stuck in a perpetual life crisis

[aggieharkness]

She has taken me far longer than any other painting, but I think that it was worth it. I have worked really hard on making sure than I picked up everything single detail because she was worth it and now, at last, with considerable back pain and less vision 😂 I bring to you Lilia Calderu, our beloved Sicilian witch that has enchanted us, charmed us, bewitched us with her personality and her beauty. I accept constructive criticism, but please be kind as this has taken a lot of time and effort. I hope you all like it and from now on all my attention will go to the fics, old and new ones😉. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️

PS The lightning might suck a little but it doesn't look too bad 😊

[secretsav]

This is amazing omg

Good job!

[secretsav]

[keezybees]

I loved this show so much haha

Prints!

[critter-of-habit]

Spooky slumber party shenanigans - now with the whole coven ✨

[shinramyunnoodles]

Keeping the 6 day streak ig 🤷‍♀️

Eat up! Here’s my lil character study of my beloved Lilia Caulderu! I hope Patti is right “we didn’t see her land,” she says, I hope marvel uses this to their advantage, I NEED MORE LILIA 😩

[angeliccss]

[secretsav]

This is so pretty

[adivinationwitch]

Lilia not believing Agatha's fake story for a second.

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Writing Notes & References

Alchemy ⚜ Antidote to Anxiety ⚜ Attachment ⚜ Autopsy

Art: Elements ⚜ Principles ⚜ Photographs ⚜ Watercolour

Bruises ⚜ Caffeine ⚜ Color Blindness ⚜ Cruise Ships

Children ⚜ Children's Dialogue ⚜ Childhood Bilingualism

Dangerousness ⚜ Drowning ⚜ Dystopia ⚜ Dystopian World

Culture ⚜ Culture Shock ⚜ Ethnocentrism & Cultural Relativism

Emotions: Anger ⚜ Fear ⚜ Happiness ⚜ Sadness

Emotional Intelligence ⚜ Genius (Giftedness) ⚜ Quirks

Facial Expressions ⚜ Laughter & Humour ⚜ Swearing & Taboo

Fantasy Creatures ⚜ Fantasy World Building

Generations ⚜ Literary & Character Tropes

Fight Scenes ⚜ Kill Adverbs

Food: Cooking Basics ⚜ Herbs & Spices ⚜ Sauces ⚜ Wine-tasting ⚜ Aphrodisiacs ⚜ List of Aphrodisiacs ⚜ Food History ⚜ Cocktails ⚜ Literary & Hollywood Cocktails ⚜ Liqueurs

Genre: Crime ⚜ Horror ⚜ Fantasy ⚜ Speculative Biology

Hate ⚜ Love ⚜ Kinds of Love ⚜ The Physiology of Love

How to Write: Food ⚜ Colours ⚜ Drunkenness

Jargon ⚜ Logical Fallacies ⚜ Memory ⚜ Memoir

Magic: Magic System ⚜ 10 Uncommon ⚜ How to Choose

Moon: Part 1 2 ⚜ Related Words

Mystical Items & Objects ⚜ Talisman ⚜ Relics ⚜ Poison

Pain ⚜ Pain & Violence ⚜ Poison Ivy & Poison Oak

Realistic Injuries 1 2 ⚜ Rejection ⚜ Structural Issues ⚜ Villains

Symbolism: Colors ⚜ Food ⚜ Numbers ⚜ Storms

Thinking ⚜ Thinking Styles ⚜ Thought Distortions

Terms of Endearment ⚜ Ways of Saying "No" ⚜ Yoga

Compilations: Plot ⚜ Character ⚜ Worldbuilding ⚜ For Poets ⚜ Tips & Advice

all posts are queued. will update this every few weeks/months. send questions or requests here.

