#amazing sin

[spookingisfun]

[the-cheshire-pussy-cat]

Amazing Sin #11, #12, #13!!!!

I’m answering this one next because i still have the fic’s tab open lol

Also i answered #11 on the previous one but you didnt know that :)

Amazing Sin

12) What do you like least about this fic?same thing as i said for a different answer, but the ending i gave taylor’s character is my biggest regret. why, oh why, didn’t i make her suffer???

13) What music did you listen to, if any, to get in the mood for writing this story? Or if you didn’t listen to anything, what do you think readers should listen to to accompany us while reading?Adam Lambert!!!!! Obviously!!! and then when i was writing i also listened to lots of Gaga, Shakira, Beyonce, and Riri to help with louis’ character. and the 1975 and arctic monkeys for harry’s character. basically all the music mentioned in the fic itself is what i listened to lol

Fic Questions

[the-cheshire-pussy-cat]

2. 3. 5. 11. for amazing sin

Amazing Sin

2) What scene did you first put down?Actually the first scene i wrote was the first scene in the fic with louis kissing niall onstage. like i wrote that out and then made a little outline of events i wanted to happen, and wrote the whole thing in order!

3) What's your favorite line of narration?“Maybe they should have stayed in and talked about what was wrong with Harry, maybe it would have been better than just grinding on each other in public. Yet, Louis loved where he was. He loved feeling Harry’s strong arms wrap around his slim body. He loved the low grunt Harry let out when Louis tugged on his long hair. He loved that he could feel Harry’s lips on his neck, and how hard Harry was against his lower back. Louis loved Harry.“

5) What part was hardest to write?The ending when i didn’t just make taylor a full on bitch like she is in real life. at the time i was afraid of the ending coming off sexist, and i regret feeling like that now because i would have rather it ended with her being miserable and alone :)

11) What do you like best about this fic?Tbh i’m very proud of the plot i thought of for it. i still haven’t seen any other fics like it in our fandom and it makes me so happy that i could be so original.

Fic Questions 

[spookingisfun]

[darrenandaaron]

Amazing Sin by thecheshirepussycat (wordcount: 56,034)

Gears started turning in Louis’ head. Purely mischievous gears that had Louis formulating a revenge plan against Taylor. He’d had enough of sitting around and taking it. If she was going to call him a whore, then fine, he’ll act like one for real. “I’m going to say something, and as my friends you are obligated to love me anyway.” “This can’t be good,” Niall said, Zayn just groaned. “So I know we have this strict ‘no lashing back at Taylor’ rule with me, but what if I can get press revenge a different way?” Louis asked. He wasn’t expecting an answer, because they knew by now to just go with it. “What if I stole her boyfriend?” Or, the story of Louis ‘Steal Your Man’ Tomlinson.

[nojemmyproteste]

“Even when the night changes…”

[1d-mood-boards]

//fic moodboard: louis in Amazing Sin by thechesirepussycat//

[the-cheshire-pussy-cat]

Can you imagine amazing sin!Louis singing Good for you by Selena Gomez

Can i imagine an entire music video for amazing sin!louis as if he were the one singing Good For You dedicated to harry? yes, yes i can.

The video starts off with a dark screen and white lights flashing every few seconds as the music starts up. The camera moves slowly to reveal a messy dressing room, one obviously belonging to some kind of show girl or stripper, with costumes and glitter and mirrors every where. Louis is sitting at one of the mirrors, completely alone, putting on some makeup as he sings the first few lines.

“I’m on my 14 carats, I’m 14 carat. Doing it up like Midas, mhm, .ow you say I got a touch so good, so good. Make you never wanna leave, so don’t, so don’t.” He’s putting on white glitter around his eyes and light pink lipstick as the final touches to his look. Most of his body isn’t shown, save for a white, embroidered silk robe. He looks angelic and out of place in the rundown dressing room.

As the next few lines are song, the camera changes scene to a private room inside a strip club, where Harry is waiting. He’s got on a nice black suit, but he’s pacing as if he’s nervous, loosening his tie and biting his lips. A golden pole can be seen in the background of the room, as well as a small black leather couch. “And syncopate my skin to your heart beating.”

The scene moves back to Louis, who takes a deep breath and smiles, almost a smirk, to himself in the mirror. He stands up and ties the robe tighter, making it impossible to know what he has on underneath.

Louis walks into the dressing room just in time for the chorus to start, and Harry is sitting on the couch. He watches in awe as Louis begins to dance on the pole, singing, “‘Cause I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huhI just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh.”

Louis jumps up and spins around the pole with his legs wrapped around it, and Harry can be seen squirming in his seat as the first chorus of the songs ends. Louis drops down to his knees, smirking at Harry as he unties the robe and lets it fall to the floor. 

“I’m on my marquise diamonds. I’m a marquise diamond. Could even make that Tiffany jealous, mhm.” Louis sings as the camera pans down to reveal him in a pair of white, sparkly booty shorts that match the stilettos he had on. 

He slowly turns around, shaking his ass, and the camera shows Harry lustfully watching Louis’ every move, biting his plump lips and waiting for whatever comes next. He watches while Louis dances on the pole some more, the choreography getting more and more intense and complicated as he enters the second chorus.

The scene goes back and forth through scenes of Louis dancing for Harry in the private room, and a new scene of Harry and Louis kissing and grinding in a very expensive looking bedroom. “Trust me, I can take you there. Trust me, I can take you there. Trust me, I, trust me, I, trust me, I…”

When A$AP’s verse begins, the camera goes back to Harry and Louis in the private room, only this time Louis is giving Harry a lapdance. Harry knows he’s not supposed to touch Louis, but he can’t help but put his hands on Louis’ hips while Louis grinds down on him, teasing him with every move.

Just as Harry can take it anymore, and A$AP’s verse is almost done, he lifts Louis up and kisses him, Louis eagerly kissing back. The rap verse finishes and the scene goes back to the one of them in the expensive bed, Louis under Harry and both of them naked while the chorus goes, “I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh. Baby let me be good to you, good to you, uh-huh. Let me show you how proud I am to be yours. Leave this dress a mess on the floor.”

As the music fades out, the camera moves slowly away from the two of them on the bed. It follows a path of clothes on the floor, and eventually fades to black.