The first piece to be shown was Humpty Dumpty. I thought the idea of how to produce Humpty Dumpty into a piece rather than just a read out nursey rhyme was good.
At the start the narators did well on involving the audience, as they spoke to and for the audience, and the volume off all speaking parts were good at the start.
Whilst they were fixing humpty, it involved humour but some lacked enthusiasm when running out to reveal to the audience what the problem was. Towards the end, the energy levels and volume went down amd also some of the language used seemed maybe to advanced for the target audience.
This was a good idea to have in the show as it was not a typical act you would find in a normal childs show, but worked well as it created humour for the audience. Although the characters needed to make what they were saying more clear as they were speaking in a different accent, overall it was a good piece.
The singing needed to be louder and most people needed to thoroughly learn to the lyrics as a lot of the time when singing it went quiet due to people not knowing the words for that part. The entrance to the song needed to be sorted out, and the actions needed to be in sync and shown with more energy and enthusiasm.
The piece had a lot of potential as it was not just group singing as it had solo parts and two people acting out their solo parts, and the actions we did while singing as a group were very simple yet effective and fit well with the song.
Entrance and exit needed to sorted out and needed music, the moves were good and effective and it was easy to see what they were trying to be.
Lazy mouse and Industrious mouse.
To begin with, the production seemed messy, as though everything was everywhere. The narrations were good and engaged with the audience well although the narrations did need tidying up a bit and so did the exit.
The piece is good for the children to watch as it is short and simple and contains a moral that the children can learn from.
Need to speak up when using direct dialogue. Learn the words for the rhyme that introduces Hansel and Gretal, clean up the exit,
Starting with the trees is good as the audience are already familiar with them but their volume needs to increase and their piece maybe shortened as it seems to drag on a bit. The wizards entrance is good, holds the character as he walks on stage. When the wizard traps Hansel and Gretal it needs tidying up and they need to show more victory when they defeat the wizard.
Hansel and Gretals characters are shown well and the wizards scary character is kept discreet and suited to the audience.
Entrance is a bit messy when the singers reach center stage. Singing needs to be louder and harmonys need to be sorted out, Actions are discreet and simple which is good for the target audience as they are easy to follow, and the song is something that most people are familiar with.
Need to dreeze when Sophie as a fairy freezes the characters, voices need to be more clear and the actors need to interact with the audience more. Volume of most the characters need to rise aswell. The piece in a whole needs to be shortened as it drags on when Jack keeps going up and down the beanstalk multiple times.
The piece is funny and is something the children will be familiar with as Jack and the beanstalk is a popular fairytale story.