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Plot
Billy Hope is a prize winning boxer, who has crawled from the rough streets of Hells Kitchen to become one of the most successful fighters in his division, with a beautiful wife Maureen, a lovely ten year old daughter Leila, and a stunning home.
When his wife is killed in a tragic accident, he spirals out of control â learns of his financial struggles, and loses his daughter to CPS after aâŠ
Hi Sarah! For the smut prompt, I'll eat up anything you write with AkkAye or SandRay but I'd love number 4 for Sand and Ray. I feel like Ray would love being told how good he is, I'm a strong 'Ray has a praise kink' believer!
Hiiii! Somehow this turned into top!Ray. I hope you donât mind?
Word Count: 1600ish
{telling} them how good they are
âHow longâs it been since someone fucked you?â
Sand was so kiss-drunk that it took him a few seconds to digest Rayâs words. They were in bed and Sand was laying on his back while Ray straddled his waist, and although it wasnât exactly rare for Ray to get possessive like this when they were intimate, that particular topic was one they had never broached before. Maybe he had misheard.
âWhat?â he asked, reaching out to trace a finger over the âbeautifulâ tattoo on Rayâs hip. Ray was shirtless and Sand felt drawn to the ink on his skin. He felt drawn to the boy wearing it.Â
âHow longâs it been since someone fucked you?â Ray repeated. âAnd who was it? Was it Boeing?â
Sand snorted because he found the idea of Boeing topping anyone hilarious, but Ray didnât laugh. âIt wasnât Boeing.â
âWho then?â
âNo one you would know,â Sand said, letting his hand fall back to his side and then sitting up so he and Ray were face-to-face. âJust some guy I met at the bar. I donât remember his name.â
âWhen?â
âEight or nine months ago?â It was only an estimate, but Rayâs pout became more pronounced at his words. âIs that a problem?â
âI want the last person you fucked to be me.â He said it petulantly like that was an honor Sand had deliberately been keeping from him and Sand couldnât help but laugh. He collapsed back down onto the mattress and gestured at his more-than-willing body. âWell then, by all means.â
He hadnât actually expected Ray to take him up on the offer. Heâd thought it was a jokeâa petty squabble with a past he had no control overâbut then Rayâs eyes darkened with a hunger it was impossible not to recognize.
âRoll over,â Ray demanded, his voice taking on the cadence of authority his rich blood afforded him. Sandâs humor washed away in an instant and his heartbeat quickened. Although he would never admit it to anyone, he liked it when Ray told him what to do. Fucking Ray was only half the fun. His true joy came in hearing Ray tell him, in painstaking detail, exactly how he wanted to be fucked.Â
So, like an obedient dog, Sand rolled over.
He was already naked from the waist up, but Ray stripped him of his pants as well and then carefully kneaded both globes of his ass before pulling them apart and leaning in to place a wet kiss against his rim. It was lovingâworshipful, evenâand despite the fact that Ray had never done this to Sand before, he was skilled with his mouth. It didnât take long before Sand was trembling beneath him, stretched open on his fingers and his tongue. He decided to distract himself with conversation.
âWhenâs the last time you did this?â he asked. Instead of answering, Ray froze. âRay?â Still no answer. âRay?â
He looked over his shoulder to find Ray still hovering over his ass, his mouth wet and messy, his eyes wide. âWell, see, hereâs the thingâŠâ
âNever?!â Sand cried in shock.
Immediately, Ray grew defensive. âI know what I like. Why would I bother doing anything else?â But then his face softened and he reached out to squeeze Sandâs ass once more. âCan I? With you?â
Sand turned back around, once again under his spell. âFine. Just hurry up or Iâm going to come before youâre even inside me.â
Ray climbed off of Sand to remove his own pants and when Sand risked a glance at him, he found that Ray was smiling, looking inordinately pleased with himself.
âDo you want me to use a condom?â Ray asked, covering Sandâs body with his once more as he leaned down to kiss his shoulder blade. Sand pushed up onto his knees and Ray tucked himself easily into the space behind him, clearly already knowing the answer, but wanting Sand to say it anyway.
âNo,â Sand said, pushing back against him,. Ray took his dick in hand and began running it along Sandâs opening, taunting him the way Sand oftentimes did to him.
âWhy not?â
âBecause I want to feel you come inside me.â
For a moment, neither of them moved. Then, in one fluid motion, Ray said, âgood boy,â and pushed inside.
Sand wasnât sure which of them was more affected, but the feel of Ray inside him, filling him more full than he had ever been, immediately threatened to overwhelm him. It wasnât a physical reaction so much as an emotional one. Sand had been fucked far rougher than this by far more endowed men. But it had never meant anything. It had only ever touched his body, never his heart.
