E. B. Asher’s This Will Be Fun often appears in tumblr rec-lists for queer romance, so I thought I’d give it a go. Unfortunately, it really didn’t work for me. I found it unfocused and frustratingly unwilling to delve into the emotional depths it sets up.
The premise is a strong one: four heroes are forced back together on a quest (complete with messy romantic entanglements) after the last one ruined their lives. Despite this, I struggled to determine what tone the narrative wanted to strike. The characters’ inner monologues are honest to the point of glossiness, eschewing subtext and subtlety in a way that reminded me a little bit of stage theater. This exaggerated quality is so consistent, so immediate, that I took the prologue to be a deliberate establishment of its perspective character as a caricature of a hero. Although I can’t be sure, I don’t think that interpretation is the intended one—there are no signs that anyone considers him a little silly, nor any indication that the reader should find him cartoonish. If anything, the narrative takes him and all the other characters completely seriously, despite their exaggerated archetypes.
The world, too, is rendered in almost cartoonish style. It gestures at the trappings of the fantasy genre—absolute monarchy, castles, travel by horseback through vaguely European countryside, swords, sorcery—but consistently adds recognizably modern elements. There are stories that do this well: Shrek uses its ruthless lampooning of Disney as a backdrop to tell a story about finding authenticity outside of conventional beauty, thumbing its nose the whole time at the concept of the Disney princess. This Will Be Fun gives us everything from Ye Olde Starbucks to Ye Olde Las Vegas, but isn’t saying anything about the modern things it incorporates or using them as thematically relevant metaphor. It left me with the impression that the authors (yes, plural, we’ll get there) approached these elements in a very “wouldn’t it be funny if…” sort of way that comes off more like Forrest Gump than anything else; a bunch of cameos that add nothing of substance.
Both the exaggerated characterization and the narrative style run in direct contrast to the themes of the story being told. Love, grief, and the ways that people will harm themselves and others in the name of safety are all threaded tantalizingly through this book. I wanted the characters to struggle messily and mightily with these things, as a person might, but they didn’t really. They spend a lot of their on-page time grappling with their feelings, but in a straightforwardly self-aware sort of therapy speak. Anyone running from their true feelings is doing so consciously, and we are told this in the character’s own voice. Everyone is healed by the end of the book, despite spending the previous ten years pursuing deeply unhealthy coping mechanisms. This kind of tidy, inoffensive storytelling strikes me as a real letdown from the potential created in the setup.
The book is at its strongest when it actually sets its weightier material aside and embraces a more chaotic rom-com style. Bar the actual ending, the last act of the story was super enjoyable and I think it’s because that section is largely hijinks with lighthearted interpersonal drama. The setting and its Ye Olde jokes heighten the hilarity, the jokey bits are grounded in the world we’ve been shown, the plot moves forward apace, and in general it really works.
This Will Be Fun is written by three people, and it really shows. I think that collaborative storytelling sometimes works well to create deeply moving works of art, but often is a little bit chaotic and unfocused. There are many parts of this book that make sense in the context of a few friends riffing off each others’ jokes or funny ideas, and unfortunately that leaves us with a story that trusts us to get the joke but doesn’t trust us with anything else. It wasn’t really for me. But! If you’re looking for a fantasy book that doesn’t take itself too seriously and you like a little bit of humorous hijinks, I think you might enjoy this read.















