no actually i'm so pissed rn. and i usually wouldn't make this too but im just mad. and no, im not going to elaborate on what fic this is, because i don't want to hurt the writer if they came across this, or have people harassing them.
i will also not be elaborating on what fandom(s) this is, figure it out yourselves.
like it was really good, i really liked this. like it had me hooked for DAYS, (which is unusual even for a 103 chapter fic with 130000 words because i speed through those things) but i got fucking sick and tired of there being new plot points every other chapter
like there's a FUCKING CULT OUT THERE TRYING TO KILL SYD, and we just moved onto the joker
MARINETTE APPARENTLY ALMOST GOT RAPED, and it's never brought up again
HER CLASS IS OUT THERE, ALMOSR GOR HER HURT ON PURPOSE, again, never mentioned again
WHAT ABOUT THE BODY GUARD THAT MARINETTE WAS CLOSE WITH AND WAS LIKE THE ONLY ADULT SHE LIKED? never brought up again.
idk this is just pissing me off. cause you've had FIVE YEARS to write this, and there are still so many plot points that need to be gone over. it feels like the author forgets what they wrote (which is perfectly fine, but you need to be able to have a plan and like something to help you remember) and was just bullshiting their way out of things and not even rereading what they wrote, just making plot points and not even doing anything about said plot points
AND NOT TO MENTION, TERRIBLE FUCKING GRAMMAR. sure it's gotten better, but please, a third grader could remember better grammar
i do get that sometimes people don't get grammar, i don't either, but when you're writing a fic, or something like that i would usually have someone else check it or smth. i do get that people don't have those resources, but it just makes me mad. idk
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