Behind him, Ray let out a moan and then collapsed down so that his forehead was pressed against Sandâs back. For several seconds, the two of them just stayed there, their bodies connected, as they breathed in tandem.
âAre you okay?â Ray asked after a minuteâchecking in, the way Sand always did with him. Sand knew Ray well enough to know that was a learned behavior, not something that came naturally to him. It warmed his racing heart. âWas that too much?â
âNo. Iâm good,â Sand said, pushing back onto Rayâs dick just enough to make the boy moan again. âNow fuck me like you mean it.â
With a hesitance Sand wasnât used to from him, Ray began to move. He pulled out of Sandâs body and then pushed back inside with no particular finesse or skill, but it still felt good because it was still him. Sand pushed back in time to his thrusts, silently asking for more, but Ray didnât seem to know how to give it to him.
âIs this right? Am Iâ?â
Suddenly, Sand realized what the hesitation was. Ray didnât like not being good at things. He had a pathological fear of disappointing the people he loved. He needed positive reinforcement.
âThatâs perfect. Youâre perfect,â Sand said, reaching behind him for Ray's flank and slowly leading him into a steady rhythm. Ray took his instruction and began to speed up. Sand dropped his head down onto his hands, opening his body up even more. âFuck, that feels so good. Youâre doing so good.â
âYeah?â
âYeah,â Sand agreed. âYou can go harder.â
Still hesitant, Ray did as asked and with every thrust, Sand fell a little more under his spell.
âFuck, Ray. Right there.â
The praise seemed to reawaken Rayâs confidence. Or at least his dirty mouth. âYou like it when I fuck you, donât you? You like my dick inside you?â
âYes,â Sand moaned.
âSay it.â
âI like your dick inside me.â
Ray gave a particularly hard thrust and his cock rubbed right against Sandâs prostate. Sand wasnât sure whether he had done it on purpose or whether it was just beginnerâs luck, but he could feel his self-control start to unravel.Â
âI want to make sure youâll be able to feel me tomorrow,â Ray said. âI want to make sure youâll remember who it was that was fucking you.â
âAs if I could forget.â
His words seemed to trigger something in Ray. âFuck,â he said, collapsing down over Sandâs back, abandoning his long thrusts in favor of letting their bodies grind together as if he could no longer bear to let them separate. âHow do you last for so long? It feels too good.â
âGo ahead and come,â Sand said, hopelessly endeared. âI want you to.â
Ray cursed again, but took the out Sand had given him. With a few last hard thrusts, he came inside Sandâs body for the very first time.
For several seconds, they both just stayed there, intimately connected. Sandâs cock was throbbing with arousal and his whole body was sore in a way he wasnât used to, but in that moment, he felt very, very loved.
Ray pulled out of him slowly. Sand could feel the warmth of his seed leaking from his opening and he was about to climb out of bed to get something to clean them both with when he felt Rayâs tongue push inside him.Â
It was Sandâs turn to curse. He had never before been completely at Rayâs mercy before and it made him feel wild. Wild and free. Free from his own thoughts. Free from the expectations he put on himself.Â
Ray continued to lick his seed from Sandâs body and as he did so, he reached around and grabbed his cock. Sand sighed at the touch, knowing he wouldnât last long and, sure enough, he came under Rayâs skilled ministrations quickly with his loverâs name on his tongue.
That night, Ray was the one who cleaned them. Sand had never realized before just how intimate the practice was. He wondered if Ray felt just as loved and cared for when Sand did this for him.
âSo,â Ray said once he was finished, finally crawling back into bed and cuddling into Sandâs side. âDid I do good?â
Sand considered teasing him, but saw no reason to lie. âThe best.âÂ
Ray rolled his eyes as if he didnât believe him, but it was the truth. It was the first time in his life that Sand had been fucked and actually enjoyed it.Â
âIâll get better,â Ray said as if it was a challenge. Sand knew better than to argue with him. âBut you have to promise me something. No one but me ever again. Do you understand? I want to be your last.â
âNo one but you ever again,â Sand agreed. It wasnât a hard promise to make. He was the only one who had ever mattered. âNow go to bed. You can practice more in the morning.â
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Plot
Rob Bilott is a corporate defence attorney â who is hounded by a family friend to investigate a chemical manufacturing conglomerate DuPont, who he believes is contaminating the water of a local town. Reluctant at first, he relents when he discovers it might just be true.
