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@phoenixmaiden-writing
Two Types of Writing
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HOW TO SHOW FEVER / NAUSEA IN WRITING
“They felt sick.” — Vague. “They threw up.” — Sometimes, but not always.
Illness isn’t a switch you flip. Fever and nausea creep, spike, ebb, lie to you, then come back worse. They live in the body first, and that’s where your writing should live too.
Below, I've written a lil' cheat sheet for you. Reblog so you can come back later.
Meant To Be Chapter 44
Author’s Note: I'm so sorry it's late. But I promise it was worth the wait!
Summary: One Night of passion leads to drastic consequences that change the war completely. Harry must go into hiding to protect himself and his most guarded secret. But will that secret bring Harry and Tom together? Only if it is Meant to Be. M/M - TRHP - OOC - MPEG
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: Explicit
Language: English
Read it on AO3: Chapter 44
Read it on fanfiction.net: Chapter 44
Read it on Wattpad: Chapter 44
Art Source: Flayu
Deleted Tomarry fics
I've recently set up a Google Drive folder linking up to many deleted fics. I have a little hobby of tracking down great deleted fics and downloading them for my pleasure, and I'd say I've gotten pretty good at it tbh. I didn't realize I have so many now, so I set up a drive folder and decided to make it public.
I have it organised by author, so hopefully you can recognize the stuff. I'll put the names of the authors in the tags, and you're def gonna recognize them. People on twitter are already freaking out about everything I have lol. (P.S. ever heard of yours, in murder by May Marlow? Read it. Cuz I got it.)
So please enjoy my library of recovered fics. I also take requests if you want me to find a deleted fic of some sort. Altho be warned, my area of expertise is tomarry, but I'm sure I could still track down a few fics.
Edit: Btw I'm still adding fics to this folder. So if there's anything you're missing out on I suggest coming back to check every once in a while.
Edit 2: There's an ongoing problem that a few people have brought up to me. Turns out some people can't open the files. The reason why is because I download the webpage directly from chrome, usually, and those are html files, but when I download the webpage, the file isn't automatically recognized as html for some reason, so I end up putting it into the Google drive and it's an unrecognized file type, which is why some of you can't open it. There's an easy way to fix that. Just download the file then rename it. Add ".html" to the end of the file name and you should be good to go. And for those that don't like to read html files, you can convert it to an epub or wtv else by using free sites like cloud convert and then you're good to go.
Google Drive Link
The truth of it 🤣
@isalisewrites do these words resonate in any way? Lol
YES
Plot is ALWAYS cockblocking my smut!
helps him get dressed
Meant To Be Chapter - Late
Not sure if any of my readers are on here, but the next chapter of Meant to Be is going to be late. I caught a cold and it is kicking my ass so I haven't had time to write as often as I wanted to.
Rest assured, it will be coming out, but not exactly at midnight as I usually do. It may even be a few days after the new year, but it is coming. And it's a good one. I promise.
Happy New Year everyone!
The chapter is taking a lot longer than I was expecting. I have so much happening in it, that I am taking my time. Now that I am back at work, it's taking even longer and cutting into my sleep. But I will get it done!
Real, *me using dictionaries and thesauruses to avoid it*
I’m noticing an increase in new fic writers on AO3 who…uh…mayy not know how to format their fics correctly..so here is a quick and VERY important tip
Using a random fic of mine as example..
The left example: ✅✅✅
The right example: ❌❌❌
Idk how many times I’ve read a good fic summary and been so excited to read before clicking on it and being met with an ugly wall of text. When I see a huge text brick with zero full line breaks my eyes blur and I just siiiigh bc either I click out immediately or I grin and bear it…it’s insufferable!
If a new character speaks, you need a line break. If you notice a paragraph is becoming too large, go ahead and make a line break and/or maybe reconfigure the paragraph to flow better. I’m not a pro writer or even a huge fic writer but…please…ty…
This is a good thing to keep in mind! It is often and unfortunate that a really good fic doesn’t get love because its formatting makes it too difficult to read!
I think I figured out why this happens!
AO3's posting form has two modes: Rich Text and HTML. the vast majority of people write in Rich Text editors, aka any normal word processing software (MS Word, Google Docs, Apple Pages, what have you). but when you first open it, the posting form opens in HTML view. if you paste formatted text into HTML view, it erases every piece of formatting, including paragraph spacing.
this is an easy fix. when you go to post your fic, make sure the posting form looks like this:
not like this:
and please spread the word! this is an important piece of computer literacy that nobody is teaching to the new generations and they deserve to know
and the reverse happens when pasting from some places (google doc, ms word) into rich-text where it doubles the spaces between lines. If you look at the html it generates </p><p> </p><p> tags - an extra paragraph containing a single space, which you can search and replace down to a single </p><p> (end paragraph, start new one).
