I leave a comment on every single fic I read. Sometimes when I read published books I go and leave a comment somewhere the author can find it. Granted, I literally majored in ‘leaving comments on fics’ (English Education), but once you start doing it it just becomes second nature. Now you’re gonna go to the Ozymandias school of leaving comments:
Problem: I can’t leave kudos again.
Beginner: This is a second/third/fourth Kudos
Advanced: This is my second/third/fortieth time reading this, I still love it so much. Here are a few new things I noticed. I like the way you personally do x, y, z compared to other authors I’ve read (in this ship/genre/fandom).
Problem: I don’t know what to say :(
Beginner: Just list what you did to read this fic. “I stayed up late reading this”, “I read this on a crowded train”, “this kept me company while sick”.
Advanced: X,Y,Z parts made me get butterflies, and I had a physical reaction to this part of the story, I squealed outloud when characters did x,y,z. I blushed at this part. I laughed out loud here. Whatever.
Problem: I’m embarrassed to leave a comment (what if I annoy the author?)
Beginner: Short answer: you won’t EVER annoy the author (unless you’re needlessly mean) But to start, be generic, you don’t have to spill your soul in the comments section. “I liked this” “I enjoyed reading this” “nice fic”.
Advanced: This really meant a lot to me that you wrote this. This is something I feel like I’ve always wanted to read. This fic hit me in all the right places. Etc.
Problem: I don’t know how to express myself/my experience
Beginner: My beginners go to is to highlight a line, put that in your comment and say “i liked this” or to identify basic emotions you had while reading and comment those “this made me happy” “this part made me sad” “i almost cried” “you made me laugh”
Advanced: “Highlighted line” This line made me smile because it has to do with character development/it’s really romantic/it’s so unique/it’s moving. Sometimes I don’t highlight a line at all, I just talk about the stuff I’ve noticed were unique to the fic. “I love the way you did this particular thing with this character”.
I made a little diagram in my spare time to show different sizes of animals in warriors, since a lot of the time I see them depicted too big or too small. This is just Averages though, sometimes they can be much smaller or bigger than shown but typically these are going to be how big your animals are compared to cats. Feel free to use for reference!
Attempting a comprehensive Kid thread... Starting with his connection to the real life Captain Kidd. Aside from the name, there's a few elements that Oda took from the irl Kidd...
Namely his bad luck and that he suffered a humiliating loss to the same person twice, once at the beginning of his journey and once toward the end. This mirrors his losses to Shanks, although there is plenty of evidence to support that he will return, but that's another thread.
The real Kidd was, well, not a great pirate. He didn't have a loyal crew and suffered a series of misfortunes from the start. Oda shows us time and again that his Kid is actually a strong and determined pirate who isn't afraid to face opponents stronger than himself.
His crew are loyal to him, being former gang leaders and their followers that he united behind him when he united his home island after his childhood love Victoria was murdered.
Kid was never meant to be an actual villain. We know from Shakky that he got his bounty because he killed civilians. Or so the WG states. However, the real Kidd was also the subject of misinformation.
While he did accidentally kill crewmate William Moore in a fit of rage, the majority of his supposed exploits came from made-up tales that greatly exaggerated his misdeeds. Here's a brief history (and tasty drink) from my fav food historian.
Our Kid has a first mate and crew that he cares deeply for, but what if Oda took inspiration from this and we find out that Victoria's murder was pinned on him? We already know from Caribou's explanation of how Kid lost his arm that there's misinformation about him circulating.
I think Oda will give Captain Kid a comeback, redeeming the reputation of his real-life inspiration. For now, here's my favorite version of the ballad of Captain Kidd by Great Big Sea!
Oh Captain, My Captain - Domestic Intimacy with Eustass Kid
Summary: While painting a room, sender starts a paint fight with receiver.
Warnings: None. Fluff and domestic stuffs.
Word count: 994
Reposting this story for my bb @icy-spicy have a good monday boo
The dull thudding of the hammer broke your concentration as you were carefully trying to pour the neutral color paint into the slanted tray. Thankful that Kid had the foresight to lay tarp on the floor, you still internally curse at the droplets that fell on it from his distracting noises, but grateful that it protected the newly installed flooring.
“Why are you bothering with that anyways? We still have to paint the walls!” you complain to your lover.
