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okay now that you have established yourself as a date everything fan I must humbly request that you draw Hector. I need to see him in your style please please please please please please please please please plea
your fave and mine (Ėµ ā¢Ģ į“ - Ėµ ) ā§ (contrary to popular belief my no.1 dateable is actually not mac.... oh my god no it's jon wick.....)
OH MY LORD MY TOP 2 FAVES IN THE SAME ART AUGGHHH
OMG HI IM BACK HEHEHE
Got fixated on Date Everything sm so I HAD TO MAKE AN OC EHE. I have more but so far I only drew the feather duster :D Meet Heather Duster!
And of course I had to make a yumeship with her and Scandalabra. I FIND HIS CHARACTER INTRIGUING AND THINKING ABT HIM ALSO MADE ME THOUGHT ABOUT LUMIERE AND FIFI EHEHEHEHE
WOAHHHHHH Hi guys :3 Meet my shayla (Dandys world OC),,, HALLEY THE COMET >-<!!!! I LOVE HER literally got fixated with this game asf and yknow that if I got a new fixation, I make an oc out of it
One of the main characters of Dandy's world! She functions as an All-Rounder toon, meaning that she could take in all roles.
Her movement speed has a total of 5 stars and she has a high stamina, followed by an average extraction speed, which I'd like to think that she could work as a back-up distractor as she helps out extracting (similar to Looey)
Her weakness however is stealth and skill check, reflecting her competitive nature in willing to take on even the most difficult challenges to be the greatest toon.
Also OC relationships with the main characters :D!!!
Now Astro's close friendship with Halley doesn't replace Dandy as his best friend. While she is a great friend and they get along really swell, I can imagine that her friendship could not compare with Dandy towards Astro.
I could imagine that with everything currently going on, Dandy may have resented her because of her boisterous energy swaying the other toons easily but he does not entirely hate her.
While she likes making friends, she also thinks that her competitive and prideful nature may have pushed many toons away from her, making her quite insecure of it whoopsy (but she doesn't wanna admit it at all, She wants to maintain a pristine and perfect image of herself)
UMMM WUHHH HI I l,,,love this guy and his name is P,,,Pure Vanilla Cookiešššš
Since CRK is trending again because of toxic yaoi, I shall hop in the train and give my boi some love :3 IM SO NORMALLLL ABOUT HIM HEHEHEHE
Oh and also a CRK OC I just made :333 Literally just came back to CRK after a longtime hiatus and I finished City of Wizards. Favorite episode of all time. So I had to make an OC based on the aesthetic of that episode.
Sorry guys, no toxic yaoi from me IM HOMOPHOBIC /HEAVY J
Happy International Women's Day to you and all of your multitudes. We here at Black Tabby Games love Women (all one of them!)
Woah so suddenly I got hit with the hero x villain beam after 3-4 years of losing interest in the trope and now I want to start writing about it again, perhaps even recreate my hero and villain ocs that I abandoned years ago š
I am lowkey thinking about creating another account for writing, this one will be reserved for art and general yapping or random shit
Ummmm wuhhhhh Bonnie's Bakery and Pyun Pyun stuff :D I thought of doodling them ever since I have heard of Pyun Pyun and I GOT SO INVESTEDDD URRRGHH majority is just Abe, I love detectives gotta be one of my fave genders
Okay you know what? Schizophrenia is way too demonized and, as someone who has had it for ten freaking years, I want to dispel some myths about hallucinations.
Aka talking about hallucinations using my own personal examples because I had an actual fucking THERAPIST tell me I was the ONLY person in the world who experienced hallucinations that were not solely visual or auditory. Warning forā¦hallucinations obviously.
Visual hallucinations - These are hallucinations you see. I usually experience these by way of inanimate objects moving (like dolls or mannequins moving on their own, before you ask yes I do hate clothing stores). Sometimes these can be scary and sometimes theyāre mundane! Iāve hallucinated monsters and Iāve hallucinated pretty birds. Hallucinations donāt always have to be scary.
Auditory hallucinations - These are hallucinations you hear. I commonly hear crying, talking, music, and video game noises. If I play a video game for too long and it has a repetitive sound in it, I WILL be hearing that sound for minimum three hours. You think the sound that plays in LoZ when youāre low on hearts is annoying? Try having to listen to it on loop when youāre not even playing the game. Like with visual hallucinations, theyāre not always scary! Contrary to popular belief, they can be totally mundane. Hearing voices is not always scary either. Sometimes they just say random stuff, sometimes they give me little pep talks, most of the time they just all talk over each other at once and Iām like GUYS ONE AT A TIME PLEASE jeezy cheez-itās.
Tactile hallucinations - These are hallucinations you feel. I hear common tactile hallucinations are feelings of bugs on you and fur but I donāt usually have these, I mostly have tactile hallucinations of being choked which isā¦not fun.
