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Глава 1: Закат эпохи

The comic "The Voice and the Guard" will only be in Russian (because I don't know enough English to translate it into that language).

This is my first major project of this size, and I feel a tremendous sense of responsibility for it.

It will be published only on:

Telegram LilaPilz (тут больше контента)

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Twitter (X): Robopilz, LilaPilz ← (?)

Это мой первый крупный проект, и я совершенно не разбираюсь в создании комиксов.

Я планировал сделать комикс из 3 больших (даже огромных) глав, но в процессе сильно поменял структуру. Из-за этого возникло много сложностей, и я до сих пор не уверен, правильно ли поступил.

К сожалению, я почти не читал официальных комиксов, поэтому мне особенно не на что опираться. Было бы гораздо проще, если бы у меня был хоть какой-то опыт чтения профессиональных работ.

Очень надеюсь, что моя история понравится людям. А те, кто разбирается в комиксах, если не сложно, укажите на ошибки и слабые места — буду искренне благодарен за любую конструктивную критику.

Хотя, скорее всего, я просто сам себя слишком загоняю :"")

This is my first major project, and I have absolutely no experience in creating comics.

I planned to make the comic consist of 3 large (even massive) chapters, but during the process I significantly changed the structure. This caused a lot of complications, and I’m still not sure whether I made the right decision.

Unfortunately, I’ve hardly read any official comics, so I don’t really have any professional references to rely on. It would have been much easier if I had at least some experience reading published works.

I really hope that people will enjoy my story. And if anyone who understands comics sees this — please feel free to point out any mistakes or weak spots. I’ll be sincerely grateful for any constructive criticism.

Although, I’m probably just overthinking it too much :"")

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At first this was supposed to be part of my project, but in the end I gave up on it

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Я уже устал от этой работы🫠🫠🫠

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Aww, I was hoping for a heartwarming reunion with their Autobots friends

Oh, alas :(

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Метроплекс без ручек 😭

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What are you teasing us a hint for???

Sorry, I have so much work... It seems you asked this question when I posted pieces of the cover for my upcoming comic, or more precisely, for its first chapter

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While traveling back to Cybertron when does Windblade start to warm up to Starscream?

Not very soon :)

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if there is a chance of Megatron might be still alive and return. What’s going to happen if he found out about Ariel because if he’s around or lays a finger on her and the other sparklings. Everyone might kill him before he has a chance.

Well... Actually, Megatron won’t be surprised by Ariel’s appearance. Orion blabbed to D-16 a long time ago about wanting to start a family.

The real surprise will rather be that she showed up so quickly, because Cybertron still has a very long way to go before it’s fully restored.

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Мегатронус Шок🫨

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Is there a chance when the space bridge are final fixed, an Older Ariel might sneak away and use the space and travel to Earth and later befriends humans and even meets an older version of the Autobot’s human friends, Jack, Miko, Raf, June, and Agent fowler

Perhaps Ariel will indeed try to get to Earth, since this planet was recorded in Cybertron's history as the place where the war ended.

But she will never meet Miko, Jack, Raph, June, and Fowler again... They simply won't live to see it, _,

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Это второй набор пикселей который мне понравился (именно человек), первым был Зуко..

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Ой ой что это?

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So that you don't get bored, I made this thing in my free time

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Work, art block, comic script (←I don't know, did I get that translated correctly?)

Perhaps, if I get through this comic, I might rewrite some parts and try to address some old questions.

(The first chapter of three is ready.)

*Цом*

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Does knockout feel envious that  Ariel gets to have both of her creators and not wildbreak 

Perhaps there's still some slight envy, but not in a bad way.

Knockout is more driven by sadness and rage toward M.E.C.H. (I don't remember, is that what the organization of these people is called?)

Before his death, Breakdown managed to spend time with Wildbreak, but he didn't have time to witness his first words or his first steps. And then these people desecrated his corpse.

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how old the kids are when they arrive in cybertron since it’s be confirm to be 4 earth years when they left Earth

Ariel, as a clot of energy, only appeared near the Elite spark after they left Earth.

Wildbreak already existed before the Omega Lock was created... So... There's an age difference between them...

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Do Ariel and Wildbreak do play dates. Can you draw them playing together while their parents aren’t looking

Yes, they play, and very often. They're the only Sparklings on two ships, and recently on all of Cybertron. So no one's stopping them from playing together