“Tch, better to have it done now and paint over the studs than doing it later and chip the paint! Ungrateful ass,” his golden amber eyes roll in their sockets as he made his way towards you.
“Rude ass,” you click your tongue back at him.
Soft sponge rollers bounce off your head and you shoot him a glare, watching him juggle a few more in his hands with a warning look on his face.
“Careful, I’m fully armed babe,” he gave you a devious grin.
Taking the high road from the arm pun you wanted to chuck back at him, you give him a curt nod and stand tall. Picking up the broomstick handles you bought during a 2-4-1 sale at the department store, you toss one his way and he drops the sponge rollers while fumbling with the stick.
“Fully armed but not loaded,” you chuckle, taking one of the rollers he had thrown at you and attaching it to your handle. You dip it into the paint tray and begin rolling the thick liquid on to the walls.
“WAIT A SECOND!” his shout startles you causing your concentrated rolls to stutter, dripping thick paint lines down the wall and on the tarp covering.
“ACH! What?!”
“You needa do the primer first, ya ding dong!”
If your eyes could shoot laser beams, he’d be a dead man.
“If you took a second to read, you would know that this brand is primer + paint, bolthead!”
“TCH, WHAT WAS THAT?!”
From the corner of your eyes you watch as he picks up the accent paint color, squinted eyes reading the description written in large, bold print on the front. You could hear a soft ‘ooooohhhh’ escape him before he tried to nonchalantly pretend he knew that the whole time. Attaching the sponge roller to his own broomstick, he follows your example and begins painting the adjacent wall.
The soft rock music plays in the background as you paint, with you softly singing the lyrics and Kid backing you up with the chorus. It’s peaceful for about an hour as you work in tandem. That is, until your paint rollers met each other on the same wall.
With a confused look, you look up at him and then turn around to take the room in. Did he—
Yep. He did. Kid forgot to leave the back wall plain for the accent color.
“Don’t. Say. A Word,” Kid gripes with a hand over the bandana tied above his forehead to keep his hair out of his face.
You don’t say anything. Not a single peep. You simply turn around and continue coating the already covered wall to keep yourself in check from making a cheeky remark. They say that in long-term dating, partners pick up each other’s traits and habits. A learned habit for you was sassing the fuck out of the sardonic man. He could dish it but not always take it, and it was those delicious moments that made life a little bit sweeter.
Instead you mind yourself and allow a resigned sigh to escape you. A single syllable dripped from your lips as you did so, and you could feel the tension in the room spike. Your shoulders hunch, waiting in anticipation when the first droplets of cool liquid hit your skin.
“YOU DID NOT!” you shriek, dropping the paint roller and rubbing your hands to your backside, inspecting the residue. Your favorite color – the accent paint. “MOTHERFU—” the rest of your words die on your tongue as more paint splatters on you.
With a charged cry you rush at him, fully prepared to tackle your body into his like the defensive lineman you always knew you had inside you. Unfortunately for you, Kid’s height will always be his key advantage. With one hand he held you back by your forehead while with his other hand he shook the loaded paint stirrer over your body, covering you in very expensive paint.
“I’M GONNA DESTROY YOU!!” you cry out, only to be suddenly lifted under your thighs in his strong arms.
Kid presses your back flat against the back wall and shuts you up with a hard press of his lips against yours. Grinning into the kiss, he enjoys the way you melt into his touch as you kiss him back. During your fervent make out he pushed you up and around the wall in what seemed like lust-filled frenzy.
Turns out he was making wall art.
You stare wide-eyed at the mess he made by pressing your paint splattered body against the wall. Your own face smeared in red from his lipstick that he trails down your neck as you wordlessly gaze at the wall.
“I dunno, you showed me your Pinterest board and while it looked nice, I think this looks better,” he whispers in your ear.
You turn to face him, “You’re a dumb bitch if you think I’m letting you leave it this way.” The pout on his face is both too adorable and also too sad to look at. “Oh my goooodd, fine let’s fix it together.”
A small smile on his lips, he stood next to you as you quickly work together to finish the last wall. Taking a step back, he laces his fingers with yours and brings your hand to his lips to place a soft kiss on the back of it.
“This domesticity shit ain’t so bad when I’m doing it with you, angel.”
Originally posted - soon to be archived from main :)
