hey there, for the wip-ask thingy: what about "flight"
I have found yet again my overuse of commas. It's supposed to be one sentence....enjoy this entire paragraph that happens to also be one sentence.
“Short term stamina, my friend, short term,” she unfolded and stood gulping down breaths with her hands on her hips, “the longest airwing flight on record was fifteen minutes...most are under two...hand-to-hand combat too— you either die...or you win, it doesn’t take that long, I mean,” she gasped, “that record was set by me- but I dropped unconscious after it,” she gestured out in front of her even though she knew he couldn’t see her, “this isn’t even long distance, man, this is like…ultra distance… I’m gonna loose fifty pounds and most of them are going to be organs falling out of my body.”
