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omg i’d eat your ass for another part of bathroom bullies and maybe the girls like put on display outside the school at the entrance or something
Bathroom Bullies Part 5
Read part 4 here
Content: NSFW, (F-Reader x Multiple M + F), Exhibitionism, CNC, Bondage, Blackmail, Degradation
You thought your bullies' humiliation rituals would stay locked behind bathroom doors and in the depths of their basement parties, but you were wrong.
After months of using you, and the nerdy boy that had somehow gotten roped into this too, they grew bored of their usual sexual torture for you. The only reason you continued to obey their commands was because of the growing amount of explicit videos they had of you. If anyone outside of the popular kids saw how slutty you looked as they tormented you you would die of embarrassment. No one would believe if you said it was always against your will once they saw the lewd faces you'd made everytime they drew an orgasm out of you. Even in your own mind the line had blurred on what acts were forced onto you and which ones you secretly craved more of.
Late one night you and the boy were called to your bully's place once again. In their basement they stripped you bare, bent you over a small table about waist high, and tied you tightly to it. A belt of rope tied your waist to the top while your wrists and ankles were secured at the end of each leg.
The boy had a small table of his own he was attched to. He had his wrists cuffed together and pulled up above his head, a belt around his waist and the tabletop, as well as his ankles tied up to two posts at the end of the table, which left his legs splayed open, his cock and asshole presented for whoever wanted to use him.
You hadn't been bound like this before, but this wasn't the strange part. They put ring gags in both of your mouths then blindfolded you. You laid there anxiously waiting for them to grope you, smack you, finger you, fuck you, something! But instead you felt the table rise as they enlisted some jocks to carry you upstairs and load you, still bound to the piece of furniture, into a van.
You jostled around in the back, completely blind as you anxiously wondered where they were taking you. Eventually the van stopped, the doors slid open, and you were being carried out. You heard hoots and hollers around you as your naked skin pebbled in the brisk outdoor air. Finally you were set down and your blindfold and gag were removed.
Both you and the boy, bound to your tables, had been set on either side of the college entrance with signs saying "Student Relief Stations". A crowd of rowdy curious students had already formed, slowly closing in on you. You had been degraded and toyed with in front of the popular kids before, but never had you been so publicly exposed.
Suddenly the crowd fell into hushed murmurs as a professor pushed through to see what the commotion was about. Now was your chance to get free of the humiliation.
"Professor, thank god you're here. Please help me ou-"
Your plea was cut short when he rammed his cock in your mouth. Everyone cheered and descended on you and the boy. Hands were everywhere, touching every inch of you, lingering on the sensitive parts that made you squirm. The professor was merciless in his facefucking, making you drool and gag on his length as it hit the back of your throat.
You yelped when exploring hands decided to slap you just to see your ass jiggle. A girl went down to your cunt and began feverishly eating you out, harshly licking and sucking your clit. Another student got up and crouched on the table before shoving his cock in your unprepared asshole.
A scream escaped you, vibrating the professor's cock. He groaned and pulled out at the last second to paint your face in his cum. Before you could catch your breath another dick forced its way past your lips.
You don't know how long you were helplessly bound there. You remember the non-stop overstimulation, the stretching of your holes, the rawness of your skin littered in hand prints, the degrading names spewed at you, and the cries of the boy bound and tortured somewhere beside you. Too embarrassed to admit it to yourself, you became drunk on the attention of being the strangers' fuckdoll. You came too many times to count and eventually passed out.
Me and my girlfriend have been together for six months and I recently just told her about how I’m a masochist and she admitted she likes degrading and I don’t know what to say and I also don’t know how to ask her to hit me and like put me through pain and stuff.
Does she like being degraded or doing the degrading? I would talk with her about things you both like or want to try, starting off small. Like you could ask if she's comfortable slapping or spanking you first, then try more if you're both comfortable.
Even though I write noncensensual stories they are just fantasy. In real life communication is key and honestly can be sexy hearing out loud how someone cares about making you feel good or hearing the things they want to do with/to you. 😉
Thanks for writing in! Hope that helps. Good luck!