Also, since sometimes working with the rich text editor can be a pain even when copy-pasting from another rich text editor, there is a Google Docs script that will format your document in HTML and make it appropriate for posting into the AO3 html editor. I swear by this and I use it every time I post to AO3. It's literally just a specific Google doc that you can make a copy of that includes a script where you just select a menu option and it will automatically convert formatting to HTML, and using this script + pasting into the HTML editor has bypassed the issues of "extra line breaks between paragraphs" and "a space after italics where there shouldn't be" for me.
The original google doc is here and it includes directions both for getting a copy of it into your own google drive and for using it to prepare your fic for posting on AO3.
Also be aware that if you write in Scrivener it will not keep your formatting when you paste it into AO3, even in the Rich Text editor.
There's a reason I'm only writing one fic in Scrivener (it's the timey wimey one where I need the corkboards function on Scrivener in order to function).
adding on that if you use ellipsus (online alternative to Google docs) there is a native "export to ao3" function which automatically copies an html version of your fic including the spacing and formatting and opens a new tab for a new work in ao3. Just paste into the text box and you'll be set!
@mysteryteacup, and everyone else who uses Scrivener;
In Scrivener, you can go to the manual "copy" section of the edit menu and hit "copy special"! Then, it will give you 2 options which auto-generate HTML you can paste into the HTML editor.
Oooh, interesting! I'll try that next time! Thank you!
dialogue prompts for enemies with tension
(this is my first time on tumblr, some of these will probably just be prompts you hear everyday but i'll have some of my own too :D)
"don't tempt me."
"you really gonna act like our kiss never happened?"
"stop looking at me like that" - "stop acting like you don't like it"
"keep talking like that and i'm kissing you right here, right now"
"make me."
"if you bite your lip one more time, i'll start doing it for you"
"you just gonna stare at me like that or are you actually gonna get closer for once?"
"i know you want me too, just say it."
"we can't do this" - "then stop looking at me like that"
"i want to hate you, but i don't."
"you're the last person i should want"
"bite me."
"careful, you're starting to sound jealous"
"just this once."
"look me in the eye and tell me you don't feel this too"
"why won't you just admit what's going on between us?"
"you wanna know what i hate the most about you? the fact that i can't get you out of my head"
"oh my god, you're so hot, can i have your number?" (when they're like... HELLA drunk)
"talk to me, baby"
"why did you tell everyone we're in a relationship?" - "i didn't want other guys/girls thinking they could have a chance with you"
"stop glaring" - "stop flirting with others"
"give in, please."
"come and get it."
"you're so cute when you're jealous"
"people will start thinking you're obsessed" - "maybe i am"
"i'm not yours" - "no, but you will be"
"you think i like seeing you with other guys/girls?"
"try me."
"why are you looking at me like that?" - "cause you're hot as hell"
"try not to fall for me, will you?"
"we're alone, no one has to know, just this once..."
"touch me like you hate me"
"jealousy doesn't suit you" - "then stop making me wear it"
"are you planning on kissing me?" - "depends, do you want me to?"
"promise me you won't do anything stupid" - "as long as you promise to kiss me as my reward"
"you're drunk" - "and waiting for my kiss"
"stop looking at me like that" - "like what?" - "like you want to devour me"
"i won't kiss you as long as you promise you don't want me to"
"three words and i'm yours"
"did anyone ever tell you how good you look in (colour)?"
"damn it, she/he's so attractive" - "who?" - "(name), who else?" - "this is (name)" - "shit."
"jealous?" - "yeah, right"
Hurt/Comfort Dialogue
Some of these are found all over tumblr. And my apologies for not posting.
"Hey- no, no. It’s okay, cry it all out. I’m here for you"
"I’ll stay by your side for the whole time" "Promise?" "Of course darling, Promise"
"When’s the last time you actually slept?"
"Just breathe, it’ll be over soon"
"Everything will feel that it’s not okay, but— don’t forget, you’re not alone this time"
"I’m sorry—" "No, don’t be sorry. It’s not your fault"
"I’m here, and will be by your side"
"You can’t hide that fever from me"
"You’re safe now"
"Calm down, you’re burning up"
"I’m open for hugs, whenever you need them!"