Olfactory hallucinations - These are hallucinations you smell. Yeah I thought of farts first too. So far I havenāt heard of that being a common hallucination though. I hear a common olfactory hallucination is burning? But I just smell wet metal. Iā¦donāt know why.
Gustatory hallucinations - These are hallucinations you taste. I donāt know how to pronounce gustatory either. I often taste blood or metal. I hear those are pretty common gustatory hallucinations.
None of these hallucinations are inherently scary! As a child, I thought hallucinations were a super power. After living with them for over ten years, they just donāt phase me that much. Remember: you donāt have to be schizophrenic to experience hallucinations! There are many things that cause hallucinations including and not limited to trauma, PTSD, psychotic depression, etc. (sometimes even stress!)
But please please please be kind to people who hallucinate. Iāve lived with it for over ten years and (rarely) it can still be terrifying to me sometimes. People say āBut thereās nothing there and you know that-ā yes I know that! But itās still very very real to me and very terrifying! Minimizing what people experience with their hallucinations is not helpful and will only make them feel worse.
Thank you for reading!
Hi guys sorry that I neglected yall š Anyways I am fixated on Piggy once again 4 years after ā¹ļø
Oh my goodness guys I didn't realize how inactive I was in Tumblr lmao- My bad yallšš
I don't have the motivation to write like I used to anymore so if you come back to my page then you may never see new stories written by me though I do keep all my old ones here so enjoy those while I am gone- In the meantime I will just be posting my art here (And it'll flop but idrc I just like showing my art)
Anyways adios
Prompt #176
āPlease donāt yell at me.ā
Civilian blinked as Hero set them down on the pavement. The hero looked like a dog with its tail between its legs, the type thatās used to being hit. āWhy would I yell at you?ā
Hero peered up from the ground just a little, but apparently, did not dare push their shield of hair out of their face. āBecause usually when I save someoneā¦.they yell at me.ā
āWhat in the world for?ā
āTaking too long, holding them too rough, ruining an outfit, not saving someone else in time, saving them when they didnāt want to be saved in the first placeā¦I could go on.ā
Civilian gaped. āBut youāre a hero!ā
āI fell off the pedestal a long time ago.ā
āI p-promiseāā Hero sneezed, their whole body jolting. āāM not sickā¦ā
Villain hardly looked impressed, pulling the covers back up around the otherās shoulders. Not even at gun point would they admit how much they were worried about the heroās worsening condition.
āDonāt be a martyr, sweetheart. The city can waste away until youāre better.ā With shaky hands, Villain carefully tucked the duvet under the frail hero, making sure they didnāt jostle their infected wounds too much.
The crime-stopper coughed, water rattling in their lungs as their fever raged incessantly. āC-Canātā¦ā Their glossy eyes locked onto the villainās. āPlease... Keep them safe.ā
With that, exhaust dragged Hero to the depths of a feverish sleep that would keep them tossing and turning all night. But Villain couldnāt be there this time, this time they had a city to protect.
HELL YEAH THE FLAVORRRR
Hello cat!
Just read your 3k series and wanted to give you a bit of feedback.
End of part two feels a bit hasty, besides the typo in the second to last paragraph (pretty sure you meant villain not hero there). There's a few typos but who cares, this one was just a bit confusing and stopped my reading flow. BUT.
Part four is GREAT OMG the feelzzzz
And don't get me started on the ending it's truly villainous~ and just over the top honestly. I love it. Hard, hurting, realistic. Wanted to let you know you did a great job on the series :)
Personal opinion: I feel like you could have made this a lot longer. There's only a glimpse of the feelings you're trying to express, they came out but they'd really sink in if you'd dwell on it a bit more, write about the stuff a bit more. Although I think that's mb just not your style since you put more weight on dialogue. Like I said it's just a thought it's still great you don't have to change anything in your style.
Something else entirely... I've read some german mostly in your tags sometimes. So I wonder where you're from if you want to tell. Don't have to ofc.
Greetings!
Uhmā¦okay?
So, when I put my work out here, I obviously have to expect criticism. Thatās kinda unavoidable. People will have an opinion about me and my writing.
However, I donāt really know what your intention is. For example, I donāt see the ātypo in the second to last paragraph.ā
I wrote:
The hero stared at them, eyes narrowed. As if all of this was a trick. But then eventually, they spoke. Followed by a line spoken by the villain.
The hero stared at them. So, they spoke eventually. I get that using nb/nb for both characters is confusing but most of the heroxvillain community is structured like that and nearly all my writing is too. Which makes it weird to me to see this as a mistake on my partā¦? Like, you could use any line Iāve written on here and tell me I actually meant hero or villain because they both use they/them pronouns.