Hi my partner likes it when I dirty talk but I don't really know what to say because Im a girl and sometimes when I jerk him off its just very quiet and I don't really know what to say when I do it to him
You can give compliments or stuble remarks like:
"Your cock feels so good in my hand"
"I love when it gets harder for me"
Or you can try getting him to focus on the sensation with things like:
"How does it feel baby?"
"Do you like when I stroke your big, hard cock?"
Or you can fantasize about other things you want to do with it like:
"It looks so tempting. My mouth is watering thinking about it sliding down my throat."
"I want you to fuck this dick deep inside me so bad."
Or if you are feeling dominant and he likes to be subby you could praise or degrade him like:
"Such a good boy, sitting still for me as I toy with you."
"I love your pathetic little whimpers."
"You have no control here, so just take it like a good slutty sub."
Anywayssssss, hope these gave you some ideas or inspo! I would also say the best thing to do would be to just ask him directly what type of dirty talk he likes and what he might've enjoyed hearing from you in the past. Communication is key!
I don’t necessarily have a question I more so need some ideas- idk if this is weird to ask but what is some subtle ways to degrade your partner?? (They have told me numerous times they like it and want me to do it during intimacy, and also to add they like me being in controlling to them) I hope this isn’t weird to ask 😭😭💕💕
Not weird to ask at all! I would say start out small and see what you're comfortable with too. Degrading is all about showing them how much you want them and getting them in the headspace of focusing on pleasure or pleasing no matter how pathetic it may seem from an outsiders' perspective.
Maybe try little comments or actions outside of sex to get them in the mindset, like randomly grabbing their ass, pinching their nipples, stroking their hair then giving it a small yank, anything that shows your dominance and reminds them that they are your plaything.
You could try phrases like:
"Such a gorgeous little fucktoy"
"God, you're such a slut for me"
"You'll do anything to please me, won't you?"
"This body is mine"
"I decide when you get to cum"
"Listen to those pathetic moans"
And remember aftercare! Cuddle them and love on them so they know that the degrading is just part of the play and not how you really feel. Make sure they feel special and know they are valued. ❤️
Part two of hypnosis skeptic where she tries to go about and live her life but he keeps saying the trigger words at the worst possible moments to further embarrass her. Maybe she’s at an important event and he says the trigger words and she starts acting like a slut in front of all these important people.
Hypnosis Skeptic Pt2
Read Part 1 Here
Content: NSFW, (F x Multiple M), Hypnosis, Dubcon, Exhibitionism, Humiliation
He had been a total menace in her life once he had her wrapped around his finger.
They'd be hanging out at the park, shooting the shit like they used to, but now when their arguments started to irrate her she could feel the rising heat spread from her needy pussy. Everytime she would try to hide it, but everytime he noticed the sudden flush to her face and change in her demeanor.
"Awww, is my good girl feeling horny?" He'd tease.
She wanted to tell him to fuck off, but the word 'good' always triggered a mind-numbing wave of arousal. Instead she'd squeak out a pathetic moan.
"Come on honey. Speak up."
An involuntary, high pitched moan escaped her, loud enough that passersby looked over confused. Embarrassed, she crumbled into herself.
"Oh, don't be like that! Don't be shy now." His faux sympathy was easily seen through the sly grin he sported.
Unable to control herself, the word 'shy' triggered her to tug down her top, loll out her dribbling tongue, and shake her tits. Strangers gawked at her in various states of disgust. Some laughed, pulling out their phones to record the spectacle.
Her friend would eventually snap his fingers, breaking her out of her trance, a shit-eating grin slathered across his face from ear to ear. She'd see the crowd that had formed, feel the drool that had run down her exposed breasts, then cover up and run away, humiliation burning on her cheeks.
She didn't know why she kept hanging out with him. Maybe it was because she didn't have many friends to begin with. Or maybe, deep down, she craved the feeling of helpless submission, of feeling worthy of being desired and dominated over. Either way, they continued to be friends.
One day he apologized to her for all the stunts he had pulled on her using his hypnosis. To make up for it he had gotten her an interview with some executives at the company he worked at. Himself and four other business men would be in the conference room for the interview, and he promised to vouch for her the best he could. Naively, she accepted.
