we’re more ghosts than people

ace jack, 32, he/him. trans cowboy. oc enthusiast. dm me or leave your number on the men’s room at any leather bar and it’ll get to me in 24 hours

[tiktoks-i-enjoyed]

[unheardoracle]

Your dialogue is stiff because everyone is being too honest

Great dialogue can come from radical emotional honesty. But in most real conversations, people

dodge questions

answer indirectly

lie (badly)

change the subject

crack jokes to avoid serious answers

lie (convincingly)

say half of what they mean

tell the truth but get so anxious/angry/defensive others now think they're lying

If your dialogue feels unnatural, it might be because everyone is saying exactly what they think, or articulating their thoughts too well. Try letting characters hide things instead.

Subtext is where tension lives.

[hortensius-deactivated20240909]

the novelty of having pets really does never wear off i’ve had my cat for ten years and i still look at him strolling around like can you believe this. a cat. is everyone seeing this. he’s alive he has bones and all. unbelievable

[3000s]

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reblog to win one of that

[memorycycle]

(to the tune of working on the railroad) iiive been working on the railrooad

[kosmogrl]

[qalbtalk-deactivated20231105]

“…use things to have good days.”

[narcissistcookbook]

the loading screen trying to convince me to use even one of my 3000 consumables

[just-sans-things]

my cherios spelled out my exact address this morning but like what the gudge ever i gobbled those honey nut freaks up and licked the bowl too

[daciancatamite]

[hoaxghost]

holding on by a god damn thread

[briannyssey]

Oh easy mistake. Yearning actually rises from the floor and longing hangs from the ceiling

[briannyssey]

🥺🥺

[zaynsgrammys]

[crazy-brazilian]

[dogpuppy]

[etcstims]

little snakes sips | source

[peachsodah]

Remember to Vote for Senshi!!

some cowboy butt for todays senshi :)

[pandaphox]

Just saying

[havinganormalone]

Fanfiction is insane. You can write porn so good you make friends.