Also, I didnāt really catch any big typos/mistakes in that snippet. I used a lot of short sentences in this especially because the hero is extremely tired in these scenes and thinking in long ass sentences is just not really possible in such a state of mind (at least not for me lol). So, I guess this could be a reason for why you were confused/not satisfied with the writing flow? Itās structured like all my other snippets and itās my usual writing style, so that confused me about your ask, too. Of course, I make mistakes as well and I make typos but againā¦you could say that about every snippet I write, so I wonder why you chose this one specifically?
Additionally, I donāt really see which parts of my snippets are giving āonly a glimpse of the feelings [I am] trying to express.ā I donāt think my readers are dumb. I think my readers get what I mean when I write āIt fried their brain, making it impossible to even think straight. Old panic resurfaced but they put on a tired smirk.ā
I think my readers get that old panic means that this character is familiar with panic, whereas putting on a tired smirk is a reaction to it. Which is (as we see throughout the whole story) a thing the hero does a lot. Hiding their pain and distracting themselves with flirting. Readers arenāt dumb. I donāt have to go into every little detail about every tiny thing the characters experience. In fact, part of being a reader is, that you get to imagine these things for yourself. As the writer, I give you a tiny bit of information and as the reader, you get to interpret and shape that however you want.
My readers get what I am trying to express with my charactersā actions and their dialogues. The villain asking the hero if they think theyāre a good person has meaning behind it and normally, as a reader, you get stuff like that. I donāt have to describe in a paragraph that the villain doubts themselves and is beginning to value the heroās opinion on them, no, I let them ask if they think theyāre a bad person.
Of course, this series could have been longer. Couldāve been deeper. It couldāve been a whole book. But I am not here to write books for you for free. I am not here to write thousands of words because one anonymous user thinks a blog which posts snippets, should write more and more and more.
So, I believe this is more opinion than actual criticism. I guess? Because, like I said, thereās a reason for the way this snippet is written and if you want to ācriticiseā me for typos, youād have to criticise every post I have ever made.
And another thing is, this message is coming from an anonymous user. So, Iām sorry if this offends you but I really donāt care about your opinion that much. I donāt think this message had any criticism in it which improves my writing.
Eventually, your opinion doesnāt have the same weight to me as the opinion of a certain epiclamer or a certain lilyaang or a certain creweemmaeec11 or a certain snowshowerwriting or a certain avvail or a certain thepenultimateword or a certain English teacher of mine.
This is your opinion of the series and this is mine ā I donāt see any big mistakes or horrible decisions Iāve made and some anon telling me they didnāt like this or that wonāt change that.
And yes, English isnāt my first language. I am German, come from Germany, live in Germany.
Also, as my wife has already implied in her response, we are not machines. We do not write for you. We do not write according to your directions. We do not write your own stories. If you want something specific, go write it yourself.
There is a massive difference between criticism on a post written for you versus written for oneself.
Cat doesnāt come on this app for hours writing just to receive asks like this that are going to ācriticizeā her work, when she works hard enough already to just post this stuff. Be fucking grateful before you decide to go talk around like this and at the very least, be right. You canāt say you saw typos when there are clearly none.
The writers on this app arenāt writing to cater to you.
I see where yall are going at- As an artist and writer myself, Even as you do not intend your opinion/criticism to offend the creator you don't have to give them that opinion if they do not ask for it.
Most creators create for fun, Not to mostly entertain or please thousands (Well some they do but yknow where Im getting at) ā or perhaps millions. You don't need to push them to your expectations just enjoy their creations yknow.
"I feel like you could have made this a lot longer" I do get that you wanted to see more of it but the creator doesn't have to. Creating isn't what you expect; quick as a wave or fast like the wind - no it took hours, probably weeks or months, to think of what to create. Even writing, It's hard to construct them just for people to leave a like and support them which motivates them to keep going (Don't mean it badly yknow) -
Like take me for example. Even for an oc art it took me 3-4 hours just to get 11- 13 likes on Instagram or 0 - 5 notes on tumblr. Even if it took me that much to finish that art, I at least appreciate it for people to just look at it for a second and leave that digital like even if it's small. And even for writing, It had took me years to wait and look for what to write and to construct on my stories but somehow even so I just couldn't think of one. I just scramble all those ideas altogether and think and think.
Simply; If you don't like the writing, Just leave yknow- like let the writer be and let them have fun on their style. No need to push your criticism on them just to get better. Like do they even care-
I get you are trying to not sound offending but does the writer really care about your opinion? No. They just wanna write so just sit in your corner and drink some water man
MARCH REDRAW!
Character below owned by my friend!
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best dynamic. you agree
So uh hey I am back?
I couldn't write shit anymore so have my ocs being lovey dovey cause I have no bitches and because february is gonna be over in days
Content// Gvns and Kissing
FEBRUARY REDRAW 2022 - 2023
Okay I don't normally post Danganronpa content here but i havent posted lol anyways have them- (right is Kiji Nomai, my danganronpa oc and Ryoma Hoshi on the left-)
The old one is on the 2nd picā
