Misfit Mansion - Development and Concepts #1
I recently scoured my old computer and found all of the Misfit Mansion art/writings I made while developing the first book! I'd forgotten about a lot of this, and with the second book out in less than a month, I thought it'd be fun to do a series of posts going over my thought process behind it all. Misfit Mansion went through a few different versions, since I kept running into writing blocks. The following are the very first ideas that eventually led to MM.
Text-heavy post incoming!
"Lily of the Dead Valley"
Back when I was working on Oddity Woods as a webcomic, I was brainstorming ideas for potential book pitches. The main two were A. a story based on “Journey to Stars,” which became Star Knights, and B. a story about a monster hunter that wound up in a world of monsters, titled “Lily of the Dead Valley.” I ended up moving forward with Star Knights instead, but I’d come back around to the second while working on SK.
The monster world was called Dead Valley and had a wide array of monster inhabitants. The monster hunter was a hooded girl named Ava that somehow fell into Dead Valley and had to team up with “Lily” (Iris’s original name) to return home, learning that monsters were actually good in the process. These are sketches from around 2018.
Lily/Iris was originally a vampire.
Then became less vampire and more typical monster.
I liked the hoodie pattern but I didn't want to draw that in every panel, so I scrapped it! Simple designs are best for comics in my experience.
Ava's face was always hidden by a hood until the end of the story. Also I guess Iris had a brother?? I don't remember. She had a devil tail here.
The issue with this version was that I wasn’t sure what this monster world should look like (I think I was still burned out from OW and didn't want to draw a fantasy world), so to make it a little easier on myself, I ultimately decided to change the setting to the real world. The story then became about a human summer camp at odds with a monster one.
Things of note- there was a moth girl named Juniper who was kind of mean towards Lily/Iris, and a ghost boy camper and a kelpie!!! I liked the kelpie design a lot so I'd bring it back later. I think this kelpie was a girl.
The plot was basically: Ava is accidentally signed up for the wrong summer camp— one for monsters instead of monster hunters. Hiding her identity, she eventually befriends Lily, and ultimately comes to learn that hunting monsters is wrong. This idea didn’t go anywhere as I never went to summer camp as a kid, and so I had no idea how to write a summer camp story… I decided to channel the experiences I did have as a kid in order to figure out what Misfit Mansion would actually be about— found family and belonging.
In 2019, the story became about a foster home hidden in the woods. When conceptualizing the house, I originally wrote the caretaker as a woman, but I wanted to write a father/daughter bond between Iris and the caretaker, so they became Halloway instead. “Lily” was changed to Iris, as it matched her color scheme. Instead of a random monster, I wanted her species to have an effect on the story, so she became a dreamon, or a “dream imp” back then.
This version was a lot closer to the final Misfit Mansion, but there were still many differences plot-wise! I’ll save it for part two, but I did want to briefly mention another story I was working on at the time.
This was a very small and undeveloped idea I was writing in 2018, but I couldn’t figure out the story, so it quickly got scrapped. It followed a mage who was trapped in a haunted house of living dolls, and had to help himself and a trapped soul escape, which lived in a small cage he carried. This idea doesn’t have much to do with Misfit Mansion, but I liked the designs and ended up recycling them to create Mathias and Dahlia. This version of Dahlia also had a giant stuffed bear butler, which I still kind of like.
These characters didn't have names, but I did reuse the beanie design for Kel.
I'll post more about the next draft + reveal some of the sample pages I pitched with next week!