[thewatcher727]

Writing Description Notes:

Updated 9th September 2024 More writing tips, review tips & writing description notes

Facial Expressions

Masking Emotions

Smiles/Smirks/Grins

Eye Contact/Eye Movements

Blushing

Voice/Tone

Body Language/Idle Movement

Thoughts/Thinking/Focusing/Distracted

Silence

Memories

Happy/Content/Comforted

Love/Romance

Sadness/Crying/Hurt

Confidence/Determination/Hopeful

Surprised/Shocked

Guilt/Regret

Disgusted/Jealous

Uncertain/Doubtful/Worried

Anger/Rage

Laughter

Confused

Speechless/Tongue Tied

Fear/Terrified

Mental Pain

Physical Pain

Tired/Drowsy/Exhausted

Eating

Drinking

Warm/Hot

[novlr]

ok hello first time sending in an ask but how would you go about writing a longing for your own romantic partner? if that makes sense like you love them so much that you start to feel almost hungry for them

How to write longing

Writing about deep emotions can be challenging. One of the most complex emotions to write about is longing. Longing is a powerful emotion that can tug at the heartstrings of readers and leave them wanting more. So let’s explore how to write about longing in a way that captures the essence of the emotion and engages readers.

Behaviour

Behaviour is a key factor in portraying longing in your writing. When a character is longing for something or someone, they may exhibit certain behaviours that can include:

Constantly checking their phone

Waiting by the window

Becoming restless and agitated

Daydreaming

Obsessively thinking about the thing or person they desire

Putting themselves in situations where they may encounter the object of their longing

Going out of their way to please or impress the person they desire

Silent crying

Interactions

Interactions with other characters can also help to show a character's longing. If the character is longing for someone, they will exhibit certain behaviours when with that person, but also around others. These may include:

Nervousness or stuttering

Trying to impress the person they long for

Engaging the one they long for in deep conversation to prolong their time together

Avoiding eye contact to hide their true feelings

Becoming jealous when the person interacts with others

Making grand gestures to show their affection

Becoming emotional when the person mentions leaving or being with someone else, or when others talk about this prospect.

Physical Signs

Physical signs of longing can vary depending on the character and the situation. Some common physical signs of longing can include:

Racing heart

Sweaty palms

Lump in the throat

Shortness of breath

Muscle tension or trembling

Flushed cheeks

Loss of appetite

Difficulty sleeping

Weakness or fatigue

Visual cues and imagery

Visual cues can help to set the scene and create a visual image for readers. When writing about longing, visual cues and narrative imagery can include things like:

The setting sun to illustrate melancholy

An empty bed to illustrate loneliness

A picture of the person they are longing forto illustrate their constant presence in the character's mind

A heart or other symbol of love to represent the character's feelings

A locked door or closed window to represent obstacles preventing the character from fulfilling their longing

A clock ticking loudly to emphasize the character's impatience

A scent associated with the object of their longing to immediately evoke emotions in the character and the reader.

Internal thoughts

A character’s internal thoughts allow readers to get a sense of the character's desires and motivations, as well as adding depth to their personality. Some ways you can represent their internal lives include:

Reliving memories or staring off into the distance

Focusing on small details such as the sound of footsteps or a certain smell

Being lost in thought or feeling detached from their surroundings

Having imaginary conversations with the object of their longing

Writing letters or messages they never intend to send

Having metaphor-filled dreams

Suppressing their emotions to protect themselves from potential disappointment

Rationalizing their longing as something that cannot be fulfilled

Feeling conflicted about their feelings and the potential consequences of pursuing them

Reliving memories or staring off into the distance

Body Language

Body language is always a compelling way to show, not tell your character’s inner longing. This can include:

Fidgeting

Biting their lip

Looking away when talking to or about the person they are longing for

Sighing or slumping of their shoulders

A deep gaze towards the object of their longing

Fidgeting with personal items such as jewellery or clothing

Clenching their fists

Wrinkling their brow

Tearing up or crying

Unconsciously smiling when talking about the object of their longing

Leaning towards the person they desire or those talking about them

Standing still or frozen in place when in the presence of the person they long for

Internal Feelings

Internal feelings are perhaps the most crucial aspect of representing longing. When a character is longing for something, they may feel a range of emotions like:

Sadness

Frustration

Anger

Envy

Hopelessness

Desperation

Restlessness

Obsession

Depression

Anxiety

Attitudes

Attitudes to represent longing will depend on the type of character your are writing. They may have a pessimistic or optimistic attitude towards their situation, and attitudes can shift and change with time. You can play around with variations of these attitudes, depending on where a character is on their personal journey:

Resigned due to unrequited feelings

Determined in their pursuit of the object of their longing

Guilty for longing for someone they shouldn’t

Resentful of others’ attentions

Ambivalent to everything outside of the one they long for

Jaded by former bad relationships

Vulnerable when with, or thinking about the object of longing

Defensive when speaking about their desire, or when the object of longing is criticised.

Positive outcomes of longing

When a character finally gets what they have been longing for, it can be a rewarding and satisfying experience, which translates to a satisfying relationship resolution for readers. From the character’s perspective, it means they will have an increased motivation to emulate positive traits for personal growth and find happiness and fulfilment as they progress their relationship.

Negative Outcomes

On the flip side, longing can also have negative outcomes. If the character is unable to obtain the person they are longing for, they may become depressed or despondent. It changes the nature of a narrative resolution as well as their relationships with other characters.

[ghostflowerdreams]

How to...Witty Banter/Dialogue

Witty banter is a playful, clever, and humorous conversation technique that every writer uses to spice up their characters’ interactions and convey a sense of depth when they speak. And depending on the situation it can be witty flirting, mild sarcasm, self-deprecating humor, playful teasing and whatnot.

For example a little bit of playful, lighthearted teasing between two people in an already-established relationship is a wonderful way to demonstrate how well they know one another.

“I can’t believe you worn that stupid suit again.” “How else was I gonna get you to rip my clothes off.”

“Do you want lasagna or parmigiana for supper?” “Lasagna.” “Me too. Stop by Olive Garden on the way home.”

However, banter should never be rude, offensive, or condescending. There is a crucial balance between mild teasing or sarcasm and crossing the line into insulting remarks. The only way to truly be good at coming up with witty banter/dialogue is to study it by listening to people, watching movies, and reading books with clever dialogue and narration.

Keep reading

[novlr]

How To Write Compelling Character Arcs - Novlr

Learn to write well-crafted character arcs to make a story memorable, relatable, and emotionally engaging.

Types of Character Arcs

Just like there are various flavours of ice cream to satisfy our taste buds, there are different types of character arcs to captivate readers’ imaginations.

Transformational Arc: A character undergoes a profound transformation throughout the story. This transformational arc takes them on a journey of personal growth, where they evolve, learn from their experiences, and undergo significant change. Think Frodo Baggins from The Lord of the Rings, who starts as an ordinary hobbit and becomes a heroic figure, or Cinderella, who goes from being a mistreated servant to a princess.

Flat or Static Arc: Not all character arcs involve drastic change or growth. In a flat or static arc, the character remains relatively unchanged throughout the story. Instead of personal transformation, these characters serve as a stabilizing force or a moral compass within the narrative. They maintain their core values, beliefs, or traits, providing stability and guidance for others. Sherlock Holmes is a prime example of a character with a flat arc. His brilliant deductive reasoning and logical nature remain consistent, while the world around him evolves.

Positive Change Arc: In a positive change arc, a character starts with flaws, struggles, or a particular mindset, but over the course of the story, they experience personal growth and positive transformation. They learn valuable lessons, overcome obstacles, and develop into a better version of themselves. This arc is often associated with themes of redemption, self-discovery, and the triumph of the human spirit. Characters like Ebenezer Scrooge from A Christmas Carol or Katniss Everdeen from The Hunger Games exemplify positive change arcs.

Negative Change Arc: Contrasting the positive change arc, the negative change arc delves into the descent or downfall of a character. It explores the moral decline, corruption, or internal conflicts that lead the character astray. This arc can be dark and intense, showcasing the destructive power of choices or external influences. Characters like Macbeth from Shakespeare’s play or Anakin Skywalker in Star Wars demonstrate the negative change arc. 💻✨ Discover how the transformative journeys of character arcs breathe life into your stories, and captivate the hearts and minds of your readers. You can read the full post in the Reading Room at the link above.

