never looked away once.

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Hey babes how’s chap 7 coming along💗

hey babes im editing it today so probably tmr or even maybe today. Ill give yall two snippets

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ts had me cryingggg