Shitty Five Nights at Freddy's OCs

(Autoplay music) Blog for all the shitty ocs out there. You can submit ocs for review or you can submit bad ocs that you find. If you want something removed POLITELY ask for it to be removed. If you are not polite forget about it!

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This is my oc Robbie Rabbit..

He was Invented for an different pizzaria/Fun/playhouse. Rickies magic place. He was the ‘Keyboardist’ of an animatronic band. Because of their low budget quality they broke quite often. They was used to walk around or greet the guests but they broke to often or fell out so they left them on the stage. Over the years the children got bored by them because they wherent that cool like the videogames or the big indoor playground. One day the singer (a red bear) was trown off the stage by accident so they replaced him with robbie. Robbie became the next target. Anything wasnt that bad untill he was thrown of the stage on purpose from several teenagers. His head cracked open , his eye broke out and his arm broke off as it hit the corner of the stage. After they tried to turn him on his speakers only made weired and loud noises or constand hissing. They tried to repair it but the speakers where compledly broken. They made him able to speak some of his text but he stardet to stutter or the speed of his text changed (even the depht of his voice). They set the stage out of order. A small child found the animatronics and bound the destroyed animatronics. She felt sorry for Robbie and tied him her bow around his neck. After a few days they were brought to the cellar an Rickies was closed..After some years the funhouse was reopened…They wanted to use the animatronics for their show but something seemed to be wrong with them…

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I realized very late that he looks very similar to bonnie ovo. Besides of the very oldish build. (includes non-movable yaw. Sorry for my bad english..i hope this time the submission work ovo. 

Colored version here:

http://maniactheleader.deviantart.com/#/art/DRAWING-HAVE-YOU-SEEN-MY-BOW-487383206?hf=1

I’m sorry to say but Robbie is a complete design rip off of Bonnie.. (not to mention Robbie the Rabbit from Silent Hill, but its more of a name theft than a look theft)  It’d make sense if Ricky’s Magic Place was a rip off or “bootleg” of Freddy Fazbear’s Pizzeria and thus all the animatronics there were cheaply made carbon copies of Freddy Bonnie Chica and Foxy.  His back story is all rather cliche, mess up animatronic, beat up by teenagers, loved by random passerby child. The easy to break thing due to them being poorly manufactured again would run smoothly with the boot leg Freddy Fazbear’s idea. But other than that its just a generic bunny trying to be to angst.  Work on him a bit, maybe change some colours around and I’m sure it could be a better oc 

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So I have fnaf oc that's a night watcher and she's able to defend herself against the animatronics (pretty sure any sane person would bring like a bat or something after night 1, that and she's a bit of a nutcase) would that make her a badly developed oc or what?

While its a different take, its still not very original. I’m pretty sure a lot of people make night guards that can “defend” themselves mostly because they feel like being tough or different and want to 1 up other people. I’m certain even a bat with average human strength behind it wouldn’t do much against a 8 to 10 feet tall metallic being with a reinforced skeleton anyways. And the whole nutcase things is overdone as it is.. Why not deal with the fact that your oc could possibly die and roll with it. Make her cocky at first then slowly descend into madness as she starts to feel more helpless, thinking maybe a bat could defend her but in the back of her mind she knows it wont do her any good. 

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hey, you think a ram animatronic who is confused for a goat most of the time is good idea for the oc? -pomeranian-animatronics

Yes, that sounds pretty cute! 

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Could you review my Fanimatronic? Rodney Raccoon that is...

Sure thing! Just send in a submission with a picture and some info and we’ll get to it asap!

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oh yeah! and one more thing about the parrot animatronic it repeats whatever you see I think it would be fun for the younger children

Very fitting,I love it. 

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so uh I kind of have an idea for a fnaf oc but I want to tell someone to see if it's okay. so my idea is a parrot or something in the parrot family. its stuck in a cage and can only move it's beak eyes and wings. I think it would be around pirates cove . but it can't attack so it just psychologically messes with the player with random loud sqwauks and screeches. do you think this is an okay idea?

I like this idea,it sounds perfect! I’d love to see more smaller animatronics bolted to platforms or cages. If it’d be located in pirates cove,maybe you could give it a perch instead of a cage? Otherwise it is a pretty cool idea. 

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31 messages left to go through..There is so much left to do OAO

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Review!

Here’s my OC Rani (Rah-ni) the Raccoon

More art of her here http://pastelkitty14.deviantart.com/gallery/52672115/Rani

And here’s a fairly short bio of her:

"After kids continued breaking the rules the pizzeria provided they decided to get a kid friendly animatronic to take care of the problem. Her name was Rani and her purpose was to walk around the place and make sure nobody was breaking the rules. If they chose to, they would get send to a small cell as a time out next to pirates cove. (This is in my view is lack of space in the small building, they are not shipped or have any sort of relationship) Every hour or so she would do a little routine she is programmed to do and that is to "steal" from the other animatronics (Chica’s cupcake, Freddy’s hat, Bonnie’s guitar, and the main one was to steal Foxy’s treasure) she hides the items around the pizzeria and if a child finds one of the items they receive a prize. The rest of her "background story" is here (Sorry that her “anatomy” isn’t that great i’m trying to improve so it can be a more legit one than a chibi styled)”

First I must say,the raccoon is a cute design. Right off the bat recognizable. From the beginning part she is pretty much like an antagonist to the Fazbear group. It gives a mixed message to the children about break rules yet she steals from the other animatronics,that part puzzles me a bit. Yet I still enjoy the anatomist feel it’d something real racoons would do. 