Direction
There was a very heavy use of dark and bland colours â with Todd Haynes using a similar colour palate that heâŠ
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Plot
In a totally normal town in America, on a totally normal day â parents start to kill their children for no reason. Siblings Carly and Josh must try to keep safe from their parents Brent and Kendall.
Direction
This was actually a fairly solidly filmed movie, with decent techniques used. There was some good use of foreshadowing in some of the camera angles used, and there was some reallyâŠ
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Plot
In 1959, four twelve-year-old friends venture out to find a missing boy â along the way they discuss the many things that they must endure in their lives; from bullies, girls, their future, and their pasts.
Direction
There is some very subtle direction from Rob Reiner; and while there are no âexceptionalâ shots â they all work together to help support the narrative. Some memorable shotsâŠ
Hey! Can you please tell me how can I purchase the collector's edition of Hosho's ms?
You canât purchase it unfortunately. It was only available for a limited time and the only way to get it was reading the Love Choice story unlocking the last CG and getting the super happy ending, which meant spending roughly 200 hearts.
Donât bother trying it now because the campaign has ended.
Yes voltage is really low for changing to this ridiculous system.
I honestly wasnât going to bother with this one considering I found Takadoâs story to be... letâs just say not my cup of tea. However I love a good man whore especially one that changes heaps once he falls in love with the MC. And this had all the formula for that so I brought hearts (while the campaign was on, anyone else think that these campaigns suck compared to the old ones??) and started my binge.
I will say I like how you can unlock the collectors edition straight away now which Is cool coz I hated having to read it again to get the cgs unlocked.
How was the story.... well honestly I actually liked this one. I found Hosho story to be more on track and less all over the place. I first thought oh god no, not another dead girlfriend in the past story but it wasnât. Not sure that the actual thing it was was any better but at least it wasnât dead girl friend. It actually made me sad thinking about Hosho and his situation. But I love that the MC doesnât give up on him and actually helps him. You sort of understand why he fell for her. It wasnt just a right here at the right time kind of thing. She goes and pursues him which is always a plus in my books. Give it a go.
You donât need to spend money to get the good stuff. Story would still be good without it. But for those who care, I spent 150 hearts to get the super happy ending but I only needed 130. My last choice wasnât needed but I wanted to unlock it so I did.
Any how looking at the Japanese version I can see itâs not really getting updated anymore so bummer for that. I was really starting to like these characters. Really really wanted kasumi but hey Iâll just enjoy what we do get.
So I just finished this, and got the super happy ending. Was it worth it???
Well I didnât spend 207 hearts to get the super happy ending. I think I spent about 160ish. I missed 3â€ïž choices that I felt like werenât worth it and I may have regretted not getting one of them.
The story it self was ok at best. I felt like the chapters were shorter then normal and it felt rather rush. And the plot changes sort felt like they came out of no where. I am disappointed that the JPN version isnât updating so I feel like this will be left unfinished which sucks. Over all I think it wasnât worth the hearts. I may or may not give the next character a chance but I guess that will depend on whether I have the money to blow on this LC BS.
Does anyone know which title the first song comes from? They said it would be in the Voltage album but I couldnât find it. It sounds similar to BBTBB but Iâm not 100% sure.
Itâs definitely not the main theme. It could also be from 10DWMD but I honestly canât remember.
As I was reading through the route, once again I got really frustrated with the MC. It felt like all the progress she made during previous routes was all undone. She was not confident and she let people push her around and didnât fight back but then it got to the end and once again she proves that she has indeed grown. I was like thank goodness.
I loved reading the special story from Ayumu POV. That was funny and you donât realise just how much he loves the MC considering heâs always so mean to her.
I cant wait for the continue of this season. Why must they make us wait so long for content??!!
So I kinda wanna askâŠ..Iâve never really liked detective games that have a lot of high action, but Iâve been interested in Kiyoharuâs route for a while. Should I play while itâs free?
Itâs been a long time since Iâd posted anything about voltage games. With the new Love 365 app and transferring games and some new routes and everything I was kinda waiting for them to settle down.Â
But I decided to make this post now because as a human, an adult, a 24 year-old-girl who wasted her money and time on a game only to find it insulting and infuriating, I feel responsible to warn other players before you waste your money and time.
I was originally gonna roast them in this post but because bunch of you genuinely asked me for reasons, I will tone it down as much as my rage allows but I may give out some spoilers, apologies in advance >_<;
I honestly never thought a day would come where Voltage would be capable of outdoing themselves in releasing the most hatable, pathetic, and wrong-in-every-way route in their games.