"I know it hurts, but just hold on a little longer!"
"Let me take care of you this time"
"Stop pretending that you’re fine! You need first aid!"
"You’ve always been there for me, now, it’s my turn to be there for you"
"Why?" "Because you mean the world to me,"
"Listen to me! Fuck what they think! Because you are perfect! You hear me?"
"You’re not useless"
"Take these meds, they’ll help"
"I’m not leaving, okay?"
“Don’t pretend you’re okay. Please, don’t lie to me, because I know you’re not okay!"
Prompts
Making them warm soup, and taking care of them, as if they were glass
Asking them every two minutes if they need something
Holding their hand once the pain becomes unbearable
After a long day they’re burnt out, and finds their partner making dinner for them both
Treating to their partner/friend’s wounds
Giving them meds for the pain
Refusing to leave because you can see past them, and knowing they’re sick
Pretending to be fine after a small incident, and their partner/friend asks them what’s wrong, which flips the switch and they can’t stop crying. And eventually tell their partner/friend about it
Going out to buy their favourite snacks
Giving the other hugs
Not letting go of the others hand
( a collection of too close for 'just friends' prompts. adjust phrasing as necessary.) feel free to make edits to better suit your muse.
They’ve always hugged, but lately those hugs linger just a beat too long.
Sharing a bed during a trip—neither of them sleeps much because they’re too aware of the other’s presence.
Accidentally slipping into couple habits (buying each other food, remembering their exact coffee order, fixing their collar, etc.).
Friends teasing them for acting like a couple… and both of them freezing because it hits a little too close.
One notices the other’s dating profile and feels irrationally territorial.
The line between “friendly banter” and “flirting” has gotten blurry.
A partner/bystander points it out bluntly: “You know they’re in love with you, right?”
A fight about boundaries—because one of them wants more, but is terrified of losing the friendship.
A drunken kiss that neither of them can stop thinking about.
Everyone else assumes they’re together already… and they can’t quite correct them.
“Do you have any idea what it does to me when you look at me like that?”
“You’re supposed to be my safe place, not the reason my chest feels like it’s going to explode.”
“We can’t—God, we can’t cross that line.”
“Say it. Say you don’t feel it too, and I’ll drop it.”
“You don’t get to touch me like that and still call it friendship.”
“Stop smiling at me like I’m yours.”
“If this is just friendship, then why can’t I breathe when you’re this close?”
“You’re going to ruin me, and you don’t even know it.”
“One more second like this, and I’m not going to be able to stop myself.”
“Tell me you don’t want me, and I’ll believe you.”
“Don’t kiss me like that and pretend it means nothing.”
“We’re not supposed to do this. We’re not supposed to feel this.”
“I’d rather lose my mind than lose you, and right now I think I’m losing both.”
“Do you want me to beg? Is that what this is?”
“If we cross this line, nothing will ever be the same. And God help me, I still want to.”
“If you keep touching me like that, I won’t be able to stop.”
“Friends don’t ache when the other leaves the room. So what does that make us?”
“Tell me to go, and I will. Please—say something before I do something we can’t take back.”
“Don’t call me your best friend when you’re looking at me like I’m more.”
“If this is nothing, then why does it feel like everything?”
“You don’t get it, do you? Every time you smile at me, it feels like a promise.”
“You’re in my head all the time, and it’s killing me. Friends aren’t supposed to feel like this.”
“If we cross this line, you’re not just my friend anymore. You’re my downfall.”
“You’re standing too close.”
“Do you even know what you’re doing to me right now?”
“Stop making me want something I can’t have.”
“I can’t lose you to this, but God, I can’t stop wanting you either.”
“You’re looking at me weird.”
“That wasn’t a… friendly thing to say.”
“Do you always stand this close?”
“Why does it feel different when it’s you?”
“You’re supposed to be my best friend, not the one making my heart race.”
“That… didn’t sound like a joke.”
“Stop holding me like that. Friends don’t hold each other like that.”
“Do you even realize how you’re looking at me right now?”
“Don’t call me yours. You don’t mean it.”
“I can’t breathe when you touch me like that.”
“Say we’re still just friends. Lie to me.”
“We’re not supposed to want this.”
“If this is nothing, then why does it feel like everything?”
“One more second and I’m not going to be able to stop myself.”