She anxiously sits at the head of the table, her friend and the executives all seated around it facing her. Her friend introduces her then says,
"I brought her in today because I think she's a good candidate for the position."
Her heart skips a beat as a rush of arousal descends to her cunt.
"What makes you think she is a good fit?" One of the men ask.
Hearing the trigger word from a stranger made her brain feel extra fuzzy.
"Well, she's just so good at taking orders. Isn't that right?" He asks her coyly.
Her entire body is on fire. Her pussy is sopping wet. The only response she can muster is a weak nod as drool starts to spill from the corner of her mouth.
"Why don't you present to these fine gentlemen what asset you can offer that you're most proud of?"
Without missing a beat, she stands, turns her back towards the men, then drops her pencil skort and thong before spreading her ass cheeks to show off her needy holes.
The men gasp, but don't move to have her cover up or be removed by security. Instead they start rubbing their cocks through their slacks as they admire her tight body.
"Well? Don't be shy. Speak up and tell them what you'll do for them if they decide to hire you."
She spins around, exposing and jiggling her tits as she loudly moans,
"I-I'll be such a good girl for you all! You can use any hole you want to dump your cum in me! Please, I'm so horny it hurts!"
The mumbled sound of the executives deliberating fill the room, along with the clinking of belts being undone.
"We could use an office whore for stress relief. Boost employee morale. But I'm going to want to test out your skillset first."
One of the men beckons her over, his erect cock standing up out of his slacks. She eagerly bounds to him, stripping herself on the last pieces of clothing she wore. Immediately she hops onto his lap, straddling him in the office chair, and slowly sunk her wet pussy down his length. They both groan at the sensation.
She expertly rolls her hips, grinding on his cock as he gropes the tits dangling in his face. Greedily she picks up the pace, bouncing up and down on his cock as the others jerk themselves to the sight. As they both get close to climaxing her friend starts clapping and says,
"Give him a show when you cum."
The word 'show' prompts her to make the sluttiest ahegao face, eyes crossed and tongue hanging out, while the applause makes her tip over her breaking point. She violently spasms on his cock, cumming the last of her brains out as her cunt clenches around him, milking his seed into her womb.
"Good girl. Now clean up your mess."
Despite her exhaustion she crawls to the floor, kneels between the man's legs, and licks his cock clean of their combined spend and juices. She looked brain-dead, yet also in a state of pure bliss.
I love your work. I have spent all morning masturbating to mostly your monster fucking stories and the dub on series and my favorite has to be any volunteers, the breeding pole, and the glory hole one, even though that one is free use. Would love to read more work in the future!!! Also hoping if there's gonna be more parts to the breeding pole
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I'm happy my writing excites you 😉 No promises on the breeding pole story continuation, but I do love me a good breeding fantasy 🤤
I have a few atm. Some I deleted if I was too uncomfortable writing what they asked for, if I had already written that idea, or it was just too boring or too crazy for me lol
Content: NSFW, (F-Reader x Multiple M Werewolves), Kidnapping, Dubcon, Breeding, Cumflation
Awkwardly lying in the dirt, legs still pried apart by the spreader bar and wrists still cuffed around the breeding pole, you try to ignore the sensation of the caked-on cum coating your thighs.
Everyone has gone to bed, forgetting to free you after the long day of continuous breeding by the townsmen. It's dark and cold; only the full moon providing any light.
Your tired body awakens as you feel an unknown presence seemingly watching you from further in the woods. Straining your eyes you think you see a dark shadow emerge from behind the trunk of a tree. Then another.
Your heart races as three hulking masses grow in size as they loom closer to you. Unable to escape, you shiver as the creatures step into the moonlight, showing off their sharpened canines and fur lined bodies. Werewolves.
They sniff and study you as you cower, frozen in fear. You flinch as their claws trace your cum-stained legs up to your pussy. Their snouts prod at your hole, inhaling deeply, until they are startled away by your chained hands swatting at them.
Looking at one another they seem to reach an unspoken agreement. The one grabs the chain connected to your handcuffs and snaps it with little effort. Another aburptly grabs the spreader bar by your ankles with one beastly fist and hoists you upside-down over its shoulder.
