Oh look a crappy background. I finished this last night but was too tired to upload.
Info So far;
Name; ClĂ©mant Augury Speceis; Reptillian-Dragon humanoid Sex; male Age; 22 Height; 5â 6â ( 167.64 cm ) Weight; 125 lbs (  55.7 ) Appearence; Dark Brown hair, deep red-brown horns and tail, slight scales on some parts of body, pointed ears, simple clothes with simple colors. Personality; Somewhat shy or timid, insecure about his race, prone to lonliness, Large amounts of courage and power when provoked. Very caring towards others less fortunate than he. Pretty ambitious but due to the incident where he was unable to become a knight heâs lost faith in his most if not all his abilities. Small Bio; Aspired to become a knight but was turned away after all his training due to his reptillian race. He knows how to handle a battle axe and bow well. He is also able to breath fire for a small amount of time. Currently, since he canât become a Knight, he takes up doing odd jobs around his village. Family; No known family
First impression: Love this OC right off the bat, there are never enough cute bashful types.
Analysis:
The FC pictures really good, it gives a complete look at how the described appearance comes together and I adore the art style.Â
The personality feels three dimensional and interesting, and sets him up well for conflict and character evolution over time.
I would suggest he not begin with a large store of latent courage, rather have it evolve to be a larger part of his personality over time. I don't know if that would be the creators intent, and it doesn't hurt the character to already be at that state, it just strikes be as an interesting evolution the character could go through over time.Â
Expanding the bio to explain how the he reacts to the conflict between races, beyond how it affects his aspirations would be interesting. Also, if he has no known family, how does that affect him as a hybrid? I feel like this is a really interesting start to a history, but would benefit from some expansion.Â
Additional notes:Â I just want to squeeze this cute baby. Great work!
