If you think Rambeau is trans, go for it!! I donāt mind hearing and sharing ideas about my characters, even if I didnāt originally write them that way :)
But if I could change anything, Iād honestly mess with so much. Instead of just saying Iād remake the whole book, Iād most specifically redo the convention; chapter 5. I feel like I missed out on so many important opportunities for the event and just didnāt draw out as much as Iād like to now. Was it a fundraiser? Who hosted it? I didnāt put any of that in there.
For overall changes, hereās some that I can pinpoint off the top of my head.
- I would need so much more Onyx content, we donāt really care about him enough.
- Iāll be so honest that I forgot about Coach Kara very quickly and never brought her back. Iām both okay and not okay with that. Sheās not very important but I love her too much.
- I never explained Ambrozās whole story and that makes me mad
- The ending doesnāt satisfy me; and it never will. I played with so many options and I couldnāt land on one that made me happy. I got antsy and just chose the one that my readers liked most. Even when I first got the publishing, I wanted to redo the whole page. I know that no one wants to hear that, but I really had no reasons to choose the other options except for sequel probability. Iām not gonna do that to my audience.