People freaked out over a “leaked” 7x10 script. It took me less than half a second to look at it and know it was fake.
The person who wrote it used final draft, a paid app, to write but clearly needs to do a lot more practice. The formatting is beyond wrong in easily a dozen ways. And I really do mean wrong both Industry-wide and for 9-1-1.
She’s a fanfiction writer so her ideas are solid. I think it could make for a pretty good fanfiction if she’d write it out as a novel. In fact I think she’s probably close with how the characters might react (not well written, but the general ideas are there and I’d agree with the general ideas). As a just for fun script, I think she definitely enjoyed writing it, which is always nice.
But her script writing just needs a lot of work.