They head back to their den, ignoring your wails and limp punches to the monster's back. You shut up quickly once inside the cavern they call home as you pass more werewolves than you can count.
Deep within their den they finally stop in front of a slab of rock which they unceremoniously fling you onto. As you reorient yourself one of the werewolves has already snapped the spreader bar, letting your legs free. They feel like jelly after being forced open wide for so long, but that doesn't stop you from kicking the beast right in the face.
A guttural growl rumbles from its chest. With its giant claws it catches your next kick, gripping onto your ankle so tightly that its nails draw blood. Your screams echo as it snatches your other leg. Pulling apart your legs, you look in terror as its crazed eyes bore into yours.
Expecting to be ripped apart, you squeeze your eyes shut in dreadful anticipation, only to be met with the sensation of a thick, slobbering tongue prodding at your cunt. Gasping, you see the creature's impossibly long tongue greedily lap up the remanants of seed in your hole left there by the townsmen.
Covering your mouth, you try to hide your moans as it licks every inch of your pussy clean. Once the werewolf stops tasting cum, and instead only your arousal, it stops and drags your ass to the edge of the rock slab.
Drunk with pleasure, you tilt your head up to look at what it plans to do next. Your blood runs cold as you see the girthy, angry-red cock head it aligns to your entrance. With your ankles still in its grasp you desperately try to squirm away.
It pulls you back like you're a doll, then promptly spears you on its member. Stars dot your vision as you're filled more than you've ever been. Both the walls of your pussy and its cock pulse and throb. It groans as it retreats, leaving just the tip of itself inside, before ramming back in, deeper this time.
The stretch is painful, yet the delightful friction of it scraping your cunt is indescribable. The werewolf lets out animalistic grunts as it punches the air out of your lungs with each thrust.
You're going delirious, experiencing pain and pleasure like never before. As its pace quickens you rise closer and closer to what will surely be the most intense orgasm of your life. Just as you are about to climax, it pulls almost all the way out of you and stops for a moment. Before you can complain it stabs its cock all the way to your cervix in one fell swoop, and keeps pushing a bit more until your pussy lips expand to suck up its bulbous knot.
Feeling the fullness of that knot hurdles you over the edge. You violently spasm as copious amounts of werewolf seed floods your tiny womb. Its fur gets soaked as you uncontrollably squirt while trapped on its cock.
Both you and the creature collapse, the hairy beast almost crushing you under its weight. It pants hot breath beside your ear.
Finally it stands, walking with you still stuck on its pulsing knot. Looking down you see your stomach has descended from the obscene amount of cum in your womb. It's so bloated you look pregnant already.
You're taken to an area filled with makeshift cages, other human women laying on beds of straw within them. The werewolf takes you to an empty one, slides you off its now deflating knot, and locks you in along the puddle of cum that fell out of your abused cunt.
an isolated village is starting to worry about the declining population and one of the older pervs suggests solving it before it's a real problem by having a public use breeding slave ("you") and it may or may not be consensual (most of them don't know or care you're tied up and gagged for reasons they don't care to learn)
once all the guys have a turn your meant to be plugged up and untied but someone "forgot"
and you spend the whole day getting you're boobs sucked and cunt fucked
Breeding Pole
Content: NSFW, (F-Reader x Multiple M), CNC, BDSM, Exhibitionism, Gangbang, Breeding
Read Part 2 Here
No one thought the local old, senile man was being serious when he suggested 'the town's women should be forcefully bred' to help combat their low population. Sure life was hard for the aging townsfolk in the little village secluded in the deep forest, but no one would stoop that low to do something so barbaric, right?
Apparently everyone would if given the chance, as you found out when you awoke naked and chained to a pole on the outskirts of town. You were cuffed with your arms hugging the cold steel pole, and your legs were held apart by the metallic spreader bar locked around your ankles. Desperately you called for help, tugging uselessly against the metal bindings.
Defeated, you sighed and rested your cheek on the pole. Exhaustion from your phailing set in and you sleepily leaned against the pole for what felt like hours. The crunch of leaves behind you jolted you out of your haze.
Any semblance of hope for rescue evaporated as you turn to see the old man who advocated for the forced breeding of all the town's 'holes'. He already had his cock in his wrinkly hand as he licked his lips, approaching your exposed sex.
