Screencraft: Speechifying
Watch this video. You'll recognize every moment:
It's hard not to get a little verklempt watching an inspirational speech on film. It riles us, makes us feel powerful, and stokes the flames of America's "can do, will do, will not be denied" ethos ever so perfectly.
And truthfully, as much as I love watching a formidable call to arms, I truly, deeply despise them.
I know. Blasphemy. Some of the greatest moments in cinematic history are drawn out speeches. But I always feel like these speeches pander and say very little about the people giving the speech. We get bland characterizations - grit, determined, powerful - pretty much the same monikers we give to professional athletes, but the only agenda of these speeches are to rile and build militaristic confidence. We never know that the guy (and it's very much usually a guy) is scared of or what troubles them. It's just a jingoistic, robotic missive of how to go out with honor. It's a cop out because they're telling us everything we want to hear. No surprises, no revealing of deeper character, all heart and no soul.
The truly amazing speeches of cinema give insight to the people telling them, to the situation they are in, and paint a very different angle of the human condition. You can still have a rally call, but have it mean something as opposed to a generic appeal to what we already know. Here's my favorite speech in all of cinema:
Look how much we learn from this. It's a rally call of a different sort, a blast of reality that no one wanted to hear, but had to be said. In this speech we learn just as much about Tommy as we do Renton. Personalities are reinforced. Renton's not being a pessimist, he's pointing out what needs to be recognized. He destroys idealism, jingoism and blind devotion in thirty seconds. Renton's speech would make me fight harder than any bland William Wallace grandstanding.
Speeches have to be very carefully selected. They take large chunks of cinematic time and is asking a lot of the audience, so they better be worthwhile not only to them but to the narrative. The honorable warrior speeches the moments before battle are purely cosmetic - when standing on the precipice of combat, assembled with the enemy in sight, combat is an inevitability. I'd rather William Wallace give a personal parable, to let me know something about himself that will make his army fight for what he believes in, that he understands the sacrifice that they are about to make. Instead we get a bully, a steroid-fueled call to mayhem.
Second thing about movie speeches is to avoid the soapbox. Your script will always have something to say but try to avoid having your characters literally say your viewpoint. I remember a speech in a film that I saw at the Toronto Film Festival many years ago, a film that shall go unnamed but was set in South Africa. A young woman, unable to realize a taboo lesbian relationship, goes into a long speech which she begins with the following line:
Yes. That's a real line of dialogue. Spoken by an actor. In a feature film. What followed was a blow-by-blow account of why apartheid sucks, just in case we thought otherwise. It was awful. And it went on and on, forever, beating us over the head with self-righteousness. It said nothing about her other than that she opposes injustice. Well by that point in the film I would certainly hope we'd understand that.
Six Angry Women has two long speeches in it, which is why this post came to fruition. I took great care in crafting these segments with my actors, in that I wanted to avoid them being hammer-over-the-head obvious. The first speech was designed to be preachy, as it is one juror explaining her decision. She has a self-rightousness about her but she is unaware of it. Rather than delivering a message about a message, it delivers a message about her. This is a very important distinction.
The second speech ends the film, and it is a nasty, acidic piece of work by my actress Fawzia Mirza. Rather than lift people up and call people to arms, it serves to deconstruct everything that has been built before. There is a nihlistic patina to everything and it is the portrait of a woman cornered, a woman battling between what is right and what is permissable. I love it. It works for me becuase it is very much a commentary on society but through the vector of one woman's anger and defeat.
The second challenge with speeches is how we go about filming them. We can do them in one long, single take or we can break them up into wides, mediums and close-ups, intercut with reactions from the recepients of said speech. Or we can place that speech over a montage of the events that they portend, or even over the aftermath of the event. There are so many ways to do it, but the path you choose will reflect your intent.
Filming a speech in wide, MCU and ECU and then intercutting the reactions is, to me, the most standard way of doing it. If you have the ability to, I would use two cameras for it. You place Camera A on the orator, and with each take and setup you shift B-cam to capture different reactions. If you have one camera, then get your speech done first, as your actor will have only so much energy to give. I like to start in at ECU and move out, because during a speech you will cut to wides less frequently that close-ups, and you want the most intensity, focus and energy on your closes. Once your orator is covered, flip the camera and get reactions, with the orator performing behind the camera for the actors to react off of. Your orator will be exhausted but at least she won't have to be "on" as she would be in front of the camera. With reactions, wides become more important as you'll be cutting to them more frequently. Collect ECU's and MCU's of key players' reactions and then go for some free-flowing reactions in the crowd. In a two-camera setup, I like to basically invert the progression; A-cam is close-up on the orator, and B-cam is wide on the crowd, and as we move out on A-cam to wides, we move in on B-cam to MCUs and ECUs. It all takes a bit of planning but then again what doesn't, right?
A single take is intense and real-time, it imparts an urgency of message, and requires a strong performance that is paced and blocked out. Not easy to do, but when done well it is unlike anything else in cinema. I ended Six Angry Women with Fawzia performing an almost four-minute long single take monologue. We did it three times, each time changing only the pace and small inflections of words. Each of them incredible. Single takes require fair rehearsal time for camera and the performer. Rehearse at 10% energy, you don't want your actor burning out before you even go to take. If you're shooting digitally you may want to record your rehearsals, sometimes without your actor even knowing. You'll always get something interesting becuase the actor isn't doing neccessarily what they prepared for, and they'll give you something more relaxed and easy. Just make sure to let your intentions to record rehearsals to your sound and camera teams, and remember to end slate each take.
If we choose a montage then we have to collect enough varied footage for it to work, and this is when a speech can become labor intensive. Conversely it is a way to compress time, and if you're doing something like a battle scene, it is a way to convey an entire war in just a handful of shots. I remember David Fincher doing this beautifully in The Curious Case of Benjamin Button.
Montages with speeches tend to impart a dream quality, as they compress time and space, so be aware of this before you plan to use them. You can take the dreamlike-edge off by not using dissolves, using harder cuts, changing the angle of your camera shutter, or using more active music, which you can try cutting on specific time signatures.
Speeches are an important part of cinema, but I implore that if you choose to use them - as I did - then they must be so much more than a we-are-here-to-pump-you-up nonsense. It has to say as much about the person saying it than the speech itself. It must be motivated, and it almost always is a last resort for any character. We have to remeber that speeches, by nature, are impositions - they are one person trying to convince another of a disposition or cause. How we film and edit them will increase or decrease their impact. Use them wisely and selectively, and if done right you will make something of absolutely incredible visceral power. There's nothing in art quite like it.