[promptsbytaurie]

do you have any good references for kiss scenes 🥲

of course!! let me know if you want/need more :D

fics for reference: good kiss scenes

the art of missing the ground - not too exaggerated of a kiss, feels very natural, sweet

paths are made by walking - a bit spicier ig?? i dunno these are more lighthearted

where you go, i will follow - kiss has meaning!!! kiss as a plot device!! good example of more 'negative' reasons ig (still soft tho)

but you saw enough - more climactic? also kinda spicier soooo...? (help me)

pick me up and dust me off - literally so soft you will get cavities. top tier fic. natural kiss too, not too exaggerated

shrapnel - good example, shows that not every relationship has to begin with or star a kiss

(ain't nothin' like) the real thing - definitely spicier. nice example of buildup and that good ol climactic approach where you're literally just screaming 'oh my god kiss already'

listen (he's already told you five times) - another good example of when kissing is not the only form of love!

i counted days, i counted miles - excellent buildup, the kiss has... meaning? it isn't just a kiss yknow it has emotional depth

but we can try - also has meaning. i'm not a huge fan of the trope where like 'oh they aren't in love/dating until they kiss' but this fic actually writes it really well!

[literaryvein-reblogs]

Writing Notes: Character Traits (Virtues)

When describing someone, we often describe the virtues or values they exhibit, which are aligned to their character.

Virtues - positive personal strengths and behaviors that demonstrate an individual’s moral standards.

Can be considered the foundation of character and can be categorized as moral virtues, civic virtues, intellectual virtues, or performance virtues.

Types of Virtues

INTELLECTUAL VIRTUES

Can be considered habits of mind, enabling individuals to become critical thinkers who ask the right questions and seek answers from evidence-based resources.

These virtues support discernment, right action and the pursuit of knowledge while enabling problem-solving.

MORAL VIRTUES

Can be considered habits of the heart.

Moral character guides decision making from multiple perspectives allowing individuals to evaluate situations and respond in a meaningful and responsible manner that keeps the betterment of society and all stakeholders in the forefront.

These virtues guide social connections and ethical decision making.

CIVIC VIRTUES

Can be considered habits of service.

Civic character supports a collaborative approach to solving systemic problems to contribute to the well-being of others and serve the public good.

These virtues ultimately support citizenship and community.

PERFORMANCE VIRTUES

Can be considered habits of action and will, enabling us to marry the quality of our actions to the strength of our convictions.

These virtues equip and enable one to navigate life and uncertainty for success.

Performance virtues are informed by intellectual, moral, and civic virtues.

In collaboration, the virtue types allow individuals space to develop a deeper sense of virtuous behavior and growth through personal experiences and reflection when the virtues collide, known as practical wisdom, furthering our good sense.

Practical wisdom

Also known as phronesis, is the meta-virtue that guides individuals in making decisions when two or more virtues collide.

This helps us determine what is morally right in a given situation so we can discern which virtue to put into action.

Intellectual Virtues: Are my actions in pursuit of knowledge, truth and understanding?

Examples

Reflection

Resourcefulness

Communication

Critical Thinking

Curiosity

Reasoning

Moral Virtues: Do I respond ethically and with heart?

Examples

Honesty

Humility

Compassion

Integrity

Kindness

Empathy

Civic Virtues: Do I engage in responsible citizenship?

Examples

Service

Citizenship

Community Awareness

Neighborliness

Civility

Performance Virtues: Do I have the tools to navigate life and uncertainty?

Examples

Resilience

Determination

Perseverance

Leadership

Self-discipline

Motivation

Source ⚜ More: Writing Notes & References ⚜ +600 Personality Traits

[literaryvein-references]

When your Character...