"Please, don't do this. You know this isn't right! Ah!"
The ramming of his hard cock into your unprepared cunt interrupted your plea. His worn fingers gripped your youthful pillowly hips as he thrust into you like a madman.
It's fast.
It's brutal.
It burns.
But it stirs something pleasurable deep in your gut.
Your whimpers turn to moans as he picked up the pace. Just before he released inside you he leaned over you and yanked your hair back so that your ear met his lips.
"Take my seed you filthy bitch!"
His hips meet yours in a powerful push, leaving you fully impaled on his cock, helpless as you felt it throb while it painted your womb white with his warm cum.
When he slid out of your used cunt and let go of your hair, you slumped to the dirty ground, embarrassed and violated. Only then did you realize that more men from town arrived to test out the breeding whore. Your wanton cries must've attracted them.
They drag you to your feet and toy with your sore pussy as cum oozes out of it. Despite your cries for freedom they rape you too, using the old man's spend as lube. When your rambling gets too irritating for them they stuff cocks in your mouth too. They find it funny how you whine with your mouth full when another man suckles your tits.
Every man in town unloads their balls in your poor cunt. Your legs are coated in dried cum; your body riddled with red welts from their slapping.
You hear talk of needing to plug your pussy at the end of the night, though they seem to forget. Instead you are left chained to the pole, abandoned and thoroughly used.
What's worse is that as you're mind is processing the trauma you've endured, your body yearns for more. The lack of control, the undeniable pleasure felt from the cocks ravaging you, and the full-body shivers that rocked through you with every degrading, humiliating thing they said to you awakened a sluttier side of yourself that craves more.
if u write hypno, please could you write one where a guy is a hypnotist and his girl best friend doesn’t believe in the idea and makes fun of him for it and she tells him to try it on her. So he hypnotises her basically to get really horny whenever he says a specific word, and when she gets angry with him to take her top off (she doesn’t wear a bra) and one day when they’re arguing, it works and she gets horny and takes her top off and he decides to video it and then he snaps her fingers to free her from the hypnosis and he blackmails her and tells her he’ll send this video to his friends and anger her outside so she takes her shirt of in public, unless she gives him a blowjob. Something like that, sorry if this is too long, thankssss
Hypnosis Skeptic
Content: NSFW, (F x M), Hypnosis, Dubcon, Humiliating, Blackmail
"Hypnosis is bullshit."
He rolled his eyes, annoyed at her skepticism towards his new hobby.
"And why do you think that?" He asked.
"It only works on losers who believe that kind of crap is real. They gotta be willing and wanting to be bossed around."
"Let me try it on you then. If you don't believe in it it won't work on you, right?" He already had a dubious plan forming in his head, though he didn't reveal it in his tone.
"Fine. Afterwards I'll rub it in your face that I was right."
He rushed to his room, grabbing a pocketwatch and a small perfume bottle he hid in his waistband. Sitting across from her crosslegged on the floor he started swinging the watch like a pendulum.
"Seriously?"
"Just focus on the watch. Follow its movement with your eyes and steady your breathing."
She huffed at the absurdity of it but followed his directions. The repetitive and soothing action soon had her tension melting from her body, her shoulders slumping and her eyes glazing over.
"How're you feeling?"
All he got back in reply was a lazy hum. Pleased with the docile state she was in, he carefully got the perfume bottle while still swinging the watch. As she swayed her eyes back and forth with the pendulum he described things he had done in the past to make her mad. She remained silent but he could see the anger bubbling up inside her by the way her brows slightly furrowed and her breathing sharpened.
He then sprayed some of the perfume between them. The concoction was laced with an aphrodisiac with she greedily inhaled. As he kept reminding her of how he likes to piss her off, he also started pointing out how hot her body must be getting, how nice it would be to take off her shirt to cool off and stop the fabric rubbing against her sensitive nipples.
She shifted uncomfortably, now painfully aware of her body's discomfort. With annoyance towards him still buzzing in her she removes her top, baring her braless chest for him. A smirk dances across his face, knowing he has her under his spell. Snapping a picture of her for later use, he then gets to work conditioning her.
