HI K, GUSTO MO BA KO PATAYIN?? THATS WHATS HAPPENING. first of all, I love the banner 😔👊 sarap nya tignan HAHSHAHSH
starting off strong with Yoongi and his little actions, akala mo tinotorpe ka pero kuhang kuha sya kay mc BYE ??? TANGINA NIYA!!
| Seokjin walks by, a crimson delight. You’re curious when Yoongi stops him in his path, a blue coat hanging from the crook of his arm.
| “Hyung.” Yoongi holds up the coat in his hand. “Trade.”
like okay?? TAPOS TUMINGIN PA
PUTOK MO NA NGAYON MIN YOONGI!!!
HIM LIFTING HIS SHIRT LIKE (like a good boy) ALAM NAMAN NAMIN KUNG ANONG INISIP MO, once a slut, always a slut.
I love how you write so much, yung mga details mo, even each small thing riles me up ugh..
| You tap your headset monitor, nodding to Yoongi. “Say something.”
| “Something,” he says, flat.
| You're in Paris, the city of love, and Yoongi's been in your mind a little more than usual.
kailangan q pov nung pusa na yan kasi for sure inisip nya rin si MC 😵💫😵💫 feelengera much?? JAHSHAH I LOVE THAT LINE
gets na gets q si ate girl when she watched YoonMin, alam mo tlaga kuhang kuha na xa kay yoongz 😭
joonie and mc bonding over their thoughts on love oh ok.. aww joonie wanting someone HAHAHAHAHAKOAKOAKOAKO NALANG!! the silence after MCs advice, gosh, the detail pagkatapos para magsink in tlaga UGH GALING GALING MO K!!
| “To just accept what version of love that’s handed to you. Even if it’s not perfect. Even if it’s just a semblance of it. At least it’s yours.”
at libre 'tong basahin? WOW.
Disarmed, you blurt. “No. I’m not wearing a bra.” You cross your arms over your chest, suddenly feeling chaste.
LINTEK YUNG LAUF Q AHAHA?!?! Honestly I love this relationship with Joon, I hope it doesn't turn to anything complicated because what he's looking for is company (from how I interpret the situation?), and MC is great company! They're great friends
STAY UP FOR ME BABY HA?? OKAY DADDY !!!
yoongi opening up is my kink ok.... THE FAVT HE SHOWS US LYRICS FUCK AWFFF
🛑 🛑🛑 STOP THE CAR YOONGI'S RESPECTFUL ASS.
this played the entire scene she woke up at his room: https://open.spotify.com/track/1LxBThEXAGZMS6UnBWvex5?si=0WCDU4-RSmGm6WEQyq13Ag
THIS IS LITERALLY MC?? STOP!!!
bruh this writing so good it got me feeling THINGS!!! Feeling ko nandun tlaga ko...
| “Best morning ever,” he slurs unabashedly, shaking his head like he can’t believe his luck.
this writing feels like I'm there STOP
| “I fuckin’ hate your rule in case I haven’t told you,” Yoongi says matter-of-factly.
AND WHO SET TNAT SYSTEM UP BY REJECTING MC?? EXACTLY HO!?
Now I couldn't get more quotes because I was so locked in during the smut and the entirety of the chapter, that's how much your writing pulls me in. I love the domesticity, how you move them forward, the way it progresses and the hint of jealousy(?) during the volleyball scene!! Gosh, ang galing mo'ng magsulat, this whole CHAPTER I WAS FEEEEEELING IT!! Their chemistry, the angst, the comfort, the fluff at the final scene )): Yoongi really is someone intense, like you do not know if when you fall in love with him until you're in soooo, incredibly deep (no pun intended), each chapter just proves it, wow you lay the evidence bare!!!
I also love how Yoongi's vocal about the rule, like fr gusto nya tumikim ENOUGH....sigh... I love this chapter so much, I'm sure my love will keep growing as the story goes by!
Thank you for writing this K!!!
HOAYYY. Plsss. Salamat sa ask. My favorite line bilang ang kalat ko: PUTOK MO NA NGAYON MIN YOONGI. Iktr.
The no-kissing rule: Yun eh. Takam na takam na si ulol. Lol. Gustong gusto na tikman si MC but it’s not happening. He knows he needs consent. Clocked it though, if he hadn’t rejected her before maybe she wouldn’t have developed a complex… 🤦🏼♀️
Shobrang shekep ni MC na willing ang isang Min Yoongi na mag pickleball for her kahit sobrang olats nya dun hahahah
Actually problema ko din si Kim Namjoon. Because he is so endearing bruh. And he is not afraid to be vulnerable with MC. The burning question is: totropahin or jojowain?? ⚠️
So the im-not-wearing a bra scene. Feeling ko di nagets ng iba but in Filipino ang naisip ko talaga yung parang “huy anu ba wala akong bra.” Idk it just seemed so quirky and funny to me cos we’re a little more conscious with that.
That UDD song is so goddamn perfect. Iyakkkk 😭😭Literally yan ung thoughts ni MC every time Yoongi’s actions are not … casual. I think in the next chapter we might see her lean into it a bit more. Maybe become receptive or responsive even??
Pero yung selos nya dun sa Yoonmin. Yun lang. Baka isa yun sa maging mitsa ng 💣💣 wait ive said too much.
Ketzzz thank you so much for this ask. Like I said ang sarap basahin. Makes all the sleepless nights and agonizing over every single paragraph and dialogue worth it kasi ganto ka thorough ng feedback. Thanks for returning my energy and enthusiasm I have for this series ilysm frennie 💜
Shoutout to @risky-peaches for that banner because my girl killed that shii even though she wants kill this yoongi hahaha ily G