“Every time you laugh, I forget we’re not allowed to be more.”
“Tell me you don’t feel it. Please. Tell me I’m imagining this.”
“You can’t just kiss me and act like it means nothing.”
“I’m trying so hard not to want you, and you’re making it impossible.”
“If you keep looking at me like that, I swear I’ll ruin everything.”
“Tell me to go, or I’m not going to.”
“You’re mine. God help me, I don’t care what we call it—you’re mine.”
“I’d rather destroy this friendship than pretend I don’t want you anymore.”
“Do you want me to beg? Because I will.”
“We’ve already crossed the line. The second I realized I loved you, we did.”
“Stop staring at me like that. You’re my best friend.”
“You can’t just… say stuff like that. We’re supposed to be friends.”
“Friends don’t make my heart do backflips when they smile.”
“Why does it feel like I’m cheating when you go on dates?”
“Don’t hold my hand if you don’t mean it.”
“We’ve been friends for years, so why does it suddenly feel different?”
“Don’t kiss me like that if you’re going to pretend it didn’t happen.”
“You’re supposed to be the one I tell about my crush, not be the crush.”
“That’s not a friendly kind of jealousy.”
“If we’re just friends, then why do I feel like you’re mine?”
Argumentative Sentences, Vol. 3
(Sentences from various sources for sparking up an argument between muses. Adjust phrasing where needed)
"Don't tell me to calm down!"
"I hate you!"
"I'm perfectly capable of making my own decisions!"
"You are the most stubborn man I've ever met!"
"You started this!"
"Apology not accepted."
"You don't know what you're talking about. Can we not do this right now?"
"Aren't you getting a little tired of this? Because I know I am."
"You think this is who I wanted to be?"
"Don't tell me to calm down! You're making me nervous!"
"How could you say that so easily?"
"Maybe I don't always want your opinion!"
"Have you lost your fucking mind?"
"What the hell do you mean you lost them?"
"Don't raise your voice at me!"
"This is all your fault!"
"That's an incredibly inappropriate question!"
"You have no right to control my life!"
"Are you kidding me? You're actually bringing this up right now?"
"You think I'm dumb, don't you?"
"I'll talk to you any way I like!"
"Let's not start this tedious argument again."
"Stop it! I don't want you talking about this with these people here, do you understand?"
"What are you saying? That I'm taking you for granted?"
"Don't you dare play the innocent with me!"
"No, you're not doing this! You're going to kill yourself!"
"I don't have to tell you who I've slept with!"
"Don't fucking patronise me!"
"Is this what you wanted? Is it?"
"You always ruin everything!"
"Was it you? Were you the one talking shit?"
"all we do is fuss and fight" - argument prompts
a prompt list by @novelbear 🐾
✧ grinding teeth to prevent themselves from saying something they don't mean
✧ clenched fists
✧ "what the hell was that?!"
✧ "you can't tell me what i can or cannot do!"
✧ the clicking teeth + rolling eyes combo
✧ watching their tongue poke the inside of their cheek as they get more irritated
✧ storming out of the house mid-argument
✧ "i think we should come back to this conversation later." "you always do that when you get caught up, no."
✧ biting your bottom lip as they spew nothing but nonsense
✧ backing away and throwing their hands up as the other tries to move closer
✧ "you're not listening to me!" "tell me what i'm not hearing then!"
✧ laughing in their face, which only makes the other angrier.
✧ "you think everything is a joke, don't you?"