I only wish I could find the writer who inflicted this joke of a story upon us and ask them: âReally?â
So here are some of the reasons why this route is now my least fave voltage game EVER:
1. Makeover
So imagine as the MC you have found your husband has been cheating on you, you get a divorce, you have no money, no job, no skills, and no place to stay. You would think even as a fictional character this MC is going through hell.
So then how can this MC heal?
Apparently, this writer thinks she need to be forced into a makeover project and be constantly humiliated.đ
The MC is literally forced into getting a makeover by this dude and he gets to publish the results (aka her transformation photos over the months) in a magazine and gets credit for!! For the entire country to see!
Now, I am all for a makeover! I personally love fashion and I think taking care of yourself and your skin and your health in general is important for everyone!Â
But not like this for the love of God!
Not by constantly telling the person how unattractive and âmediocreâ they are!!! (And I mean until the very last chapters he humiliates her!!)
Thatâs not a makeover! Thatâs called bullying!<_<
2. His method
He forces the MC to follow his ridiculous beauty regimen. He forces her to swim 20-30 laps a day to get in shape (even though the MC almost drowns in the the prologue cuz she doesnât even know how to swim!) He tells her how to wash her face, put on makeup, what to eat etc etc etc. He keeps talking about being confident but to me it seems like he is the one with confidence issues (I mean the dude he has a freaking gym in his room!)
AGIAN, I am all for a makeover but this means nothing if he constantly talks to her in a condescending tone and keeps reminding her she was cheated on to make his point!!!!Â
Even when the mc tells him she doesnât want to do the makeover project this is his reaction:Â
âŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠ..
 **cough manipulative son of a bitch cough**
3. Name-calling
There are so many instances in the story where he literally insults her!
I donât know about you guys but for me even in a fictional game this is unacceptable!
4.The MC
Last but not least, our forever problem with Voltage games , the MC!
Iâm not gonna get too much into her but to sum it up: I hate her! đ
She is a pushoverÂ
She has no individualityÂ
She letâs them toss her around and play with her all the want
She gives into their demands and obeys them like a dog (sorry dogs)
She gets insulted by her husband in few occasions but her reactions are so unrealistic!!!! (no one is that dumb!)
I personally feel she is very sexually frustratedÂ
Bonus:Â
Yesterday when I played the game this was on the main page:
This wouldnât have sounded so bad if the guy didnât actually force the mc into getting an appearance makeover from himâŠ
So yeah, these were my main reasons I hated his route. Yesterday I was so mad after reading this story that I almost deleted the app.
What really upsets me is that these games are targeted towards young girls.
 Iâm 24 years old.Â
I am old enough to know for example, by shouting at someoneâs face âDONâT BE ANXIOUSâ their anxiety disorder is not gonna magically disappear!
That by telling a person to âthrow away your baggageâ you are not helping them, you are undermining their feelings and their experiences.Â
That by portraying all this stuff as if itâs normal and acceptable we are teaching young girls that abuse is a form of love.
I blame the Japanese culture for most of the mess in this game.
As a bonus here are 2 very disturbing videos Asian Boss made a while ago about how âBeing Dumbâ is considered pleasant for woman in Japan and âsmart girlsâ are âintimidatingâ.
I think as many of you know, in the stuff I write on here I comment on some of these problematic moments. With that said, the baseline of where I am when I read a route is very different than what I think is acceptable in real life. I think IRL heâs incredibly problematic, but some of the nuggets he drops and the ridiculousness of the situation as a whole makes me completely throw away any serious guidelines for reading and I see it as trashy fun.
For me, knowing the kind of character trope he was meant that I entered into this story well aware of what was going to happen. The problems I had with the route had more to do with the pacing and story structure which just took such a harsh pivot that I actually laughed out loud.
Iâve learned from playing these games that the archetypes I find most problematic tend to be popular in these fandoms. Iâm not sure why but I think it has something to do with it being a complete and utter fantasy.
Curious to hear what others think about his route and others that fit this trope (cough cough Ota)
I donât mind characters like him because itâs what his character is suppose to be like. I know itâs fictional but I also know that if he was a real life character I would run away as fast as possible. But thatâs the thing. Heâs NOT real!! So why hate on him if thatâs what heâs design to be?
I personally donât think these games are targeted towards young girls. I think the aim is for older women. I mean the MC is a divorcee. Pretty sure younger girls wouldnât be the intended audience. Other wise they would have made the MC younger and more connectable to young girls. Plus the main audience for otome tend to be older women who can afford to spend a bit.
However this is just my personal opinion. Please donât think Iâm taking sides. I think everyone is allowed to have their own opinion even if itâs not the same as mine.