Grayson + Lyra rushed
Okay so I liked TGG. It was a three star read for me but I won't get into that in this post because this is about Grayson and Lyra. I absolutely loved their buildup and tension and 100% could see them being endgame. That being said, I felt the final scene (their kiss) felt quite rushed. Grayson is a slow-burner as we've gotten to learn from all the previous books. So him being so quick to get with Lyra after them only knowing eachother what, six hours? Felt very out of character for him. I also think Grayson doesn't really need a love interest. He needs to love and believe in himself more. Get him to be more vulnerable with his brothers before giving him a love interest. But yes, I felt the kiss was rushed and it would've been better to wait until Grandest Rivals to have them kiss because by then they'll have had more time together and there would still be tension. I also think JLB really should've ended the series at The Hawthorne Brothers because atp, it kind of feels like she's dragging on the story imo. Lmk your thoughts!
















