Freewriting Exercise/Application
Page 40-41 (April 14, 2018)
Exercise
The Advantages of Commuting
Tone: Informal
Purpose: To inform, To express
Commuting to school has some advantages, most notably financial benefits. First benefit falls under housing. A dorm can cost fortunes without the proper furnishing, plus it includes one small and uncomfortable bed. You might wanna add the idea of sharing a room with a stranger, who might as well be a psychopath in the making. Second benefit is the advantage in food. Eating out can be very costly especially if youâre surrounded by temptations, by which it means Fast food! Who wouldnât want to eat junk foods? Even though it is an unhealthy choice of diet, which can make you sick. And nothing beats a home cooked meal made mom! Plus they knew all your faves! Third is the laundry. You can save a bunch if you regularly go home. Come to think of the detergents, fabric conditioner and bleach that you have to buy. And it is an inconvenience to drag all your clothes, seperate them from whites to nonwhites, and actually do the laundry when you can just relax and let your family do the work. It is physically challenging, okay, I just seriously donât want to do the laundry, I hate it.
Lastly, commuting may tire you off or drain all your energy but still you will spend the night with your family, which by far lessens your stress as a student because at the end of the day, you have your family as a support for all the struggles that you face.