Gets into: A Fight ⚜ ...Another Fight ⚜ ...Yet Another Fight

Hates Someone ⚜ Kisses Someone ⚜ Falls in Love

Calls Someone they Love ⚜ Dies / Cheats Death ⚜ Drowns

is...

A Child ⚜ Interacting with a Baby/Child ⚜ A Genius ⚜ A Lawyer

Beautiful ⚜ Dangerous ⚜ Drunk ⚜ Injured ⚜ Shy

needs...

A Magical Item ⚜ An Aphrodisiac ⚜ A Fictional Poison

To be Killed Off ⚜ To Become Likable ⚜ To Clean a Wound

To Find the Right Word, but Can't ⚜ To Say No ⚜ A Drink

loves...

Astronomy ⚜ Baking ⚜ Cooking ⚜ Cocktails ⚜ Food ⚜ Oils

Dancing ⚜ Fashion ⚜ Gems ⚜ Mythology ⚜ Numbers

Roses ⚜ Sweets ⚜ To Fight ⚜ Wine ⚜ Wine-Tasting ⚜ Yoga

has/experiences...

Allergies ⚜ Amnesia ⚜ Bereavement ⚜ Bites & Stings ⚜ Bruises

Caffeine ⚜ CO Poisoning ⚜ Color Blindness ⚜ Food Poisoning

Injuries ⚜ Jet Lag ⚜ Mutism ⚜ Pain ⚜ Poisoning

More Pain & Violence ⚜ Viruses ⚜ Wounds

[these are just quick references. more research may be needed to write your story...]

[literaryvein-reblogs]

more words for your fight scenes (pt. 3)

Argue

ado, altercation, argument, battle, bicker, cause célèbre, conflict, confrontation, contend, contest, contradiction, controversy, demur, dicker, difference, disagree, dispute, dissent, divide, double standard, expostulate, falling out, fight, friction, haggle, hue and cry, imbroglio, misunderstanding, object, protest, quibble, rebut, rift, row, run-in, sass, squabble, tiff, vendetta, wrangle

Punishment

blackmail, damage(s), dressing-down, fine, lesson, rap, reproach, sanction, whipping

Pursue

chase, dragnet, hound, shadow, tag, trace, track/track down, trail

Rip

claw, lacerate, snag, tear

Rub

bite, burnish, creak, erase, file, friction, glaze, grate, polish, smear

Search

comb, dig, explore, forage, grope, hunt, investigation, nose, plumb, prospect, quest, ransack, rummage, scout, snoop, track/track down

Squeeze

choke, clinch, constriction, crush, enfold, pinch, pulp, rumple, squash

Stab

claw, gore, impale, lacerate, perforate, prick, puncture, spike, stick, tap, transfix

Throw

buck, chuck, dash, disseminate, eject, extrude, fling, heave, intersperse, launch, lob, pelt, powder, propagate, scatter, sling, splatter, toss

To break

collide, crash, dash

To burn

arson, conflagration, flame, glow, incinerate, kindle, light, scorch, singe, smolder

Injury

abrasion, affliction, blister, boo boo, concussion, corrosion, damage, detriment, disadvantage, fracture, harm, inflammation, laceration, prick, rip, rust, shock, swelling, wound

Death

abort, curtains, decease, die, end, expire, mortician, pass away, perish, undertaker

Deathplace

boneyard, crypt, graveyard, monument, tomb

NOTE

The above are concepts classified according to subject and usage. It not only helps writers and thinkers to organize their ideas but leads them from those very ideas to the words that can best express them.

It was, in part, created to turn an idea into a specific word. By linking together the main entries that share similar concepts, the index makes possible creative semantic connections between words in our language, stimulating thought and broadening vocabulary.

Source ⚜ Writing Basics & Refreshers ⚜ On Vocabulary ⚜ Part 1 ⚜ Part 2 Writing Notes: Fight Scenes ⚜ Word Lists: Fight ⚜ Pain

[soularsss]

Death's Hand in Mine

this episode really got me i can't lie, it was just incredible