yana. Girl. If you didn’t have any interest in drawing this, then why did you? We didn’t need a million flashback pages to last months chapter. We didn’t need to see the scene play out again if it’s the same illustrations anyways.
We didn’t need to see the same moments drawn with a massive drop in quality.
We would have gotten just as much out of it if we were just told what happened. Seeing it go down is actually worse story telling if you’re doing it like this instead of only showing glimpses and letting us fill in the gaps
there are so many things that don’t line up with what we have precedent for and It’s so obnoxious that I cant have as much fun theorizing because I have barely any confidence that it isn’t just bad writing considering to how carelessly the chapter was executed lol. Yana didn’t even make a comment when she retweeted the g fantasy release like she always does. It played out as if we needed to hit every beat required by the spark notes. It honestly would have actually made more sense if it WAS just relayed through dialogue, because Sebastian literally did not even do a single thing to tempt Modri and we get basically nothing to show us his frame of mind (…beyond the obvious fact that he wouldn’t like his family being killed. I can’t even say “he wouldn’t be hurt by it” because it’s like, whatever. I’m accepting this. They’re dead now. I hold no resentment towards you for killing them. I’m not even going to ask why you did it, even though you haven’t given any motivation for this, haven’t called yourself a demon, haven’t so much as mentioned souls.)
Modri had nothing to live for and he knew that the serpent doesn’t actually grant you the spoils of your wishes, So why wouldn’t he just ask to be killed, or kill himself? I’m serious. All he wanted was his family happy and they were slaughtered. Why was he smiling LOL it’s not as if he was hypnotized… Sebastian didn’t do anything but say he killed them?? And Modri thinks it’s his own fault to some degree and he didn’t even need Sebastian to say THAT much. Ciel at least wanted revenge against those responsible, but Sebastian was the one responsible this time. Why would he be asking for another “miracle”. Where is the appeal
When I sent this chapter to my friend they thought I messed up and left pages out lol. I’m being repetitive but seriously I could have gotten just as much out of this by reading it on the wiki. Only the first half of the chapter had remotely any care put into it, so that’s why I was saying I feel like I know the next one is just going to do this scene over again before we see the new guy. Why even release this??????? You’ve skipped a month before! You’ve released 8 page chapters before! WHAT WAS THE POINTTTT




















