I feel like the TNR arc is where the Redux gets to truly shine as a work of xenofiction. You’ve already done great writing, but by virtue of being a warrior cats fanfic, many aspects of this story are “expected” or not surprising to the audience.
But here, we’re really looking at a different perspective, where we know that the humans are doing something helpful and beneficial, but the characters do not know that, and thus the narrative does not know that. In the story, this beneficial action is the destruction of a society, and it’s horrifying. It feels like an apocalypse story. Well done, I applaud you.
This is my favorite ask related to this part of RSR, god dang. Thank you! I can't even say anything to it, I'm just all smiles.