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Can you review my OC Dana the Donkey? My DeviantArt is AprilShine03.

Design wise.. Dana is a bit bland and doesn't represent a donkey. To me she appears to look more like a Kangaroo. I am trying not to be harsh on your art,that isn't something I enjoy doing. I am just going by what I see your oc looking like. For her ponytail you could turn it into a wig,wigs were often used on animatronics back in the day. I have a question,why does she have a formal name? Are you trying to do something like Freddy Fazbear? If she managed to rip off a child’s finger,why would they put her back in service? If a robot causes harm to anyone you'd think they'd put her out of commission,like Foxy.

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Hey, um, I don't have a Tumblr account, but I do have a dA account (AerithEchidna4rt), and I was wondering if you could review my Fnaf FC Brandie~

Alright,I believe I found her. To me it looks like you had mixed Bonnie and Freddy together. It reminds me of frankendolling. First of all,it represents a bunny mostly,so I suggest getting rid of the purple with the suit color. Bunnies can be brown. Second animatronics won’t be designed to have BREASTS. 

Wait is this oc Bonnie and Freddy’s love child? Robots can’t have children...Turns out is is a love-child..

I can understand if this oc is for a joke,please don't make this a real thing. 

I don't think I can review this anymore. 

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can you like review my character? i know kids like really bright colors (i had my 9 year old cousin pick his colors since i just sketched him at school) Idk about him though i have no bio or anything for him

Let me say this first,I feel a bit overwhelmed with this design. There is so much going on. This is a Rabbit and a Deer? Mixed species? Animatronics aren't usually mixed species. They represent animals children are usually familiar with. This animatronic could be fine just as a rabbit. I suggest toning it down a little,turn the hoves into big rabbit feet. Drop the eye circles,they could be considered a bit disturbing and possibly drop the diamond shape tattoo? I am also not big on giving animatronics hair unless it represents a wig.  As for the color scheme get rid of that neon green,it burns. The other colors are fine. The bandaid is a cute little feature. 

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Sorry for using link, I cant copy-and-paste on mobile. ^^;

Could you review him? I’d like to know if anything about him needs to change.

This doesn’t automatically link me to your oc,could you send another link please? 

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How would you draw a penguin animatronic? I've got the basic shape down but I'm not sure how to incorporate the animatronic parts. Any advice?

Most of the animatronic features would be shown in the face of the penguin. Especially around the eyes and the beak. There might be hinges visible where the fins are attached,depending on if you're creating a Toy bot or not. Toy bot’s don't really have visible endoskeletons. The body of the penguin would be covered by the suit,no visible endoskeleton. I would also suggest bolting it to a platform. 

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Alfonso/Bo's owner (again), I'm really sorry I cocked up on the post, it wouldn't allow me to attach the two images at once, when it did put them in they were the little broken file icon so I thought it would be easier to link to my FNaF stuff on DA, if you want me to go back and rejig it all properly I will. I'm sorry for causing such a faff.

Alright,if you'd like go ahead,link me to you DA. : ) 

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So I think Foxy is supposed to be programmed to be the antagonist of the Fazbear Group, (like the Hamburgler) but I don't ever really see him or Freddy and his gang having a sort of "fight". So, would it be okay to have an OC programmed to be like the one that fights him off, or no?

Very little information is said for the Pirate Foxy’s character,so we can't say for sure he is a antagonist. So I say go ahead make a antagonist! 

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Hey ^^ Um I need help with a new name for my fnaf oc. He's a brown bear and his runs a workshop of making teddy bears. I want to rename him something that fits him other then his current name Zack. I was thinking of renaming him Teddy or Ted but not sure if it sounds too cliche or not. What do you think of a name that suits for him?

I personally like the name Ted or the name Theodore,they both sound like loveable names for a big bear. 

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Is it bad that "OC/Security Guard x -insert animatronic or Purple Guy-" makes me wanna vomit? (Especially Springtrap x OC. I love Springtrap but...ew. Mummified remains in the suit isn't sexy...! Yuck...)

Nope,honestly I am not sure how I feel about it myself. There is always the thought of the suits are possessed by ‘children’,why would you want to pair with them to begin with. There wouldn't be any emotions,since animatronics are NOT real(just haunted). Yeah I love Springtrap as well...most definitely the thought of Springtrap having a corpse inside should be a turn off.The Purple Guy in general is a murderer,I don't understand why people would make oc’s for him?  But I guess to each their own. I personally don't mind the Fazbear pairings within the cast,fanart.