✧ tears of anger welling up in one's eyes
✧ ^ the other notices and either slows down or doubles down
。゚゚・。・゚゚。 ゚。 BUILD A FIC ! ゚・。・
( pick a quote + a feeling + a trope ! let’s see what fic you end up with. )
author's addition: this lil build-a-fic is inspired by @scealaiscoite ’ s adorable idea ! her prompt lists are literal perfection. go stalk her blog pls she’s the best ever 🧸
— QUOTE
❛ stop smiling like that. it’s distracting. ❜ ❛ you make it really hard to stay just friends. ❜ ❛ why does it feel like a goodbye? ❜ ❛ you’re blushing. ❜ — ❛ no i’m not. ❜ ❛ just friends don’t look at each other like that. ❜ ❛ i missed you. that’s all. ❜ ❛ you remember the little things. that’s what gets me. ❜ ❛ tell me to stay. and i will. ❜ ❛ my hand fits so perfectly in yours. it's like i'm made for you. ❜ ❛ do you want me to leave? ❜ — ❛ no. i want you to stay forever. ❜ ❛ i think i knew it was you. even back then. ❜ — ❛ then stay. ❜ — ❛ but that's the thing. i don't know if i know you anymore. ❜ ❛ i don’t know how to stop wanting you. ❜ ❛ this means something. don’t pretend it doesn’t. ❜ ❛ you’re not just anyone. you’re you. ❜ ❛ if we kiss now, everything changes. ❜ — ❛ i know but that's a risk i'm willing to take. ❜ ❛ i’ve been in love with you since the night we met. ❜ ❛ tell me it meant nothing. lie if you have to. ❜ ❛ i was easy to leave, wasn’t i? ❜ ❛ you don’t get to miss me now. you lost that right when we broke up. ❜ ❛ say something. anything. please. ❜ ❛ i loved you. that should’ve been enough. ❜ ❛ i wish i didn’t remember everything. ❜ ❛ don’t look at me like you still care. ❜ ❛ i’m tired of pretending this doesn’t hurt. ❜ ❛ you said forever. i believed you. ❜ ❛ if you didn’t mean it, why did you say it? ❜ ❛ you chose them. you always do. ❜ ❛ i don’t hate you. i just wish i’d never met you. ❜ ❛ you let me go like i was nothing. ❜ ❛ please don’t make this harder than it already is. ❜ ❛ are you sure? cause whatever this is it doesn’t feel like love. ❜ ❛ it’s always been you. i just didn’t know how to say it. ❜ ❛ say that again. i dare you. ❜ ❛ you really don’t see it, do you? ❜ ❛ i think i like you. like, like like you. ❜ ❛ do you always look at people like that? ❜ ❛ you make it really hard to think straight. ❜ ❛ oh my god. you’re blushing. ❜ ❛ this means something. don’t pretend it doesn’t. ❜ ❛ i should’ve kissed you when i had the chance. ❜ ❛ you’re not helping. you’re being pretty. it's distracting. ❜ ❛ you make me nervous in the best way. ❜ ❛ every time you look at me, i forget what i was saying. ❜ ❛ just admit it. you like me. ❜ ❛ if you don’t kiss me right now, i might explode. ❜ ❛ you’re dangerously good at that smile. ❜
— FEELING
❛ longing ❜ ❛ comfort ❜ ❛ fear ❜ ❛ hope ❜ ❛ guilt ❜ ❛ joy ❜ ❛ jealousy ❜ ❛ trust ❜ ❛ confusion ❜ ❛ safety ❜ ❛ regret ❜ ❛ tenderness ❜ ❛ ache ❜ ❛ peace ❜ ❛ want ❜ ❛ yearning ❜ ❛ hesitation ❜ ❛ betrayal ❜ ❛ relief ❜ ❛ pride ❜ ❛ vulnerability ❜ ❛ nostalgia ❜ ❛ admiration ❜ ❛ disbelief ❜ ❛ grief ❜ ❛ devotion ❜ ❛ loneliness ❜ ❛ warmth ❜ ❛ embarrassment ❜ ❛ desire ❜
— TROPE
❛ only one bed ❜ ❛ mutual pining ❜ ❛ fake dating gone real ❜ ❛ friends to lovers ❜ ❛ strangers to almosts ❜ ❛ found family ❜ ❛ rivals with tension ❜ ❛ the “oh” moment ❜ ❛ confessions at 2am ❜ ❛ sunshine x grump ❜ ❛ forbidden ❜ ❛ hurt / comfort ❜ ❛ secretly in love ❜ ❛ reunion after years ❜ ❛ accidental domesticity ❜ ❛ slow burn ❜ ❛ “just friends” denial ❜ ❛ second chances ❜ ❛ love letters never sent ❜ ❛ childhood friends ❜ ❛ exes ❜ ❛ soulmates who don’t believe in fate ❜ ❛ enemies on the same side ❜ ❛ sleep talking confessions ❜ ❛ one falling first, the other falling harder ❜ ❛ patching up wounds with shaky hands ❜ ❛ “who did this to you?” ❜ ❛ dancing in the kitchen ❜ ❛ jealousy over nothing ( but also everything ) ❜ ❛ late-night phone calls ❜ ❛ caught in the rain ❜ ❛ almost kissing but someone interrupts ❜ ❛ waking up next to them ❜ ❛ fixing each other’s tie / collar ❜ ❛ taking care of them while they’re sick ❜
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