"Doesn't that feel better? I can see how mad you are at me, your whole chest is flushed red!"
Still in a trance, she only gave a frustrated grunt in response.
"But you're being such a good girl." He purred. "Good, good, horny girl."
She shivered at the praise, her thighs rubbing together in arousal each time he said the word 'good'.
He continued to toy with her, having her pliable mind associate different words with different actions she could perform. Through it all she was listening intently, yet it was clear that her rational conscious mind was gone. Her subconscious soaked in all of his teachings.
Finally, he snapped his fingers, breaking her out of the daze. Blinking away the disorientation, she looked around, searching for something amiss. When she noticed her tits were out she shouted at him.
"You perv! You took my shirt off!"
"You did that yourself sweetheart." He chuckled.
"It's not fucking funny! There's no way I'd do that." She snatched up her top, hugging it to her chest to cover her breasts. As she went to put it back on he interrupted her.
"Are you sure you want to do that? Don't you feel a little hot? Maybe a little flustered?"
She pauses, taking in the signals of her body. Blush erupts across her face as she realizes how wet her pussy is, and how her nipples are hardened into peaks. Her skin radiates heat almost as if she has a fever.
"You know what would make you feel better? Sucking my cock."
"What the fuck? Why would I ever want to do that you freak?!"
"Because if you don't I'll leak these."
He shows her pictures on his phone from minutes before where, in her hypnotic haze, she pesented her tits willingly for him.
"T-those can't be real. You had to have photoshopped them or something."
"Nope. Just used my 'bullshit' hypnosis to bring out your inner slut. Not only that, but I also taught you certain phrases that'll have you acting like a total whore no matter where you are. Would be a shame if I used those trigger words on you while we were out in public..."
"I don't believe you. Hypnosis is fake."
"You think so? Do you really want to take that risk?"
She huffed an annoyed breath, processing what he said.
"If I suck your dick, you promise not to leak those pics or fuck with me in public?"
"Scouts honor." He replied coyly, placing his hand over his heart.
After a moment of hesitation she relents, scoffing about the absurdity of the situation under her breath as she peeled his sweatpants and boxers down his legs. Her embarrassingly red cheeks glowed even brighter as his girthy throbbing cock sprung up at attention. Tentatively she began licking the monstrous member from his balls to his tip.
"There you go. Doing such a good job." He cooed.
The word 'good' once again sparked an involuntary reaction in her, turning her beain fuzzier and her cunt drippier. The anxiety in her muscles dissappiated and she began unabashedly worshipping his cock with her mouth. Before long she was slobbering on his length, deep throating him hungrily. He had to yank her off of him by the hair before he came too soon.
"Woah there! You definitely aren't shy anymore, huh?"
'Shy' triggered her to present her tits to him, puffing out her chest and jiggling her breasts side to side.
"Impressive. But we both know what part of your body you're really proud of..."
Again a switch in her mind forced her to pridefully turn around and bend over, holding her ass cheeks open to show off her sopping pussy and puckered asshole.
"Wow, you really are drenched huh?"
The hypnotized girl simply squirmed and whined.
"Well, if you're so needy I guess I can let you cum after you lend me a hand."
Eagerly she crawls to his lap, leaving enough room for his erect cock between them. She humps his leg as her delicate hands wrap around his girth, expertly stroking him. He groped her tits and enjoyed shoving his fingers in her drooly mouth just to watch her gag.
Eventually he came all over her bare chest, the excess oozing from his tip onto her fingers.
Snapping his fingers she broke out of the trance again. Seeing the mess he left all over her she was infuriated, which triggered her body to once again grow hot and aroused.
"The fuck did you do to me?"
"I made you into the perfect fucktoy! Now as promised, you can cum. Nice work slut."
"What are you talking ab-"
He mockingly applauded her and the clapping activated her final trigger. She crumbled to the ground, violently spasming and squirting as the strongest orgasm of her life came crashing through her. Her cries echoed throughout the room as he watched her eyes roll back in her skull. Eventually she came down from the high, exhausted, braindead, and twitching from time to time. He gave her a pillow and blanket as she lay there limp on the floor in a puddle of her own juices.